高中英语满分写作技巧

高中英语满分写作技巧

‎ ‎ ‎ 一. 开头 句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。‎ ‎〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.‎ ‎〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.‎ ‎〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.‎ ‎〔修正〕Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t help crying.‎ 二. 经过 ‎1. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。‎ ‎①强调句。如：‎ ‎〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.‎ ‎〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.‎ It was yesterday that I met him in the street.‎ ‎②由with或without引导的短语。如:‎ He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.‎ ‎③分词短语。如:‎ Satisfied with the result，he decided to go on with a new experiment.‎ ‎④倒装句。如:‎ Only in this way can we achieve our goal.‎ Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.‎ Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent（正派的，得体的）person.‎ ‎⑤省略句。如:‎ If so，victory will be ours.‎ You can make some changes wherever necessary.‎ ‎2. 通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。‎ ‎〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.‎ ‎〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.‎ ‎〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.‎ ‎〔修正〕After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess.‎ 注意使用不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。‎ ‎3. 学会使用过渡词。如:‎ ‎①表递进关系：then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)等。‎ ‎②表转折关系：however(然而)， but(但是)， on the contrary (相反)， after all(毕竟)等。‎ ‎③表总结关系：finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(总之)， in conclusion(最后)等。‎ ‎④表示强调：indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， surely(确定)， above all(尤其)等。‎ ‎⑤表示对比：in the same way(同样地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。‎ 相似的比较： similarly, in the same manner ‎ 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely（相反地）, whereas（然而）, while（然而）, instead（相反）, nevertheless（然而）, in contrast（相反）, on the contrary（相反）, compared with…（和......相比之下）‎ ‎4. 注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:‎ ‎〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.‎ ‎〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.‎ ‎5. 避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:‎ ‎〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.‎ ‎〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.‎ I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.‎ 三. 结尾 ‎1. All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that…‎ All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious（和谐的）society.‎ ‎2. Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that…‎ draw a conclusion：得出结论 ‎3. As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.‎ ‎4. From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that…‎ ‎5. Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that good manners（礼貌）arise from politeness and respect for others.‎