2020届外研版高考英语新一轮作文复习：第四编妙连缀

2020届外研版高考英语新一轮作文复习：第四编妙连缀

缺乏衔接过渡的文章，就好比一串断了线的珍珠，每个词句虽光彩夺目，拿出来却七零八落，不堪受用。要想成就一篇美文，光靠一个个华丽词句的堆砌不行，还需要穿珠之线，这个线就是衔接过渡。‎ 增分技法(一)　过渡自然的对比用语 比较和对照法是英语作文的基本写作方法之一。在这类作文的表达中，要使作文连贯、流畅，有条理，灵活运用对比类过渡连接词至关重要，过渡词也是信息词，能较好地表明作者想比较或对照的意图。对比用语大致分为两类：‎ ‎(一)相似的比较。常用的有for one thing ...for another (一方面……另一方面)，in the same way (以相同的方式，同样地)，just as (正如)，similarly (相似地，类似地)，equally (同样地)。‎ 如：I think it is a kind of winwin activity.For one thing, I can help take care of the children.For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.‎ 我认为这是一种双赢的活动。一方面，我可以帮助照顾孩子。另外一方面，我可以提高我的英语水平，结交更多的朋友，并丰富我的暑假生活。‎ ‎[应用体验1]　翻译句子 ‎①我想尽力做得最好，但同时我也得考虑费用。‎ I_am_trying_to_do_what_is_best,_but_equally_I've_got_to_consider_the_cost.‎ ‎②正如单个单词可以改变一句话的意思，单个句子也可以改变一段话的意思。‎ Just_as_a_single_word_can_change_the_meaning_of_a_sentence,_a_single_sentence_can_change_the_meaning_of_a_paragraph.‎ ‎③那么我们如何解决这个问题呢？就我个人而言，骑自行车是一个好的解决方式。一方面，自行车不需要任何汽油，它们是节能的。另一方面，自行车是环保的，因为它们不会排放废气。另外，骑自行车是我们锻炼的好方式并且它有益于我们的健康。‎ How_can_we_solve_the_problem_then?_As_far_as_I'm_concerned,_riding_bicycles_is_a_good_solution._For_one_thing,_bicycles_don't_need_any_petrol_and_they_are_energysaving._For_another,_bicycles_are_environmentally_friendly_because_they_won't_give_off_waste_gas._What's_more,_riding_bicycles_is_a_good_way_for_us_to_exercise_and_it_is_‎ beneficial_to_our_health.‎ ‎(二)还有一种对比是表示相反的意思：如：on the other hand (另外一方面)，on the contrary (相反)，compared with/to (与……比较)，in comparison with (与……比较)，in contrast (to)(和……对比)，instead (代替)，while (而；然而)，unlike (不像)，however (然而；仍然)，whereas (然而；反之)，yet (然而)。‎ ‎①As a citizen, we mustn't do anything to harm our city.On the contrary, we should obey the city rules and protect the city environment.作为一个公民，我们不能做损害我们的城市的事。相反，我们应该遵守城市规则，保护城市环境。‎ ‎②However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is wellknown at home and abroad.‎ 然而，其他学生反对这一观点，认为建于1906年的北京动物园有着100年的历史，并且享誉国内外。‎ ‎[应用体验2]　翻译句子 ‎①我可不像你，我不太会跳舞。‎ Unlike_you,_I_am_not_a_great_dancer.‎ ‎②与此相反，其他人主张广泛阅读。‎ In_contrast,_others_insist_on_reading_extensively.‎ ‎③他们的批评并没有使我感到气馁，相反，我比以前更加努力了。‎ Their_criticism_did_not_discourage_me.On_the_contrary,_I_worked_even_harder.‎ ‎④有些学生认为中学生应该做社会实践。然而，其他人的想法不同，认为他们太年轻，不能融入这个世界。‎ Some_students_hold_the_view_that_middle_school_students_should_do_social_practice.However,_others_think_differently,_believing_that_they_are_too_young_to_fit_in_with_the_world.‎ ‎[专题过关训练]‎ 翻译句子 ‎1．她学习英语有困难，然而她学习努力，进步很快。‎ She_has_difficulty_in_learning_English._However,_she_works_hard_and_is_making_rapid_progress.‎ ‎2．我们的生活也是如此，一个人不和他人合作，仅靠自己是不可能轻易地完成一项富有挑战性的任务的。‎ Similarly_in_our_life,_an_individual_person_cannot_easily_carry_out_a_challenging_task_on_his_own_without_joining_hands_with_others.‎ ‎3．首先，和传统的购物相比，它很方便。‎ To begin with, compared with traditional shopping, it's very convenient.‎ ‎4．令人惊讶的是，萨莉不像以前的老师一样被驱逐出去；相反，她赢得了学生的尊重。‎ Surprisingly,_Sally_was_not_driven_out_like_the_former_teachers;_instead,_she_won_respect_from_the_students.‎ ‎5．一方面，我可以了解一周发生的重要事情；另一方面，世界知名人士的成功故事也深深地吸引了我，这让我明白一个道理：人人贡献一份力量，世界会变得更美好。‎ For_one_thing,_I_can_learn_all_important_things_that_have_happened_during_the_week.For_another,_equally_attractive_are_the_success_stories_of_worldfamous_people,_which_help_me_understand_how_a_person_can_work_hard_to_make_the_world_a_better_place.‎ 增分技法(二)　条理分明的时序用语 阅卷老师看文章一般要通过一些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚、自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面的时序用语加入到你的几个要点前就OK了。常见的时序用语有：‎ ‎1．表示“现在”的有：nowadays/now (现在), at present (目前), recently (最近)。‎ Nowadays it's acceptable for women to be ambitious.‎ 如今，女性胸怀大志也能被接受。‎ ‎2．表示“首先，第一”的有：first/firstly (第一), to begin/start with (首先), in the first place/first of all (首先)。‎ ‎①(2017·天津高考书面表达)Firstly, I am expected to know about the polite language related to my service.‎ 首先，我必须知道有关服务的礼貌用语。‎ ‎②To begin with, your brother is qualified for that kind of demanding job.‎ 首先，你的弟弟足够胜任这样高强度的工作。‎ ‎3．表示“后来，不久，然后”的有：after (在……之后), afterwards/later on (后来), after that (后来), after a while (一会儿之后), before long (不久), shortly after (之后；立即), since (自从)。‎ Several years after they'd split up, they met again by chance in Paris.他们分手几年以后在巴黎又偶然相遇。‎ ‎[应用体验1]　完成片段 首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。‎ ‎①Firstly,_I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. ②Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. ③After_that,_I swept ‎ and mopped the floors.‎ ‎4．表示“在此期间，同时”的有：meanwhile/meantime (在此期间), in the meantime (在此期间), at the same time (与此同时), while (当……的时候)。‎ At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.‎ 就在这时，我的父母回来了，他们非常惊讶地看到所有房间都很整洁，地板闪闪发亮。‎ They will be here soon.In the meantime, let's have coffee.‎ 他们很快就会回来。在此期间，我们喝杯咖啡吧。‎ ‎5．表示“最后”的有：finally/lastly(最后), in the end/eventually/at last (终于)。‎ We were thinking about going to Switzerland, but in the end we went to Austria.‎ 我们一直打算去瑞士，可最后却去了奥地利。‎ ‎[应用体验2]　翻译句子 ‎①最近，我们班热烈讨论了北京动物园是否应该搬出城市。‎ Recently,_our_class_have_had_a_heated_discussion_about_whether_the_Beijing_Zoo_should_be_moved_out_of_the_city.‎ ‎②医生很快就来，在这期间，尽量放松一下。‎ The_doctor_will_be_here_soon.In_the_meantime,_try_your_best_and_relax_yourself.‎ ‎③首先，我们应制订一个合理的计划。‎ First_of_all,_we_should_make_a_reasonable_plan.‎ ‎④最后，我想问一下你未来的计划。‎ Lastly,_I_would_like_to_ask_about_your_future_plans.‎ ‎[专题过关训练]‎ 翻译句子 ‎1．(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)首先，记住，你最好准时到达，或者比约定时间早一点到达，这对于表示你的礼貌很重要。‎ First_of_all,_bear_in_mind_that_you_had_better_arrive_punctually_or_some_time_earlier_than_the_appointed_time,_which_is_of_great_significance_to_show_your_politeness.‎ ‎2．(2018·6月浙江高考写作)最终，在英语演讲比赛中，我取得了第一名的好成绩。‎ Eventually,_I_came_out_of_the_English_Speech_Contest_as_the_first_prize_winner.‎ ‎3．(2016·天津高考书面表达)自从你来参加这个交流项目已经有两周了，这让我们大家受益很多。‎ It_has_been_two_weeks_since_you_came_here_for_the_exchange_program,_which_has_benefited_us_all_a_lot.‎ ‎4．最后，我们应该经常参加体育和户外活动。‎ Finally,_we_should_take_part_in_sports_and_outdoor_activities_frequently.‎ ‎5．当今，微信很受人们的欢迎。‎ Nowadays,_WeChat_is_very_popular_with_people.‎ ‎6．约翰在他母亲刚过世后度过了一段艰难时期。‎ John_got_through_a_difficult_period_shortly_after_his_mother's_death.‎ 增分技法(三)　不要人云亦云的因果桥梁词 ‎(一)让“因为”变得不简单 ‎“因为”，如because/because of等很难激起阅卷老师心底哪怕一丝丝的涟漪。如何有效诠释这个人们时常挂在嘴边的“因为”呢？我们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多变的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。‎ ‎1．首先as a result of, as a consequence of, due to, owing to, on account of, thanks to, by reason of, for the reason of, for the sake of等介词短语都将是你不错的选择。‎ Because of/Owing to/Due to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university.由于你的鼓励，我在数学上不断进步，最后我决定在大学学习数学。‎ ‎2．若想连接句子，则可使用since, for, as, now that, in that, considering等连接词。‎ Since it happened, why not try hard to get it settled?‎ 既然事已发生，为什么不努力去解决它呢？‎ ‎3．倘若认为以上表达稍显单调，则可加入各种从句。譬如：借助名词性从句，可构成owing/due to the fact that ...此类表达；借助定语从句，可构成which results from, accounts for, makes for等表达。‎ ‎①Due to the fact that Ryan was severely injured in the car accident, he was immediately sent to the ICU.‎ 由于在车祸中受了重伤，瑞恩立刻被送往重症监护病房。‎ ‎②Generation gap, which may result from differences in thoughts and consciousness, makes it hard for children to live harmoniously with their parents.‎ 代沟可能产生于思想、意识上的分歧，它让孩子们很难与父母和睦相处。‎ ‎[应用体验1]　翻译句子 ‎①那个周末因高速驾驶造成的交通事故很多。‎ Accidents_due_to_driving_at_high_speed_were_very_common_that_weekend.‎ ‎②因为Laura的指导，Samuel在语法学习上取得了稳定的进步。‎ Owing_to_the_guidance_from_Laura,_Samuel_has_made_steady_progress_in_grammar_learning.‎ ‎③既然你不愿告诉我们真相，我们只有向警方求助了。‎ Now_that_you_are_unwilling_to_tell_us_the_truth,_we_have_to_turn_to_the_police_for_help.‎ ‎④鉴于你违反了交通规则，你面临被罚款的风险。‎ Considering_that_you_have_broken_the_traffic_rules,_you_are_running_the_risk_of_being_fined.‎ ‎⑤因为玩网络游戏会消耗大量时间，所以它对青少年危害极大。‎ Due_to_the_fact_that_playing_online_games_will_swallow_a_huge_amount_of_time,_it_does_great_harm_to_teenagers.‎ ‎⑥近来，我们的日常生活受到雾霾的极大影响，这是由日益严重的空气污染造成的。‎ Recently,_our_daily_life_has_been_greatly_affected_by_the_smog,_which_results_from_the_growingly_serious_air_pollution.‎ ‎(二)炫酷“结果”表达法 简单地使用“because, so”来表示英语中的因果关系，难免会使你的作文落入俗套。然而，若巧妙动用一些小心机，借用炫酷“结果”表达法，则极易引人入胜。‎ ‎1．表达“结果”“因此”，可借用以下衔接词：thus, therefore, consequently, as a result, as a consequence等，简洁明了，干净利索。‎ ‎①I was badly treated in your store.Consequently, I am writing to you in expectation of getting things settled.‎ 在你的店里，我受到了不好的对待。因此，我写信给你，希望事情能得到解决。‎ ‎②(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Therefore, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty.‎ 因此，请花些时间简单地看看唐朝的历史。‎ ‎2．非谓语动词的加入也为“结果”表达法增色不少，极易吸引阅卷老师的眼球。其中，较为突出的表达有thus/therefore doing, end up doing, only/never to do等，充分展示了非谓语动词这种高级语言结构的妙用。‎ ‎①The scientists made joint efforts, therefore making a great breakthrough.‎ 这些科学家勠力同心，因此取得了重大突破。‎ ‎②I eagerly unpacked the package, only to find a broken book in it.我急切地打开包裹，结果只在里面发现一本破书。‎ ‎3．在表达“结果”时，定语从句也可作为生机勃勃的生力军。拥有“结果”“因此”“导致”之意的动词短语、介词短语和定语从句的有机结合，如：which results in, leads to, contributes to或者as a result, consequence of which等，更是为“结果”表达法注入了亮点。‎ When facing troubles, he couldn't keep calm, which results in his constant failures.‎ 面对困境时，他不能保持镇定，这导致他不断失败。‎ ‎[应用体验2]　翻译句子 ‎①天上下着倾盆大雨，因此，运动会不能如期举行了。‎ It_rained_dogs_and_cats.Consequently,_the_sports_meeting_couldn't_be_held_as_scheduled.‎ ‎②我身处困境时，你帮我摆脱了麻烦。所以，向你献上我最诚挚的谢意。‎ You_helped_me_out_when_I_was_in_trouble.Thus,_I_owe_my_most_sincere_gratitude_to_you.‎ ‎③迈克以其出色的表现击败了比尔，因此赢得了冠军。‎ Mike_defeated_Bill_for_his_marvelous_performance,_therefore_winning_the_championship.‎ ‎④Lily在成千上万竞争者中脱颖而出，因而获得了广泛关注。‎ Lily_stood_out_among_thousands_of_competitors,_thus_winning_widespread_attention.‎ ‎⑤面试的紧张情绪可能会导致糟糕的表现，从而造成负面的印象。‎ Being_nervous_about_the_interview_can_lead_to_bad_performance,_which_might_result_in_a_negative_impression.‎ ‎[专题过关训练]‎ 翻译句子 ‎1．(2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)我们应该早点出发的原因是我希望有更多时间来阅读和挑选书籍。‎ The_reason_why_we_should_set_out_early_is_that_I_hope_to_have_more_time_to_read_and_select_books.‎ ‎2．(2016·四川高考书面表达)春天是我最喜欢的季节，因为我喜欢闻花的芳香，看树的新绿，听小鸟的歌唱。‎ I_like_spring_best,_owing_to_the_fact_that_I_love_to_smell_the_fragrance_of_flowers,_see_the_new_green_trees_and_hear_the_singing_of_small_birds.‎ ‎3．他努力学习，结果考试获得了好成绩。‎ He_worked_hard_at_his_lessons,_so_that_he_gained_high_grades_in_the_exams.‎ ‎4．正如谚语所说：“三个臭皮匠赛过诸葛亮。”鉴于此，团队合作极其重要。‎ As_a_proverb_goes,_“Two_heads_are_better_than_one.”_As_a_result,_teamwork_is_of_vital_importance.‎ 增分技法(四)　峰回路转的转折表达法 转折关系是逻辑关系中最常见的一种，在高考英语写作中常常会用到，比如在记叙文中表达事情出现转折，在议论文中表达不同的观点等。‎ 在转折关系中，最常用的就是although/though和but，二者不能同时使用。例如：‎ Although everyone wants to succeed in what he tries, sometimes failure can't be ‎ avoided.‎ ‎＝Everyone wants to succeed in what he tries, but sometimes failure can't be avoided.‎ 虽然每个人都想在尝试中成功，但有时失败是不可避免的。‎ 关于转折关系的表达，大致可以分为以下几类：‎ ‎(一)however, but, yet, whereas, at the same time然而，不过，但是 ‎①(2017·江苏高考书面表达)The boxoffice income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.‎ 从2012年到2015年，中国电影的票房收入是不断增长的，但在2016年，由于某种原因其增长减慢了。‎ ‎②However, it can be harmful to our friendship.‎ 然而，这可能会对我们的友谊造成伤害。‎ ‎③She has her weakness, yet that does not mean she is not up to the job.‎ 她有缺点，然而那并不意味着她不能胜任这项工作。‎ ‎[应用体验1]　翻译句子 ‎①但是，如果你采纳了我的建议，这种情况就很容易改变。‎ However,_the_situation_is_easy_to_change_if_you_take_my_advice.‎ ‎②我们国家在环境保护方面已经取得巨大进步，但是很多问题仍然存在。‎ We_have_made_great_progress_in_terms_of_the_environmental_protection_in_our_country,_but_many_problems_still_exist.‎ ‎③这个问题虽然很难，但却非常有趣。‎ It's_a_difficult_problem,_at_the_same_time_it_is_very_interesting.‎ ‎④玛丽知道她不会获胜，然而她还是继续尝试下去。‎ Mary_knew_that_she_would_not_win,_yet_she_went_on_trying.‎ ‎⑤他很穷，然而他的弟弟却很富有。‎ He_was_rather_poor,_whereas_his_brother_was_very_rich.‎ ‎(二)otherwise(否则，不然), despite/in spite of/regardless of(不管，不顾), rather than(而不是), instead (of)(相反，而，却), on the other hand(另一方面), unfortunately(不幸地，令人遗憾地)‎ ‎①Do your work every day; otherwise, it will pile up.‎ 今日事今日毕，否则事情会堆积如山。‎ ‎②On the other hand, it causes pollution to our fragile environment, which will in turn do harm to our health.‎ 另一方面，它对我们脆弱的环境造成污染，反过来也会危害我们的健康。‎ ‎[应用体验2]　翻译句子 ‎①(2018·北京高考书面表达)‎ 不管你选择什么课程，你都会快速有效地增强你的语言能力。‎ Regardless_of_your_choice_of_course,_you'll_develop_your_language_ability_both_quickly_and_effectively.‎ ‎②快点，不然我们将会上学迟到。‎ Hurry_up,_or_we'll_be_late_for_school.‎ ‎③是你而不是我应为这次事故受到责备。‎ It_is_you_rather_than_I_that_are_to_blame_for_the_accident.‎ ‎④遗憾的是，现实世界从来不会表现得如此完美。‎ Unfortunately,_the_real_world_never_behaves_so_perfectly.‎ ‎(三)although/though/as/while(虽然), even if/though(尽管), no matter ...(无论，不管)‎ Although/though I can enjoy more freedom, I realize that being a grownup means more responsibilities.虽然我可以享受更多的自由，但是我认识到作为成年人也意味着更多的责任。‎ ‎[应用体验3]　翻译句子 ‎①尽管多年没有见过我的同学，我还是马上认出了他。‎ Even_though_I_hadn't_seen_my_classmate_for_many_years,_I_recognized_him_immediately.‎ ‎②不管遇到多少困难，她都不会放弃。‎ No_matter_how_many_difficulties_she_meets,_she_refuses_to_give_up.‎ ‎③尽管我们旅行前预订的房间很小，但是很舒适。‎ Although/Though_small,_the_room_we_had_booked_before_the_journey_was_pleasant.‎ ‎[专题过关训练]‎ 完成语段 ‎1．正如你所知，我对美国文化很感兴趣。生活在美国是一个了解美国文化以及提高英文水平的良机。然而，我刚得知寄宿家庭的主人生病了，住在他家会很不方便，所以我需要你的帮助。‎ As you know, ①I_have_been_interested_in_American_culture.②Staying_in_America will be a great opportunity for me to learn more about American culture and improve my English.③However,_I've_just_learned_that_my_host_falls_ill and it will be inconvenient for me to stay in his house.④So_I_need_your_help.‎ ‎2．刚开始学英语的时候，我本想在一周内拿下它。然而我却失败了。之后我调整了学习策略。不再记忆单词短语和背诵文章，我耐心地遵循着我的学习道路，欣赏英文音乐、电影和杂志。不知不觉中，我的英语进步了。‎ At the beginning of English learning, ①I_had_intended_to_conquer_it within one week.②But_I_failed.③After_that,_I made adjustments to my strategies.④Instead_of_memorizing words_and_phrases and reciting articles, I took my path with patience and enjoyed English music, films and magazines.⑤I_made_progress_in_English before I realized it.‎ 增分技法(五)　多样多变的递进用语 大部分学生都能够脱口而出一个递进用语：“not only ...but also”。我们在英语学习的过程中已经习惯了很多诸如此类的“简单的递进关系”，因而不常思变。实际上，英语中有很多方式表达递进关系。下面介绍一些可以让文章增色，增加表达效率的递进用语。‎ ‎(一)常见的递进用语词有：besides/moreover/furthermore/what is more(此外；而且), also(还), additionally(另外)等。‎ ‎①He was a talented artist, moreover, a writer of some note.‎ 他是一位有才华的艺术家，同时也是颇有名气的作家。‎ ‎②What's more, I get along well with my parents and my friends.而且，我和父母、朋友之间相处融洽。‎ ‎[应用体验1]　翻译句子 ‎①此外，个人安全也可能是他们的主要考虑之一。‎ Besides,_personal_safety_may_also_be_one_of_their_major_considerations.‎ ‎②而且，荣获奖学金终被证明不仅仅是获取学费的一个途径。‎ Furthermore,_receiving_the_scholarship_turned_out_to_be_more_than_just_a_way_to_pay_for_tuition.‎ ‎③此外，每周最好(recommend)进行两次以上力量训练的练习。‎ Additionally,_strength_training_exercise_is_recommended_at_least_twice_a_week.‎ ‎④另外，广泛的阅读可以拓宽我们的视野，丰富我们的业余生活。‎ Besides,_a_wide_range_of_reading_can_broaden_our_horizons_and_enrich_our_sparetime_life.‎ ‎(二)我们还可以使用一些短语来表示递进关系，如not only ...but also(不但……而且), apart from/as well as ...(此外；除……之外), in addition(而且), more importantly(更重要的是), equally important(同样重要的是), last but not least(最后但同样重要的是), worse still/what's worse(更糟糕的是), to make matters worse(使情况更糟糕的是)等。‎ ‎①Not only can the trees protect the land, but also can prevent the sand storm.‎ 这些树不但可以保护土地，也可以抵挡沙尘暴。‎ ‎②More importantly, I am willing to help others, so I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time.更重要的是，我愿意帮助他人，所以我想在业余时间当一名志愿者。‎ ‎③The car broke down when I was driving home from work, and what was worse, it was pouring with rain.下班回家的路上我的汽车坏了，更糟糕的是，天还下着大雨。‎ ‎[应用体验2]　翻译句子 ‎①Nick不仅自编剧本，还饰演其中的角色。‎ Nick_not_only_writes_his_own_plays,_but_also_acts_in_them.‎ ‎②除了为当地的慈善机构募捐外，这个机构还为需要的人们提供帮助和支持。‎ The_organization_gives_help_and_support_to_people_in_need,_as_well_as_raising_money_for_local_charities.‎ ‎③而且，我很乐意去帮助需要帮助的人。‎ What's_more,_I'm_more_than_happy_to_help_those_who_need_help.‎ ‎④更糟糕的是，我发现我把门钥匙弄丢了。‎ What's_worse,_I_found_that_I_had_lost_the_key_to_the_door.‎ ‎[专题过关训练]‎ 翻译句子 ‎1．(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)另外，为了表示尊重，你最好带一些适当的礼物。‎ Additionally,_to_be_respectful,_you_might_as_well_bring_some_appropriate_gifts.‎ ‎2．(2017·江苏高考书面表达)此外，拍摄技术有了进步，更多优质影片被提供。‎ In_addition,_filming_technology_has_advanced_and_more_quality_films_are_on_offer.‎ ‎3．(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)此外，通过做这份兼职工作，我不仅可以获得一些宝贵的经验，还能让我更好地适应社会的发展和改变。‎ By_doing_the_parttime_job_not_only_can_I_get_some_precious_experience_but_I_can_better_adapt_myself_to_the_development_and_changes_of_society.‎ ‎4．还有，如果你需要进一步的信息，一定要让我知道。‎ Also,_do_let_me_know_if_you_need_further_information.‎ ‎5．最后但同样重要的是，我们应当多和父母面对面地交流。‎ Last_but_not_least,_we_should_have_more_facetoface_communication_with_our_parents.‎ ‎6．自行车似乎太重了，很难控制。更糟糕的是，我还从自行车上掉下来了很多次。‎ The_bike_seemed_too_heavy_and_difficult_to_control.Worse_still,_I_fell_off_the_bike_many_times.‎ 增分技法(六)　锦上添花的总结用语 一篇优秀的英语书面表达，不仅仅需要华丽的开篇和中段，末段虽然要求言简意赅，但也不可太过苍白无力，以免“虎头蛇尾”‎ ‎。巧妙使用合适的总结语，必能让阅卷老师眼前一亮，尽显“低调的奢华”。‎ ‎(一)插入语的使用，可为英语写作带来完美的结尾。常用的插入语有：all in all, altogether, on the whole, in short/brief/general/conclusion, in a/one word, generally/briefly speaking, to conclude, to sum up, to put it simply等。‎ ‎①In a/one word, you will surely benefit a lot from your careful preparation.总之，你一定会从精心准备中受益匪浅。‎ ‎②In short, playing basketball enriches my life and makes me more confident.‎ 总之，打篮球丰富了我的生活，使我更加自信。‎ ‎③To sum up, the whole society should pay special attention to environmental protection.‎ 概括地说，整个社会应该特别关注环境保护。‎ ‎④In brief, we can not emphasize the essence of honesty too much.简言之，我们怎么强调诚信的重要性也不为过。‎ ‎⑤To conclude, perseverance overweighs everything.‎ 总之，坚持不懈重于一切。‎ ‎⑥To put it simply, I would be more than grateful if you could give me an early reply.‎ 简而言之，如果你能早日回复，我将不胜感激。‎ ‎[应用体验1]　翻译句子 ‎①总之，环境保护很重要，它能使我们生活得更加舒服、更加健康。‎ Altogether,_environmental_protection_is_of_great_importance,_which_can_make_us_live_more_comfortably_and_healthily.‎ ‎②总的来说，我发现自行车比摩托车更令人喜欢。‎ On_the_whole,_I_find_a_bike_more_enjoyable_than_a_motorcycle.‎ ‎③总而言之，你诚挚的歉意比一切都重要。‎ All_in_all,_nothing_is_more_important_than_your_sincere_apologies.‎ ‎④简言之，如果你能给我一些指导，我将非常感激。‎ To_put_it_simply,_I_would_appreciate_it_if_you_could_give_me_some_guidance.‎ ‎(二)三大从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)、非谓语动词等各种语法结构的使用，无疑为收束全文锦上添花。‎ ‎①As is stated above, a conclusion can be drawn that this volunteer activity is well worth taking part.综上所述，我们可以得出这一结论：这次志愿者活动非常值得参与。‎ ‎②Based on the view above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that diligence is of great benefit to our development and improvement.基于以上观点，我们可以清楚地得出结论：勤奋对我们的发展和提高极有益处。‎ ‎③Judging by the figures, we can easily be aware of the severity of the problem.‎ 根据以上数据来判断，我们不难发现问题的严重性。‎ ‎[应用体验2]　翻译句子 ‎①综上所述，我们可以得出一个结论：合作有利于成功。‎ As_is_indicated_above,_a_conclusion_can_be_drawn_that_cooperation_makes_for_success.‎ ‎②基于以上观点，我们完全可以得出这个结论：诚信是第一要义。‎ Based_on_the_idea_above,_we_can_definitely_draw_the_conclusion_that_honesty_is_the_first_policy.‎ ‎③考虑到一切因素，我确信我相当适合这个职位。‎ All_the_factors_taken_into_account,_I_am_convinced_that_I_am_quite_qualified_for_the_post.‎ ‎④根据以上陈述判断，我们绝不能忽视优质服务的重要性。‎ Judging_from_the_statement_above,_never_can_we_overlook_the_importance_of_good_service.‎ ‎[专题过关训练]‎ 翻译句子 ‎1．(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)总而言之，我诚挚地邀请你来我们学校亲自观看。‎ All_in_all,_I_sincerely_invite_you_to_come_to_our_school_and_see_for_yourself.‎ ‎2．(2018·6月浙江高考写作)综上所述，我确信我完全符合你们的期望。‎ As_is_stated_above,_I_am_sure_that_I_can_perfectly_live_up_to_your_expectations.‎ ‎3．(2016·江苏高考书面表达)一言以蔽之，某种程度上，网络投票有失公允。‎ In_short,_Internet_voting,_to_some_extent,_is_unfair.‎ ‎4．(2016·福建高考书面表达)概括起来说，我们要不辞辛苦通过学习努力提升自我，并且要为明天做好准备。‎ To_sum_up,_we_should_take_pains_to_improve_ourselves_through_learning_and_get_prepared_for_the_future.‎ ‎5．总之，从这次的经历中，我明白了一个道理：质疑精神可以成为帮助我们找寻真理的桥梁。‎ In_a_word,_from_the_experience_I_have_learned_that_questioning_can_serve_as_a_bridge_that_helps_us_to_seek_the_truth.‎ ‎6．综上所述，我相信：相互帮助一定会让我们都取得很大进步。‎ According_to_what_is_mentioned_above,_I_believe_we_both_can_make_much_progress_with_each_other's_help.‎