2018届二轮复习写作专题：道歉信课件（17张）

2018届二轮复习写作专题：道歉信课件（17张）

2018届 二轮复习 写作专题：道歉信 文体概述 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容： 1. 开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意。 2. 说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施。 3. 再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解 ( 语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实 ) 。 常用语块 因某事向某人道歉 ____________________ 2. 向 …… 说对不起 ____________________ 3. 接受我的道歉 ____________________ 4. 为某事原谅某人 ____________________ 5. 并非故意做某事 _____________________ have no intention to do sth . apologize to sb. for sth. / make an apology to sb. for sth . say sorry to accept my apology forgive sb. for sth . 6. 弥补；赔偿 _____________________ 7. 赔偿；偿还 _____________________ 8. 给你带来不便 _____________________ 9. 给你带来许多麻烦 _____________________ 10. 更加小心 _____________________ be more careful make up for pay for / compensate for cause you inconvenience cause you much trouble 11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误 ______________________ 12. 应当受到责备 ______________________ 13. 承担责任 _______________________ 14. 难以接受的后果 ______________________ 15. 下不为例 ______________________ never let it happen again make such a stupid mistake be to blame be responsible for/shoulder /undertake the responsibility an unacceptable result/consequence 套用句式 我写这封信是因 …… 向你致歉。 2. 请接受我真诚的道歉。 1. I am writing to apologize for … /I am writing to say sorry for… 2. Please accept my sincere apology. 3. 对于我说的话 / 做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要 …… 4. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境 / 设身处地地为我考虑，并接受我的道歉。 5. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。 3. I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but please believe I had no intention to… 5. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 4. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology. 习作修改 ( 做短文改错，背经典范文 ) Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts. I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the lost of the book. borrowed it when loss I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame. I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation( 赔偿 ) for the missed book. I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless. I promise that such a thing will never happen again. Yours sincerely, Li Ming ∧ to on missing inconvenience carelessness 1. borrow →borrowed 由后面的 last week 可知，要用一般过去时。 2. them →it 指代前文提到的从图书馆借的“那本书”，故用 it 。另外，后面的 it 也有提示。 3. 去掉 next week 前的 the 相对于现在的“下一 ……” ， next 前不用 the 。 4. until →when 根据上下逻辑关系，可知用表示“当 …… 时”的 when 才符合逻辑。 5. lost →loss 介词后要用名词作宾语。 6. 在 blame 前加 to 固定结构 be to blame 意为“该受责备”。 7. in →on 在“星期几的下午 / 上午”，要用介词 on 。 8. Missed →missing 在名词前作定语，表示“丢失的”常用形容词 missing(=lost) 。 9. inconveniences →inconvenience inconvenience 作“不方便”解是不可数名词，没有复数形式。 10. careless →carelessness 形容词性物主代词后接名词形式。 课堂练习 假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训，回国时因为匆忙，把房东 Bob 的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给 Bob 写一封道歉信，要点如下： 1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。 2. 提出解决的办法。 3. 再次请求原谅。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Bob, I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present . The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know. I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused . I am looking forward to your reply . Yours sincerely, Li Hua 课外作业 假定你是李华，你的美国老师 Mr. Evans 要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向 Mr. Evans 道歉并说明情况。要点如下： 1. 表示歉意。 2. 理由：父亲去北京出差，母亲生病住院需要人照顾。 3. 询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Mr. Evans, I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days. However, I am actually very interested in English society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology . Yours sincerely, Li Hua