【英语】2020届二轮复习短文改错学案

【英语】2020届二轮复习短文改错学案

专题二 短文改错 ‎1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ ‎    注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ John is a tall man weighing as much as 100 kilogram.Though he is large，but he fears dogs.One day he was taking walk when a dog suddenly appeared from somewhere.He became so nervous that he ran as fast as he can.The dog kept run after him and it was getting closer.In the danger situation，John decided to climb up a tree to avoid the dog.Unfortunate，it was not an easy job.He hadn't gone up very high when the dog stood right above the tree.The dog jumped up and bit it's teeth into his bottom.John fell right onto the dog's head，that killed it immediately.‎ ‎2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ ‎    注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎         2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分 ‎        I live in the country and my father was a farmer. He is now forty-five year old. Because of years of hard work, he looks old than his age. When I was young, he is used to tell me the important of study. Father knows little about English and other subjects, but he usually gives me some good advices on how to learn his lessons good. He is not only kind to me but also very strict in me. With his help, I’ve made great progress. I’ll never forget what he taught me. I think my father is best father in the world. ‎ ‎3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Nowadays, the destruction of forests is one of most serious environment problems. From that I understand, people are destroying thousands of square kilometers of trees every day. This is killing hundreds of wild animals live in the forests. But something must be done. Unfortunately, we don’t do everything to protect the forests.‎ People who cut down trees should go to prison. That’s what happens in some country to people who sell plastic bags. That’s what should happened to people who destroy the forests. I can’t help but to think that we must protect wildlife for future generations. Hopeful, our children will be even much responsible that we are today.‎ ‎4、    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ ‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎      2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ It was raining hardly outside, that made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom. I rushed out and it was my mother, who is already in the fifties, that brought me lunch, in spite the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our children. But what had the children done in return？All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parents should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. How shall I do for you?‎ ‎5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ A smile is great importance to us because it has magic powers. It can not only refresh us mentally but also keep us closely to each other.‎ Last week, I take part in an English corner for the first time. When I arrived there, I felt so nervous that I had no idea what to express myself. Then the enthusiastic boy came up with a big smile on his face. He told me he felt the same way the first time that he came to the activity. He encouraged me to open my mouth and spoke English bravely. Then he introduced me to some other people and anyone present greeted me with a smile, it made me feel comfortable and confident.‎ I don’t remember what I said that day, but their smiling faces remains fresh in my memory.‎ ‎6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ I am an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with housework. Feel quite sorry for that, I begin to think about how to do to help.‎ Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not gave the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and another things ‎ scattered in the rooms and put them in the place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furnitures. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.‎ At this very moment, my parents came back and quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug but I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I felt quite happily.‎ ‎7、    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ ‎    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ ‎    删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。‎ ‎    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ ‎    注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2. 只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。‎ Kate was always unhappy about her figure, but she didn’t know how to lose the weight. One day, she went to consulting a doctor. The doctor advised her to have a balancing diet and exercise more. So her parents were both busy earning their living and couldn’t provide Kate a healthy diet. She often ate fast food who contained too much fat .She knew she ought to eat more vegetable and fruit that were good for her healthy. Luckily, two weeks late, with the help of the doctor, Kate become thinner. He was very happy and became more confidence about herself.‎ ‎8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;‎ ‎      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help, I made great Progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In other words, we would be separated long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future.‎ ‎9、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Dear Editor,‎ I am a high school student who will graduate next year. Since I enter Senior Three, I have found that some of the students in our class study more harder than before. They study laic ‎ into night, eating snacks and drink coffee. In the morning, some students have to go to school in a hurry without breakfast, which surely do harm to their healthy.‎ In my opinion, though we are under the heavy pressures of study, we should try to eat properly and gel so much rest as possible. Taking regular exercise is also that we need. Only by this way can we keep fit and study well.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎10、假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate each other. In the past people write letters to share informations and later they talked with each other on the telephone. Now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicating. And instead writing on the paper, they email to each other on the computer. As a result, people find that quicker and easier to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in writing. They worry about whether people can be as closely as before.‎ ‎11、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ I’m very glad to have the chance to run after the president of the student union. I am student in Grade Three. Since I come to the high school, I have always been the monitor of my class. I have done a very good job for my classmate and my teachers give me good praise. I’m good in communication and organizing but always ready to help others. Moreover, I have some hobbies and I’m sure that I am well to fit for this position. If I became president, I’ll try my best to make the union attractive by organizing differently activities. I’ll do many things for you to meet my demands as well. I hope you will give me a chance.‎ ‎12、下面文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ Now many students had iPods and think it is a fashion to use them. By using a iPod, we can listen to music and download lots of learning materials. Clear, it is of great use to our study. Some students, instead of, bring their iPods to the classroom and listen to music with earphones，which make the teachers and other students badly upset. Some of them even waste time in class played video games.‎ In my opinions, we should make good use iPods to get success in study. The classroom is a place when students study. Besides, the school should make a rule to guide we students to use iPods properly.‎ ‎13、   英语课上，老师要求同桌相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号 （^），并在此符号下面写出改加的词。‎ ‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎                  2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ In my school life, a most unforgettable person is my math teacher. Not only did she helped us in class but also after class. I still remember the time that I got a “B” in the final exam. I liked math best but the teacher took pride in me all the time. However, I failed. I felt so disappointing that I lost my energy and confident. Then one day, I happened meet her in the street, and my face turned red right away. She told me not to give up and encourage me to work much more harder. Later, she offered me a great many suggestions on learning math. In addition, she cared for my feelings. With her help, I made greatly progress.‎ ‎14、文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ I am sorry to hear that you are upset about the fact what you are laughed at by your classmates because you are short and fat.Of course, it was impolite for them to laugh at others’ physically disadvantages. You need to communicate with them and be preparing to help them when they are in need to help. And you will find that you are popular with your friend. If they continue to make fun with you, you can turn to your teachers and parents for help. From a letter you sent to me, I knew that you gained lots of weight because of you preference for junk food. This is a bad habit and you must give them up. Besides, you’d better to do some exercise every day to lose weight.‎ ‎15.、假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎   I once bought the beautiful bracelet from a store and felt excited when I tried it on. Sadly, I was soon disappointed at that my naughty kids broke it. But instead of just feel sad, I chose to repair it myself.‎ To my greatly surprise, it didn’t take a long time to do it. As time went by, I found that I was not happy with just repairing my breaking bracelets. I started making new bracelets out the materials from my old one. Later on, I begin to design on my own.‎ The I made my first deal. Back in 2013, I posted my bracelets on WeChat for the first time and several friends said that they wanted it. That was just the start. With many materials at hand, I made my designs into real.‎ ‎16、假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Nowadays surfing the Internet has been part of our life. The Internet have made our life more convenient in many ways. We can acquire information, keep in touch with our friends and relax us on the Internet. Therefore, the Internet has some negative effect on us teenagers. Some teenagers spent too much time chatting online. Others are addicted to play computer games. As result, they don’t have enough sleep or physical exercise, what is harmful to their health. Worse still, they have trouble concentrating in their lessons.‎ Because we are the masters of our country in the future, so we must learn to be responsible for ourselves. I hope we all can get rid of playing computer games.‎ ‎17、   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎       As students, all of us will be faced a problem after passed the college entrance examination. Should we choose a good major and a good university first? Here are some differently ideas. Some more prefer to choose a major first so that they can learn something what they are interested in. In this way, they can put their hearts into study and got their ‎ favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important to one’s develop and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find good jobs. As far as I’m concerned, maybe the choice should be a good university if we can’t obtain both.‎ ‎18、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ ‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Life is always full of something that you can not expect. Bob is very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. He got up early as usually in the morning, but when he was ready to leave he find his bicycle’s front tyre flat. He wanted to take taxi to school, and he didn’t have any money on him. He had to look for a place along the street to get his bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops was open in the early morning. So he had to walk to school, carrying his bicycle all the way. That was the reason how he was late for school. He told Mr. White not to worry with his lessons, for he would make up for it and turn to his teachers for help if necessary.‎ ‎19、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ I felt delighted to be informed the news that I would be our Student Union’s next minister of health. Therefore, when I calmed down, I began to realize what challenging the job would be. I can still remember the first time I hold a meeting with all the members, that was a real challenge for me. With so many eyes fixing on me, I struggled to speak as my face and ears turned complete red. I had never felt so nervous ago.‎ Although I went through a series of difficulty, I gained a lot as well — a plenty of new friends, the ability to communicate and an improvement in my organizational skills.‎ ‎20、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ When I was young, I want to be a great hero. But with lime goes by, things have changed. Now I’ve deeded to become a doctor which can help save people’s lives. This job is helpfully and worth doing. And how to make it come true?‎ I know it is really big challenge. I will work hard and go all out for it. From now on I will spend on more time learning my lessons, so that I can go to your ideal university. On the same time I am going to read many books on medicines. I believe I will achieve my dream.‎ 专题二 短文改错 参考答案 ‎1、John is a tall man weighing as much as 100 .Though his is large， he fears dogs.One day he was taking  walk when a dog suddenly appeared from somewhere.He became so nervous that he ran as fast as he .The dog kept after him and it was getting closer.In the situation，John decided to climb up a tree to avoid the dog.，it was not an easy job.He hadn't gone up very high when the dog stood right the tree.The dog jumped up and bit teeth into his bottom.John fell right onto the dog's head， killed it immediately.‎ ‎2、1.was 改为 is。根据上下文的时态可知。‎ ‎　　2. 第一个year改为years。因它受 forty-five 的修饰。‎ ‎　　3. old 改为 older。因其后有表示比较的 than。‎ ‎　　4. 去掉is。比较：used to=过去经常，be used to=习惯于。‎ ‎　　5. important变成importance ‎　　6. advices 改为 advice。advice 为不可数名词。‎ ‎　　7.his-----my  ‎ ‎8. good 改为 well。修饰动词要用副词，不用形容词。‎ ‎　　9. in 改为 with。be strict in后接某事，be strict with后接某人。‎ ‎　  10. best 前加 the。形容词最高级前通常要加定冠词。‎ ‎3、第一句：of 后加the 第二句：that---what 第三句：live—living 第四句：But---So/And 第五句：everything---anything 第七句：country---countries 第八句：happened---happen 第九句：but后的to去掉 第十句：Hopeful---Hopefully; much---more ‎4、It was raining  outside,  made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure  by our classroom. I rushed out and it was my mother, who is already in  fifties, that brought me lunch, in spite  the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for  children. But what  the children done in return? All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parents should serve  them unconditionally. My dear mum  dad, thank you very much for bringing me up.  shall I do for you?‎ ‎5、A smile is ∧ great importance to us because it has magic powers. It can not only refresh us mentally but also ‎ ‎         of keep us closely to each other.‎ ‎       close Last week, I take part in an English corner for the first time. When I arrived there, I felt so nervous that I had no ‎ ‎          took idea what to express myself. Then the enthusiastic boy came up with a big smile on his face. He told me he felt the ‎ ‎    how                    an same way the first time that he came to the activity. He encouraged me to open my mouth and spoke English bravely. ‎ ‎                   删除that                                                 speak Then he introduced me to some other people and anyone present greeted me with a smile, it made me feel ‎ ‎                                        everyone                        which(或it前加and)‎ comfortable and confident.‎ I don’t remember what I said that day, but their smiling faces remains fresh in my memory.‎ ‎                                                     remain ‎6、I am an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped ‎ help my parents with housework. Feel quite sorry for that, I begin to think about how to do to help.‎ ‎                       Feeling                                what Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not gave ‎                                                                       give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and another things ‎                                                                  other scattered in the rooms and put them in the place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furnitures. ‎ ‎                            去掉 the                               furniture After that, I swept and mopped the floors.‎ ‎∧ ‎ ‎ ‎ At this very moment, my parents came back and quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy ‎ ‎                                     were and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug but I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I ‎ ‎                                     and was, I felt quite happily. ‎ ‎             happy ‎7、1.去 the 2. consulting-consult 3. balancing- balanced ‎ ‎4. So- But 5. Kate 后加with 6.who-which 7.healthy –health ‎ ‎8.late-later 9.He- She 10. confidence-confident ‎8、76.friend改为friends  77.spend改为spent    78.Thank改为Thanks   79.去掉a  80.board改为aboard ‎81.another改为other    82.him改为her    83.has改为had  84.touch前加in  85.see改为seeing ‎9、Dear Editor,‎ I am a high school student who will graduate next year. Since I enter in Senior ‎                                                  entered Three, I have found that some of the students in our class study more harder than ‎ ‎                                                 去掉more before. They study late into ∧night, eating snacks and drink coffee. In the morning, some ‎                      the                   drinking students have to go to school in a hurry without breakfast, which surely do harm to ‎                                                         does ‎ their healthy.‎ health                                                ‎ In my opinion, though we are under the heavy pressures of study, we should try ‎                                      pressure to eat properly and get so much rest as possible. Taking regular exercise is also that we ‎                   as                                           what  ‎ need. Only by this way can we keep fit and study well.‎ ‎         in Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎10、Great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate ∧ each other. In the past people ‎ ‎             去掉been                                   with write letters to share informations and later they talked with each other on the telephone. Now more and more people wrote            information use our own mobile phones to communicating. And instead ∧ A writing on the paper, they email to each other on ‎ ‎   their                 communicate              of the computer. As a result, people find that quicker and easier to communicate, and at the same time some people ‎                                it                              but feel that they become poorer in writing. They worry about whether people can be as closely as before.‎ ‎                                                                    close ‎11、第一句：after→for 第二句：student前加a 第三句：come→came 第四句：classmate→classmates 第五句：in→at；but→and 第六句：去掉to 第七句：became→become；differently→different 第八句：my→your ‎12、Now many students had iPods and think it is a fashion to use them. By using a iPod, we can listen ‎                have                                          an ‎ to music and download lots of learning materials. Clear, it is of great use to our study. Some ‎                                         Clearly students, instead of, bring their iPods to the classroom and listen to music with earphones, which ‎             删除of make the teachers and other students badly upset. Some of them even waste time in class played video makes                                                                   playing games.‎ In my opinions, we should make good use ∧ iPods to get success in study. The classroom is a place ‎     opinion                        of when students study. Besides, the school should make a rule to guide we students to use iPods properly.‎ where                                                   us ‎13、a改为the       did she helped-----helped 改为 help that 改为 when        but ------and        disappointing-----disappointed confident改为confidence       happened后加to encourage改为encouraged      去掉more       greatly------great ‎14、1.waht---that    2.was—is         3.physically---physical    4.preparing---prepared ‎          5.friend---friends    6.with----of       7.a---the             8.you---your ‎          9.them---it          10.to去 ‎15、1. beautiful前 the---a   2. disappointed 后 at去掉  3. feel—feeling  4. greatly-great ‎5. breaking-broken   6. out 后加 of    7. one—ones  8. begin—began  9. it—them  10. real—reality ‎16、Nowadays surfing the Internet has been part of our life. The Internethavemade our life ‎ ‎ has more convenient in many ways. We can acquire information, keep in touch with our friends ‎ and relax us on the Internet. Therefore, the Internet has some negative effect on us teenagers. ‎ ‎       ourselves        However                           effects Some teenagers spent too much time chatting online. Others are addicted to play computer ‎ ‎             spend                                           playing games. As ^result, they don’t have enough sleep or physical exercise, what is harmful to ‎ ‎         a                                              which their health. Worse still, they have trouble concentrating in their lessons.‎ ‎ on Because we are the masters of our country in the future, so we must learn to be responsible ‎ for ourselves. I hope we all can get rid of playing computer games.‎ ‎17、       As students, all of us will be faced ∧ a problem after passed the college entrance examination. Should we ‎ ‎                                                    ①with             ②passing choose a good major and a good university first? Here are some differently ideas. Some more prefer to choose a ‎ ‎                            ③or                                                           ④different                           ⑤‎ major first so that they can learn something what they are interested in. In this way, they can put their hearts into ‎ ‎                                                 ⑥that/which或what study and got their favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important to one’s develop and ‎ ‎          ⑦get                                                 ⑧Others                                                                  ⑨development that graduates from key universities are more likely to find good jobs. As far as I’m concerned, maybe the choice ‎ ‎                                                                                                                  ⑩concerned should be a good university if we can’t obtain both.‎ ‎18、1. missed the first two lesson 中lesson改为lessons 2. he got up as usually 中usually改为usual 3. find改为found 4. take taxi 之间加a 5. and he didn’t have any money中 and改为but 6. repairing改为repaired 7. 去掉shops was open之间的was 8. the reason how he was late中 how改为why 9. not to worry with his lessons中 with 改为about 10. make up for it 中 it 改为 them ‎19、I felt delighted to be informed ∧ the news that I would be our Student Union’s next minister ‎ ‎                          of/about of health. Therefore, when I calmed down, I began to realize what challenging the job would ‎ ‎         However                                 how be. I can still remember the first time I hold a meeting with all the members, that was a real ‎ ‎                               held                           which challenge for me．With so many eyes fixing on me，I struggled to speak as my face and ears ‎ ‎                               fixed turned complete red. I had never felt so nervous ago.‎ ‎     completely                        before Although I went through a series of difficulty, I gained a lot as well — a plenty of new ‎ ‎                                 difficulties                  去掉a ‎ friends, the ability to communicate and an improvement in my organizational skills.‎ ‎20、When I was young, I want to be a great hero. But with lime goes by, things have changed. Now I’ve ‎ ‎                wanted                as或going deeded to become a doctor which can help save people’s lives. This job is helpfully and worth doing.‎ ‎                    who/that                                 helpful And how to make it come true?‎ But I know it is really ∧ big challenge. I will work hard and go all out for it. From now on I ‎ ‎                a will spend on more time learning my lessons, so that I can go to your ideal university. On the same ‎ ‎                                                   my/the             At  ‎ time I am going to read many books on medicines. I believe I will achieve my dream.‎ ‎                                medicine ‎