高考英语二轮复习写作组合练4

高考英语二轮复习写作组合练4

只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 1 写作组合练 训练 4 Ⅰ.应用文写作 假设你是学校国际部的学生会主席，你校的新图书馆即将开馆，请你根据所给提示用英 语给留学生写一则通知。 内容主要包括： 1．开馆时间：上午 11：00～下午 8：00(周末除外)； 2．要求：(1)所有学生须持学生证进入图书馆借阅书籍； (2)在图书馆内要保持安静； (3)所借图书要及时归还，每次最长借期不得超过 20 天，但可以去图书馆办理续借手续； (4)严禁带零食或饮料进入图书馆。 注意：1.词数 80 左右。开头语和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．通知的语言要得体，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear schoolmates， Good news for you！ The Students' Union 【写作指导】 本文属于应用文，要求学生根据要点写一则通知，告诉留学生图书馆的开馆时间和具体 要求。通知的开头和结尾已经给出，学生可不考虑格式问题。学生首先应当仔细阅读题干要 求，把握通知要点，确保写作时不遗漏；再在此基础上明确文章结构。文章可分为三段写作： 首段简述通知的背景和目的，说明通知主题；第二段为主体段，根据题干所列要点说明图书 馆的具体制度，包括开馆时间、凭学生证进入和借阅书籍、保持安静、禁止带零食或饮料等； 最后一段总结全文，欢迎留学生来图书馆学习和阅读。在遣词造句上，学生应当注意适当使 用通知的套句，如：Good news for you，Thanks for your attention 等；此外，学生还 应注意恰当使用连接成分，如在说明规则时可以用 first，besides，what's more 等，以提 高通知的逻辑性和层次感。 【参考范文】 Dear schoolmates， Good news for you! Our new library will open soon! In order that you can enjoy yourself at the library，please pay attention to the following rules： 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 2 Firstly，please remember the opening time is between 11：00 a．m.—20：00 p．m.every working day，and you are required to show your student card every time you enter the library.Secondly, if you haven't finished reading the borrowed books within 20 days，renewing your books at the library is necessary.And finally，to create a good reading environment，you should keep quiet in the library and you shouldn't bring any food or drinks. Welcome to our new library! The Students' Union 【导学号：85602040】 Ⅱ.读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden.One day his wife was ill and he had no money.He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market to buy some medicines.The next morning he turned to his neighbor to take care of his wife， taking two baskets of vegetables to town.But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street.When his vegetables were sold out，it was dark.The only thing he could do is just to buy some medicines and hurried to his village. On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow.He placed his baskets on the ground and went to help the person to get up.At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body.He was so afraid that he ran away quickly， without taking the baskets with him.Telling this to his wife，he was still frightened． The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station．Having shown the baskets，an officer asked，“Are these yours？”“Yes，Sir.” the farmer answered timidly (胆怯地)．“Have you killed the man？”“No，no，Sir.” the farmer said in a hurry.“When did you see the dead man？” “About seven last evening.”“Did you see who killed the man？”“No，Sir.”The officer brought out a knife and asked， “Have you seen it yet？”“No，Sir.”The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and send him into prison． That evening the officer went on trying.Pointing to the knife，he asked again. “Have you seen it yet？”“Yes，Sir.” The officer was happy and asked，“When and where？”“I saw it here this afternoon，Sir.” 注意： 1．所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2．应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 3 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： The reply of the man again fueled the foolish officer's anger. Paragraph 2： His neighbor came to the police station later， 【写作指导】 读后续写考查学生的英语思维能力和语言表达能力。续写故事情节前，学生首先要详读 并归纳出短文梗概，然后再在此基础上进行大胆合理想象。所写情节要有衔接性和发展性。 就本文而言，本文需要学生解决如何帮助被冤枉的农民顺利离开警局的难题。根据文中描述 可知，农民是胆小的，警官是武断的，且基于提示语中邻居的出现，那么符合人物个性发展 的合理的情节续写都是可以接受的。在表达中学生应尽可能多地使用一些高级句型，以做到 有效、地道地表达。 【参考范文】 The reply of the man again fueled the foolish officer's anger.“You must play jokes on me! It's you that killed the man with the knife! You left the baskets behind， running away in a hurry.The dead man，the knife and the baskets are all the evidence！” The poor farmer was so frightened that he couldn't say a complete sentence.“No， Sir.Not me.The baskets，I just went by after selling vegetables. My wife is still ill，waiting for me！” However，the impatient officer refused to listen what the farmer said，sending him into prison again. His neighbor came to the police station later，requested by farmer's wife， who was anxious about his husband's situation.His neighbor reported a case that his pig was killed by a basket yesterday.The officer laughed at his stupid idea directly， 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 4 saying that it's impossible that a basket could kill pigs.The confident and wise neighbor responded，“Do you think it possible that a farmer selling vegetables to buy medicine will take a knife or a murder will carry baskets with him？” As we expected，the poor farmer was set free! 【导学号：85602041】 Ⅲ.概要写作 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 Sharks are amazing fish that have been around since long before the dinosaurs existed.They live in waters all over the world，in every ocean，and even in some rivers and lakes. Unlike bony fish，sharks have no bones; their skeleton(骨架) is made of cartilage(软骨)，which is not nearly as hard as bone. There are many different species of sharks that range in size from the size of a person's hand to bigger than a bus.Fullygrown sharks range in size from 7 inches(18cm) long(the Spined Pygmy shark)，up to 50 feet(15m) long(the Whale shark)．Most sharks are middle in size，and are about the same size as people，5 —7 feet(1.5—2.1 m)long.Half of the 368 shark species are under 39 inches(1 m) long. Sharks have a variety of body shapes.Most sharks have streamlined，torpedo shaped bodies that fly easily through the water.Some sharks(eg.the angel shark) have flat bodies that allow them to hide in the sand of the ocean bed.Some sharks have a long body shape(eg.cookie cutter sharks and wobbegongs)．Sawsharks have long noses， and hammerheads have extraordinarily wide heads.The goblin shark has a large，pointed protuberance(凸起) on its heads; its purpose is unknown. There are about 368 different species of sharks，which are divided into 30 families.These different families of sharks are very different in the way they look， live，and eat.They have different shapes, sizes, colors, fins, teeth, habitat, diet, personalities, methods of reproduction，and other characters.Some types of sharks are very rare(like the great white sharks and the megamouth) and some are quite common(like the dogfish shark and bull shark)． 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 5 【写作指导】 要写好说明文类文章的概要，主要需把握好以下几点：(1)本文介绍和说明的核心事物 是什么？(2)该事物的主要特征是怎样的？(3)该事物的用途有哪些等。就本文而言，其概要 框架应该是：第一段引出本文介绍的主要事物——鲨鱼；第二至五段从四个方面介绍鲨鱼的 主要特征：骨架、尺寸、体形、种类等。本文属于总分结构，因此学生应注意在概要中也要 体现这一结构特点，各要点间可用过渡衔接词和连接词将其串联起来，以使概要连贯、有条 理。 【参考范文】 According to the passage，we can learn that sharks are amazing fish living in the world.(要点 1) Sharks have no real hard bones but cartilage，and there are different species of sharks of different sizes，all of which can fly easily through the water.(要点 2) Besides，sharks have various body shapes.(要点 3) In all，about 368 different species of sharks live in waters，some types of which are very rare.(要 点 4)