【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之三：建议信

【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之三：建议信

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案三：建议信 写作模板 Dear________,‎ You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.‎ In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).‎ I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.‎ Good luck with your________________(祝愿).‎ Yours Sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎1. 建议信写作注意事项 ‎ 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。‎ ‎2. 写作方法 ‎① 首段：‎ a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；‎ b. 说明目的，注意语气。‎ ‎② 主体：‎ a. 提出具体建议；‎ b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；‎ c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。‎ ‎③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。‎ ‎3. 写作流程图 说明写信目的 介绍详情、说明原因 提出建议 提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 ‎ ‎ 第一部分：说明写信的目的 套语：‎ ‎(1) 来信收到，得知你下个月要对中国进行一次为期十天的访问，我建议……‎ ‎ I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a ten-day visit to China next month. I recommend that…‎ ‎(2) 写此信是要提出我对进一步提高和改进饭店管理的建议——建立我们自己的网站来吸引更多的客户。‎ ‎ I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients.‎ 第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因 套语： ‎ ‎(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。‎ It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.‎ ‎(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。‎ We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. ‎ ‎(3) 下午，我们会一起……‎ During the afternoon, we’ll...together. ‎ ‎(4) 记得带上水和午餐。‎ Remember to take water and lunch with you. ‎ ‎(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。‎ By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. ‎ ‎(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。‎ I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. ‎ ‎(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。‎ Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. ‎ ‎(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。‎ I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. ‎ 第三部分：提出建议 套语：‎ 我建议……‎ I’d like to suggest that…‎ May I suggest that…?‎ In my opinion…‎ I would like to make a recommendation that…‎ I am writing to advise…‎ If I were you, I would…‎ 第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 套语：‎ ‎(1) 对你就此事的关注不胜感激。‎ ‎ Thank you for your attention.‎ ‎(2) 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。‎ Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.‎ ‎ ‎ 经典试题训练 Writing1‎ 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。‎ 内容要点如下：‎ ‎1．表示理解并给予安慰；‎ ‎2．提出建议并说明理由。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数120左右；‎ ‎2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ ‎3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪 Hi Worried.:‎ I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment. ______________ ‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ Yours,‎ Jamie ‎【范文】‎ Hi Worried:‎ I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:‎ First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.‎ ‎ I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.‎ Yours，‎ Jamie Writing2‎ 学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；‎ ‎2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【范文】‎ Dear Editor,‎ I’ve learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one. I’m writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.‎ Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students’ interest and have positive effects on their study and life.‎ Compared to the entertainment, I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important. The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. In addition, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.‎ Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand, it covers one’s career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to one’s career success in the future.‎ What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Cheng Fei ‎ ‎ Writing3‎ 假定你是李华，你校在学生中征集意见，询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂(iPad classrooms)。你支持开设iPad课堂；请给校长写一封建议信，要点如下：‎ ‎1.资源丰富；‎ ‎2.促进交流；‎ ‎3.利于环保；‎ ‎4.其他理由。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.开头语已为你写好。‎ Dear Headmaster,‎ We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms._________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【范文】‎ Dear Headmaster,‎ We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms. I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons. To begin with, everyone learns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailor it to different needs. Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently. For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Most importantly, I believe students will develop their interests in the subjects by enjoying a new way of learning.‎ I hope you would take my ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua Writing4‎ 据报道， 藏羚羊(Tibetan antelope)受非法捕杀而濒临灭绝，总数从1990年的100万只锐减到现在不足10万只。假设你是李华，现请用英文给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA(China Wildlife Conservation Association)的会长写一封建议信。内容应包括:‎ ‎●简述藏羚羊的现状；‎ ‎●陈述原因(取羊皮获利等)；‎ ‎●提出你的建议(加大宣传力度、增加资金、选派志愿者等)。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数(可根据内容需要适当增加细节)；‎ ‎2.词数100左右。‎ Dear President,‎ I’m writing to give some suggestions to further protect the Tibetan antelope. __________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ Writing5‎ 随着近年来城市发展速度的加快，很多反映城市历史风貌的古建筑屡遭破坏。就这个问题请你以How to Protect the Ancient Buildings为题向报社写一封建议信。‎ 要点如下：‎ ‎1.很多古建筑被拆；‎ ‎2.呼吁拯救这些古建筑;‎ ‎3.希望有合理的解决方法。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ How to Protect the Ancient Buildings ‎________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【范文】‎ How to Protect the Ancient Buildings In recent years, as the city develops faster and faster, many old and historic buildings are being damaged by people. They want to make room for housing or offices in urban construction. Do you think we should try ‎ to protect those old buildings or replace them with the modern ones?‎ I think we should take measures to protect those ancient buildings, because they reflect the history and culture of the city. And the young will learn a lot when they visit the historical relic sites. The government and related departments should find a suitable solution to these problems. As a citizen, it is my and everyone’s duty to spare no efforts to take any way to protect the historical property.‎ Writing6‎ 你是张伟的好朋友John ，张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。‎ ‎1.比赛之前：认真准备，如平时可对着镜子练习；用语简练，使评委印象深刻。‎ ‎2.比赛时：保持微笑；忘词时不紧张，继续演讲。‎ 写作内容：‎ ‎1．说明回信的意图；‎ ‎2．向张伟提出建议；‎ ‎3．预祝张伟比赛成功。‎ Dear Zhangwei,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours,‎ John ‎ ‎ Writing7‎ 假如你是李华，你班要就“如何为高考做准备”开一个班会，请根据以下内容写一篇公开的建议信，谈谈你对高考准备过程中要注意的事项及建议理由：‎ ‎1.保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气；‎ ‎2.目标明确，正确评价自己；‎ ‎3.与父母，老师或同学沟通，帮忙走出困境；‎ ‎4.作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100—120，开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使得行文连贯。‎ ‎3.参考词汇：明确的 (definite) 评价(estimation)‎ No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National college Entrance Examination.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.‎ First, it’s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. Besides, we’d better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we’re in trouble. Finally, keeping a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.‎ With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.‎ Writing8‎ 假如你是黎斌老师,一个名叫李华的学生来信询问如何学好英语。请你根据以下提示给他写一封建议信：‎ ‎1.词汇对提高英语听、说、读、写的技能起到重要的作用。‎ ‎2.养成学练结合的习惯。‎ ‎3.培养兴趣。‎ 要求：词数：100〜120。‎ Dear Li Hua,‎ I am so sorry to hear that you are having trouble in learning English. However, the situation is so easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips for you.‎ Firstly, words play an important part in improving your listening, speaking, reading and writing skills. So you should remember words every day. Secondly, practice makes perfect. The best way to learn English well, I think, is to learn and use English at the same time. The most important of all, interest is the best teacher. Find happy ways to learn it, such as, reading more English storybooks or novels, watching more English ‎ cartoon TVs or movies, and so on.‎ I do hope my suggestions may be of great help to you.‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Mr Li