【英语】2018届二轮复习如何写好夹叙夹议类型书面表达的三段教案（11页）

【英语】2018届二轮复习如何写好夹叙夹议类型书面表达的三段教案（11页）

‎2018届二轮复习 如何写好夹叙夹议类型书面表达的三段 如何写好开头——首段要有力 ‎[学审题谋篇] ‎ ‎(2014·武昌区高三2月供题)‎ 请根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ The ant philosophy is: never give up, look ahead, stay positive and do all you can.‎ 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎④词数不少于120。‎ 好的开头对一篇文章来说是至关重要的。要注意以下几点：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎1．开门见山 根据英语提示语，第一段要明确地表明自己的观点，或营造一种背景。‎ ‎2．言简意赅 语言要简短有力，这样可以给阅卷人一个强烈印象和冲击力。第一段切忌拖沓。倘若用了大量的篇幅来表达观点或阐述道理，那就没有足够的空间来把第二段的事例写充分。‎ ‎3．句式丰富 第一段虽然短，也能显示作者的英语表达实力，因此，哪怕只有一句话，也要尽量使用复合句或固定表达法。‎ ‎4．词汇高级 恰当使用高级词汇会让你的文章与众不同，印象深刻。‎ ‎[学增分亮点] ‎ ‎[满分范文]‎ ‎①It is universally acknowledged that only with perseverance can we achieve our goals and reach true success.②I learn it through my own experience.‎ I suddenly became interested in playing badminton one day and began practicing it though some of my classmates laugh at me saying that I would never play badminton well because I am not very tall.No matter what they say, I just kept on practicing almost every day after school.In order to improve my skill I consulted some professional players.With two years passing by, I won the champion of our school sports meeting.All the students and teachers congratulated me on my success.‎ From this story, I am firmly convinced that it was my determination, selfconfidence and never givingup that help me achieve my success.‎ ‎[满分缘由]‎ ‎1．结构布局 本文开头只有两句话，言简意赅，观点鲜明。‎ ‎2．亮点词汇 universally, acknowledge, perseverance, achieve one’s goal, reach true success ‎3．亮点句式 第①句包含It is universally acknowledged that的固定表达法和倒装；‎ 第②句承上启下，使文章自然过渡。‎ ‎[句式改写]　用其他结构改写句①‎ ‎1．毫无疑问，只有通过不懈的努力我们才能实现目标，获得真正的成功。‎ There_is_no_doubt_that_only_with_perseverance_can_we_achieve_our_goals_and_reach_true_success.(doubt)‎ ‎2．我们应该记住的是只有通过不懈的努力我们才能实现目标，获得真正的成功。(用主语从句)‎ What_we_should_keep_in_mind_is_that_only_with_perseverance_can_we_achieve_our_goals_and_reach_true_success.(keep)‎ ‎3．用强调结构改写句①‎ It_is_only_with_perseverance_that_we_achieve_our_goals_and_reach_true_success.‎ ‎[写满分作文]　完成下列作文的开头，尽可能使用复杂句式 ‎ ‎ (一)‎ 请根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ No matter how painful or how uncomfortable it is to admit your wrongdoing, you should always choose to face in instead of running away from it.Hard as it is, it shapes us.‎ 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；‎ ‎②除诗歌之外，文体不限；‎ ‎③内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；‎ ‎④词数不少于120。‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考范文：‎ Despite the fact that it is painful to admit our wrongdoings, never should we run away from it.Only if we keep correcting the mistakes we make can we shape our good character.‎ A wrongdoing I did in my childhood will never fade away from my memory.When I was a boy, a cap gun was my favorite.Every day I carried it and practiced shooting with it.One day, I played by the river where a group of ducks were swimming.Considering a cap gun may not hurt the duck, I aimed at one and shot it.To my surprise, the duck struggled for a while and finally died.Seeing nobody was looking, I hid the duck under some grass, thinking it wouldn’t be discovered.Then came countless nights when I was always woken up in nightmares.‎ All in all, running away from wrongdoings can result in nothing but suffering.So facing up to it is the best choice.‎ ‎(二)‎ 请根据以下提示，结合你生活或学习中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ You will never change your life until you change something you do daily.The secret of your success is found in your daily routine.‎ ‎—John C．Maxwell 注意：①不得照抄英语提示语。‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限。‎ ‎③内容必须结合生活中的一个事例。‎ ‎④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎⑤词数不少于120。‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ 参考范文：‎ As the proverb says, “Good habits benefit you all your life.” Indeed, a good habit is to me what water is to fish.‎ Entering the high school, I took delight in having fast food and ate too much.Consequently, I was so heavily overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance.What made matters worse was the fact that my classmates played jokes on me at times.From then on, I made up my mind to avoid snacks and meanwhile to take up jogging to lose weight.Owing to the timely changes, it was not too long before I did succeed in creating my new image. Only then did I start to appreciate the significance of forming a good habit.‎ To be honest, the change in my habit means a lot to me, which contributes to my success and helps me regain confidence.‎ 如何写好事例——中段要清楚 ‎[学审题谋篇] ‎ ‎(2014·襄阳高三调研)‎ 请根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ A goal can guide us in the right direction, so a life without a goal is just like a travelling ship without a compass.‎ 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎④词数不少于120。‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ 事例是湖北短文写作的中心部分。‎ ‎1．审题 ‎(1)仔细阅读汉语要求，弄清是否要求写事例，是哪方面的事例。‎ ‎(2)认真理解英语提示语，弄懂提示语所表达的含义。‎ ‎(3)确定事例，要选那些积极向上，内容健康，有励志和具有启发意义的事例。‎ ‎(4)定人称，可以是本人的事例(第一人称)，也可以是他人的事例(第三人称)。‎ ‎(5)定时态，根据所举事例确定事例中的基本时态(一般使用过去时态)。‎ ‎2．谋篇 事例一般单独成为一段。尽量使用复合句和高级词汇。做到句式丰富，一气呵成。‎ ‎[学增分亮点] ‎ ‎[满分范文]‎ It is vital and essential to set a life goal if we hope to succeed.Without a clear goal, life will be like an aimless ship sailing in the sea.‎ ‎①It was not until the discussion “What is My Chinese Dream” was held in my class last term that I become aware what I wanted to chase.② I used to believe that it made no difference whether I studied hard or not.③I was always left behind in our class in the exams.④Thanks to the hot discussion from my classmates, I transformed my mind and set a goal that I want to go to Wuhan University after graduating from high school.⑤From then on, I spared no effort to study.⑥The moment I met a problem I would consult my classmates and teachers.⑦Seeing my complete change, they gave me heartfelt praise and kept encouraging me.⑧Two years hardwork paid off.⑨Having succeeded in occupying the first place of our class in later exams, I feel confident of achieving my goal.‎ It was with the life goal set that changed my life.I am firmly convinced that I will ‎ have a bright future.‎ ‎[满分缘由]‎ ‎1．结构布局 本文事例单独成为一段，由九个句子构成。‎ ‎2．亮点词汇 become aware, used to do, make no difference, leave behind, thanks to, transform one’s mind, set a goal, spare no effort, pay off, succeed in doing, feel confident of, achieve one’s goal ‎3．亮点句式 第①句包含强调结构；‎ 第②句包含whether引导的名词性从句和强调句型；‎ 第③句包含被动语态；‎ 第④句包含that引导的同位语从句；‎ 第⑥句包含the moment引导的状语从句；‎ 第⑦和⑨句包含动词的ing形式作状语。‎ ‎[句式改写]‎ ‎1．用倒装句改写句①‎ Not_until_the_discussion_“What_is_My_Chinese_Dream”_was_held_in_my_class_last_term_did_I_become_aware_what_I_wanted_to_chase.‎ ‎2．用强调结构改写句④‎ It_was_because_of/thanks_to_the_hot_discussion_from_my_classmates_that_I_transformed_my_mind_and_set_a_goal_that_I_want_to_go_to_Wuhan_University_after_graduating_from_high_school.‎ ‎3．用虚拟语气改写句⑦‎ If_they_hadn’t_seen_my_complete_change,_they_wouldn’t_have_given_me_heartfelt_praise_and_kept_encouraging_me.‎ ‎[写满分作文]　完成下列作文的事例 ‎ ‎ (一)‎ 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ Encouragement is to children what sunshine is to flowers.‎ 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎④词数不少于120。‎ ‎[要求]‎ 请用定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、被动语态、非谓语、it作形式主语和宾语、部分倒装完成作文。‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ 参考范文：‎ Just like warm and bright sunshine, encouragement can warm the heart of anyone who is in low spirits.The more encouragement one is given, the more progress can make.‎ Never will I forget a time when I had great difficulty improving my poor English.Desperate about my English, I even considered abandoning it.It was my mother who became aware that I had got into a situation where I couldn’t cope with difficulties.Instead of scolding me, she gave me much encouragement.Inspired by ‎ what she said to me, I regained my confidence and the following months witnessed me devoting myself to learning English.Finally, my efforts paid off and I made great progress in English.‎ In conclusion, encouragement is what it takes to motivate us to move forward.‎ ‎(二)‎ ‎(2014·湖北黄冈市高三年级质量检测)请根据以下提示，并结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ A man is not old as long as he is seeking something.A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams.‎ 注意：①无须写标题；‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；‎ ‎④词数不少于120。如引用提示语则不计入总词数。‎ ‎[要求]‎ 请用状语从句、名词性从句、定语从句、too ...to ...结构完成作文。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考范文：‎ Hopes and dreams are important in our life.I think young people should not only have dreams and hopes, but also try their best to avoid regrets.‎ I had a dream when I was a little girl.I wanted to learn to play the piano, because I thought girls who could play the piano were elegant and beautiful.However, my mother told me that my fingers were too short to play the piano.So my dream could only be a dream in my head.Years later, I walked past a piano shop that offered piano lessons.Suddenly I realized I still wanted to learn to play the piano.I told myself I ‎ shouldn’t have any regrets.Then my dream came true.‎ My experience tells me that hopes and dreams are the inspiration that makes me move forward all the time.‎ 如何写好结尾——末段要照应 ‎[学审题谋篇] ‎ ‎(2014·湖北省重点中学高三10月考试)‎ 请根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ The only way to turn dreams into reality is to go allout trying, thinking only of success.——Royal Robbins 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎④词数不少于120。‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ 好的结尾对一篇文章来说可起到画龙点睛，锦上添花的作用。‎ ‎1．首尾呼应 最后一段往往是叙述从事例中得到的启示和教训，这种启示和教训要与第一段所表达的观点和英语提示语核心意义相呼应。‎ ‎2．结尾紧凑，铿锵有力 最后一段一般由一两句话构成，切忌拖沓。‎ ‎3．句式丰富，词汇高级 尽量使用复合句和所学句型，高级词汇使用或普通词汇的巧妙使用会为文章加分。‎ ‎[学增分亮点] ‎ ‎[满分范文]‎ At a certain period of our lives, all of us may unavoidably throw doubt upon ourselves.‎ In my freshman year in senior middle school, my English teacher urged me to sign up an English speech contest.I did it unwillingly because I was unsure of myself and afraid of failure although I had been dreaming of standing out in such contests.But she encouraged me to have a try, saying that it didn’t matter even if I failed.Meanwhile she offered to help me make full preparations for it.Under her tireless instructions, I tried my best to practice speaking English as much as I could and my spoken English improved steadily.Eventually my hard work paid off — I won the first prize in the contest.‎ ‎①My experience tells me that only when we always go allout in everything we do and stay positive can we fulfill our dreams.②Believe in yourself and you are surely to reach a success.‎ ‎[满分缘由]‎ ‎1．结构布局 本文结尾由两个句子构成，简短紧凑，铿锵有力。‎ ‎2．亮点词汇 stay positive, fulfill one’s dream, believe in, reach a success ‎3．亮点句式 第①句包含only＋状语置于句首的部分倒装；‎ 第②句包含祈使句＋and＋陈述句的句型。‎ ‎[句式改写]‎ ‎1．用强调结构改写句①‎ It_was_my_experience_that_tells_me_that_only_when_we_always_go_allout_in_everything_we_do_and_stay_positive_can_we_fulfill_our_dreams.‎ ‎2．用非谓语改写句②‎ Believing_in_yourself,_you_are_surely_to_reach_a_success.‎ ‎3．用条件状语从句改写句②‎ If_you_believe_in_yourself,_you_are_surely_to_reach_a_success.‎ ‎[写满分作文]　完成下列作文的结尾 ‎ ‎ (一)‎ 请根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ As Madame Curie put it, “I will never see what has been done; I only see what remains to be done.”‎ 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎④词数不少于120。‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ 参考范文：‎ During my years of school life, what strikes me most is that I’ve learned to look at what I need to do in the future, rather than being lost in what I’ve done before.‎ When I was luckily admitted into this key senior high school three years ago ‎ with good grades, I was wild with joy, thinking that the good grades might guarantee me enough time for relaxation before I acted up.Therefore, I found myself hanging aound with some other students rather than devoting myself to my studies.It didn’t take long before I realized that I felt behind sharply in my studies, sometimes even with my homework unfinished.Fully aware of the fact that I still had a long way to go before I relaxed, I began to catch up.‎ We tend to be content with what we’ve achieved, forgetting all about our road ahead, which may actually put us at a disadvantage.Only when we keep in mind what remains for us to do can we make continuous progress.‎ ‎(二)‎ ‎(2014·湖北八市高三年级三月调考)请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ There is a crack (裂痕) in everything, and that’s how the light gets in.(Leonard Cohen, a Canadian singer)‎ 注意：①无须写标题；‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；‎ ‎④词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ 参考范文：‎ I still remember the day when I was left alone at home.I carelessly broke the vase, which was much treasured by my father.When he came back, I was so fearful that I didn’t tell the truth.The cat was my excuse.My father said nothing, but I could read his distrust.The next morning, after a restless night, I admitted to my father that it was my fault.He smiled to me, and I saw relief in his eyes.From then on, I never told ‎ lies.My honesty won me great trust from others, which benefited my growth a lot.The accident, or exactly the “crack” forced me to mind my behavior.‎ It is the “crack” that is reminding me all the time that I have a long way to go.With the light through the crack I can see the road ahead clearly.‎