2013届高考英语二轮专题复习图画作文经典

2013届高考英语二轮专题复习图画作文经典

2013 届高考英语二轮专题复习图画作文经典 1 例 请根据下列两幅图写一篇短文，短文内容应包括以下几个要点： ①妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩； ②儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理。 写作时要适当地发挥，语言连贯,要写出妈妈的惊诧，还要写自己对此幅漫画的感受和观点。 词数：100 左右。 ［写作指导］ 本文写作有一定的难度，主要体现在两个方面：一是要正确地、全面地理解漫画的内容；二 是通过分析漫画所反映的问题，得出自己的结论。本文属于半控制性、半开放性写作，学生 自由发挥的空间比较大。可考虑分为两个层次来写。第一层次描述漫画内容。通过观察图画 可以看出：第一幅图母亲劝阻儿子扶起摔倒的女孩；第二幅图儿子对倒在地上的油瓶视而不 见。第二层次谈谈自己对这种现象的看法。本则漫画反映的问题是不良教育对孩子的不良影 响，所以得出的结论是：大人应以身作则，教育孩子关心别人，爱护别人。 基本时态应为一般现在时，描述漫画时可用一般过去时。 ［范文选登］ Do you understand this cartoon? Let me tell you. One day, the son wanted to help a little girl up when she fell over, but his mother stopped him and said, "Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down."A few days later, the mother was shocked at seeing her son just let the fallen oil bottle be. She asked him why he didn’t put it in place, but the boy talked back, "If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it." I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their children. They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds. They should let their children know it’s a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right? ［亮点回放］ 短文主题明确，条理清楚，过渡自然，要点到位，发挥适度，语言流畅，用词正确。作者使 用了一定数量的高级表达方式，提高了短文的得分档次，如：虚拟语气（If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.），宾语从句（She asked him why he didn’t put it in place），定语从句（We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.）等。