2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之一：如何写好并列句

2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之一：如何写好并列句

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达中如何写好并列句 增分句型一　独立又相依的并列句 并列句是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，这种简单句常被叫做分句。并列句中的各个简单句彼此独立，互不依从，但它们表达的意思之间有一定的关系，通常用并列连词连接起来。并列连词之前可用逗号，也可不用逗号。它的基本模式是：简单句＋并列连词＋简单句 ‎(一)常见并列句的类型及并列连词 类型 连词 并列关系 ‎(递进关系) and, when, both ...and ..., not only ...but (also) ..., neither ...nor ...‎ 转折关系 but, yet, whereas, however 选择关系 or, otherwise, or else, either ...or ..., not ...but ...‎ 因果关系 because, as, for, so, therefore, thus, due to 对比关系 while ‎①Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars.‎ 一半的女孩选择电影和电视明星作为她们的偶像，而48%的男孩更喜 欢体育明星。‎ ‎②(2018•北京高考书面表达)You may have trouble in adjusting yourself to the life in Beijing, so I suggest that you make full preparations in advance.你可能在适应北京生活方面有困难，因此我建议你提前做好充分准备。‎ ‎③(2017•全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Not only will all kinds of papercutting works created by famous artists of this field be on show that day, but a lot of useful and interesting activities will be held as well.‎ 那天不仅会有这一领域的著名艺术家所创作的各种剪纸作品展出，而且还会举办许多有用且有趣的活动。‎ ‎④(2017•全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)If you're interested in it, either you may send an email to 12345@sina.com or you can sign up in person.如果你感兴趣，您可以发送电子邮件至12345@sina.com或亲自报名。‎ ‎⑤(2017•北京高考书面表达)Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect.‎ 一些妥协是不可避免的，但视频结果是完美的。‎ ‎⑥(2016•全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.‎ 我知道你拍照好，并且你总是想着为环境保护做些事情。‎ ‎(二)使用并列句的注意事项 ‎1．not only ...but also ...在连接两个并列分句时，如果not only置于句首，not only所在的分句需用部分倒装语序。‎ ‎①(2018•浙江高考写作)Firstly, not only can I speak fluent English, but also I have little difficulty communicating with foreigners.首先，我不仅能说一口流利的英语，而且和外国人交流也毫无困难。‎ ‎②Not only do they offer us joy and excitement, but they also encourage us to think critically.他们不仅提供给了我们喜悦和兴奋，还鼓励我们批判性思考。‎ ‎2．表示“虽然……但是……”这一转折关系时，连接词but不能与though/although连用。‎ 虽然我当时很累，但是我感到非常幸福。‎ ‎①Although I was very tired then but I felt very happy.(×)‎ ‎②Although I was very tired then, I felt very happy.(√)‎ ‎③I was very tired then but I felt very happy.(√)‎ ‎3．表示因果关系的连词so不与because, as等表示原因的连词连用。‎ 因为他生病，所以他那天没去上学。‎ ‎①Because/As he was ill so he didn't go to school that day.(×)‎ ‎②Because/As he was ill, he didn't go to school that day.(√)‎ ‎③He was ill so he didn't go to school that day.(√)‎ ‎[应用体验]　用适当的并列连词填空 ‎①(2018•北京高考书面表达)First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.‎ ‎②(2018•天津高考书面表达)I know you once participated in the Robotics Competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.‎ ‎③(2017•全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)I'm sure that it will interest you, for you have been enthusiastic about pingpong.Therefore,_I'd like to invite you to join the team.‎ ‎④(2015•陕西高考书面表达)First, my English is very good and I'm openminded and warmhearted, so I'm getting along well with everyone.‎ ‎⑤Give me a chance and I will give you a wonderful surprise.‎ ‎⑥The young man wanted to help the dog, but as he approached, the dog started to bark.‎ ‎⑦Would you like to leave or would you like to stay?‎ ‎⑧I had just finished my homework when Tom came to me.‎ ‎⑨Some choose to avoid them while others decide to deal with them.‎ ‎⑩It must have rained last night, for it is wet all over.‎ ‎[专题过关训练]‎ 补全句子 ‎1．(2018•北京高考书面表达)虽然外国学生在我们学校学习了很长时间，但他们不知道如何沏茶。‎ Though/Although_the_foreign_students_have_studied_in_our_school for a long time, they don't know how to make tea.‎ ‎2．(2017•全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)这次展览不仅可以帮助你更好地了解中国民间艺术作品，而且也可以帮助你获得一些剪纸技巧。‎ The exhibition can_not_only_help_you_have_a_better_understanding_of Chinese folk art works, but_can_also_help_you_acquire some papercutting skills.‎ ‎3．(2017•全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)别犹豫，如果你有什么问题就问我。‎ Don't_hesitate_and_ask_me if you have any questions.‎ ‎4．(2017•江苏高考书面表达)票价正在上涨。因此，电影业应该做出更大的努力来吸引更多的观众。‎ The ticket price is on the increase. Therefore,_the_film_industry_should_make_greater_efforts_to_attract more viewers.‎ ‎5．虽然她是一位普通妇女但是确实值得尊敬。‎ She is an ordinary woman but_she_is_really_worth_respecting.‎ ‎6．因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进行推心置腹的谈话。‎ So, from now on, let's ‎ not_waste_our_time_on_unimportant_things_but have a hearttoheart chat with our parents once in a while.‎ ‎7．上课时要认真听老师讲课，否则你听不懂他在说什么。‎ Listen to the teacher carefully in class, or_you_can't_catch_what_he_is_saying.‎ ‎8．她正走在大街上，这时她听到有人叫她。‎ She was_walking_along_the_street_when she heard someone calling her.‎