2020届二轮复习书面表达专题如何运用高级句式和复杂结构课件（63张）

2020届二轮复习书面表达专题如何运用高级句式和复杂结构课件（63张）

2020 届二轮复习书面表达专题 如何运用高级句式和复杂结构 高考评分标准中的 “ 复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构 ” 就是指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。不论是复杂结构的运用，如强调句、倒装句等句型、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句，还是较多的语法结构，如分词和不定式等非谓语动词的运用都指向句式的转换问题。不容置疑，这些复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构会增加文章的表达力度、提升文章的档次。 此句式在写作中属于高级句式，在文章中巧妙地使用此句式能使文章句式复杂多样，对要点的表述更加具体、生动、准确和全面，并能突出重点。从而提升了表达的层次，成为增分的亮点。 美句输入 1 . The reason why I want to apply for the position is that I want to improve my spoken English and help them have a better understanding of Chinese culture. (2018· 浙江高考书面表达 ) 我想申请这个职位的原因是我想提高我的英语口语水平，帮助他们更好地了解中国文化。 2 . The reason why I suggest you apply for Peking University is that it is one of the best universities in China. (2018· 北京高考书面表达 ) 我建议你申请北京大学的原因是它是中国最好的大学之一。 1._____________________________________________________ his grades were too low. 他没有被重点大学录取的原因是他的分数太低。 2.I think ____________________________________ you may have high pressure in study. ( 安徽高考满分作文 ) 我认为你总是生气的原因可能是学习上的巨大压力。 3 .___________________________________________ they believe it is the time when the moon is at its fullest and brightest in the whole year. ( 辽宁高考满分作文 ) 人们庆祝这个节日的原因是，他们相信这时候是月亮一年中最满、最亮的时候。 佳句输出 The reason why he wasn’t admitted into a key university was that the reason why you are always angry is that The reason why people celebrate the festival is that 在写作中，若巧妙利用此句式的倒装结构，就会使得文章句式多样，亮点增多，体现作者的深厚功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，是作文的增分点，从而 “ 加分 ” 多多。 so...that... 美句输入 1. 陈述语序： Some of my classmates and I are so interested in the competition that we have formed a group to take part in it. 倒装语序： So interested in the competition are some of my classmates and I that we have formed a group to take part in it. (2018· 天津高考书面表达 ) 我和我的一些同学对比赛非常感兴趣，以至于我们组织了一个小组来参加比赛。 2. 陈述语序： Paper-cutting is so attractive and alive that I think you could be interested in it. 倒装语序： So attractive and alive is paper - cutting that I think you could be interested in it. (2017· 全国卷 Ⅱ 书面表达 ) 剪纸是如此迷人和生动，以至于我想你可能对它感兴趣。 1. 陈述语序： I was _____________________________ try wearing them. 倒装语序： __________________________________ try wearing them. 我太激动了，迫不及待地想穿上它。 ( 湖南高考书面表达 ) 2. 陈述语序： The dough figurine he made ____________________________________ have a try ourselves. 倒装语序： _______________ the dough figurine he made ____________________ have a try ourselves. 他捏的面人如此漂亮，以至于我们都情不自禁地想要自己尝试一下。 佳句输出 so excited that I couldn ’ t wait to So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to was so beautiful that we couldn’t wait to So beautiful was that we couldn’t wait to 3. 陈述语序： He was ________________________________ his heart beating wildly. 倒装语序： ________________________________ his heart beating wildly. 他是如此紧张以至于能听到自己的心在狂跳。 so nervous that he could hear So nervous was he that he could hear 作文中使用非限制性定语从句后，使得文章句式复杂，提升了表达的层次，成为增分的亮点，从而提升作文档次。 非限制性定语从句 美句输入 1.During holiday seasons ， I will live in the countryside ， where air is fresh and people are friendly . ( 全国卷 Ⅱ 满分作文 ) 在假期，我会住在乡下，那里空气新鲜、人们 友好。 2.Tang Poetry ， which wins great popularity with Chinese people as an important literary form ， is what we’re going to learn the next class. (2017· 全国卷 Ⅰ 书面表达 ) 唐诗作为一种重要的文学形式深受中国人喜爱，它也是我们下节课将要学的内容。 1.I hope you can help the students in our class to learn more about English and western culture ， _________________________________________________________________. ( 天津高考满分作文 ) 我希望你能帮助我们班的学生更多地了解英国和西方文化，这能增进我们的理解并有助于我们建立良好的关系。 2.In addition ， you should respect your teachers ， _______________________________ ________________. ( 江西高考满分作文 ) 另外，你应该尊重那些无私帮助你获得很多知识的老师们。 佳句输出 which can increase understanding and help build good relationships between us who unselfishly help you to gain much knowledge 3.First of all ， the theme of the show is environmental protection ， ____________________ __________________________. (2016· 全国卷 Ⅱ 书面表达 ) 首先，节目的主题是环境保护，这在当今社会是非常重要的。 4.Have you seen the film ， ________________________________ ？ 你看过那部电影吗？它的男主演可是世界闻名的。 which is of great importance in today’s society whose leading actor is world famous 写作中恰当运用 what 从句不仅显得句式多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。 what 从句 美句输入 1. What I want to stress is that you’d better bring some gifts ， such as a book or a Chinese knot. (2018· 全国卷 Ⅰ 书面表达 ) 我想强调的是你最好带些礼物，比如一本书或一个中国 结。 2.Compared with the escaped driver ， I am proud of what I did . ( 湖北高考短文写作 ) 与逃跑的司机相比，我为自己所做之事感到非常自豪。 1.________________________________ is the spectacular view of sunrise on the top of it. (2017· 北京高考书面表达 ) 最吸引游客的是山顶上壮丽的日出景色。 佳句输出 What attracts tourists most 2.Only those who spare no effort can achieve _______________________.( 福建高考满分作文 ) 只有那些不遗余力的人才能取得他们渴望的成就。 3.Today is ____________________________________________. 今天是我们能够抓住并利用的。 ( 重庆高考满分作文 ) what they long for what we can hold and make use of with 复合结构的使用可成为作文中一道亮丽的风景线，让阅卷老师心旷神怡，想不给高分都难的很啊！ with 复合结构 美句输入 1.Moreover, with the stadium set up ， all the students are accessible to the facilities. (2018· 全国卷 Ⅲ 书面表达 ) 此外，随着体育场的建立，所有的学生都可以使用这些 设施。 2.For one thing ， with almost all of us having access to the Internet and other media sources ， such news is within our easy reach. ( 上海高考书面表达 ) 一方面，随着几乎所有的人都能使用互联网和其他媒体资源，这样的消息很容易得到。 3. With all the work done ， we went to the nearby neighbourhood and gave them to the people living there. (2016· 北京高考书面表达 ) 做完所有的工作后，我们去了附近的社区，把它们给了住在那里的人们。 1.The soldier had him stand _________________________________. 士兵让他背朝着他的父亲站在那儿。 2.He stood before his teacher ___________________________. 他低着头站在老师面前。 3.________________________________ ， we are sure to finish it in time. 有这么多人来帮忙，我们一定能及时完成任务。 4.I sat in my room for a few minutes ________________________________. 我在房间坐了一会儿，眼睛盯着天花板。 佳句输出 with his back to his father with his head down With so many people to help us with my eyes fixed on the ceiling “ only ＋状语 ” 放在句首的倒装句穿插于写作中，可令人眼前一亮，好感顿生。 “ only ＋状语 ” 放在句首的倒装句 美句输入 1. Only when you come to China can you experience Chinese food culture. (2018· 全国卷 Ⅲ 书面表达 ) 只有当你来到中国时，你才能体验中国的饮食 文化。 2.As far as I am concerned ， only by studying hard at ordinary time can you succeed eventually. ( 四川高考书面表达 ) 就我而言，只有平时努力学习，你才能最终取得成功。 3. Only if we know what we do in our daily life and live a low － carbon life can we make a difference. 只有我们知道日常生活做什么，过一种低碳生活，我们才能有影响。 1.____________________________________ know its value. 一个人只有在失去自由后才知道自由的可贵。 2.The pilot reassured the passengers._________________________________ how dangerous the situation had been. 飞机驾驶员要乘客们放心，只有在那时我才明白刚才的情况有多危险。 3.________________________________ make a real difference. (2016· 江苏高考书面表达 ) 只有这样，网络投票才真正有意义。 4._________________________ able to make himself heard. 他只有叫喊才能让别人听到他。 佳句输出 Only when one loses freedom does one Only then did I realize Only in this way can Internet voting Only by shouting was he as/though 引起的倒装句表转折，常放句首，是英语写作中的常见表达，也是高级表达的结构之一，灵活地运用也会让你的作文与众不同。 as/though 引起的倒装句 美句输入 1. Busy though/as I am with the lessons ， I have managed to find time to hang out with my friends. (2017· 天津高考书面表达 ) 尽管忙着上课，我还是设法挤出时间和朋友们出去 玩。 2. Teacher though/as he is ， he can’t know everything. 他虽然是老师，但也不可能什么都懂。 3. Hard though/as they tried ， they couldn’t make her change her mind. 尽管他们做了很大努力，却没法让她改变主意。 1.________________________________________________ ， they are easy to answer. ( 四川高考书 面表达 ) 虽然有些问题我似乎不熟悉，但很容易回答。 佳句输出 Unfamiliar though/as some of the questions seem to me 2._____________________________ ， he knows to help others. 他虽是个孩子，但却知道帮助别人。 3.__________________________________ ， I’m going out for a walk. 虽然正在下着大雨，我还是要出去散步。 Child as/though he is Hard as/though it is raining 强调句型是一种修辞，我们恰当运用该句型可以准确表达我们的意愿或情感，使强调部分给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。 强调句型 美句输入 1.It is believed that it is an excellent opportunity that you mustn’t miss. 相信这是一个不容错过的好 机会。 2. It was his continuous efforts that caused China to change gradually. (2016· 北京高考书面表达 ) 正是他的不懈努力使得中国逐渐发生变化。 3. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. ( 福建高考书面表达 ) 重要的不是故事本身，而是故事中所反映的东西。 1 .________________________________________ he went to bed. 直到他父亲回到家里他才睡。 2 .__________________________ did the experiment in the lab last night. 昨晚是我的朋友吉姆在实验室里做实验。 3 .____________________________________________ I bought it. 正因为这本书对我的工作很有用，我才买了它。 佳句输出 It was not until his father came back home that It was my friend Jim who/that It is because the book is so useful for my work that it 不仅可以看作简单的代词来用，还可用它引导出十分高大上的句型 ——it 作形式主语，后面真正的主语或为不定式，或为动名词或为从句。 it 作形式主语 美句输入 1. It is obvious that some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment. (2018· 北京高考书面表达 ) 显然，网上的一些汉语口语课程有助于你适应汉语 环境。 2. It is reported that there will be a Chinese paper - cutting show this Sunday in the art gallery. (2017· 全国卷 Ⅱ 书面表达 ) 据悉，本星期日在美术馆将有一个中国剪纸展。 3. It’s a great pity that I have to cancel the Sunday bookstore appointment with you. (2016· 全国卷 Ⅲ 书面表达 ) 非常遗憾我不得不取消我们周日一块儿逛书店的约定。 1.As far as I’m concerned ， ___________________________________. (2016· 北京高考书面表达 ) 在我看来，保护地球是每个人的责任。 2 .____________________________________ for the school as a teaching assistant. ( 山东高考满分作文 ) 有可能我会在学校里作为一名志愿者当教学助手。 3.____________________________ without thoughtful planning. 没有周到的计划而做一大堆工作是没用的。 佳句输出 it is everyone’s duty to protect the earth It is likely that I will work as a volunteer It’s no use doing a lot of work it 作形式宾语，与 it 作形式主语所指代内容一样，它能使句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明，从而使文章的语言活起来、亮起来。 it 作形式宾语 美句输入 1.I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you. (2017· 全国卷 Ⅰ 书面表达 ) 我觉得和你一起学习唐诗是很有趣 的。 2.Parents usually have such high expectations that their children find it hard to live up to them. (2016· 上海高考书面表达 ) 父母通常有如此高的期望值，以至于孩子觉得很难不辜负父母的期望。 3 ． We all thought it a pity that the conference should have been cancelled. 会议取消了我们都感到很遗憾。 1.They ____________________________________ in such a short time. 他们认为在这么短的时间内完成这项工作是困难的。 2.The professor _____________________________ without understanding. 这位教授认为阅读而不理解没有益处。 3.I _______________________________________. 我觉得应邀在这儿演讲是我的荣耀。 佳句输出 felt/thought it difficult to finish the work considers it no good reading think it my honor to be invited to speak here “ 主语＋ be ＋ adj . ＋不定式 ” 的结构简单、实用，能使文章整齐和谐，抑扬顿挫，有助于增强表达效果。 “ 主语＋ be ＋ adj . ＋不定式 ” 结构 美句输入 1.All of us think the short film is interesting to watch ， which is a documentary on the history of our school. (2018· 全国卷 Ⅱ 书面表达 ) 我们都认为这部短片看起来很有趣，这是一部关于我们学校历史的 纪录片。 2.The chair looks rather hard ， but in fact it is very comfortable to sit on . 这把椅子看上去很硬，但事实上坐在上面很舒服。 3.The problem isn’t easy enough for him to work out. 问题太难了，他算不出来。 1.The main problem in my study is ________________________________. 我在学习中的主要问题是很难记住单词。 2._____________________________________.Anybody can learn to use it in a few minutes. 这台机器很容易操作。任何人学习几分钟就会使用。 3.A man _______________________________ must be ________________________. 一个很难取悦的人一定很难与之共事。 佳句输出 that words are difficult to memorize This machine is very easy to operate who/that is so difficult to please hard to work with “ 疑问词＋不定式 ” 结构紧凑，言简意明，它的合理运用能给文章增色添彩，从而 “ 加分 ” 多多。 “ 疑问词＋不定式 ” 结构 美句输入 1.With the Teachers’ Day approaching ， we’ve decided which classrooms to decorate . 随着教师节的临近，我们已经决定要装饰哪些教室 了。 2.Seeing such a crowd of audience below the stage ， he was too nervous to know what to say . 看到舞台下有那么多的观众，他紧张得不知道说什么。 3 . It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. ( 江西高考书面表达 ) 我很荣幸在这里和大家交流在高中要学习什么的看法。 1.Would you please advise me ____________________________? 你能否告诉我该买哪一个才好？ 2.Please explain (to me)______________________________. 请 ( 给我 ) 解释该从哪里开始及该怎么做。 3.They exchanged views on ______________________________________. 他们就该选谁的问题交换了意见。 佳句输出 which one to buy where to begin and how to do it the question of whom to elect 高中英语书面表达中， “ 越 …… 越 ……” 之类的表达颇为实用。若能合理利用， “ 好处 ” 多多，不容小觑。 the ＋比较级 ... ， the ＋比较级 ... 美句输入 1. The more you know about our tradition culture ， the more you are interested in it. 你对我们的传统文化了解越多，你对它就越 感兴趣。 2. The harder you work ， the greater progress you will make. 你工作越努力，进步就越大。 3. The more careful you are ， the fewer mistakes you will make. 你越小心，你犯的错就会越少。 1._____________________________________________________ 他越是这样想，就越是不开心。 2.________________________________________________ 一个人书读得越多就会变得越明智。 佳句输出 The more he thought like this ， the more unhappy he became. The more a person reads ， the wiser he will become. 3.___________________________________________ 你站得越高就看得越远。 The higher you stand ， the farther you will see. 在写作中应巧妙利用并列连词 not only...but (also)... ，以使句子整齐对称，从而使自己的作文增加得高分的亮点。 not only...but （ also ） ... 美句输入 1. Not only Jack but also his sister was taken to watch the 2016 Rio Olympics last summer. 去年夏天不仅杰克还有他妹妹都被带去观看 2016 年里约奥运会。 2.Practising Chinese kung fu can not only build up one’s strength ， but also develop one’s character. 练中国功夫不但能增强体质，还能培养一个人的性格。 3. Not only will I earn much money but I will also gain some social experience through the job.( 倒装语序 ) 通过做这份工作，我不仅可以赚许多钱，而且还能获得一些社会经验。 1.____________________________________________________( 倒装语序 ) 太阳不仅给了我们阳光， 也给了我们热量。 2._____________________________________________________________( 倒装语序 ) 他不仅英语说得正确， 还说得流利。 3. ________________________________________________( 陈述语序 ) 这个小伙子不仅聪明， 也很勤奋。 佳句输出 Not only does the sun give us light but also it gives us heat. Not only does he speak English correctly ， but also he speaks it fluently. This young man is not only clever but also hard-working. “ 介词＋关系代词 (which/whom) ” 引导的定语从句属于高级句式，它的使用使得文章句式复杂，亮点增多，体现作者的深厚功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，是作文的增分点。 “ 介词＋关系代词 ” 引导的定语从句 美句输入 1.Not only will all kinds of paper - cutting works created by famous artists of this field be on show that day ， but a lot of useful and interesting activities will be held as well ， from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture. (2017· 全国卷 Ⅱ 书面表达 ) 不仅由这一领域的著名艺术家们创作的各种剪纸作品会在那天展出，而且还有许多有益、有趣的活动，从中你可以更清楚地了解中国 文化。 2.He referred me to some reference books with which I am not very familiar. 他叫我去查阅一些我并不熟悉的参考书。 3.The documents for which they were searching have been recovered. 他们寻找的文件已经找到了。 1.This is a matter ___________________________________________. 这是一个我们可能长时间争论的问题。 2.I like the new manager ， __________________________________________. 我喜欢新来的经理，每个人都能与之合作很好。 3.This is our classroom ， ________________________________________. 这是我们的教室，前面有老师的讲台。 佳句输出 about which we might argue for a long while with whom everyone can work well in the front of which there is a teacher’s desk 省略句在写作中的巧妙运用是书面表达得高分的助力，应当得到重视。 状语从句的省略 美句输入 1. When built up/set up ， the new stadium will become the new landmark in our school. (2018· 全国卷 Ⅲ 书面表达 ) 建成后，新体育馆将成为我们学校的新 地标。 2.So while sitting in the classroom and doing my papers ， I felt confident and was full of energy. ( 四川高考书面表达 ) 因此，当我坐在教室里做试卷时，感到精力旺盛，信心十足。 3. If necessary ， you should turn to your parents for help. 如果有必要，你应该向你的父母求助。 1.____________________________ ， you’ll be informed soon. ( 北京高考单选 ) 如果你被录取做这份工作，你很快就会接到通知。 2._________________________ ， they would stop him and ask him the three questions. 只要有可能，他们就让他停下来问他这三个问题。 3.__________________________ ， some talented students gave a wonderful folk dance performance ， making the elderly very happy. 吃饭时，一些有天赋的学生表演了精彩的民间舞蹈，这使老人非常高兴。 佳句输出 If accepted for the job Whenever (it is) possible While enjoying the meal It is (about/high) time that... 意为 “ 到了 …… 的时候了 ” ，后面从句谓语或用 should ＋动词原形或用一般过去时。该句式非常实用，是写作中常用句式，它的合理运用能给文章增色添彩，从而提升了表达的层次，成为增分的亮点。 It is （ about/high ） time that... 美句输入 1. It is time that the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候 了。 2. It is time that you reflected/should reflect upon your mistakes. 该是你反省思过的时候了。 1. _______________________________________________________ 是他们该开始干活的时候了。 2.______________________________________________________ 是该做这件事的时候了。 3._________________________________________________________ 该是我们为期末考试做准备的时候了。 佳句输出 It is time that they got/should get down to doing their work. It is about time that the thing should be done/was done. It is time that we got/should get ready for the final examination. 此句式的陈述句常用一般将来时，有时祈使句可用名词短语替换。若在写作中灵活运用不仅有助于增强表达效果，突出要强调的重点，更能彰显考生对英语表达的掌控能力。 祈使句＋ and/or （ else ） /otherwise ＋陈述句 美句输入 1. Follow your doctor’s advice ， and you will get better soon. 接受医生的建议，你很快就会 好的。 2. Hurry up ， or/or else/otherwise you will be late. 快点，否则你会迟到的。 3.It is really very dangerous. One more step ， and the baby will fall into the well. 真危险。再多迈一步，这个小孩就会掉进井里。 1._______________________________________ 努力学习，你终有一天会成功。 2.___________________________________________________ 抓住机会吧， 否则你会遗憾的。 佳句输出 Work hard ， and you’ll succeed some day. Take the chance ， or/or else/otherwise you will regret it. 3._______________________________________________________ 再多一点努力，你就会取得更大进步。 A little more effort ， and you will make greater progress. 疑问词 - ever 引导的从句是写作中常用的高级表达，内涵丰富，不容小觑。 疑问词 - ever 引导的从句 美句输入 1.The gold medal will be awarded whoever wins the first place in the bicycle race. (2018· 天津高考书面表达 ) 无论谁获得自行车比赛的第一名都会被授予 金牌。 2. Whatever she says will not make any difference to our arrangements. ( 湖北高考完成句子 ) 无论她说什么都不会对我们的安排有影响。 3. Whenever/No matter when I’m unhappy ， it is my friends who cheer me up. 不管什么时候我不高兴了，总是我的朋友们让我振作起来。 1._________________________________________ ， she brings a friend. 她每次来都带个朋友。 2._________________________________________________ 没有人能说服他做他不喜欢做的事。 3.___________________________________________ 无论是谁违反法律都要受到惩罚。 佳句输出 Whenever/No matter when she comes Nobody can persuade him to do whatever he dislikes. Whoever breaks the law should be punished. 4._________________________________________ ， it will lead you to the station. 无论你走哪一条路都会到车站。 5. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in ____________ _________________. 只 有我们言行一致才能对我们希望完成的事情有所贡献。 Whichever/No matter which road you take whatever we hope to accomplish 作文中使用此用法，能使文章句式复杂多样，对要点的表述更加具体、生动、准确和全面，并能突出重点，起到 “ 点睛 ” 作用，它的合理运用能给文章增色添彩。 when 作并列连词 美句输入 1.He was about to shut the door when an idea came to him. 他正准备关门，突然想到了一个 主意。 2.She was just about to say something more when she noticed the unhappy look on his face. 她刚要再说些什么，却突然看到了他不快的脸色。 3.He was still smiling when the door opened and his wife came in. 他正笑着的时候，门突然开了，他妻子走了进来。 1._____________________________________________________________ 昨天晚上我正在做作业，突然灯灭了。 2.______________________________________________________ 我们正准备给你打电话，这时你的电报来了。 3._______________________________________________________ 在劳累了一天之后， 我刚上床睡觉， 这时电话响了。 佳句输出 I was doing my homework when the light went out yesterday evening. We were about to telephone you when your telegram arrived. I had just gone to bed after a very hard day when the phone rang. 4 .________________________________________________________________________ _________ 她刚做完作业，她妈妈就让她练习弹钢琴。 She had just finished her homework when her mother asked her to practise playing the piano.