高考英语二轮复习-高效书面表达专题卷，精品4套

高考英语二轮复习-高效书面表达专题卷，精品4套

试卷第 1页，总 3页 高考英语二轮 复习-高效书面表达专题卷，精品 4 套 高考英语二轮复习 高效书面表达专题卷(附参考答案) 1． 基础写作（满分 15 分） 假如你是李华，2010 年亚洲运动会将在广州举办，现在正招募志愿者，你希望成为其 中一员。请按要求用英语给组委会写一封申请信。 写作内容： 个人情况：年龄，学历 个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交往，乐于助人，熟悉广州情况 承诺：提供最佳服务，展现青年志愿者的风采 写作要求： 1. 只能使用 5 个句子表达全部的内容，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入考查范围内。 2. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称 Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. ___________________________________________________________________________ ____ ___________________________________________________________________________ ____ Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully Li Hua （考词汇：志愿者 volunteer 2010 年广州亚运会 the 2010 Guangzhou Asian Games.） 2．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。 One day, while she was walking in the woods, a girl found two starving songbirds. She took them home and put them in a small cage. She cared them with love and the birds grew strong. Every morning they greeted her with a wonderful song. The girl felt great love for the birds. One day the girl left the door to the cage open. The larger and stronger of the two birds flew from the cage. The girl was so frightened that he would fly away. As he flew close, she grasped him wildly. Her heart felt glad at her success in capturing him. Suddenly she felt the bird go limp. She opened her hand and stared in horror at the dead bird. Her desperate love had killed him. She noticed the other bird moving back and forth on the edge of the cage. She could feel his great need for freedom. He needed to soar into the clear, blue sky. She lifted him from the cage and tossed him softly into the air. The bird circled once, twice, three times. The girl watched delightedly at the bird's enjoyment. Her heart was no longer concerned with her loss. She wanted the bird to be happy. Suddenly the bird flew closer and landed softly on her shoulder. It sang the sweetest melody that she had ever heard. She finally realized that the fastest way to lose love is to hold on it too tight, the best way to keep love is to give it WINGS! 试卷第 2页，总 3页 [写作内容] 1. 以约 30 个词概括短文的要点； 2. 然后以约 120 个词就 “爱就要放手” 这一主题发表看法，并包括如下要点： a) 以自己为例，简述生活中你父母对你的过度关注； b) 你父母的做法对你造成了什么不良的影响； c) 如果有机会，你会就此问题对父母说些什么 [写作要求] 1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引 用原文中的句子。 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。 3．假如你是学生会主席, 请根据下面图表, 1。用英语写一则秋游的通知。 回来后讨论。2.在山顶野餐, 要自带午餐和饮料。3.参加者在本周四前到学生会报名。 注意：1.通知必须包括表内所列内容, 可以适当调整内容的顺序和增加细节, 使其连 贯, 完整。 2. 词数：100 左右。3.通知时间 10 月 3 日。 4. 生词：植物园 the botanical garden; 报名 sign up for; 学生会 the Students’ Union. 参加者 高一年级的学生 活动内容 1.去博物馆看《人与自然》的展览 2.参观泉山植物园 集合地点 学校大门口 集合时间 1.10 月 3 日上午乘校车前往。2.早上 7 点集合， 7：20 开车。 注意事项 1.参观展览时保持安静；并认真记笔记，准备回来后讨论。 2.在山顶野餐，要自带午餐和饮料。 3.参加者在本周四前到学生会报名。 4．假设高考已经结束，请你根据下列提示给你的美国朋友 Tom 写一封电子邮件。(开头 已为你写好，不计算在总词数内) 1. 对高考感觉和考后打算； 2. 畅想大学生活和未来理想。 注意：1. 词数 120-150； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 5．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。 Here are some comments on Li Hua from his classmates. Lily said, "Li Hua is the smartest student in our class and usually scores the highest marks in the English and mathematics exams. His homework and assignments are always done to a very high standard so our teachers ask us to follow his example. We all admire his intelligence." Kate said, "Li Hua is really a hard-working student. He spends at least four hours every day reviewing his lessons and his homework is never late. As the exams get closer he becomes even more diligent and works into the early hours of the morning, making sure he has gone over all of the information covered in our classes." John said, "Li Hua is the kind of person who is easy to co-operate with. Although he's very clever he is still willing to listen to others' opinions and take their suggestions. When we do groupwork in class we all want to be in his group because he always does his share of the work and is easy to get along with." Tim said, "Li Hua is the class monitor and the most helpful student in our class. 试卷第 3页，总 3页 He always makes sure the classroom is kept clean and assists the teacher in handing out and collecting the students' books and homework. When a student is absent from school he will call and tell them what they have missed." 【写作内容】 假设你叫李平，你的同学李华拟申请到美国某大学学习。申请材料需包括同伴的推荐信。 李华邀请你为他写一封推荐信。上文是其他同学对李华的一些评价，请根据这些材料和 你自己对李华的看法，写一封推荐信。以下是信的内容（信的开头和结尾已经为你写好）： 1. 以约 30 个词概括同学们眼中李华的特点和优点； 2. 以约 120 个词表达你对李华的看法，并包括如下要点： ⑴ 你对同学们评价意见的看法； ⑵ 以你和李华之间的经历来说明其中的一点看法。 【写作要求】 1. 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直 接引用原文中的句子； 2. 信中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 试卷第 4页，总 9页 参考答案 1． Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to serve as a volunteer for the coming of the 2010 Guangzhou Asian Games. I am a 17-year-old Senior Three student at No. 28 High School and I am good at English and I enjoy talking with foreigners. I believe I would do a good job at the Games. First of all, I appreciate sports and I know the city very well; secondly, I can easily get along with others, which is important for a volunteer and also, I’m ready to offer my help whenever needed. I make a promise that if I were to be chosen as a youth volunteer, I would offer the best service possible to the people at the Games. Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully Li Hua 【解析】 2． A girl realized the best way to keep love is to let a bird fly when she accidentally killed a bird which tried to escape and freed the other which flew happily. I must admit that my parents love me very much, but their excessive love sometimes has gone too far. For example, they won’t allow me to chat with my American friend online or allow me to go shopping by myself for fear I might be cheated though I am already 18 years old. What’s worse, they even secretly read my diary. To be honest, I am now suffering a lot from this. Due to their excessive love, I don’t have many friends. As a girl of 18, I am not able to make my own decisions about many things. Though I can’t tolerate all this, I dare not speak up for I know this is all due to their deep love for me. If I had the chance to talk with them about this, I would like to tell them that I can manage without their hovering over me! I’d like to say to them, “Please let go of your anxiety. Give me some advice just when necessary, and for most of the time, let me think for myself. Your love should never be a burden on me. Love me, and let me fly with it.” 【解析】 试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真 看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约 30 个词概括上文的主要内容， 要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约 120 个词写一篇短文，按照 要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。 写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型， 使自己的文章更有文采。 【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯，使用了词 组：What’s worse 更糟糕的是, Due to 由于，因为，To be honest 说实话, let go of 放手，句式上也是富有变化：A girl realized the best way to keep love is to let a bird fly when she accidentally killed a bird which tried to escape and freed the other which flew happily.这句话用了定语从句和不定式做表语， For example, they won’t allow me to chat with my American friend online or allow me to go 试卷第 5页，总 9页 shopping by myself for fear I might be cheated though I am already 18 years old. 这句话用了目的状语从句，Give me some advice just when necessary, and for most of the time, let me think for myself. 这句话用了省略句， 考点：考查读写任务类书面表达 3． One possible version: Notice October 3 The students of Senior Grade One will go out for a visit on October 3. We’ll first go to the museum to see an exhibition of Man and Nature. When you’re in the exhibition hall you should keep silent and make careful notes because we’re going to have a discussion after we come back. After that we plan to visit the botanical garden on the Quanshan Hill and have a picnic on the top of it. So please bring lunch and some drinking water with you. Our school bus will leave at 7:20. Please gather at our school gate at 7:00a.m. Those who want to take part in the activity should sign up for it at the Students’ Union before Thursday. 【解析】 试题分析：本文要求写一则秋游的通知，要把时间地点和注意事项写清楚。所以要用一 般将来时或祈使句或情态动词表达应该怎么做。字数要求 100 词左右。注意使用较高级 的词汇和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。 【亮点说明】文中使用了祈使句或情态动词表达要求做的事情，用 will 表示将要做。 非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如 keep silent，have a discussion 和 take part in 还运用了 who 引导的定语从句等复合句。并注意了句子开头的变化和句子之间 的衔接如用 After that 、So 等等。 考点：提纲作文。 【答案】略 【解析】略 5． I am writing this letter to support my good friend Li Hua's application to study at your university. In my classmates' eyes, he has always been an intelligent and hard-working student, who is helpful and co-operative with others. For these reasons, he is very popular with everyone. I agree with my classmates and I have personally benefited greatly from his help. I still remember at the beginning of this school year I was in a traffic accident and that required me to be in hospital for over two months. This situation caused me great concern as I feared I would fall far behind my classmates in this very important year of study. But thanks to Li Hua by the time I was well enough to leave hospital and return to work I was up-to-date in all areas of my study. Not only did he come to visit me every day, bringing with him all the lessons and materials our class had gone through each day, but he patiently sat with me and explained to me all those issues that I didn't understand. Only after staying with me for at least 2 hours every day would he go home and begin his own studies. For the reasons above, I urge you to consider his application favourably. 【解析】 试题分析：考查半开放性作文。李华的优点可以用：聪明，勤奋，善于合作等等。考生 可以自行选择一个身边的实例作为蓝本说明你和李华之间的经历，考生可以适当拓展并 发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。写作时认真审题，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪 试卷第 6页，总 9页 些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的，不会错的。写的过程中， 多注意灵活使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句。 考点：考查半开放性作文 点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较 大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能 力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内， 选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词， 把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如 besides, further, last but not least 等。在发表个 人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。 高考英语二轮复习 高效书面表达专题卷(附参考答案) 1． 读写任务（共 1 小题，满分 25 分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文： Anna really wanted to do something significant for her school before she went to college. But she couldn't think of anything meaningful that would influence the lives of her schoolmates. One day, Anna saw a girl sitting by the school pond crying. Anna went up to her and said, "Are you okay? Is there anything I can do to help?" Anna found out that the girl was in her first year and was having trouble coping with her schoolwork. Then, Anna had an idea. She would start a tutoring group where seniors could help juniors who were struggling in their subjects. Before long, many seniors volunteered to join Anna's tutoring group. Soon, Anna also started other support groups like "I'm not Alone" which provided counseling for students whose parents had been divorced and "Crime Fighters" where students helped prevent theft. Anna was happy that she made a difference in her peers' lives. She was showered with flowers of appreciation from her friends at her graduation! [写作内容] 1．以约 30 个词概括上面短文的主要内容； 2．以约 120 个词就“帮助他人”这一主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点： (1) 你在日常生活和学习中经常帮助别人吗?请举例说明， (2) 帮助别人之后你有何感想? (3) 以你的亲身经历说明应该如何去帮助别人? [写作要求] 你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不 得直接引用原文中的句子。 2． 书面表达（满分 25 分） 距离高考剩下不到一个月的时间了，紧张的高考备考已经进入 尾声，但是很多同学不知如何处理学习、健身和休息与高考备 考之间的关系。请你根据图中的内容写一篇英语短文，谈一谈 你对这一问题的看法和建议。 注意： 1．词数 100 字左右，开头语已为你写好。 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams We are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one month. 试卷第 7页，总 9页 ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ____________________ 3． 书面表达 (满分 25 分) 高考文理分科与否在不同人群中反响各一，请根据图画所给提示，用英语写一篇短文， 发表自己的感想。 注意： 1. 仔细品读图画中的文字，要突出自己的感想，不要作简单描述； 2. 词数 150 左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 参考词汇：全能的 overall 高考 CET Whether to cancel the division of science and art in senior middle school is an issue of controversy nowadays. ___________________________________________________________________________ __ ___________________________________________________________________________ __ 4． 情景作文（20 分） 美国中学生 jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你 是李华，请给 Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于 60。 试卷第 8页，总 9页 5． 11 月的第四个星期四是感恩节。2014 年的感恩节是 11 月 27 日星期四。假如你是李华， 为了感恩母亲，请你依据所提供的信息，给你妈妈发一封电子邮件。 提示：1、感谢母亲多年的养育和教育之恩； 2、美好回忆：惹她生气时，她总能理解我；生病时，她总能 给我最好的照顾；考试成绩不好时，她总能鼓励我；教会 我要帮助有困难的人及如何做人等； 3、向妈妈谈谈你的理想和打算。 注意：1、词数 150 左右，开头与结尾已写好，不记入词数； 2、语言通顺，结构严谨。 参考词汇：感激某人 be grateful to Dear Mum, How are you? Thanksgiving Day is drawing near, and I would like to say “thank you” here. I hope you are happy every day. Yours, Li Hua 参考答案 1． 试卷第 9页，总 9页 【解析】 2． How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams We are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one year. However, many students still don’t know how to arrange their study, rest and physical exercise when preparing for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to their study, which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning. As the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We’d better leave ourselves enough time to sleep since it enables us to learn our lessons more efficiently. What’s more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study and our future work and creative activities. Therefore, as we are preparing for the Exams, don’t forget that rest, exercise and study are equally important. 【解析】 3． Whether to cancel the division of science and art students in senior middle school is an issue of controversy nowadays. We have heard many different voices about it. Some experts hold the view that the division of science and art limits the overall development of the students, and they believe students can develop their overall abilities if such division is canceled. They strongly believe that only when students learn both science and art subjects can they develop in all round way, which lays a solid foundation for their future study. However, as we can see from the cartoon, the student is still heavily loaded with lessons when there is no such division. The students think that it makes no difference whether to cancel the division of science and arts if the CET system is not changed, as students have to learn more subjects than before. From my point of view, I suppose that it may have more advantages than disadvantages to learn both science and art subjects. Although it will take us more time and energy, it’s beneficial to students in the long run. 【解析】 4． Dear Jeff, I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing. While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to 试卷第 10页，总 9页 our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua 【解析】根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感；要 用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然。 5． Possible version: Dear Mum, How are you? Thanksgiving Day is drawing near, and I would like to say “thank you” here. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. Thank you for educating me and bringing me up. I’m very grateful to you for taking care of me. In my heart are many beautiful memories. When I was young, I always made you angry, but you were always very understanding. When I was sick, you were always looking after me. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me. You always encouraged me to help others who are in trouble. When I did good deeds, you were always praising me. I am really thankful to you for your teaching me how to be “a real person”. Now I have grown up. I will work harder and make greater progress in my study. Mum, I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice, so don’t worry about me. I hope you are happy every day. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析：本文属于提纲类书面表达，主要为了感恩父母。以第一人称和一般现在时为 主。要点为：1、感谢母亲多年的养育和教育之恩；2、美好回忆：惹她生气时，她总能 理解我；生病时，她总能；给我最好的照顾；考试成绩不好时，她总能鼓励我；教会我 要帮助有困难的人及如何做人等；3、向妈妈谈谈你的理想和打算（更加努力学习，成 人成才）。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要 赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组 织成一个完整的整体，如 besides, further, last but not least 等。在发表个人观 点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。 亮点说明：范文里较多运用了高级词汇，如 bring up, be grateful to 等；另外本文 中高级句式的运用也很到位，如时间状语从句 When I failed an exam, you encouraged me.定语从句 You always encouraged me to help others who are in trouble. 考点：提纲类书面表达 高考英语二轮复习 高效书面表达专题卷(附参考答案) 1．书面表达（满分 30 分） 随着高考的临近，部分住校生要求搬出学生宿舍，在学校附近租房子住。请你根据 下表提供的内容，写一篇英语短文，阐述学生和 家长的观点，并表达自己的看法。 试卷第 11页，总 9页 现象 观点 高三部分住校生搬离学生宿舍，在学校附近 租房住 多数学生 1．宿舍吵闹，影响学习和休息 2．熄灯制度限定了学习时间 许多家长 1．提供好的学习环境 2．方便照顾饮食起居 你的看法 …… 注意： 1．陈述所有要点，可适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2．词数 120—150（开头已写好，不计入总词数）。 3．参考词汇：熄灯制度—blackout rule With the college entrance examination approaching day by day, some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in a rented apartment near their schools. 2． 第二节 读写任务（共 1 小题，满分 25 分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 左右的英语短文。 It is exciting to visit different places. As you travel, you will see beautiful sceneries typical of the region. Besides, you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races. Today people are so fond of traveling that tourism has become one of the developing industries in most countries. Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future. Facing this tendency, we can't help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people's living standard has greatly been improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What's more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now. Though there are still some problems with tourism, I personally believe that tourism should be playing a key role in our life. I also hope that our government will make policies to create a better environment for tourists. [写作内容] (1) 以约 30 个词概括短文的要点； (2) 然后以约 120 个词就“旅游的好处”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点： ① 体验不同地方的美景、美食，出国旅游更是给人们提供一个远离祖国的机会； ② 了解风土人情，拓宽历史、地理、生物等知识，增强爱国意识。 [写作要求] (1) 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得 直接引用原文中的句子； (2) 标题自定； (3) 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 3．今年，你将高三毕业。为使即将升入本校的高一新生的高中生活更顺利，学校的《英 语学习园地》请你给他们留言，提出一些中肯的建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一 试卷第 12页，总 9页 篇短文。 1．合理分配学习、锻炼和休息时间； 2．搞好与老帅和同学之间的关系； 3．积极参加校社团活动。 注意：1．词数：不少于 100 词； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4．假设你叫李华，与好友周凯分别升入不同的高中，开学两周后你对自己的所见所闻 感受颇深。请你给周凯写一封邮件，简述你对新学校的印象。要点包括： 学校概况 新校园干净美丽；有大型操场和电子阅览室 教师 最喜欢英语老师，他是一位帅气的男老师，他的教学方法与众不同，从不让 人尴尬 同学 友好、勤奋 感受 高中新生活开始了 ，要积极上进 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：电子阅览室：digital reading room Dear Zhou Kai， It has been more than two weeks since we met last time. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 5．据调查，人们对学生网上交友持不同意见。请以“Should students make friends online?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍不同看法，并表达自己的观点。 赞成方认为 反对方认为 你的观点 1．可以广交朋友 1．浪费宝贵时间 ? (请考生列举一到二点) 2．自由表达思想 2．影响正常学习 3．利于学习外语 3．容易上当受骗 注意：1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2．词数 120 左右。 3．作文中不得提及考生所在班级和本人姓名。 参考词汇：网络朋友 online friend(s)；上当受骗 get cheated； Should students make friends online? Some people say yes. _________________________________________ 试卷第 13页，总 8页 参考答案 1．With the college entrance examination approaching day by day, some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in a rented apartment near their schools. Most students think although school dorms bring them fun and friendship, the blackout rule to guarantee students sleeping hours doesn't leave them enough time to finish homework．Worse still, the noise in the dorms not only influnces their studies but also ruins their rest．To many parents, they'd like to provide a better environment for their children so that they can study more effeciently．Besides, they can take care of their children's daily meals and laundry, so their children can eat better and have a comfortable life． In my opinion, whether a student should rent a house outside his school depends on his need．I am in favor of renting a house for the sake of study．After all, time is pressing．But I strongly recommend that parents should care much about their children while they are outside school． 【解析】略 2． Traveling can bring us a lot of benefits, which in turn promotes the development of tourism. Though it has some disadvantages, more and more people now show great interest in traveling. People travel both for pleasure and for learning. By traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places. We will visit many famous cities and scenic spots with our own eyes and taste different delicious foods. Traveling abroad is an especially satisfying experience for those who do not have much of an opportunity to be away from their homelands. We will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when we travel. Travel will not only help us to know about customs of other people, but also will help us gain knowledge of history, geography, biology, and other knowledge of the places we visit. In this way, we can understand how differently other people live and arouse our deep love for our motherland 【解析】 3． One possible version: Here are some suggestions for you ,which may help you enjoy your school life better. As senior high school students. You will be living a very busy life. So first of all ，you should arrange your time properly .You’d better make a timetable so that you know when to study, exercise and rest. Only in this way can you make good use of every minute .Besides ,while in school，it is wise to develop a pleasant relationship with teachers and classmates .When you have a problem that you can’t work it out alone ,you’d better turn to your teachers or classmates for help .Of course you should lend a helping hand when necessary .Last but not least ,I advise you to take an active part in societies at school ,which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves. I hope the suggestions above will help you go through a rich and colorful school life .I’m sure that a beautiful future is waiting you. 【解析】 试题分析：本文是一篇提纲式命题作文，要求给学校的《英语学习园地》请你给他们留 言，提出一些中肯的建议。命题中给出了三个写作要点,因此考生需要仔细审题，把握 主题，写作中要包含所有提示要点，根据要点进行适当的合理的发挥和想象。文章要注 试卷第 14页，总 8页 意遣词造句，注重句式变化，调动自己多年以来的英语积累和语言储备，写出富于变化， 有利于高中生活的短文。结合所给材料,可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述,人称 以第二人称为主.由于是提供建议,写作中注意使用连词,或者序数词,做到上下文联系紧 密,符合逻辑关系. 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如 living a very busy life, take an active part in;短语 Only in this way can you make good use of every minute 的倒装 句及 when 引导的时间从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：So first of all , Besides，Last but not least 等等。 考点：提纲类作文 4．Dear Zhou Kai， We haven’t seen each other for over two weeks. How are you doing？I can’t wait to tell you something about my new school life. My new school is really clean and beautiful. There’s a large playground and an amazing digital reading room. I like my English teacher best，who is very popular with all the students. He is really good-looking. His teaching method is nothing like that of the other teachers. What’s more，he avoids making us feel embarrassed in class. All my classmates are friendly and hardworking. We’re living a new life and trying to make greater progress in our lessons. Would you please tell me something about your new school? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua 【解析】本文首先是一份书信，应注意书信的格式 然后可以分点介绍学校的情况。 然后可以写自己在这个学校的感受（可从同学，老师，生活习惯，学习环境等 方面叙述），还可以写希望自己能在这个学校去的什么样的成就，什么目标 最后可以询问对方的看法，对方的情况以及对对方的问候 5． Should students make friends online? Some people say yes. The Internet helps students make many friends. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely and even get help with their foreign language studies. Others, however, think students should not make online friends. They think it a waste of time to make friends online, which should be spent more meaningfully on their studies. Otherwise, their normal studies will be much affected. Besides, some students may even get cheated online. From my point of view, making friends online is harmful rather than helpful. Students should think of their study, health and safety first. As for friendship, we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us. 【解析】略 高考英语二轮复习 书面表达专题卷(附参考答案) 1． 校刊“英语园地”为配合学校创建“绿色学校”的工作，开展了“创建绿色学校英语征文活 动”，请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。 内容如下： 存在现象 浪费水、电； 试卷第 15页，总 8页 乱扔可回收的饮料瓶、旧书本等； …… 个人看法和建议 对学生进行环保教育； 从关灯、回收废物等小事做起； …… 注意：1、词数 150 左右。 2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 3、文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school. However, there are still a lot of problems in the school 。 ___________________________________________________________________________ ____ 2． 第二节 书面表达（满分 25 分） 高考在即，一年以后我们每位同学也都面临着志愿的选择问题。对此同学们进行了热烈 的讨论。有的同学认为应该依靠父母或老师，因为他们更有经验；有的同学则认为我的 未来我做主，父母和老师的想法也许已经过时。请你将同学们的讨论结果和自己（李华） 对该问题的看法、写信给对此感兴趣的美国笔友 Tom。 注意： 1．词数 100 左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当发挥，增加细节，使行文连贯、完整。 Dear Tom, With the coming of the college entrance examinations, all the students should make a choice. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 3． 第二节 读写任务(共 1 小题，满分 25 分) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。 I found that my way of learning English that I formed from middle school still works today. By listening to tapes and imitating the speakers one can improve his pronunciation within a short time. By reciting classic essays one can enrich their language as well as enlarge their vocabulary. As a non-English major， I like to set aside a certain period of time for English learning every day， usually an hour or at least half an hour. I utilize this precious time by listening to tapes and imitating their content and then reciting the short passages I like. To be frank， “Crazy English” has always been my favorite. This is definitely not intended to flatter. Instead of dividing my attention between too many materials ， I’d rather concentrate on one particular resource at a time such as CE， not only because of its abundant content and native English， but also because of the benefits it has brought to me through intensive reading， listening and reciting， I believe that studying English by using these intensive methods will help you to get twice the result with half the effort. ［写作内容］ (1) 以约 30 词概括短文的要点； (2) 然后以约 120 个词就 “如何学好英语” 的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点： 试卷第 16页，总 8页 ①弄清自已学习英语的目的；认识到学习英语是一个渐进的过程； ②养成良好的学习习惯，学英语讲究日积月累； ③充分利用好 INTERNET。 ［写作要求］ 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料 的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； ［评分标准］ 概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ________________ 4．书面表达：（15 分） 你的美国笔友 Lisa 暑假期间将要来中国旅游，请你根据提示，写一篇介绍你的家乡广 州的短文。 1. 广州市地处广东省中部，是广东省的省会，是一座有 2200 多年的文明历史的古城； 面积 7434.4 平方千米 ，人口约 1000 万； 2. 1982 年，广州被选定为全国首批历史文化名城之一。 广州一年四季如春、繁花似锦，故又有“花城”的美誉；同时，“五羊”是广州的象征。 4. 今日广州，正以迷人的风采迎接来自四面八方的海内外游客。 评分标准： 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 5．假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友 Bob 来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并 希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。 自然情况 ①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住 成 ．就 ②经济发展迅速 ③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。 存在问题 ④水、空气污染 ⑤交通拥挤 对江城发展的看法 ⑥(内容由考生自己拟定) 注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。 2．词数 100 左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。 参考词汇：经济 economy n． Dear Bob， It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng． ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第 17页，总 8页 __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． One possible version： Very often you come across an empty classroom with the lights still on. It’s not difficult to find evidence of wasting water, a very serious problem. Additionally, students do not recycle enough, throwing away the soft drink bottles, used exercise papers and books. Worse still, many students still use non-environmentally friendly lunch boxes, causing the White Pollution. These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness. It’s important to educate students to be more environmentally friendly. At the same time, students can do small things, such as collecting used items for recycling, turning off the lights, saving water. Always remember that it’s everyone’s responsibility to protect the environment. 【解析】 2． One possible version： Dear Tom, With the coming of the college entrance examinations, all the students should make a choice. What university should they choose to study in? what major should they study in university? We will also be faced with the same problem in year, so it brings a heated discussion among us students. Some students think that it is better to rely on teachers or parents because they are more experienced. On the contrary, some other students think now they are already grown – ups, so they can decide everything for themselves. Besides, they agree that parents and teachers may have the ideas that may be out of date. As far as I’m concerned, I think teachers and parents have more life experience. Also what they do will obviously benefit us. In a word, as students, we should take teachers and parents’ advice. Look forward to your reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 3． The author shares his/her sucessful experience of learning English. The method inculdes listening to tapes and imitating the speakers, reciting classic essays and choosing proper learning materials such as Crazy English. From my point of view, if you are not motivated to learn English you will become frustrated and give up, so firstly you must know why you learn English. And secondly remember that learning a language is a gradual process - it does not happen overnight. You must be patient with yourself.What’s more important, make learning a habit. That is ,try to 试卷第 18页，总 8页 learn something every day. It is much better to study (or read, or listen to English news, etc.) 10 minutes each day than to study for 2 hours once a week. At last, Use the Internet properly. The Internet is the most exciting, unlimited English resource that anyone could imagine and it is right at your finger tips. If you can stick to it, I’m sure you’ll be a successful English learner. 【解析】 4． Located in the middle of Guangdong province, Guangzhou, the capital of Guangdong, is an ancient city with a cultural history of 2200 years. It covers a total area of 743, 4 square kilometers with a population of 10 million. Because it is warm and flowery all the seasons, it is also called “Flower City” and “Five Goats” is the symbol of it. Since 1982, Guangzhou was named as one of the first historical and cultural cities. The special character of Guangzhou is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world. 【解析】 试题分析：题目要求写一篇介绍家乡广州的短文。写作要点包括：广州的地理位置、人 口、历史、气候等。要求句子结构要正确，不能出现语法错误；包含所有信息，使作文 保持与语意连贯。 亮点说明： 范文使用了非谓语动词 Located in the middle of Guangdong province；with 复合结 构 with a cultural history of 2200 years；原因状语从句 Because it is warm and flowery all the seasons 等语法知识，使作文句式多样，层次清晰； 范文使用了 was named as，all over the world 等短语，使表达更生动、形象。 考点：材料类作文 5．Dear Bob， It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng. The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future. Yours， Xiaohua 【解析】这篇书面表达主要结合要点来写，首先介绍家乡江城的自然情况：The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in.这里的 stand 表示位于，不定式 to live in 做定语修饰 a beautiful place。然后介绍江城的成就，Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. 这句话中的时态很重要，用现在完成式。More schools and hospitals are available for its people.这里的 be available for 是“可以获得的”。表达存在问题时，要注 意用表示转折的词，像 however，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.举例说明这里用了 such as。最后是对江城发展的看法，让考生自己发挥，就要看 考生的思维和表达能力了，用 In my opinion,引出自己的观点，I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.这句话里面用了 be brought under control“控制住….”，so that 引导 试卷第 19页，总 8页 的是目的状语从句。都是很值得学习的。 高考英语二轮复习 书面表达专题卷(附参考答案) 1．假如你是王林， 李明是你的好友， 他对布朗先生的公司感兴趣，打算到该公司谋 职（apply for a position）。请根据下面李明的简历表，用英语为他写一封推荐信。 姓名 李明 性别 男 国籍 中国 出生地 江苏，启东 婚否 已婚 出生日期 1980.8.21 通讯地址 启东市人民路 148 号 电话 0513-83335550 职业 律师 学历 大学毕业 外语水平 擅长英语， 懂一些日语、德语 其他 有三年工作经历，办事认真，待人诚恳，与人和睦相处 2．随着网络的普及，越来越多的中学生上网交友。某英语报社就“Should students make friends online?”这个主题进行了征文大赛。请你给英语报社投一篇稿子。 内容要点：1. 网上交友的优点。 2. 网上交友的弊端。 3. 你自己的看法。 要求：1．词数不少于 100；（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 2．内容充实，结构完整，语言连贯； Should Students Make Friends Online? Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends._______________________________ 3．目前我们国家在建设节约型社会，请你根据自己的实际生活情况，向全校同学发出 倡议。内容从下面几个方面着手，开头已给出，不计入总词数。词数 100 左右。 1. 吃零食方面； 2. 服装打扮方面； 3. 节约用水、电方面； 4. 文具方面。 Dear classmates, Chairman Xi called on the whole society to build China into a saving country this year. As a student, I think __________________________________________________________________ 4．假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要 求写一篇短文，主要内容包括： 1 乐观的人生态度 2 努力学习 3 参加体育锻炼 关键词： 态度 attitude 乐观的 positive 5．感恩，是我们生活中永恒的话题。学会感恩，学会热爱生活，我们将会感受到更多 快乐。假如你校拟举行一次有关“感恩”的演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演 讲稿。 要点： 1. 感恩对象（如：父母、老师、朋友……）； 试卷第 20页，总 8页 2. 为何感恩； 3. 如何感恩； 注意： 只能选择一个感恩对象； 可对所给要点做适当发挥； 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在的学校师生或本人姓名； 词数在 130 字左右；开头已给出（不计词数）。 Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum” 6．假如你是安阳一中的学生李华，你的美国笔友 Jane 给你来信想了解中国人过春节的 情况。请你给他写一封回信，简单介绍中国人过春节的情况，内容须包括以下要点：字 数 120 字左右。书信的开头和结尾已给出 春节是中国人最重要的传统节日，春节往往在阴历元月或二月份进行，春节往往持续半 个月的时间。在春节来临之前，为了有个新面貌，各家都进行大扫除。然后在门上张贴 对联以便能带来好运气。提前一个月人们就开始忙着采购过年的物品。尤其孩子们都盼 望着过春节，因为能穿上新衣服，还能得到很多零花钱（pocket money）。各家都准备 了丰富的食物来招待朋友，亲戚。尽管火车票、飞机票很难买，为了能和家人团圆，在 外工作的人都会设法回家过年。在春节这一天，燃放鞭炮来增加过年的气氛。在春节期 间，人们彼此都很友好，相互探访。在元宵节来临时，春节就结束了，新的一年又开始 了。 Dear Jane, I’ m glad to know that you want to know something about the Spring Festival. Yours sincerely Li Hua 试卷第 21页，总 3页 参考答案 1． Dear Mr. Brown, I’d like to introduce my friend to you, Mr. Li Ming, who is going to apply for a position with your firm. He graduated from college three years ago and since then he has worked as a lawyer. He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German. He works hard and is careful in everything he does. He is honest, kind and easy to get on with. He was born on August 21st, 1980 in Qidong, Jiangsu Province, China. He is married and lives at No 148 Renmin Road, Qidong city. His telephone number is 0513-83335550. He shows great interest in your firm. If he is accepted, he will do his best. I’m sure he will be fit for the position. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Wang Lin 【解析】 2． Should Students Make Friends Online? Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends. The Internet helps students make as many friends as they want easily. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely. Thus they can also ease their anxiety from their studies. Some students even get help with their foreign language studies. However, each coin has two sides. Making friends online can no doubt waste much of students’ precious time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students sometimes get cheated online. In my opinion, students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us. 【解析】 试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文的话题是“Should students make friends online?” 上网的优点和缺点。优点方面可以从在网上可以获取有用的信息，和世界各地的人保持联系， 可以自由发表个人的观点等方面展开；缺点可以从网络安全性，以及网络游戏上瘾等方面进 行展开。写作时需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系， 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档 次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。 考点：考查半开放性作文写作 点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。 对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完 成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时 要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织 成一个完整的整体，如 besides, further, last but not least 等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以 使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。 3． Chairman Xi called on the whole society to build China into a saving country last year. As a student, I think we should do something in answer to his call. We can’t 试卷第 22页，总 3页 do something great but we may do something closely connected with our life. At first, we’d better not waste money on too much junk food such as ice cream, soft drinks or bread. It’s unnecessary for us to pay much attention to dressing, which will cost our parents’ much money. We must learn to save electricity and water. Whenever we leave our classrooms, we must turn off the lights and don’t turn them on in the day time. It’s a bad habit to leave the water flowing all the time. Everyone should remember to turn off the taps after using water. Although we have to buy some pens, pencils, notebooks and some other things for study, we mustn’t waste them. If everyone does a bit, we may help a lot in the project organized by Chairman Xi 【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中 给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻 辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得 更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。 考点：提纲类作文 点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能 遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的 范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。 4．We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things. Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.We should be brove in front of difficulties.secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we have the power,we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.In order to study well,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.We can go running ,play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily. 【解析】 试题分析：本文较为简单，是关于健康成长的短文，要点很简单，留给考生发挥的余地较大， 考生可以根据自己的个人感受做适当的发挥。在写作的时候，要使用合适的连接词 firstly, secondly 来连接全文。也要使用高级的词汇如 consist of 等提高文章的文采。 考点：考查半开放性作文 点评：本文的话题较为简单，要求也不高。考生可以从心理和生理的健康发展两个方面着手， 培养乐观的人生态度，参加体育锻炼，增强体质。在写作的时候要运用多种句型让文章充满 变化，提升文章的层次。 5． One possible student version: Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum” Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife. I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during the stressful days. In these days, she keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m fortunate to have such a caring mother. Listen, time is pressing. The big exam is there for me and you, every son and daughter, 试卷第 23页，总 3页 to realize dreams. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our mums. I have another message for everyone here; Express your love in return. Either a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her and her face will light up. Thank you for listening. 【解析】 试题分析：本书面表达是要求学生写“感恩”为话题的演讲稿，是一篇典型的提纲作文，在 写作之前要注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些 要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示 情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言 表达要符合英语习惯。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如 be blessed with，keep sb. company，as … as possible，on top of that, cheer up，be fortunate to do，realize dreams， appeal to，light up；还运用高级词汇 appreciate，unconditional 等等。并注 意了句子的衔接如：whenever 等等。 考点：提纲作文 6．不唯一 【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文，要点和信的开头结尾已经给出.我们所要做的就是用正确 的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多. 需要注意不要偏离文章中心.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系， 一定要契合给出的开头结尾,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也 要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 考点：书信类作文 点评：本文属于书信类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能 遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的 范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。