2020届二轮复习经典写作分步实施指导之七：发言稿

2020届二轮复习经典写作分步实施指导之七：发言稿

‎2020届二轮复习 经典写作分步实施指导之七：发言稿 ‎[试题]‎ 假定你是李华，你负责接待一个要参观故宫的美国中学生代表团。请你根据以下要点写一篇发言稿，以备参观之前向代表团宣读：‎ ‎1．表示对客人的欢迎；‎ ‎2．故宫简介：故宫是从明朝中期到清朝末期的中国帝王宫殿。它坐落于北京市中心，占地72万多平方米，于1987年被列为世界文化遗址之一；‎ ‎3．表达对客人的祝愿。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ‎ 参考词汇： 帝王的imperial　遗产heritage ‎[一]写作分步实施 第一步：准确审题，理行文脉络，拟写作要点 ‎1．审题：①文体：发言稿　②人称：主要是第一、二人称 ‎③时态：主要是一般过去时和一般将来时 ‎2．拟点：通过审题，根据题目和写作要求，可以从以下三个方面来写作。‎ ‎①开头：介绍成为导游的心情并对客人表示欢迎。‎ ‎②主体：具体介绍故宫。(位置；面积；重要地位)‎ ‎③结尾：表达对客人的祝愿。(祝愿客人更好地了解中国文化，玩得开心)‎ 要点1：今天有机会成为你们的导游我感到很荣幸。欢迎来到故宫！‎ I_feel_honored_that_I_have_the_chance_to_act_as_your_tour_guide_today._Welcome_to_the_Forbidden_City!‎ 要点2－①：故宫位于北京市中心。它是中国从明朝中期到清朝末期的中国帝王宫殿。‎ The_Forbidden_City_is_located_in_the_center_of_Beijing._It_was_the_Chinese_imperial_palace_from_the_midMing_Dynasty_to_the_end_of_the_Qing_Dynasty.‎ 要点2－②：故宫占地72万多平方米。它于1987年被列为世界文化遗址之一。 ‎ The_Forbidden_City_covers_over_720,000_square_metres._It_was_listed_as_one_of_the_World_Heritage_Sites_in_1987.‎ 要点3－①：你们会更好地了解中国文化。‎ You_will_understand_Chinese_culture_better.‎ 要点3－②：你们会在这里玩得很开心。‎ You’ll_have_a_good_time_here.‎ 第二步：添加细节，文意更丰满，表达更亮眼 为了使内容更充实，我们需要对要点进行适度拓展。注意句式要灵活多变，可补充定语、状语或更换高级句式，让要点在内容上和形式上更丰满。例如：‎ ‎1．要点2－①可以用形容词短语作状语合并升级。‎ ‎2．要点2－②可以使用非限制性定语从句合并升级。‎ ‎3．要点3－①可增加状语“通过参观故宫”，补充细节“你们会惊叹于它的设计”。‎ ‎4．要点3－②可增加“我确信”。‎ 升级要点2－①：故宫位于北京市中心，是中国从明朝中期到清朝末期的中国帝王宫殿。(形容词短语作状语)‎ Located_in_the_center_of_Beijing,_the_Forbidden_City_was_the_Chinese_imperial_palace_from_the_midMing_Dynasty_to_the_end_of_the_Qing_Dynasty.‎ 升级要点2－②：故宫占地72万多平方米，1987年被列为世界文化遗址之一。(非限制性定语从句)‎ The_Forbidden_City,_which_covers_over_720,000_square_metres,_was_listed_as_one_of_the_World_Heritage_Sites_in_1987.‎ 拓展要点3－①：通过参观故宫，你们会更好地了解中国文化并且你们会惊叹于它的设计。(并列句)‎ By_visiting_the_Forbidden_City,_you_will_understand_Chinese_culture_better_and_you’ll_be_amazed_by_its_design.‎ 拓展要点3－②：我确信你们会在这里玩得很开心。(宾语从句)‎ I’m_pretty_sure_you’ll_have_a_good_time_here.‎ 第三步：连句成文，排语句顺序，重衔接过渡 本文写作时要注意谋篇布局，应按要点阐述，并注意各要点之间的衔接。可用“My name is Li Hua.”开头引入话题，用“Thank you！”结束本次发言。‎ ‎[参考范文]‎ Dear friends，‎ My name is Li Hua. I feel honored that I have the chance to act as your tour guide today. Welcome to the Forbidden City!‎ Located_in_the_center_of_Beijing,_the_Forbidden_City_was_the_Chinese_imperial_palace_from_the_midMing_Dynasty_to_the_end_of_the_Qing_Dynasty.The_Forbidden_City,_which_covers_over_720,000_square_metres,_was_listed_as_one_of_the_World_Heritage_Sites_in_1987.By_visiting_the_Forbidden_City,_you_will_understand_Chinese_culture_better_and_you’ll_be_amazed_by_its_design.I’m_pretty_sure_you’ll_have_a_good_time_here.‎ Thank_you!‎ 训练材料：高级词汇和复杂句型运用 ‎1．(2018•6月浙江高考写作)我被选中代表我们学校参加英语辩论比赛，因为我精通英语口语。(select, debate)‎ I’m_selected_to_represent_our_school_to_take_part_in_the_English_debate_competition_because_I_have_a_good_command_of_spoken_English.‎ ‎2. (2017•全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)既然你对中国传统绘画感兴趣，我认为这个中国剪纸展很值得体验。(painting, worth)‎ Since_you_are_interested_in_traditional_Chinese_paintings,I_think_the_Chinese_papercutting_exhibition_is_well_worth_experiencing.‎ ‎3．(2016•10月浙江高考写作)After she had survived that night, she was confident that everything else would be all right.‎ ‎→Having survived that night, she was confident that everything else would be all right.(分词作状语)‎ ‎4．The project, which was designed to help the students in need, didn’t work out as planned.‎ ‎→The project, designed to help the students in need, didn’t work out as planned.(分词作后置定语)‎ ‎5．在涉及健康、娱乐和文化的三个栏目中，我的建议是娱乐栏目应该从报纸上去掉。‎ Of the three columns concerning health, entertainment and culture, my suggestion is that the column of entertainment (should) be removed from the newspaper.‎ ‎6. (2015•浙江高考书面表达)好的意见是值得坚持的，因为它们可以使我们所有人受益。‎ Good_opinions_are_worth_sticking_to_because_they_can_benefit_us_all.‎ ‎7. 她刚好在我们正要离开时到达，但我不能肯定这是出于偶然还是有意安排。(design)‎ She arrived just as we were leaving, but I’m not sure whether this was by accident or by design.‎ ‎8．据报道科学家对这种植物是如何经受住这么干燥的气候的仍感到不解。(survive)‎ It’s reported that how this kind of plant survives such dry climate still puzzles scientists. ‎ ‎9．他在会议上提出的建议值得考虑。‎ ‎①His suggestion put forward at the conference is worth considering. (worth)‎ ‎②His suggestion put forward at the conference is worthy of being considered. (worthy)‎ ‎③His suggestion put forward at the conference is worthy to be considered. (worthy)‎ ‎④It is worthwhile considering/to consider his suggestion put forward at the conference. (worthwhile)‎ ‎10. (2017•全国卷Ⅲ完形填空)Axani wrote in his post that he is not looking for anything in return (作为回报) and that the woman who uses the extra ticket can choose to either travel with him or take the ticket and travel on her own.‎ ‎11．(2015•福建高考完形填空)It wasn’t until her friend was badly hurt that Kerry became aware of her habit of finding fault. Very quickly, she learned to appreciate life rather than (而不是) to judge everything so harshly (刻薄)．‎ ‎12. (2014•重庆高考写作)是我们用在礼物上的时间和精力而不是我们花了多少钱使得礼物有价值。(rather than)‎ It_is_the_time_and_energy_we_spend_on_the_present_that_makes_it_valuable rather than the price we pay.‎ ‎13．(2018•6月浙江高考写作)毫无疑问，我与外国人交流几乎没有什么困难。(there is no doubt that)‎ There_is_no_doubt_that_I_have_little_difficulty_communicating_with_foreigners._‎ ‎14. (2018•全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)据认为这部短片不仅有意义而且有趣。(It be＋过去分词＋that ...)‎ It_is_believed_that_the_short_movie_will_be_not_only_meaningful_but_also_interesting._‎ ‎15．(2016•北京高考书面表达)The residents give praise to (＝think highly of) what we have done.(用本单元短语替换加彩部分)‎ ‎16. 当我意识到我的钢笔不见了，我几乎要发疯了。我仔细地搜查了操场，甚至通往我家的路。‎ I almost felt crazy when I realized that my pen was missing. I searched_the_playground_carefully_and_even_the_road_leading_to_my_home.‎ ‎17. 作为一名理科学生，我一直在复习语文、数学、英语、物理、化学和生物，这些都属于高考科目。‎ As a science student, I’ve been reviewing Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry and biology, which all belong to the College Entrance Examination subjects.‎ ‎18. (2015•四川高考书面表达)你提到作为回报你想教我英语，这正是我所渴望的。‎ You_mentioned_that_you_would_like_to_teach_me_English_in_return,_which is exactly what I am dying for.‎ ‎19. (2018•北京高考书面表达)With their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.(要点句)‎ ‎20. (2018•天津高考书面表达)I would appreciate it if you could give us some advice on how to improve our robots.(总结句)‎