2020届二轮英语特优复习专题六书面表达第4讲课件

2020届二轮英语特优复习专题六书面表达第4讲课件

专 题 突 破 第 二 部 分 专题六　书面表达 第 4 讲　议论文 英语议论文的写作和汉语写作基本一样，考生可从以下几个方面着手： 一、明确文章论点： 论点是议论文的灵魂和统帅。但要注意一篇议论文只有一个中心论点，有时可以有分论点。论点应鲜明、准确和具有概括性不可模棱两可。 二、选用恰当论据： 论据是用来证明论点的材料，有事实论据和理论论据两种。论据必须围绕中心论点展开。另外论据还必须具有典型性，其表述要精炼，只要表述出与论点相关的内容即可。 三、确定论证角度： 论证是议论文写作的重要一环，其基本类型有立论和驳论两种。立论从正面论述，驳论从反面论述。 四、明确写作思路： “ 引入话题 —— 阐明论点 —— 论证观点 ” 是最常用的写作思路，有时还可根据需要在文章的结尾强化论点或给出推论，所以 “ 总 —— 分 —— 总 ” 结构是议论文最常用的写作思路。 五、灵活运用论证方法： 例证法 ( 用典型事例作论据来证明论点 ) 、对比论证 ( 这种方法可以增强论证的鲜明性 ) 、反证法 ( 从反面论证自己观点的合理性 ) 、引证法 ( 引用名人名言等 ) 是最常用的论证方法。这些方法应熟练掌握。 一、开篇引入话题 1 ． I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether … 2 ． Is it a good idea to … ？ 3 ． Should somebody do … ？ 4 ． Recently … have/has had a heated discussion about whether … 5 ． Some people think that it is better to /a good way to/ a good idea … 6 ． Nowadays, quite a few people think /consider/ believe/insist … 7 ． The topic of … is becoming more and more popular recently. 二、中间论述观点 1 ． Opinions are divided/split. 2 ． On the whole, there are two different/opposite opinions. 3 ． Different people hold different opinions/views. 4 ． … of the people are against the idea of … They believe /think/ consider/insist that … 5 ． Some people say yes/no. 6 ． On the other hand … think … 7 ． Others, however, think … 8 ． However, others object to/ are against the idea, saying that … 9 ． Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think … 10 ． Opinions vary from person to person. 三、结尾简述个人看法 1 ． It is my opinion that … 2 ． My opinion is that … 3 ． In my opinion; As far as I'm concerned ； From my point of view … 4 ． I think /consider/ believe/prefer … because … 5 ． Personally, I agree with the … view.The reason is that … 6 ． I think it necessary /important/ vital/urgent that … 7 ． From my point of view, it's high time that … (2019 上海 ) Directions ： Write an English composition in 120 － 150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese. 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所〔博物馆还是社区图书馆〕征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求： 1 ．简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择； 2 ．说明你的理由〔从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比〕。 项目 内容 体裁和格式 议论文：对展出场所发表意见 主体时态 一般现在时为主 中心人称 第一人称 写作要点 1. 表明写信目的：发表对展出场所的意见； 2 ．表明自己的观点并说明原因； 3 ．总结自己的观点。 On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum. The museum is located in the center of the city ③ . And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art. On the other hand, as a well － known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced at ④ holding art exhibitions. It has professional security guards and advanced facilities ⑤ . They can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen ⑥ . Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum. Wang Min 名师点评 失分诊断 1 ． 从题目要求和文意可知，征集公众意见是目前 “ 正在进行的动作 ” ，而不是经常性习惯性的动作，因此 ① 处要用现在进行时，而不是一般过去时，故将 collect 改为 are collecting 。 2 ．根据后面的 than 可知，这里是比较级，表示 “ 更加明智的 ” ，故 ② 处的 advisable 前面应该加 more 。 3 ．在 表示 “ 在某方面更加专业；更有经验 ” 时，介词要用 in ，即 be more professional and experienced in doing sth ，因此 ④ 的 at 应该改为 in 。 参考答案 1 ． On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. 2 ． Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen. 打造靓点 1. 将句子 ③ 改为含有定语从句的复合句： _____________________________________________________________ 2. 将句子 ⑤ 和 ⑥ 合并为一个简单句： _____________________________________________________________ On the other hand, as a well － known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen. Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum. Wang Min ( 云南师大附中 2017 届高考适应性月考试题 ) 最近一段时间，共享单车在城市的大街小巷随处可见，它给人们带来便利的同时，各种问题及不文明现象也随之而来。请你根据所见所闻，说说自己的看法并提出建议，以“ Bike Sharing” 为题写一篇英语短文。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2 ．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； _____________________________________________________________ One possible version: Bike Sharing Nowadays bike sharing is increasingly popular in some cities as it provides an effective solution to the “last mile” problem to schools or to workplaces.It is not only a greener method of transportation but also provides a user － friendly experience.However ， the new form has also led to problems such as arbitrary parking ， deliberate destruction and theft. I think the bike － sharing service companies have faced a challenge to improve the offline business management to meet the demand of the users.More importantly ， every user has responsibility to obey the rules to make the bike － sharing develop in a more standard way. All in all, I hope the new win － win trend could have a bright future. 课 后 作 业 谢 谢 观 看