【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达申请信和应聘信的写作指导（11页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达申请信和应聘信的写作指导（11页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达申请信和应聘信的写作指导 1. 文体特征 ‎ 申请书是我们日常生活、学习、工作中常用的一种文体。‎ 2. 写作指导 (1) 在写申请书的过程中应注意以下四个方面： 真实性：虚假的材料和信息往往导致申请失败，甚至给申请人造成极其不良的后果。 准确性：材料中所有信息应准确、适当。一些背景很好的申请人由于描述不准确或不正 确，也使申请没有成功。 完整性：材料应反映与申请有关的重要信息，疏漏可能导致申请不被接受。 严密的逻辑性：主要体现在文件能够使对方确信申请人的各个方面都符合他们的要求。 (2) 语言精练，有的放矢。 关于为何申请，自我介绍这部分的语言应该力求简练精确。要从申请对象的需要出发, 分清主次,定好详略。实事求是，既要不夸张其辞，也不要低估自己的能力；不要用套话， 但介绍自己的情况要具体、详细，要写清楚，不能含糊，不要写得过于简单；学生在与申请 有关的活动以外的其它表现和成就，可以作简略的介绍，这也可以从一个侧面反映学生的特 点。 ‎ 3. 知能提升 1. 常用词汇 ‎ 描述人格的常用词汇, (1) committed 承诺的 (2) hard-working 勤奋的 (3) determined 有决心的 (4) enthusiastic 热情的 (5) creative 有创造力的 (6) confident 有信心的 (7) easy-going 容易相处的 (8) co-operative 合作的 (9) generous 慷慨的 (10) emotional 容易激动的，富有感情的 (11) patient 耐心的 (12) organized 有组织的 (13) logical 有逻辑的 (14) flexible 灵活的 (15) aggressive 积极地，有干劲的 (16) resilient 有弹力的 (17) courageous 勇敢的 (18) imaginative 富有想象力的 (19) friendly 友好的 (20) warmed-hearted 热心的 (21) wise 聪明的 (22) selfless 无私的 (23) reliable 可信赖的 (24) calm 冷静的 ‎ 常用动词及词组 (1) hope 希望 (2) improve 提高 (3) expand 拓展 (4) enjoy 欣赏，喜欢 (5) be used to 习惯 (6) be sure 确定 (7) join in 参加 (8) apply for 申请 (9) obtain 获得 (10) express 表达 (11) enclose 附带 (12) be admitted into 被录取 (13) be confident of sth. / in sb. 对某事/某人有信心(14) be good at 擅长 (15) be interested in 对……有兴趣 (16) look forward to 盼望 (17) be fluent in 能流畅的…… 表示兴趣爱好的词组 (1) play the piano 弹钢琴 (2) collect stamps 收集邮票 (3) play football/basketball/volleyball…玩足球/篮球/排球…… (4) read magazines 读杂志 (5) draw pictures 绘画 (6) travel abroad 出国旅行 (7) do sports 做运动 (8) communicate with friends 与朋友聊天 ‎ 2. 常用句式 ‎ ‎(1) I am writing to you for…我写信给你是为了…… I was writing to you for a position at your company. 我写信给你是为了你们公司的一个职务。 ‎ ‎(2)I am interested in applying for the job of…我对申请……工作有兴趣。 I am interested in applying for the job of designing computer games. 我对申请设计电脑游戏的工作感兴趣。‎ ‎ (3) I think I would be a good … due to my …我认为由于……我会是一个好的…… I think I would be a good teacher due to my knowledge。 我认为凭借 我的知识我会是一个好老师。 ‎ ‎(4) be fluent in … 在很流利 I am fluent in spoken and written English. 我能流利地说和写英语。 ‎ ‎(5) graduate from… 毕业于…… I graduated from Shandong University. 我毕业于山东大学。 ‎ ‎(6) be good / skilled at…擅长…… I am good/skilled at computer and painting. 我擅长电脑和绘画。 ‎ ‎(7) enjoy doing sth. in one’s spare time 在业余时间喜欢干…… I enjoy reading novels in my spare time. 我在业余时间喜欢读小说。 ‎ ‎(8) be strict with… 对……很严格 Every one should be strict with his/her work. 每一个人都应该对工作很严格。 ‎ ‎(9) get on well with… 与相处得很好，某事进展的很好 He finds it hard to get on well with his new work. 他发现适应新的工作很难。 ‎ ‎（10) have some idea / knowledge of … 了解…… Everyone is supposed to have some idea/knowledge of a certain foreign language. 每一个人都应该了解某一门外语。‎ ‎ (11) If my application could be taken into favorable consideration, I would be most grateful. 如果您能惠予考虑我的申请，本人将十分感激。‎ ‎ (12) I am looking forward to your early reply. 期待您早日答复。 ‎ ‎(14)I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in your university. 写此信的目的是希望有机会在贵校继续学习。 ‎ ‎(15)If you need to know any more about me，please contact me. 如果您想了解我的更多信息， 请联系我。 ‎ ‎(16) I will appreciate it very much if you could… 如果您能……，本人将不胜感激。 ‎ ‎(17) Learning from...that you are looking for..., I should like to apply for the post. 从……得知你正在寻找……, 我想要申请这个职位。 ‎ ‎(18)I feel I am well qualified for the following reasons. 我感觉我非常适合因为以下原因。‎ ‎ (19I have had experience of …, therefore I may have the ability you are looking for. 我有……经验，所以我有你需要的能力。‎ ‎ (20)I am majoring in … / My major is… 我的专业是…… ‎ ‎(21)I would appreciate an interview at your convenience. 在你方便的时候能给与一次面试我 很感激。‎ ‎ 3. 模板参考 ‎ I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in 信息来源 of 信息发布 日期. Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a 职位 名称. On the one hand,原因之一. On the other hand,原因之二。 I would be very grateful if you grant me a personal interview. If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at 电话号码. Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to meeting you. ‎ 典例学习 ‎ (1) 某国际动物关爱协会面向全球中学生招募"动物代言人"，希望申请者 选择一种自己喜欢 的动物，为之代言（speak for）。假设你是重庆新华中学的学生李华，有意参与该活动。现 请您用英文在线填写申请表（仅需填写"申请陈述"部分），内容如下： 1.表示有意参加 2.说明自己富有爱心、关爱动物 3.打算为何种动物代言，并说明理由 4.希望申请成功 Application Form （申请表） Name (姓名) Li Hua Sex() F/M Age() 18 Email Add.(电子邮件地址) lihua@xinhuaschool.com Statement of Application (申请陈述) I am a student from Xinhua Middle School in Chongqing,China. 注意： （1）请在答题卡规定区域内作答； （2）词数 100 左右； （3）"申请陈述"的第一句已经给出，不计入总词数。 I am a student from Xinhua Middle School in Chongqing, China. ______________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ‎ (1) ‎【审题谋篇】 第一步 定时态人称 第三步 列要点信息 第二步 布文章结构 一般现在时；第一人称 得知消息，想要申请→介绍自己，热爱动物→为大象 代言→希望得到通过 1. 得知这消息，我很兴奋，想申请这份工作。 2. 我从小在乡村长大，所以十分热爱动物。但动物的 现状越来越危险，濒临灭绝，我很着急。 3. 我申请为大象代言， 因为大象的数目越来越少。 4. 希望能尽快收到你的回复。 ‎ (2) ‎【遣词造句】 ‎ ‎1. 词汇精练 ①很兴奋 be excited ②准备去 be ready to ③热爱 care for ④亲近，靠近 close to ⑤发生 take place ⑥……的数目 the number of ⑦为……代言 speak for ⑧很紧急 be anxious ⑨盼望 look forward to ⑩参加 take part in ‎ ‎2. 佳句锤炼 ‎ ‎①当我得知这项活动，我很兴奋，盼望参加。 a. (一般表达) I hear the activity. I am excited. I look forward to taking part in it.. b. (时间状语从句) When I hear the activity, I am excited and look forward to taking part in it.. c. (现在分词作状语) On hearing the activity, I am excited and look forward to taking part in it.‎ ‎ ②我从小生活在乡村，所以我很亲近自然，热爱动物。 a. (一般表达) I grow up in the countryside. So I close to the nature and care for the animals. b. (现在分词) Being a child growing up in the countryside, so I close to the nature and care for the animals. c. (定语从句) I grow up in the countryside, which makes me close to the nature and care for the animals. ‎ ‎③我们看到大量的树木被砍伐，大量的动物被猎杀或无家可归。 a. (一般表达) We see many trees are cut. Many animals are hunted and have no home. b. (witness sth. do/done) We have witnessed lots of trees cut down and many animals hunted or homeless ‎ ‎④我打算为大象代言，因为大象的数目越来越少。 a. (一般表达) The number of elephants is little. I want to speak for the elephant. b. (‎ 原因状语从句) I want to speak for the elephant because the number of elephants is very little. c. (would like…, smaller and smaller) I would like to speak for the elephants because the number of elephants is smaller and smaller. ‎ ‎⑤希望你能接受我的申请。 a. (一般表达) I hope you can accept my application. b. (被动语态)Hopefully, my application will be accepted. ‎ ‎【学生习作展评】 习作展示 阅卷点评及修改建议 ①I am a Li Hua, a student from a senior high school. ②I want to do something to help animals. ③ I’d love to join you. ④I think I’m suitable for speaking for animals. ⑤I am kind and warm-hearted. ⑥I love animals. ⑦I always keep some animals in my house, like dogs, cats and rabbits. ⑧ When I see a ill animal, I will be very upset. ⑨However, thousands of kind of animals disappeared from the earth. ⑩ Animals have killed for their fur. ○11 People must pay attention to solve the problem. ‎ 本文为 3 档（良好档）作文，总分 30 分， 本文可评为 22 分。具体分析如下： 1. 用词不准确。如第 ○8E A句中 ill 应改成 sick, 第 A○11E A句中 pay attention to solve 应改成 pay attention to solving,第 A○15E A句中 are little 应该为 is little. 2. 缺乏高级词汇的灵活运用。如第A○6E A句love 可以用 care for, be fond of 等词替换, 第 A○7E A句中 keep 可换成 raise, like 可换成 such as. 3. 句式运用上比较单一。以简单句和并列句 A○12E AI want to speak for elephants. A○13E AElephants are clever and lovely animals.A○14E A But they are being killed today. A○15E AThe number of elephants are little. A○16E AI want to devote my energy to protect them. A○17E AI think I have the ability to do it. I hope you can give me a chance. 为主，缺乏变化，。如第 ○2 ,○3 ,○4 句可以 合并为一句：I’d love to join you into helping animals because I’m suitable for speaking for animals. 4. 时态语态问题。第 9 句时态应该为一般现 在时 disappear，第 10 句应该用被动语态 have been killed。 ‎ ‎【满分作文赏析】 满分作文 名师点评 ①I am a student from Xihua Middle School in Chongqing,China. ②Hearing the activity, I am excited and was so ready to fill in the application form. ③Being a child growing up on the countryside, I have spent plenty of my time playing in the nearby forest, which makes me extremely close to the nature and care for the animals. ④Unfortunately, during the past few years, great changes have taken place in many forests all round the world. ⑤ down and many animals hunted or homeless. ⑥If I have the honor to have the chance to speak for a kind of animal, I would like to speak for the elephants. ⑦As we all know, elephants have big and strong bodies but they are badly hunted for their valuable teeth. ⑧The number of elephants is getting smaller and smaller day by day and it's high time for us to do something for them. ⑨Please do consider my application not for me but for the poor elephants. ⑩Hopefully my application will make through. ‎ ‎1. 全文内容充实、层次清晰，语言 流畅，是一篇优秀作文。在文章结构 上，第一段介绍了自己的具体情况， 着重强调自己对动物的爱及对现状 的担忧；第二段申请为大象代言，并 详细的解释原因，流畅自然。整篇文 章声情并茂，易打动人心。 2. 使用了许多高级词汇，更使得文 章表达地道，显示出作者的扎实语言 功底。如：nearby， plenty of, care for, extremely, witness, consider 。 3.运用了许多高级的语法与完美的 句式。如 hearing the activity 和 being a child growing up on the countryside 使用了现在分词, which makes me extremely close to the nature 定语从句 it’s high time for sb to do 高级句型都 使得文章灵活多变，体现了作者较强 的语言运用能力。‎ ‎ (2) 假设你是李华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。 现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封信，申请留学。 姓名：李华 性别：女 出生年月：1999 年 6 月 毕业学校：北京新华中学 学业：各门功课优秀 申请院校：美国哥伦比亚大学 申请专业：计算机科学 兴趣爱好：网络和英语 电子邮箱：lihua93@sina.com 注意： 1、必须包括以上内容，不能逐句翻译，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯； 2、字数 100 左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学 the University of Columbia ‎ Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university._________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua ‎ ‎【审题谋篇】 【遣词造句】 1. 词汇精练 ①优秀的_______________ ②毕业于 _____________ ③申请 _______________ ④专业是 _____________ ⑤喜欢 ______________ ⑥对……有兴趣 ____________ ⑦回复________________ ⑧盼望 ________________ 2. 佳句锤炼 ①我将毕业于北京新华中学，成绩优秀。 一般表达：I will graduate from Beijing Xinhua Middle School and my study is excellent. 高级表达：（用 be doing 表将来，用 with 短语简化第二个分句） I _______________ Beijing Xinhua Middle School this year ___________________. ②我喜欢计算机和英语。 一般表达：I am fond of the computer and English. 高级表达(用 show interest to 代替 be fond of)： I ____________________ the computer and English. ③我申请哥伦比亚大学是因为它是世界顶级大学之一。 一般表达：I apply to study in the University of Columbia because it is one of the best universities in the world. 高级表达：（运用 the reason why …is that…句型） _____________________I apply to study in the University of Columbia_____ it’s one of the best universities in the world. ④如果你能给我提供一些信息，我会非常感激。 一般表达：I will thank you if you give me some information. 高级表达：(使用 appreciate 代替 thank ) ‎ ‎___________________________________ if you give me some information. ‎ ‎【学生习作展评】 习作展示 阅卷点评 第一步 定时态人称 第三步 列要点信息 第二步 布文章结构 一般现在时，第一人称 1. 介绍自己的院校和兴趣爱好等详细情况。 2. 说明自己申请的原因，目标。 1. 我是李华，即将毕业于北京新华中学，喜好网络与 计算机； 2. 我想申请哥伦比亚大学的计算机科学系因为这所 大学是世界顶级大学之一； 3. 希望能考虑我的申请。 ①My name is Li Hua, a girl was born in June 1993. ②I will graduate from Beijing Xinhua School in the next six months. ③I am good at study and I like computer and English. ④So I will have no trouble in communicating in your country. ⑤I want to apply to study the Science and Computer in your school. ⑥The reason is your school is a good university in the world. ⑦It will help me further my study in the computer. ⑧If you accept my application, I will be very happy and study hard to meet your requirements. ⑨My Email address is lihua93@sina.com. ‎ 本文为 3 档作文，总分 30 分，本文可评为 21 分。具 体分析如下： 一、内容结构上 本文内容比较全面，结构比较清晰， 但缺乏一些连接 词，文章显得有点平淡。 二、语言运用上 1，语法问题。第 1 句中 a girl was born in June，1993 应改成定语从句 a girl who was born in June 1993,第 6 句中 is your school 中加上 that 成为表语从句。 2.句型比较简单，大部分是简单句或并列句，其实可 以改变成复合句。如第 5,6,7 句可合并成 The reason why I want to apply to study in your school is that your school is a good university in the world, which will help me further my study in computer. ‎ ‎【满分作文赏析】 满分作文 名师点评 ①I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. ② First, please allow me to make a brief introduction of myself. ③ I’m Lihua, a girl born in June,1993. ④ I am graduating from Beijing Xinhua Middle School this coming June with each course excellent. ⑤I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. ⑥Besides, I’m good at English.⑦I know that the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying for furthering my university study in your Computer Science department. ⑧I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. ⑨By the way, my email address is lihua93@sina.com. ⑩I am looking forward to your early reply. ‎ ‎1. 该篇文章内容完整，表达准 确，段落清晰，层次明了，是一 篇优秀作文。 2. 词汇方面运用了大量的高级 词汇，如 further, brief, coming, keen, rank, take the trouble 等. 3.使用了比较高级的表达方法。 如介绍自己的条件使用了 I am graduating from Beijing Xinhua Middle School …现在进行时表 示将来，第⑦句中使用了 why ‎ 引导的定语从句。此外还使用了 I would appreciate it if 的高级句 型。‎ ‎ (3) 假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学 为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信： ·对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等） ·个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等） ·你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等） 注意：1. 词数不少于 100； 2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 参考词汇：晨曦希望小学 ‎ Chenxi Hope School Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ‎ ‎【审题谋篇】 【遣词造句】 1. 词汇精练 ①高兴 ___________ ②获得机会 _______________③不仅……而且 __________ ④ 提高学习 ____________ ⑤ 尽某人最大的努力 __________ ⑥ 与……相处很好 ____________ ⑦从……获利 _________________ ⑧爱上 ______________ ⑨掌握 ________________ 2. 佳句锤炼 ①我非常高兴得知我们学校将举办这个活动的消息。 一般表达：I am glad to know the news that our school will hold the activity. 高级表达：(使用现在分词作时间状语) __________________________________________, I am very glad. ②这项活动不仅有利于提高希望小学学生的成绩，而且还能提升我们的能力，更有利于社会。 一般表达：The activity helps students improve their study and also strengthen our ability. It also benefits society. 高级表达：（运用 not only… but also…句式） Not only _______________________________, but also ____________________________. ③我性格外向，这有利于和孩子交往。 一般表达：I am outgoing and it benefits me to get along with students. 高级表达：（用定语从句改写上句） I am outgoing,__________________________________________. ④如果我被接受，我会尽我最大的努力去帮助孩子。 一般表达：If I get the chance, I will do my best to help the children. 高级表达：(使用 accept, double one’s efforts, do favor to sb.高级词汇) If ______________________, I__________________________________________. ‎ ‎【学生习作展评】 习作展示 阅卷点评 第一步 定时态人称 第三步 列要点信息 第二步 布文章结构 一般现在时 第一人称 1.说明写信目的 2.说明对此项活动的认识，及自身优势条件； 3.说明自己的辅导计划，体现其可行性。 1. 我很高兴得知这项活动，希望能够获得这次机会。 2. 这项活动不仅有利于提高希望小学学生的成绩，而 且还能提升我们的能力，更有利于社会。 3. 我性格外向，乐于和孩子们打交道，并且成绩也不 错。 4. 我要尽我最大的努力提高孩子们的成绩，使他们爱 上学习。希望能得到这次机会。 Dear teachers,‎ ‎ ①My name is Li Hua. ②I heard that our school will select some great students to help the Hope Primary School’s students. ③I want to take part in this activity. ④On the one hand, I think it is very useful. ⑤It can help us improve our study ⑥The older and the younger can get along with. ⑦I believe I can do this work well. ⑧I am good at English and I usually help my classmates with their English.⑨ I have many experiences. ⑩Would you like to give me a chance? ○11 I want to have a try. Yours, LiHua ‎ 本文为一般档作文，总分 30 分，本文可评为 20 分。具体分析如下： 一、内容结构上 本文结构还比较流畅，但是在第 ○7 句前应加 on the other hand,这样就会使第二段结构更紧凑。 二、语言运用上 1.少量单词运用不当。如第 ○2E A句中的 great 应改 为 excellent, 第 A○6E A句中的 the older and the younger 应改为 the old and the young, 第 A○9E A句 中 many experiences 改为 much experience. 2. 个别时态不对。第 A○2E A句 heard 应改为 hear. 3.缺乏高级句式。如 A○5E A○6E A可合为一句 it not only improve our study but also helps us get along with each other. ‎ ‎【满分作文赏析】 满分作文 名师点评 Dear Sir or Madam, ① I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. ②I’m so excited about the news that our school will hold the activity to help the students in Chenxi Hope School. ③ Not only will the students benefit from it, also shall we and the whole society.④ Moreover, it can offer a good opportunity to improve our ability. ⑤ Hopefully, I recommend myself to you without hesitation. ⑥ I’m outgoing, independent and have experience of working with children aged from 7-12. ⑦ I also have a good command of English. ⑧ If I’m luckily accepted, I’d double my efforts in order to do more favor to the poor children. ⑨ I’ll make their English classes colorful and interesting. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 本篇申请信格式正确，时 态、人称准确无误。详略得当， 避免了冗长拖沓、逐句翻译的 错误，同时兼顾了要点齐全的 原则。是一篇优秀作文。 2. 词汇方面运用了大量的高 级词汇，如 benefit, moreover, recommend, command, double, do favor to 等. 3.使用了高级的表达方法。如 介绍自己使用了 outgoing, independent，说明好处使用了 not only…but also的倒装结构 等高级表达方法。 ‎ 达标测试 1 假设你是李华，是河南大学的一名学生, 想要参加黄河科技大厦的招聘工作，请你根据 下列内容给公司经理写一封申请信。 1. 1997 年 5 月 8 日生于河南； 2. 明年 7 月大学毕业，学习英语专业 4 年； 3. 对英语感兴趣，尤其擅长口语和写作； 4. 熟练掌握电脑操作技术，会编程，每分钟打字 100 词。 注意:1. 词数：100 字左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：编程 make programs Dear Manager,‎ ‎ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______ Yours sincerely, Li Hua ‎ ‎2 假设你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作，你需要用英文给人事部经理写一封信，介绍 自己的基本情况，简介信包括写信目的及下表所列内容： 姓名 李华 出生年月 1981 年 8 月 出生地 广东省梅州市 学历 1994—2000 东山中学 2000—2004 中山大学计算机系 2004—至今 在一家计算机公司工作 所学主要课程 计算机科学，中文，数学，英语，体育 特长爱好 游泳（曾获得过学校游泳比赛一等奖）， 听音乐 系 department 中山大学 Sun Yat-sen University 写作要求： 1.简介必须包括以上全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经写好）； 2.100 字左右。 Dear Manager, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______ I am waiting for your reply.‎ ‎ Yours Truly, Li Hua ‎ ‎3 假设你是某校高二(1)班学生李华。下面是你校布告栏里张贴的“征集接待家庭”的通 知，请根据其内容用英语写一封申请信。词数不少于 120。 注意：信的开头和结尾已经给出（不计入词数）。 HOST FAMILIES WANTED Teachers and students from Central High School Phoenix will study in our school during the summer vacation. Host families are wanted to accommodate our friends. REQUIREMENTS: ◇ Good English. ◇ Good communication skills. ◇ A SEPARATE room. ◇ Convenient transportation. ◇ … If interested, please send your APPLICATION IN ENGLISH to the International Department before THURSDAY. Please consult us for any further information. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______‎ ‎ 4 阅读下面一则广告，按照要求完成写作任务。 EIL International English Summer Camp Volunteer Wanted EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding “Learn to live together by living together”. Requirements: Over 16, good knowledge of English; outgoing working well with children between 7—12. Activities: Language study, outdoor recreations and travel Camper: Students from different countries Camp site: Mount Wuyi, Fujian Time: July 26 — August 9 Application deadline: July 15, ‎ ‎2008 If interested, please e-mail to info@eiluk.org 写作内容 假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要点如下： 1、对夏令营主题的理解； 2、根据招聘要求自我介绍； 3、参加夏令营的目的。 注意：1、信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2、词数 120 左右。 ‎ Dear Sir, I’m Li Hua from Fujian._______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______ ‎ I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua ‎ 典例学习 2 词汇精练 ①excellent ②graduate from ③apply for ④major in ⑤be fond of ⑥show interest to ⑦reply ⑧look forward to 佳句锤炼 ①am graduating from, with excellent study ②show great interest to ③The reason why, is that ④I will appreciate it 3 词汇精练 ①be glad to ②gain the opportunity ③not only…but also ④improve the study ⑤do one’s best ⑥get on well with ⑦benefit from ⑧fall in love with ⑨have a good command of 佳句锤炼 ①Knowing the news that our school will hold the activity ②will the activity help students improve their study, all of us will benefit from it ③which benefits me to get along well with students ④I’m luckily accepted, I will double my efforts in order to do more favor to help the poor children. ‎ 达标测试 1 I am a student from He Nan University. I was born on May 8 in 1987 and I will graduate in July next year. I have studied English hard for four years because I am really interested in and major in it. What’s more, I am especially good at spoken English and written English. Operating the personal computer is also one of my advantages. Not only can I make programs for it by myself but also do well in typing, for my typing speed is 100 words per minute. If I am accepted, I will cherish the opportunity and work hard to be a good employee. I am looking forward to your reply. ‎ ‎2 Dear Manager, I am writing to you in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Meizhou City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. After graduating from Dongshan Middle School in 2000, I studied in the Computer Department of Sun Yat-sen University for four years. I mainly studied computer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E, and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize in the school swimming competition. I am waiting for your reply. Thank you. Yours Truly, Li Hua ‎ ‎3 Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. I’m writing in reply to the notice for host families. I think I have several reasons to accommodate one foreign friend. First, I believe my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners. Also, my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others. As for accommodation, my family live in a 4-room apartment and there is always a spare room for the guest. In addition, my home is very convenient in transportation. Its location makes it easy to take either subways or buses to most places. I have also got support from my parents, who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish. I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account.‎ ‎ Yours sincerely, Li Hua ‎ ‎4 I’m Li Hua from Fujian. When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation. As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12. I think it is a kind or win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation. I am looking forward to your early reply。‎