2020届二轮复习英语专题辅导专题6书面表达教师课件3

2020届二轮复习英语专题辅导专题6书面表达教师课件3

第 3 讲 　 增加细节的六种技巧 　　在英语书面表达中 , 增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中 , 考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容 ; 在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容 , 否则很有可能造成内容不充实、词数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。适当增加细节内容 , 能够使习作流畅、丰满 , 达到应有的表达效果。 1. 增加同位语或定语从句 (1)I am Li Hua , _______________________________ _________( 我们学校的学生会主席 ). / ___________ _________________( 来自中国的一位交换生 ).   Chairman of the Students’ Union of my school an exchange student from China (2)I want to have a pen friend, __________________ _____________________( 希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣 的女孩 ).   (3)On the Internet, people can seek information about their favourite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, ____________________________________( 既省 时又省钱 ).   hopefully a girl with interests similar to mine which is both time-saving and economical ( 4)To begin with, the theme of the show is Environmental Protection, _____________________________________ __________ ( 这不仅有意义而且很有趣 ).   which will be not only meaningful but also interesting 2. 列举具体的实例来补充说明 (1)First, the mountain has the unique marvelous wonders, __________________________________ ______________. ( 比如 , 黎明时冉冉升起的太阳和 日落时的红色的晚霞 )  such as the rising sun at dawn and rosy clouds at sunset (2)In the past two weeks, we have had the cultural communication in many aspects, _________________ _____________________________( 比如 , 在生活、学 习 , 体育运动 , 文学艺术等方面 ).   such as life, study, sports, literature, arts and so on 3. 添加与所给信息有关的原因 , 结果 , 条件 , 让步 , 手段 , 目的 等内容 (1) __________________________________________ ________________( 因为知道你对中国传统文化很感 兴趣 ), I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity.   Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture (2) ___________________________________( 为了获得一些实践经验 ), I’m planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.   In order to get some practical experience (3) __________________________________________( 由于我有过丢身份证的经历 ), I can feel how anxious Mr Steven will be now.   Since I have the experience of losing my ID card 4. 内容适当具体化 (1)The activity will be held ________________________ _______________________( 具体时间、地点 )  (2)I know the owner is Steven _____________________ ________( 相关身份信息 )   from 9 a. m. to 10 a. m. on April 11 in Classroom 501. from England, aged 38, married. (3) When I received the dictionary, I found that __________________________________________ ____________ ( 具体存在问题 , 如错印、缺页等 )   there were some misprints and pages from 23 — 45 were missing. 5. 表达感受 , 评价 , 愿望 , 倡议等 (1)I think it is a good chance to appreciate local operas, _____________________________________________ _______ ( 这必将有助于你学到更多的中国文化 ).   which will surely help you learn more about Chinese culture (2)We can set out early, __________________________ _____________________( 以便我们有更多的时间阅读 和挑选图书 ).   (3)There are quite a few missing pages, _________ _______________( 变得无法使用 ).   so that we can have more time to read and select books making it impossible to use 6. 补充 功能性 ( 交际性 ) 语言 (1) ____________________________________________ ______( 如果你能帮我这个忙 , 我将不胜感激 ).   (2) ________________________________( 期待着你的早 日回复 ).   I would greatly appreciate it if you could do me the favour Looking forward to your early reply 【技法点金 】 增加细节打造美句 1. 从单句练起 对照不同类型的作文题 , 先从开头句写起 , 保证句子不 出错。在阅读范文开头句之后 , 开始就每种类型的练习 题 , 模仿着写第一句 , 一次写 5 篇以上的作文的开头句 , 再参考范文 , 加以改正。开头句练习 2~3 天后 , 再练习主体内容段。如此以 2~3 天为一个周期 , 每个周期内只专注练习一个句子 , 这样慢慢完成对于全类型作文的整体训练。 2. 积累好的词句及学会连贯、自然的表达 积累英语作文中有亮点的表达方式 , 并且对精彩写作手法或句式进行仿写 1~3 次。在写作中添加细节时 , 学习站在对方的角度 , 合理增加内容 , 使表达生动和准确 ; 或者根据生活常识适当添加实例 , 切勿画蛇添足。每一种拓展内容的方式都要在写作练习中去尝试使用 1-2 种 , 连续练习 6 篇写作 , 才能逐渐掌握详略得当 , 重点突出 , 合理拓展的写作手法。 3. 积累并背诵交际性功能句型 文章有文体类别 , 不同的文体都有不同的写作格式或语言特征。总结不同文本的功能性句型 , 它们不仅符合语言表达习惯 , 而且在写作中也起到了事半功倍的作用。 【过关检测 】 　　假如你是李华 , 你的英国朋友 Peter 来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。 要点 : 1. 参加中文学习班。　　 2. 看中文书刊、电视。 3. 学唱中文歌曲。 　　 4. 交中国朋友。 注意 : 1. 词数 : 100 个左右。　　 2. 可适当增加细节 , 以使行文连贯。 3. 开头结尾已为你写好。 Dear Peter, _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文 】 Dear Peter, 　　 I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. 　 Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. 　　 Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 　　 Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua