【英语】2020届二轮复习短文改错原创试题20篇学案之一

【英语】2020届二轮复习短文改错原创试题20篇学案之一

‎2020届二轮复习短文改错原创试题20篇学案之一 ‎【一】‎ Long long ago, there lived a famous beauty who named Xi Shi. Since she suffered from heartburn, she would often frown in front of all neighbor.‎ A ugly girl—Dong Shi, lived in the same village. She noticed this, thinking it very charmed, also put her hand to her breast and frown in front of everyone. When the rich saw her, they closed their doors and would come out. But for the poor, they ran away, took their wives and children. Poor thing! She could admired Xi Shi's frown, but did not know why she was beautiful.‎ 答案：‎ Long long ago, there lived a famous beauty who named Xi Shi. Since she suffered from heartburn, she would often frown in front of all .‎ ugly girl—Dong Shi, lived in the same village. She noticed this, thinking it very ， also put her hand to her breast and in front of everyone. When the rich saw her, they closed their doors and would come out. for the poor, they ran away, their wives and children. Poor thing! She could Xi Shi's frown, but did not know why was beautiful.‎ ‎【二】‎ I am sorry to know that you're having so a bad time nowadays. In fact, as a Senior Three student, it is normal that everyone will have to face the ‎ special periods where things seem to be going worse and worse, so you don't have to worry so many. The most important thing is learn how to control our temper. Here are two useful tip: ‎ First, talking to someone you trust for how you feel. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends. I hope you'll be soon feel calmer or carry on to achieve your goal.‎ 答案：‎ I am sorry to know that you're having a bad time nowadays. In fact, as a Senior Three student, it is normal that everyone will have to face the special periods things seem to be going worse and worse, so you don't have to worry so . The most important thing is learn how to control temper. Here are two useful ： ‎ First, to someone you trust how you feel. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends. I hope you'll calmer carry on to achieve your goal.‎ ‎【三】‎ Li Ying came to Canada to study in Grade Ten and enter a public school. She was disappointing because the teachers and students didn't help her very much, but she couldn't take any interesting subjects. A year later, she came to a private school that she had a custom－tailored program, which got her take seven courses. She got a plenty of individual attentions from the teachers. Besides, she did a step－by－step preparation to enter a directly six－year study program. Then she got accepted into four programs. Under the help of the teachers, she really learned many.‎ 答案：‎ Li Ying came to Canada to study in Grade Ten and a public school. She was because the teachers and students didn't help her very much, she couldn't take any interesting subjects. A year later, she came to a private school she had a custom－tailored program, which got her take seven courses. She got plenty of individual from the teachers. Besides, she did a step－by－step preparation to enter a six－year study program. Then she got accepted into four programs. the help of the teachers, she really learned .‎ ‎【4】‎ Dear Tom，‎ Recently, I have heard that you feel stressing as a student of Senior Three. Here is some advices on how to study effective.‎ First of all, learn in the relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study as an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and refresh our mind, helping us memorize things faster and long. Music, too, are another effective means of refreshing and helping them concentrate better.‎ Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, that will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 答案：‎ Dear Tom，‎ Recently, I have heard that you feel as a student of Senior Three. Here is some on how to study .‎ First of all, learn in relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and refresh our mind, helping us memorize things faster and . Music, too, another effective means of refreshing and helping concentrate better.‎ Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎【五】‎ I have many friend and Lily is one of the best. We have been playing together before we were young. She is such pretty girl that when people meet him, they always say, “Oh, how lovely！” Lily is also very brave. One evening two weeks ago, my mum sent me to buy some salt or sugar downstairs. When I was back on the stairway, I sudden saw a black shadow behind me. I was frightening and cried, “God！” On that very moment, Lily came. She rushed at the shadow and shouts to it loudly until it disappeared. Then we ran to home safely.‎ 答案：‎ I have many and Lily is one of the best. We have been playing together we were young. She is such pretty girl that when people meet ， they always say, “Oh, how lovely！” Lily is also very brave. One evening two weeks ago, my mum sent me to buy some salt sugar downstairs. When I was back on the stairway, I saw a black shadow behind me. I was and cried, “God！” that very moment, Lily came. She rushed at the shadow and to it loudly until it disappeared. Then we ran home safely.‎ ‎【六】‎ ‎ I like travelling and my dream of paying a visit for Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holidays this year. On October 1st, I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents, there we watched the flag－raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly, I sang a national anthem, feel extremely excited. Then we went to some other famous attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that “One who fail to reach the Great Wall is a hero.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.‎ 答案：‎ I like travelling and my dream of paying a visit Beijing, the capital city of our country, true during the National Day holidays this year. On October 1st, I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents, ‎ we watched the flag－raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly, I sang national anthem, fee extremely excited. Then we went to some other famous ， like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very . I thought of the old saying that “One who to reach the Great Wall is a hero.” Although I was tired, I really had a good time.‎ ‎【七】‎ Yesterday morning I got up early to run in a race. It was hardly above freezing. So every runner was jumping around trying to stay warmly.‎ By the roadside was a man wrapping in a blanket. He was obviously homeless and most people pretended not see him. I went over and talked with him. We talked about all sort of things. He didn't ask me for anything, and I wanted to do something for him. I gave him all the cash which I had. At the first he didn't want to accept it but I insisted. Then he said something surprised. He said “Thank you. I hadn't talked to anybody for years.” It was him who showed me how to smile through the rough times.‎ 答案：‎ Yesterday morning I got up early to run in a race. It was hardly above freezing. So every runner was jumping around trying to stay .‎ By the roadside was a man in a blanket. He was obviously homeless and most people pretended not see him. I went over and talked with him. We talked about all of things. He didn't ask me for anything, I wanted to do something for him. I gave him all ‎ the cash I had. At first he didn't want to accept it but I insisted. Then he said something . He said “Thank you. I hadn' talked to anybody for years.” It was who showed me how to smile through the rough times.‎ ‎【八】‎ I have been a member of our local Community Youth Club for four years. So far I have took part in a lot of interested projects including activities such as holiday camps and discos. We have organized difference groups to help people in the need. We are particular proud of the most recent group we have created, that organizes regular visits to the local old people's homes. The old people there tell us their personal story. Some of them are in poor health but very unhappy. My friends and I make up our mind to do more to help. Because our work is tiring, we think worthwhile.‎ 答案：‎ I have been a member of our local Community Youth Club for four years. So far I have part in a lot of projects including activities such as holiday camps and discos. We have organized groups to help people in need. We are proud of the most recent group we have created, organizes regular visits to the local old people's homes. The old people there tell us their personal . Some of them are in poor health very unhappy. My friends and I make up our mind to do more to help. our work is tiring, we think worthwhile.‎ ‎【九】‎ Started in September of 2003, smile cards began appearing all around a world. They are marker of a brand new game of tag, where “you're it” because someone has done anything nice for you. Then it's your turn to do something nice for someone else but, in the process, pass the card along. This was a game of payitforward: make someone smile without giving out the name, leave behind a card ask them to keep it going. It's easy and funny. Is kindness truly contagious? There's only one way to find out —join the fun! Get your smile cards, read up on some kindness ideas, and get started!‎ 答案：‎ in September of 2003, smile cards began appearing all around world. They are of a brand new game of tag, where “you're it” because someone has done nice for you. Then it's your turn to do something nice for someone else ， in the process, pass the card along. This a game of payitforward: make someone smile without giving the name, leave behind a card them to keep it going. It's easy and . Is kindness truly contagious? There's only one way to find out —join the fun! Get your smile cards, read up on some kindness ideas, and get started!‎ ‎【十】‎ Not having passed the exam, Xiao Ming remained in the classroom after school. When asking, he told me he didn't dare to go home because of he was afraid of being scolded or beaten by his dad. Hearing that he ‎ said, I felt sorry for him and couldn't help think of the “wolf father”．‎ Children will behave well if they are punishing when they do something wrong and that punishment should be physical punishment, which is an extreme important educational concept to many parents. But I think this violent way harms children mental growth and the forming of their good characters.‎ No one can avoid making mistake. Parents should help our children correct mistakes and encourage them make progress.‎ 答案：‎ Not having passed the exam, Xiao Ming remained in the classroom after school. When ， he told me he didn't dare to go home because ‎ he was afraid of being scolded or beaten by his dad. Hearing he said, I felt sorry for him and couldn't help of the “wolf father”．‎ Children will behave well if they are when they do something wrong and that punishment should be physical punishment, which is an important educational concept to many parents. But I think this violent way harms mental growth and the forming of their good characters.‎ ‎ No one can avoid making . Parents should help children correct mistakes and encourage them make progress.‎ ‎【十一】‎ The new term is coming! It's time for school. Last term, I make little effort on my English, but my grades were not satisfying. During the holiday, I realized English is of great important and made up my mind to ‎ make a progress. My plan goes as follows: for one thing, I will learn new words for at least 20 minutes every morning and recite a 100words paragraph; for another, I will try to be actively in class. Besides, on my spare time, I will read more books about different topics open my mind. I think I can improve me a lot in this way, because that there is a will, there is a way.‎ 答案：‎ The new term is coming! It's time for school. Last term, I little effort on my English, my grades were not satisfying. During the holiday, I realized English is of great and made up my mind to make progress. My plan goes as follows: for one thing, I will learn new words for at least 20 minutes every morning and recite a paragraph; for another, I will try to be in class. Besides, my spare time, I will read more books about different topics open my mind. I think I can improve a lot in this way, because there is a will, there is a way.‎ ‎【十二】‎ In the past, my hometown was very small. People there lived poor life and the houses were very old and shabby, even some of which were shaking in the wind. As for the traffic, it was very inconvenient that almost no tourists came.‎ However, there has been many changes in my hometown until now. Life has become better. The houses become larger and brighter，but more people get their own cars. Everywhere is decorated with green trees and beautiful flowers and grass. What's more, thousands of tourist from the world came here every year, that is really splendid. I believe my ‎ hometown will become more and more developed and beautifully. Everything in it will represent the advancing science and technology. At the same time, I will always keep it in my mind that my hometown must be greater in the future.‎ 答案：‎ In the past, my hometown was very small. People there lived poor life and the houses were veryold and shabby, even some of which were shaking in the wind. As for the traffic, it was inconvenient that almost no tourists came.‎ However, there been many changes in my hometown until now. Life has become better. The houses become larger and brighter， more people get their own cars. Everywhere is decorated with green trees and beautiful flowers and grass. What's more, thousands of from the world here every year, is really splendid. I believe my hometown will become more and more developed and . Everything in it will represent the science and technology. At the same time, I will always keep it in mind that my hometown must be greater in the future.‎ ‎【十三】‎ My mother is a teacher work in a key high school. She is too busy that she often has to get up early and stay up late. In addition to this, she hardly has any times to take exercise. She has been on poor health for some time. My father and I are worried that she may fall ill if she works too hard. These days I'm thinking why to develop my mother's interest in playing sports. Considered that today is Mother's Day, I decided buy a pair ‎ of jogging shoes for her. I secret put them on the desk in her study. When my mother entered into her study this evening, she looked surprised, but she immediately realized my intention. She promises that she would go jogging every evening.‎ 答案：‎ My mother is a teacher in a key high school. She is busy that she often has to get up early and stay up late. In addition to this, she hardly has any to take exercise. She has been poor health for some time. My father and I are worried that she may fall ill if she works too hard. These days I'm thinking to develop my mother's interest in playing sports. that today is Mother's Day, I decided buy a pair of jogging shoes for her. I put them on the desk in her study. When my mother entered her study this evening, she looked surprised, but she immediately realized my intention. She that she would go jogging every evening.‎ ‎【十四】‎ My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my parent went to work in the fields taking my little sister with Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to the river nearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped to the water immediate. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.‎ 答案：‎ My parents live in the country. They keep a dog Ah Fu. One ‎ day my went to work in the fields taking my little sister Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to river nearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She was trying to pick a flower she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped the water . When my parents heard Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu . It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.‎ ‎【十四】‎ I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 6, an eleventh grader in our school. Of many wonderful memory in my senior years, my New Year's party of 2015 is most unforgettable one.‎ The party was organized by ourself. Before the party, we prepare a lot of foods and fruits besides some humor and interesting performances. At the party, we danced while we singing excitedly for more than three hours in our classroom, completely forget our homework and pressure. It was the first time that I have sung an English song before so many people. My classmates gave me much applause and praise, that increased my selfconfidence greatly. Undoubted, what I did and got at the party left a deep impression on me, and I will never forget it.‎ 答案：‎ I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 6, an eleventh grader in our school. Of many wonderful in my senior years, my New Year's party of 2015 is most unforgettable one.‎ The party was organized by . Before the party, we a lot of foods and fruits besides some and interesting performances. At the party, we danced while singing excitedly for more than three hours in our classroom, completely our homework and pressure. It was the first time that I sung an English song before so many people. My classmates gave me much applause and praise, increased my selfconfidence greatly. ， what I did and got at the party left a deep impression on me, and I will never forget it.‎ ‎【十五】‎ In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary.‎ Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us learn from each other. And that's why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.‎ To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.‎ 答案：‎ In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of ‎ such as frustration and anxiety. ， if we cooperation too much, there be no progress. In my opinion, are important and necessary.‎ Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, rather, challenge is a driving force him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us learn from each other. And that's why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.‎ To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.‎ ‎【十六】‎ Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.‎ This family made deep impression on me. There were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn't have a lot of money. Their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. The children were wellbehaved, all of us standing in line, twobytwo behind their parents, held hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another performances where that they would see that night. Everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before.‎ 答案：‎ Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family us ‎ and the ticket counter.‎ This family made deep impression on me. There were eight children, probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn't have a lot of money. Their clothes not expensive, they were clean. The children were wellbehaved, all of standing in line, twobytwo behind their parents, hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and performances that they would see that night. Everyone could sense they never been to the circus before.‎ ‎【十七】‎ Mrs White was in hurry to visit her grandson because she missed her very much. It was nearly three months when she last saw her grandson. When she was walking by a playground, a football fly in her direction. She was already in her seventy. Should she kick the ball back and should she just go past leave it where it was？Finally she gave it a kick with greatly effort and the ball went straight on into the goal. What amazing it was! She helped them win the game.‎ 答案：‎ Mrs White was in hurry to visit her grandson because she missed very much. It was nearly three months she last saw her grandson. When she was walking by a playground, a football in her direction. She was already in her . Should she kick the ball back should she just go past it where it was? Finally she gave it a ‎ kick with effort and the ball went straight into the goal. amazing it was! She helped them win the game.‎ ‎【十八】‎ Early one morning in April, 2014, it was raining hardly. I was seating in my classroom by myself. “We shall soon leave Beijing and return back to Sichuan. You'll say goodbye to your new classmates.” That my father told me the other day sounded once again on my ears.‎ Although I had studied at school for only two months, I real loved everything there. What's more, the teaching conditions here are many better than those in Sichuan. As a child which was born in Sichuan, I knew almost nothing about the world outside. Therefore, after I came to Beijing, I saw so many things I had never seen.‎ 答案：‎ Early one morning in April, 2014, it was raining . I was in my classroom by myself. “We shall soon leave Beijing and return to Sichuan. You'll say goodbye to your new classmates.” my father told me the other day sounded once again my ears.‎ Although I had studied at school for only two months, I loved everything there. What's more, the teaching conditions here are better than those in Sichuan. As a child was born in Sichuan, I knew almost nothing about the world outside. ， after I came to Beijing, I saw so many things I had never seen.‎ ‎【十九】‎ Dear Editor，‎ I'm sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets ‎ nowadays. I take a problem more and more seriously for the following reasons. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make so much noise that it troubled residents a lot. What's more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, where makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. ‎ Take all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.‎ Yours Truly，‎ Wang Lin 答案：‎ Dear Editor，‎ I'm sorry to occupy your precious time, I really want to tell you about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take problem more and more seriously for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to people, pets make so much noise that it residents a lot. What's more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public where they may frighten children or even bite people. The important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. ‎ all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.‎ Yours Truly，‎ Wang Lin ‎【二十】‎ My biggest problem is that I'm too busy. When I am young, I used to have so much time, and these days I get up early and stay in school all day. Then I go right to home and eat dinner. Before I started high school, I used to spend a lot of time play games with my friends, but I just don't have time anymore. In the evening, I used to watch TV or chatted with my grandma, but now I has to study. I love music, and my father used to take me to concert. These days, I hardly ever have time with concerts. I do my homework and go to bed. I real miss the old days!‎ 答案：‎ My biggest problem is that I'm too busy. When I young, I used to have so much time, these days I get up early and stay in school all day. Then I go right home and eat dinner. Before I started high school, I used to spend a lot of time games with my friends, but I just don't have time anymore. In the evening, I used to watch TV or with my grandma, but now I to study. I love music, and my father used to take me to . These days, I hardly ever have time concerts. I do my homework and go to bed. I miss the old days!‎