专题23书面表达-3年高考2年模拟1年备战2019高考精品系列之英语

专题23书面表达-3年高考2年模拟1年备战2019高考精品系列之英语

‎ ‎ ‎【2019年高考命题预测】‎ 预测一话题与考生的生活实际、社会热点内容密切相关。书面表达提供的写作情景比较真实，写作的话题与考生的校园生活、成长经历、社会热点及科技动态等内容密切相关，关注考生的情感、态度和价值观，能够充分考查考生的独立思考能力和创新精神。‎ 预测二书面表达的词数仍将保持100词左右。虽然部分地区的高考试卷要求考生写一篇120词左右的英语作文，考生要在文章的结构、段落的衔接和过渡等方面花费更多的心思和笔墨。‎ 预测三 写作的开放度可能加大。高考英语书面表达写作要求也呈现了开放的趋势，这使考生的写作内容受到的限制减少，并为考生提供了一个更加自由和开放的写作空间。‎ ‎【考点定位】2019考纲解读和近几年考点分布 ‎《英语考试大纲》对学生的书面表达能力作了明确的规定：“要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。”高中英语课程标准也对写作作了必须要达到的要求：‎ ‎1.能通过文字及图表提供的信息进行简单描述；‎ ‎2.能写出常见体裁的应用文，如信函和一般通知等；‎ ‎3.能描述人物或事件并进行简单的评论；‎ ‎4.能填写有关个人情况的表格，如申请表等；‎ ‎5.能以小组形式根据课文改编短剧。‎ 书面表达是考查考生用英语表达自己思想的能力，即运用所学的英语知识及合乎英语习惯的表达方式来传递信息，进行思想交流的能力。这将要求考生根据所给的情景和要求，在限定时间内(一般30分钟)写出100个词左右的书面材料。因此考生要做到：审题正确、要点全面，能够运用所学的语法结构、词汇知识，使上下文连贯，同时语言要准确、得当，条理清楚，书写规范。所以，具有良好的书面表达能力是非常必要的，它也进一步突出了对考生创新能力的考查。‎ 一、命题多样化 虽然每年的书面表达都属于提高性写作，但越来越重视创造情景，命题由单纯的汉语提为主、其他提示（如：图表）为辅。考生必须首先理解写作提示，然后才能组句成文。‎ 二、书面表达的体栽呈现多样化，为应用文(书信、通知、便条等)、记叙文图表作文、 日记等)和说明文(人物介绍、活动介绍)‎ 三、试題突出了交际性、实用性 书面表达的内容主要取材于校园、家庭生活和一般外事活动，符合高中学生的年龄特点和生活背景，基本都是考生己经熟悉的或将来有可能经历的事情，情景真实可信。 所提出的要求符合考生的实际英语水平，具有可写性，能够充分展示学生的书面表达能力。‎ 四、改革力度逐年増大 高考英语书面表达(全国卷I、II的命题方式和题型相公対急定，与单独命制的试题相比， 全国卷改革的力度较小，命题思想相对稳定。而单独命制的试题则敢于创新，勇于求变。‎ 五、内容更突出时代特色 近几年的话题十分贴近现代生活，因此内容贴近考生的学习和生活将成为今后命题 的方向。‎ ‎【考点pk】 名师考点透析 早在2004年公布的高中英语新课标中就已明确指出“培养初步写作的能力是英语教学的目的之一”。 而高考英语书面表达命题目的就是要测试学生运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能来表达思想和进行交流的能力。可以说这种题型最能检验出学生综合运用英语语言能力的高低。‎ 高考英语书面表达具体主要考查学生以下几种能力：‎ ‎1.观察分析，获取，加工和输出信息的能力。‎ ‎2.体现语法规则，并且正确熟练运用语法的能力。‎ ‎3.语言交际表达得体，突出正确语用的能力。‎ ‎4.关注社会现实，锤炼思维表达能力。‎ 备考策略：‎ ‎1.学习生活中多参加一些集体和公益活动，重视交流，在交流中有目的的运用语言，以达到学习和学以致用的目的。同时注意归纳整理得体用语，以扩充知识面。注重积累时尚语言，增强时尚语言表达意识。‎ ‎2. 平时就要注重体裁，话题等方面的积累准备。并且寻找适当材料进行作文专项训练，并定期进行归纳整理和分类巩固，循序渐进掌握作文写作技巧。实际写作时要认真分析材料所提供的背景，落实已知信息与所求信息。注重灵活应对开放式写法。‎ ‎3.‎ ‎ 学好语法知识，注重操练运用。平时可以多做一些句型转换、单句翻译、用词、短语或句型造句、文章缩写、改写等练习。‎ ‎4. 回归高中英语课本，切实找到并且分析高考英语书面表达在课本中的典型体现。学生一定要牢固掌握和灵活运用文化、地理、环境、健康、社会等话题的内容。同时课本中精选的文章不仅语言规范准确，而且内容丰富，能够让学生体会到学习和运用英语的快乐。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【三年高考】 16、17、18高考试题及其解析 ‎2018年高考试题 ‎【2018·全国I】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：‎ ‎(1).到达时间；‎ ‎(2).合适的礼物；‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Terry,‎ How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.‎ Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.‎ If you have any other problems, please don't hesitate to contact me. ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 点睛：本文虽然看起来比较容易，但学生真正动起笔来，还是比较困惑的。原因为：1.看起来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉，但内容很多，一时间不知道该写什么；‎ ‎2.100单词左右，写出到达时间；合适的礼物；餐桌礼仪三个内容，信息量大，选择有困难；‎ 应对方法：近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高，中国文化，中国故事，中国礼仪等等，但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里，这就是低落点。写这样的作文，一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的写，不要面面俱到，中国餐桌礼仪内容太多，100单词无法写。找重点，以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。‎ ‎【2018·全国II】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：‎ ‎(1)短片内容：学校的发展；‎ ‎(2)放映时间、地点；‎ ‎(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。‎ 注意：‎ ‎(1)词数100左右；‎ ‎(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Notice In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.‎ To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What's more, every one of you will be welcome to enjoy the movie, have a heated discussion afterwards and give your own comments.‎ Student Union June 8, 2018‎ ‎【解析】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。‎ 第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。‎ ‎【2018·全国III】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 学校的体育场馆；‎ ‎2. 主要的运动项目；‎ ‎3. 你喜欢的项目。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右：‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Peter, ‎ I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.‎ To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.‎ All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.118‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。‎ ‎【2018·北京】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎(1) 表示欢迎；‎ ‎(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；‎ ‎(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。‎ 注意：(1). 词数不少于50；‎ ‎(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jim,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Jim,‎ ‎ I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.‎ ‎ Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.‎ ‎ I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。‎ 亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。‎ 使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。‎ ‎(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)‎ 第二节 ‎57. 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。‎ 注意：词数不少于60。‎ ‎(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)‎ ‎【答案】Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.‎ On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.‎ In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.‎ Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.‎ At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.‎ ‎【解析】本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。‎ ‎1. 认真读图，把握中心。‎ 根据提示可知，内容是带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的全过程，介绍了茶具，泡茶，沏茶，品茶的过程，所以这是这组图画所要表达的中心。‎ ‎2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。‎ 在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。本文是讲述上周发生的事情，故时态要以过去时为主，人称是第一人称，尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。‎ ‎3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。‎ 运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。‎ 串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。‎ ‎4. 反复审核，修改错误。‎ 一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。‎ ‎5. 宜详则详，该略则略。‎ 对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。‎ 如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。‎ 亮点说明：‎ 巧妙使用定语从句，提升了文章档次：Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding. ‎ 使用非谓语动词，使句子表达更简洁：‎ On arriving at the tea house…‎ I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety,‎ Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.‎ 使用倒装句突出重点。‎ Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.‎ 使用it做形式主语，使表达更地道。‎ It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.‎ ‎【2018·浙江】写作 第一节 应用文写作 ‎66. 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：‎ ‎（1）. 口语能力：‎ ‎（2）. 相关经验；‎ ‎（3）. 应聘目的。‎ 注意：‎ ‎（1）. 词数80左右；‎ ‎（2）. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Sir/Madam,‎ I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Hearing that some volunteers are wanted to welcome the foreign students, I am gladly writing to apply for this job.‎ I do believe that I am very qualified for this voluntary work. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, I have a good knowledge of English and I can communicate with native English speakers fluently. Secondly, I have some experience in accompanying foreign friends.‎ I do believe the volunteer work will enable me to practise English more fluently and broaden my horizons.‎ Looking forward to your early reply!95‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写应聘信。‎ 第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。‎ 第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ 第二节 读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。‎ ‎67. It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.‎ We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.‎ His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. ‎ In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t ‎ be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.‎ Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.‎ 注意：‎ ‎（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；‎ ‎（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：‎ ‎（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。‎ Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. ____________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. _____________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. However, it became scared and started to run like crazy. All this coming without warning, I was seized by fear. “Don't let go of the rope! Keep calm!” yelled Dad. I followed what he told me to. To my relief, it stopped ‎ slowly. But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost.  ‎ We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. I kept shouting for help, hoping my shouts could be heard by someone, but there was no reply. Dad sounded a little worried as he reminded me to calm down. It was then that my mind raced. “Listen, dad, the rushing river water,” I shouted excitedly, “we can return to the farm house down the river.” Before long, we caught sight of the lights in the distance. We knew we were safe. What a thrilling vacation, like never before, we had!  ‎ ‎【解析】读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。‎ 通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。‎ 根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。‎ 第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。‎ 续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。‎ ‎【2018·天津卷】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎61. 假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。‎ ‎（1）比赛的时间、地点；‎ ‎（2）邀请他的原因；‎ ‎（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。‎ 注意：（1）词数不少于100；‎ ‎（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：‎ 世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition Dear Chris,‎ I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________‎ I’m looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Jin ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Chris,  ‎ ‎ I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July so as to promote the development of robotics. ‎ ‎ What I would like to stress is that it is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know you've just won first prize in the Robotics competition held in your institute and have shown great talent in designing robotics. Therefore, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.‎ The training schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions. I will send its details to you by e-mail. I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect. ‎ I'm looking forward to your reply. ‎ Yours,‎ Li Jin ‎ ‎【点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。‎ ‎【2018·江苏】书面表达(满分25 分)‎ ‎81. 请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名（ratings）进行消费的现象；‎ ‎2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3. 不必写标题。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Possible version one:‎ ‎ As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.‎ ‎ I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.‎ ‎ There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.‎ Possible version two:‎ ‎ Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.‎ ‎ There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique ‎ psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.‎ ‎ Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.‎ ‎【解析】今年作文仍然是读写作文，即先用30词概括阅读材料，然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料，然后进行比较和分析，表明态度，作出价值判断。‎ 文章首段要简要介绍两段材料，第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭，看了on-line rating，结果饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。‎ 然后写你对online rating的看法，表明观点，注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。‎ 文章属于议论文，要注意主题句的使用，论点之间要注意有条理。文章可主要采用一般现在时，第三人称来写。‎ ‎2017年高考试题 ‎[2017·江苏卷]‎ ‎81. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(boxoffice income)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ Saturday Afternoon.In a Shopping Centre.‎ Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?‎ Su Hua：Whatever. We've got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the West…Each sounds great! ‎ Li Jiang：Yeah！And some movie stars are fantastic.‎ Su Hua: And the hightech！…‎ Li Jiang：Perfect！Let's get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.‎ Su Hua：No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.‎ One Day in 2016.At Home.‎ Son：Mum，shall we go and see a film tonight?‎ Mother：Why bother? We can stay at home and watch films online. It's convenient with our new and faster network.‎ Son：But it feels good in a cinema.‎ Mother：And the price…We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.‎ Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.‎ Mother：But still we cannot get the money's worth. Some films are just boring…‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎1．用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；‎ ‎2．我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；‎ ‎3．谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎【思路点拨】 本篇书面表达要求考生根据柱状图及相关文字写一篇文章，总结柱状图信息，谈谈电影票房收入变化的原因，阐述对电影票房收入走向的看法，并说明理由。文章为任务型读写，属于议论文，写作时应以第三人称为主，第一人称为辅；一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。考生首先应当仔细阅读柱状图及相关文字，明确其主旨；接着指出电影票房收入变化的原因，以及将来的走向；最后在此基础上合理安排好文章结构。本文可用三段写作：第一段用约30词概括柱状图信息，提出文章主题；第二段阐述电影票房收入变化的原因；第三段论述电影票房将来的走向。‎ 在遣词造句上，应当注意合理使用连接成分，以提高文章的逻辑性，如在列举理由时可以用to begin with, what's more, last but not least等；还应尽量使用较复杂的句型，如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构；在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装句等。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ The boxoffice income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.‎ The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.‎ China's economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its boxoffice income will probably enjoy a slight increase.‎ ‎[2017·全国卷Ⅰ]‎ 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 时间和地点；‎ ‎2. 内容：学习唐诗；‎ ‎3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Leslie，‎ I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before ‎ class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems. ‎ Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.‎ Best wishes.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[2017·全国卷Ⅱ]‎ 假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(papercutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1．展览时间、地点；‎ ‎2．展览内容。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【思路点拨】 题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸papercutting)的内容，能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲中国故事，增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。‎ ‎【参考范文】 ‎ Dear Henry，‎ I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—papercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it. ‎ It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like. ‎ You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the ‎ most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting. ‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Regards, ‎ Li Hua ‎[2017·全国卷Ⅲ]‎ 假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：‎ ‎1．球队活动；‎ ‎2．报名方式及截止日期。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【思路点拨】 由要点可知，邮件是邀请对方报名参加乒乓球队，所以主体时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。人称以第三人称为主(介绍乒乓球运动的好处)，一、二人称为辅。在写作时要注意邀请信的交际性，比如：开篇点明写信目的，最后期待回复。同时还要注意根据提示内容进行合理发挥。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Eric，‎ I was informed that our school Pingpong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially pingpong.‎ ‎ As you know, playing pingpong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.‎ Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎ [2017·天津卷]‎ ‎61. 假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。‎ ‎1．简要介绍自己的学习和生活；‎ ‎2．告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等)；‎ ‎3．希望她有机会重访天津。‎ 注意： 1.词数不少于100；‎ ‎2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games Dear Mrs Green，‎ I'm so glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ Yours，‎ Li Jin ‎【思路点拨】 首先，内容要点要全，三个要点都要包含：(1)介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告诉她你作为第十三届全运会志愿者所做的准备；(3)希望她重访天津。‎ 其次，要准确并恰当地使用词汇和各种复合句。注意使用定语从句，非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要注意时态的正确运用。‎ 第三，要注意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。注意使用一些表示连接和转折的词。‎ 最后，要注意一下卷面整洁，书写工整。‎ One possible version: ‎ Dear Mrs Green,__‎ I'm so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. I'm very ‎ pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well. ‎ I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin. ‎ I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again. ‎ Yours，‎ Li Jin ‎[2017·浙江卷6月考]‎ 第一节　应用文写作(满分15分)‎ 假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 参加者；‎ ‎2. 时间、地点；‎ ‎3. 活动：登山、野餐等。‎ 注意：1. 词数80左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Chris, ‎ How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7：00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.‎ Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don't have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It's just up to you. ‎ Looking forward to hearing from you.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎2016年高考试题 ‎1. 【2016·全国新课标I】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎ 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1. 词数100左右;‎ ‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Ms Jenkins,‎ I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.‎ In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.‎ Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【试题分析】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。‎ ‎【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。‎ ‎2.【2016·全国新课标II】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：‎ ‎ 1．主题：环境保护；‎ ‎ 2．展览时间；‎ ‎ 3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshowgmschool.com.‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1．词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Peter,‎ Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshowgm.school.com.‎ ‎ Hope to hear from you soon.‎ ‎ Yours ‎ Lihua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要对：1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshowgm.school.com。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及串联过渡用语；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，并在力所能及的范围之内使用复合句或者谚语，增加获得高分的可能性。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.时间状语从句.... theme the last time you visited our school.条件状语从句If you want to join....；等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。‎ 考点：考查半开放作文 ‎3.【2016·全国新课标III】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1.表示歉意；‎ ‎2.说明原因；‎ ‎3.另约时间。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Bob,‎ ‎ I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.‎ ‎ Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to ‎ read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that we’ll have more time to read and select books；条件句If it’s convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。‎ 考点：书信类作文 ‎【名师点睛】‎ 题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。‎ ‎4. 【2016·北京】书面表达（共两节，35 分） ‎ 第一节（15分）‎ ‎ 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 该人物是谁； ‎ ‎2. 该人物的主要贡献； ‎ ‎3. 该人物对你的影响。 ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数不少于50；‎ ‎2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ‎ Dear Jim, ‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jim,‎ ‎ It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.‎ ‎ As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.‎ ‎ Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.‎ ‎ Cheers!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：题材新颖，要求介绍中国历史人物，内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于50词，使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。‎ 亮点说明：范文使用了词组hear from, As for, In fact和搭配 inspire sb to do sth等，丰富了作文内容；范文注意上下文的语意连贯。 ‎ 考点：应用文写作 ‎【名师点睛】‎ 题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。‎ 第二节 （ 20 分）‎ 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。‎ 注意：词数不少于60。‎ 提示词：地球日Earth Day ‎【答案】‎ Actions for a Greener Earth ‎ A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.‎ ‎ Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.‎ ‎ We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：题目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”‎ 写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60词，参考词汇必须使用。使用一般过去时和第一人称进行写作。‎ 亮点说明：范文使用了非谓语动词calling upon us to join in the actions和so...that句型与宾语从句we can do more for a better world等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组call sb to do sth, join in, come up with. Make use of, turn...into, give away, be proud of等，使作文内容变得丰富。‎ 考点：情景作文 ‎【名师点睛】‎ 话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按照四幅图的顺序来写，不可打乱顺序；注意行文的连贯性，多使用一些连接词。‎ ‎5.【2016·天津】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。‎ （1） 回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；‎ （2） 谈谈收获或感情；‎ （3） 表达祝愿语期望。‎ 注意：‎ （1） 词数不少于100；‎ （2） 可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；‎ （3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear friends,‎ How time flies! ‎ ‎ ‎ Thank you.‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version: ‎ Dear__friends,__‎ How__time__flies! Two weeks went by before we realized that our exchange activities ended. On behalf of our school, I would like to express my feelings.‎ As scheduled, we took part in several instructive activities. We have learnt many Chinese characters and often took exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was extremely delicious and different from our food. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists' works.‎ As far as I'm concerned, everyone here is a member of our big family. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip to your country. I hope we'll get together again next year. ‎ Thank__you. ‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文 ‎【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁的语言。‎ ‎6.【2016·上海】Guided Writing ‎   Directions:  Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.‎ ‎ 假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：‎ ‎1.描述调研数据；‎ ‎2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎（略）‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文属于图表作文。要求考生以姚平的身份写一则报告，通报“父母是否以子女为荣”的调研报告的内容。文章使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异。2.百分之80的父母亲以孩子为荣；自由百分之60的孩子认为父母以我为荣。3.分析原因：父母亲把全部的精力都倾注在孩子身上，孩子的成功也证明自己的教育方法是正确的；而现在的孩子因为年龄较小，并没有很强的责任感，他们并没有感受到自己承担的义务和责任。建议在写作的时候添加适当的谚语，如Every coin has two sides.提升文采，以增加获得高分的可能性；穿插使用多种句式，让文章富有变化。同时要使用两到三个复合句，并适当使用串联词。‎ 考点：考查图表作文 ‎7.【2016·四川】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 你最喜欢的季节；‎ ‎2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受……）。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 题目已为你写好；‎ ‎3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；‎ ‎4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ One possible version: ‎ Among the four seasons in a year, summer is my favourite, which makes me free, excited and energetic. ‎ When summer vacation for us students comes every year, we can do all that we can't do during our school time, going shopping with friends, swimming in warm water and even hiking and camping in the deep valleys, all of which, I think, lead me to full freedom. We can find us in an exciting world every day, with the sun shining brightly, trees growing greenly and flowers coming out with all kinds of colours. Summer makes me full of energy and I feel I have the strength to do the most difficult things in my life. I like summer best, and what about you？‎ ‎【解析】 这是一篇英文报的征文，要求描写考生最喜欢的季节，话题贴近考生实际生活，令考生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 写作要点：文章主要包含两大要点，首先点出自己最喜欢的是哪一个季节；然后陈述自己喜欢该季节的两条理由；这两条理由可以从气候、景色、活动、感受等之中进行选择性的描写。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。‎ ‎8.【2016·浙江】书面表达（满分30分）‎ ‎“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。‎ 要求如下：‎ ‎ 1.简述你对这句名言的理解；‎ ‎ 2.用一个具体事例加以说明；‎ ‎ 3.给出恰当的结尾。‎ 注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：‎ ‎ 2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。‎ ‎ Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】One possible student version Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better ‎ Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.‎ ‎ My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.‎ ‎ I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目判断作文主要介绍要将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能走题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章使用第一人称和一般现在时，一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。​‎ ‎【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。‎ 考点：考查开放式作文 ‎9.【2016·江苏】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎81.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.‎ Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.‎ Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer冶 competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；‎ ‎2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 ~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3. 不必写标题。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎【答案】‎ On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not. ‎ In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. ‎ To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some ‎ participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting. ‎ ‎(150 words)‎ Possible version two:‎ Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it. ‎ In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.‎ In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.‎ ‎(150 words)‎ ‎2.支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。3.理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式；网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚。同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠。（2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。3.反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响。（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉。（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。注意使用本人熟悉的词汇及句式，以增加获得高分的可能性。不要堆砌使用串联词，穿插使用陈述句、祈使句和被动句式，让文章更加丰富多样化。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 本篇范文很好地完成了所有任务。文章结构合理，层次分明。第一段总结归纳短文内容提出网络投票很流行，给人们带来好处同时也有不利之处。第二段提出个人观点并给出理由，两篇范文中正反观点明确，论据有力；第三段中提出合理化建议；时态和人称运用准确无误无误，全文无中国式英语思维，体现出很高的运用语言的能力。从写作技巧来看，文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句..... in which candidates go around to seek supports.状语从句.....if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.同时文章中串联词运用较为合理，如in my opinion、in addition、furthermore、to be honest等等。‎ 考点：考查任务型读写 ‎2015年高考试题 ‎ 书面表达之文字提纲式 ‎1.【2015·新课标全国II】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 出发及返回时间；‎ ‎2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 结语已为你写好。‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考答案】‎ ‎ Dear Lucy,‎ ‎ I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for ‎ the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明邀请Lucy去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请、时间、具体活动。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本作文从实际生活出发，以英语的交际性和实用性为目标，兼顾尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意义。体现了课程标准要求的以知识运用为教学目标的要求。在高三备考时，应该多从把语言作为交流的工具的角度去准备书面表达。‎ ‎2.【2015·新课标全国I】‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：‎ 1. 栏目介绍；‎ 2. 稿件内容；‎ 3. 稿件长度：约400词；‎ 4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。 ‎ 注意：‎ 1. 词数100左右；‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；‎ 3. 开头语已为你写好。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Peter,‎ I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.‎ The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求写一封给美国朋友彼得写信的约稿，为学校校英文报“外国文化”栏目刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的文章。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. ‎ 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和过渡词语，不仅增强了表达效果，而且实现了形式与内容的统一。‎ ‎3.【2015·北京】‎ 假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：‎ ‎ 1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）；‎ ‎ 2. 说明你打算参加的原因；‎ ‎ 3. 询问对方的意向。‎ ‎ 注意： 1. 词数不少于50；‎ ‎ 2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp Dear Jim,‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jim,‎ I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me.‎ This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.‎ Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. ‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：I’m writing to tell you my exciting ‎ plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if you’d like to go with me.‎ 文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。‎ ‎【考点定位】应用文类书面表达 ‎【名师点睛】本题是一篇考的是邀请信，龙舟的一个艺术节，仍然是传统文化的主题。采分点主要是三个板块，第一个板块是相关细节的处理。因为在第一个要点当中写到，学生要自己设计时间、地点以及参赛人员，这使学生需要自行发挥得，编纂的时候要合理一些。第二个板块提到你的参加原因，原因必然是考官会关注的，为什么要参加龙州艺术界的活动。第三，他提到两个字，就是询问，希望学生在写作的时候尽量避开一些非常生硬的词汇。注意写邀请信常用句型：On behalf of…, I am writing to invite you to take part in the…；I’d like to be involved in…due to the fact that…；I am looking forward to your reply/ arrival/coming/ attendance等考生在应用文写作中一定要体现出交际功能，重视该文体的写作结构，除称呼与落款必须写齐全外，正文部分一般开头应道明写作目的，中间呈现具体细节，结尾处补充礼貌性话语。另外，应用文的语言结构忌过于复杂，用词忌过难过偏，少用倒装从句嵌套等长难句。语言与用词做到适用应用场合，准确到位即可。只要做到以上几点，应用文部分即可拿到一个不错的分数。‎ ‎4.【2015·广东】‎ 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 你接受了一项写作任务，为英语校报写一篇科技报道。‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ 请根据以下信息，介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术。内容包括：‎ 技术名称：DNA检测 检测方法：唾液样本分析 检测费用：125英镑 检测时长：4到6周 检测用途： 1. 预测重大疾病 ‎2. 预知食物偏好 ‎3. 提示合适的锻炼方式 检测影响： 1. 增强健康意识 ‎2. 易引起过度焦虑 ‎*唾液样本：saliva sample ‎[写作要求]‎ 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ 第一节DNA Detection We can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：对于基础写作用5个句子概括医疗新技术，要求必须用上所有的要点，不能遗漏。对于概括短文大意，要抓住要点。叙述自己的班级情况时：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。2.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态及一般将来时。 3.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定语从句。副词Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本题所给用5个句子概括医疗新技术的材料是学生不太熟悉的内容，所以要尽量使用学生熟悉的句式来写，还必须用5个句子表达所有的信息。此题主要考查阅读概括能力及语言的组织的能力。需要用一些高级句式及词汇来增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎5.【2015·陕西】‎ ‎ 书面表达（满分30分）‎ 假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。 ‎ ‎ Volunteers Wanted Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at ‎ ‎ chenlaoshiaef.com.‎ 写作要点：‎ ‎1.表示写信意图；‎ ‎2.陈述应征目的；‎ ‎3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。‎ 写作要求： ‎ ‎1.邮件词数不少于100；‎ ‎2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯 ‎4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ Dear MS Chen ,‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply. ‎ ‎ Yours truly,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考答案】‎ Dear MS Chen ,‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.‎ ‎ I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.‎ ‎ As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command ‎ of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.‎ ‎ I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply. ‎ ‎ Yours truly,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了so…that…句型，以及定语从句I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文 ‎【名师点睛】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事，抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容贴近学生的生活，学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。‎ ‎6.【2015·四川】‎ 书面表达（共35分)‎ 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。‎ 1. ‎ 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；‎ 2. ‎ 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；‎ 1. ‎ 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；‎ 2. ‎ 提出你学习英语的具体需求。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；‎ Hi Sharon,‎ This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Hi Sharon,‎ ‎ This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.‎ ‎ Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.‎ ‎ In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking. ‎ Hope for you early reply!‎ ‎ Yours Sincerely ‎ ‎ Li Xia ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查提纲类作文。提纲作文在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，考生要能够抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲。 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。本篇文章的要点具体，可分成三段写，第一段写要点1、2；第二段写要点3；第三段写要点4，以及希望得到对方的回信。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.、表语从句：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲类作文 ‎【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ ‎7.【2015·天津】‎ 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。 ‎ ‎（1）自我介绍；‎ ‎ （2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等； ‎ ‎（3）询问对方的其他需求。‎ 注意：‎ ‎（1）词数不少于100；‎ ‎（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇： 学生会 the Student Union ‎ Dear Chris, ‎ ‎ 此处不能答题 ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Jin ‎【参考答案】‎ Dear_Chris，‎ I am Li Jin, chairman of the Student Union of Chenguang High School. I am writing to inform you of our donation.‎ In order to enhance the friendship between our two schools, our school has appealed to the students to donate books to your Chinese class. The books, which can be used as reading materials or reference books in your Chinese class, include 30 storybooks, 25 magazines and 20 ChineseEnglish dictionaries. We will take the books over to you when we take part in the summer camp to be held in your school in July.‎ Should you need any other things, please do not hesitate to tell us.‎ Yours，‎ Li_Jin ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.自我介绍及写信目的；2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；3. 询问对方的其他需求； 4．告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。‎ ‎8.【2015·重庆】‎ 写作二（满分20分）‎ Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：‎ ‎· 表明写信目的 ‎· 选择一种分享方式 ‎· 简述作出该选择的理由 ‎· 希望了解更多信息 注意：（1）词数不少于80；‎ ‎ （2）在答题卡上做答 ‎ （3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books. ‎ You’ve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.‎ If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.‎ ‎【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：apply for申请；Looking forward to盼望着；Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reason后面跟着一个同位语从句；not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.这个句子not only but also连接两个句子，第一个句子需要用部分倒装；‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本题的解题思路，一、表明写信目的：申请参加该活动（添加得知消息）；二、选择一种分享方式：二者选一；三、阐述理由 ；四、书信结尾（添加希望）；注意表达句式1. Between them, I would like ‎ to choose…2. Of the two, I prefer the latter to the former.表示希望的表达句式1. I am looking forward to more information.2. I would appreciate it if you would offer more information.‎ 书面表达之图画式 ‎1.【2015·上海】‎ Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.‎ 学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；‎ ‎2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Dear Sir/ Madam,‎ Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.‎ In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have ‎ just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Pan Yang ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面表达陈述观点及理由。‎ 写作时注意以下几点：‎ ‎1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确从以上三张图片中选择一张。‎ ‎2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。但是在以具体事例阐述的时候使用过去时 ‎3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。‎ 运用定语从句a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.; a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration; your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well；My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book； ‎ 运用连词 Though, ‎ 运用副词 deeply 修饰impressed 运用了宾语从句discussing heatedly what they have just read；It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion; Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story; it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity；I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration 此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如not only …but also; as far as I’m concerned; To sum up ; share with; 等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查描述图片及表达理由。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。‎ ‎2.【2015·福建】‎ 书面表达(满分25分）‎ 请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。 ‎ 内容包括：‎ ‎1. 描述画面；‎ ‎2. 概述其含义；‎ ‎3. 谈谈个人感想。 ‎ 凿壁偷光 注意：‎ ‎1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ 参考词汇：凿，钻：bore In the picture,‎ ‎【答案】‎ In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.‎ This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor ,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour ‘s house to read at night.The moral of the story is spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be Of course, things are totally different today It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.‎ ‎【亮点分析】‎ 文章第一段描述图片，第一句中用到了动词ing形式的非谓语动词做伴随状语和with 的复合结构In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.图中我们可以看见一个男孩穿着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿过，他沉静在自己的阅读中。‎ 第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese ‎ idiom.这是一个众人周知的中国古代成语。第二句也是用了一个分词结构表示伴随状语The boy, being poor ,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour ‘s house to read at night.这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛，于是他把墙凿了一个洞，从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二段最后一句用了一个no matter引导的让步状语从句。The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识，并且不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。‎ 第三段结束Of course, things are totally different today .当然，现在可完全不同了。第二句是一个not… but 结构以及宾语从句It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西才是重要的。俗语：Hard work pays off.功夫不负有心人。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.我们应该带着苦来通过学习来改进自己并且为未来做准备。‎ ‎【考点定位】看图说话写作。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本文考查看图说话写作，要求学生仔细描述图片并且发表自己的感受。一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾以丰富文章的内容。‎ ‎3.【2015·北京】‎ 假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊”英语角“写一篇英文稿件。‎ 注意：词数不少于60.‎ 提示词：一个面团a piece of dough 面人dough figurine ‎【答案】‎ ‎ Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines. ‎ When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently.‎ ‎ Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.‎ ‎ We hope we can have more activities of this kind!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文依然用四幅图的形式展现了一个活动的过程，与往年一样，体裁为记叙文。与往年不同的是，命题并未给出作文开头，需学生自己写一个事件的概括及总体感受作为文章的第一段。‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。‎ 全文适用的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。‎ 范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.；定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table…；时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. 语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰。‎ ‎【考点定位】图表类记叙文 ‎【名师点睛】本题考查的细节是手工艺人教大家如何去做这个东西，学生认真聆听，是教育学。第二幅图最重要的点就是学生能不能找到学生认真聆听这个环节，因为老师教一定能看得出来，但是学生能不能写到学生在听，这应该是一个得分点。第三幅图是一个指导。所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。最后一幅图是我们在上课的时候会重点讲的照相，大家很欢乐，做成一个作品。 所以，除了四幅图的要点之外，所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。所以写好这样的作文一定要抓住细节，才能得分。还需要注意时态，词汇不要拼写错误，多用复合句式才能体现出亮点。考生切忌在文章开篇犯低级的语法错误，尤其注意时态、单复数及冠词的正确使用。相比于实用性强的应用文来说，情景作文可以在保证要点齐全的前提下适当增加长难句的使用，如对非谓语、三大从句及连词进行灵活运用。关注句式的多样性及用词的准确性对取得该板块的高分会有更大的保障。‎ 书面表达之开放式 ‎1.【2015·安徽】‎ 某英文杂志正在举办以"Fancy yourself as an interviewer"为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题，写一篇英语短文。 ‎ 内容包括：‎ ‎1. 采访的对象；‎ ‎2. 采访的原因；‎ ‎3. 想提的问题。 ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数120左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ ‎4. 短文的标题已给出，不计人总词数。‎ A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview ‎ The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.‎ I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.‎ If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：题目是一篇命题材料作文。作文的写作要点已经给出，需要考生根据提示进行写作，作文必须涵盖所有要点，还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右，标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性，不能出现与本人有关的信息。‎ ‎【亮点说明】范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句I would like to interview is Yang Liwei；原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese...；宾语从句①I could learn a great deal from him about it，②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained；条件状语从句If I could interview him；非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等，显示了扎实的语法功底，也使作文的句式变得多样；‎ 范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：not only...but also...；one of the...；the first to do sth；be interested in；a great deal；such...as等，使作文的内容变得更加丰富；‎ 范文注意使用not only...but also, and, also和finally等来衔接句子，使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。‎ ‎【考点定位】命题类材料作文 ‎【名师点睛】题目给出了一个征文的通知，要求考生根据提示以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to ‎ Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文。题目属于命题作文，不过，题目给出了写作的框架，一定程度上降低了难度。需要注意的是，所写的作文必须涵盖所有的要点，如果能够使用高级词汇和重要句型，将会给作文增色不少。‎ ‎2.【2015·湖南】‎ Section C (25 marks)‎ Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.‎ 请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。‎ ‎ As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上；‎ ‎2. 续写词数不少于120个；‎ ‎3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ As_a_student,_I_can_tell_you_that_there_is_nothing_better_than_being_praised_by_my_teacher_before_my_classmates.‎ Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and I went home together after school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knocked down by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran over to find that the old lady's head was bleeding. She had already lost consciousness. Immediately I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with it. Li Ming stopped a taxi quickly. Together we put the old lady into the taxi and drove her to the nearest hospital. ‎ The old lady was saved and we also felt very pleased. What's more, I remembered the number of the car, and the traffic police caught the driver later.‎ ‎【解析】 一、确定文章体裁、时态和人称 本篇作文是典型的夹叙夹议文，使用第一人称；文章主体应该用一般过去时态。‎ 二、谋篇 文章结构一般要包括以下内容：‎ ‎1. 文章的开头即用试题给出的句子；‎ ‎2. 对受到老师表扬的这件事要具体描述；‎ ‎3. 针对这件事情说出自己的感受。‎ ‎3.【2015·湖北】‎ 短文写作 ‎ 请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，有英语写一篇短文。‎ ‎ Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer,you will learn.‎ 注意：1.无须写标题；‎ ‎ 2.除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎ 3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；‎ ‎ 4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎ 5.词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.‎ Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubted it. Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. Half an hour later, I managed to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to him, the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.‎ From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.‎ ‎【亮点说明】首句“Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.”鲜明地亮出了作者的观点。文章使用了状语从句“If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.”及分词做状语“Thinking that his solution might be wrong,…”等句型，为文章增色不少。此外，一些短语的使用也恰到好处，如offer sb. sth.，work sth. out，manage to do sth.，praise sb. for sth.，serve as等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查“提纲类开放式”作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】今年的高考短文写作仍然沿袭了近几年的模式，考生对“提纲类开放式”作文比较熟悉。考生答题时，先提取关键词question，doubt，learn来确定中心，确保不走题。通过英文提示，考生很容易得出这一观点：质疑既是求知的一种方式，也是“批判性思维”的起点。这对引导考生进行独立思考，发展批判性思维，培养创新意识，极具启发和指导作用。‎ ‎4.【2015·江苏】‎ ‎ 书面表达 (满分 25 分)‎ ‎81.请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章.‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;‎ ‎2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;‎ ‎3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句; ‎ ‎2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;‎ ‎3. 不必写标题。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。‎ ‎【答案】‎ The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.‎ Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What’ s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.‎ In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.‎ ‎ Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. (150 words)‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：今年江苏高考英语采用了“材料类+图形+提纲类”形式，综合考查考生阅读材料，识图和写作能力，较往年有所创新，也增加了难度。材料分为三部分：第一部分讲述了一位老奶奶阻止车辆停放引发的争议。第二部分讲述了行人和自行车不遵守红绿灯，导致交通事故发生的现象。第三部分是图表和文字，‎ 反映近几年车辆的数量激增现象。要求第一段用30个单词概括材料内容；第二段分析导致交通问题的原因；第三段从社会规则和个人行为谈谈启示（不少于两点）。‎ ‎【亮点说明】范文严格按照“三步走”的格局，第一段用短短26字（不含标点）概括了所给材料，得益于使用了“not only…but also…”这一经典句型；第二段分析了导致交通问题的原因，使用了“give rise to, large-scale construction of, the increasing number of, (be) vital to”等高级词汇，同时“what’s worse”衔接词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。第三段句型多样，变换使用了“Without虚拟语气，it is…who…强调句型，it is one’s duty to do sth.”等句型，为文章增色不少。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查“说明文类材料+图形+提纲类”作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】说明文类材料的概括方法：主题概括法 （段意合并法）。考生应抓住主题句（关键句），一般为文章第一段和各段第一句，然后进行段意合并，再用1-2个漂亮的句式整理成文；分析原因时，注意分条称述，并使用恰当的衔接词，但要避免落入俗套；谈论启示时注意句式的变换使用，避免句式的单一。另外，考生应尽可能多地使用一些高级词汇，为文章增色。‎ ‎5.【2015·广东】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）‎ Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: “Rule 1: We are family! “ All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3… In the following weeks, Sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and require everyone to follow them.‎ Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students. Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class. At the graduation ceremony, just as she expected, she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。‎ ‎2. 用约120个词就班规谈谈你的想法，内容包括：‎ ‎(1) 你们班最突出的问题是什么？‎ ‎(2) 针对该问题你会设计一条什么班规？‎ ‎(3)你认为班规会带来什么影响？‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。‎ ‎2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ ‎ 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Sally was a teacher. who taught some students full of problems. The students didn’t follow the school rules. Therefore, she made the rules for them. Later they made great progress.‎ In our class ,some students don’t work hard and often fight with each other. I will tell them some stories about hard-working people.I will make a study plan to encourage them to study work. I put up some sayings on the walls to remind them to do so.I will explain to them that studying hard is very important. They aren’t allowed to fight at school.In this way, students have a good habit. Most of the students follow the school rules and study work. They will respect teachers and other classmates. They will have good manners and confidence. Later they will get better grades.‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定语从句。副词Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本题所给用5个句子概括医疗新技术的材料是学生不太熟悉的内容，所以要尽量使用学生熟悉的句式来写，还必须用5个句子表达所有的信息。此题主要考查阅读概括能力及语言的组织的能力。需要用一些高级句式及词汇来增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎6.【2015·浙江】‎ 书面表达（满分30分）‎ 在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英文写一篇100～120个词“短文。要求如下：‎ ‎1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；‎ ‎2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。‎ 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。‎ When I Have a Different Opinion ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ When I Have a Different Opinion ‎ We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it . By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.‎ ‎ Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day . Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.‎ An alternative student version:‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.‎ ‎ The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism; I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面表达陈述观点及理由。‎ 写作时注意以下几点：‎ ‎1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确从以上两种做法中选择一种，是坚持自己的观点并说服别人还是遵从大多数同学的意见。‎ ‎2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。‎ ‎3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。但是在以具体事例阐述的时候使用过去时 ‎4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如not only …but also…不仅而且。‎ 运用连词while 表对比观点。运用because 表达原因。‎ 运用了表语从句表达原因The main reason for my choice is that …。‎ 运用了宾语从句 decide whether do have a … ；discuss where to go for an outing ‎ 运用了介词短语 By doing so, Without hesitation. ‎ 运用了强调句 we did have a lots of fun that day. ‎ 此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be worth doing sth; stick to sth.; have a good time; have lots of fun , tend to do 等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查观点理由。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。‎ ‎7.【2015·重庆】‎ ‎ 写作一（满分15分）‎ 请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。‎ If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?‎ 要求：‎ ‎（1）作出回答并说出理由；‎ ‎（2）词数不少于60；‎ ‎（3）在答题卡上做答。‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，使用了多种句式和结构。比如I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals.宾语从句；Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward.这个句子还运用到非谓语动词；If only I could go back and reset my goals.还运用到虚拟语气。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查开放性作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】这种开放性的作文，采取表明观点+阐释理由+结尾总结的解题思路，一、建议句式：主要考虑从虚拟语气着手 ‎1. 宾语从句 I suggest/ advise that…I should…‎ ‎2. 主语从句 It’s strongly recommended that…‎ ‎3. 条件状语从句 If I were three years younger, I would…‎ 二、原因句式：建议陈述两个原因，用并列结构not only, but…as well连接 ‎1. The reason why… is that…‎ ‎2. Why I say so is that…‎ 三、结尾部分：表达对“回不到过去”的惋惜 How I wish I could be three years younger!‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【两年模拟】2017、2018名校模拟题及其答案解析 ‎2018年模拟题 ‎1.【安徽省六校教育研究会2018届高三第二次联考】 网络时代，许多年轻的父母沉溺于玩手机或电脑，而忽视了与孩子的沟通。某英文报社现以How to develop a better parent-child relationship 为题向你征稿。请你分析产生这种现象的原因并提出合理化建议。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ How to develop a better parent-child relationship Nowadays many young parents are addicted to their electric devices like smartphones or computers, paying less or no attention to their kids.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】How to develop a better parent-child relationship Nowadays many young parents are addicted to their electric devices like smart phones or computers, paying less or no attention to their kids.‎ Then how does it come about? Admittedly, the smart phone indeed dramatically changes our life. With it, people can do nearly everything they want, such as surfing the Internet for information, watching films or videos, doing some online shopping and playing games as well. Thus, a smart phone serves as a platform for them to get fun in a comfortable and convenient way. As a result, more and more young parents are being attracted.‎ However, nothing can replace face-to-face communication between parents and kids, which requires parents to think about the real meaning of life, spend more time with the children and share the fun together. Only in this way can a better parent-child relationship be developed.117‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇半开放性作文。该文应该分为三大部分。第一部分描述年轻父母玩手机，忽略和孩子沟通这种现象（已给出）。第二部分应该分析产生这种现象的原因。第三部分应该给出自己的建议。这篇文章应该用现在时态。因为这个话题非常贴近现实生活，对考生来说并不难写。所以考生应该在文章的用词和句式的选择上下工夫，尽可能用一些较为高级的词汇和句式。‎ ‎【亮点分析】1. 所给范文要点齐全，条理清楚。thus, as a result, however等词的使用使得上下文自然通畅。‎ ‎2. 长短句结合，简单句复杂句共用。充分利用高级句式。定语从句（people can do nearly everything they want，which requires parents to think about …share the fun together）。倒装句（Only in this way can a better parent-child relationship be developed）。非谓语动词（surfing the Internet for information, watching films or videos, doing some online shopping and playing games）‎ ‎【安徽省皖南八校2018届高三第二次联考】假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Charlie来信说，他将于下个月到你所在的城市参观，并询问你是否可以提供住处。请你根据提示给他回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1.表示欢迎；‎ ‎2.可以提供住宿。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：客房，客室guestroom ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】I am very pleased to hear from you. I’m happy that you are having a visit to the city I live in next month. It’s good for you to learn more about Chinese culture by visiting different places in my country. And there is so much you will be able to learn in the city.‎ Of course, I can offer you some help. As long as I am here, you can always use my guestroom. Let me know your exact date and I will make sure the guestroom is ready. If necessary, I can pick up you at the airport. ‎ Looking forward to your reply soon.‎ Yours sincerely Li Hua ‎【解析】写作背景：李华的英国朋友Charlie来信说，他将于下个月到你所在的城市参观，并询问你是否可以提供住处。请根据提示给他回信。文章主要分为三部分：首先对Charlie的到来表示欢迎及来参观的好处；然后说明可以提供住宿还了解到来的详细信息；最后希望尽快回信。文章用一般现在时来写，用第一人称。‎ 写作时要注意条理清楚，要点全面，态度诚恳。还要注意高级词汇和句型的运用，如宾语从句that you are having a visit to the city,定语从句I live in.词语As long as, If necessary, pick up, Looking forward to等。‎ ‎【安徽省A10联盟2018届高三11月联考】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim将作为交换生来中国学习，他来信向你询问如何更好地融入到寄宿家庭和应该注意的餐桌礼仪方面的问题，请你就此内容给他写一封回信。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Jim,‎ I’m glad to know you will come to China as an exchange student. Here are my suggestions about your behavior in a Chinese family.‎ As far as I am concerned, helping your host family with some housework is definitely an effective approach to engaging with them. Furthermore, a warm and harmonious atmosphere can be created. When it comes to table manners, we often let the seniors eat first to show respect for them. Besides, you should avoid tapping the bowls with chopsticks, which is impolite. In fact, the best policy is “When in Rome, do as the Romans do”.‎ Looking forward to seeing you soon.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。‎ 亮点分析：本文第一段开门见山地表明写作的意图，给一些关于在中国家庭寄宿的忠告。第二段以一常用的短语“As far as I am concerned”，以一个动名词作主语的方式很好地开头：helping your host family with some housework is definitely an effective approach to engaging with them.运用了被动语态：a warm and harmonious atmosphere can be created。 同时也恰当地运用了定语从句：you should tapping the bowls with chopsticks, which is impolite. 最后本段运用一句习语 When in Rome, do as the Romans do（入乡随俗）结束了本段。本文中还运用了许多连词如“Furthermore …Besides,…In fact,”使文章条理清晰。同时还使用了一些固定短语如avoid doing ，Look forward to seeing you ‎ soon等和固定句型“ When it comes to table manners,”（当谈到），给文章增添了魅力及可读性。‎ 总之本文结构完整，布局合理，得简明扼要。文中使用了多种句式，主动语态和被动语态交替使用，并用恰当地运用了非谓语及固定句式，增加了文章亮点。‎ ‎【安徽省蚌埠市第一中学2018届高三上学期期中】假如你是李华，前几天你收到网友Jim的来信，询问你的高三生活，你打算在回信中介绍以下三个方面的内容：‎ ‎1,生活安排；2,学习计划；3,理想的大学及专业。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1,词数100字左右；‎ ‎2,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3,开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jim,‎ I’m very glad to hear from you.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Jim,‎ I’m very glad to hear from you. In your letter, you asked me about my Senior Three life, during which time I am busy with exams and homework, so I need to balance my study and life in order to make it colorful and meaningful.‎ I strongly believe that doing sports everyday may build up our body. Besides, communicating with teachers, parents and friends can be of great help to reduce my pressure. As for my study, I’ve made a practical plan to follow strictly. I should also overcome my shyness to consult the teachers if there is something making me confused. What’s more, to improve English is the most ‎ urgent thing because I have to make a solid foundation for my dream university---FuDan University, where I would like to major in English. I really hope that my dream will come true through my perseverance and diligence.‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】试题分析：本文要求写一封回信。本文的开头已经给出，因此应将重点放在正文上。书写正文的时候一定要注意不要遗漏文中给出的要点。本文的要点包括三个方面：1、生活安排；2、学习计划；3、理想的大学及专业。注意要点表述一定要层次清晰，语句要通顺流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误，做到文中语意清楚，简单明了。写作前还要根据提示可确定时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。切记尽可能地得体地使用所学词汇和句型，适当使用一些高级词汇、常用的短语和高级句式，则会给文章增添色彩，提高作文的档次。同时注意使用一些连词和插入语，使文章表达更加自然、流畅。注意字数要控制在100词左右，书写工整，卷面整洁。‎ ‎【范文亮点点评】‎ 开头首句I’m very glad to hear from you.简单明了；…during which time I am busy with exams and homework, so I need to balance my study and life in order to make it colorful and meaningful.使用了定语从句；I strongly believe that doing sports everyday may build up our body.使用了动名词短语作主语；Besides, communicating with teachers, parents and friends can be of great help to reduce my pressure.使用了高级句型be+of+抽象名词；…if there is something making me confused.使用了状语从句；What’s more, to improve English is the most urgent thing because I have to make a solid foundation for my dream university---FuDan University, where I would like to major in English.使用了不定式作主语，原因状语从句和定语从句是非常高级的句子；同时过渡词Besides, What’s more等的使用增强了文章的流畅性。‎ ‎【广东七校联合体2018届高三第二次联考试】假定你是李华，近些年来，共享单车给市民的生活带来了极大的便利，可在媒体上你也经常看到许多关于使用共享单车（shared bikes）的许多不文明行为，如乱停乱放、私自占用、故意破坏单车等等。请你就此现象，写一份倡议书发表在校英文报上，倡议同学们文明使用共享单车。‎ 注意：1. 词数100 左右，（开头结尾已给出，不计入词数）；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ My dear fellow students,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】In the past few years, we have witnessed the great development of shared bike in many cities. However, we can usually come across some phenomena in which people parked the shared bikes casually or destroy them on purpose. In fact, shared bikes bring people great convenience as they provide an effective solution to the “last mile” problem. More importantly, they are consistent with the idea that we should lead a low carbon life and make joint efforts to protect the environment. Therefore, shared bikes should be left in public for next users at the proper place rather than be possessed privately or destroyed deliberately. So here I would advocate raising our awareness of using shared bikes reasonably so that everyone can benefit from this public service.‎ ‎【解析】这是提纲类作文，要求就现在的热点话题关于使用共享单车（shared bikes）的许多不文明行为写一份倡议书发表在校英文报上，倡议同学们文明使用共享单车。在写作时即要肯定共享单词给市民的生活带来了极大的便利，更要强调对于乱停乱放、私自占用、故意破坏单车等行为要给予抵制。‎ 亮点句中：‎ ‎【广东省茂名市五校2018届高三上学期一轮复习阶段性测评（四）】假定你是李华，你的英国网友Leslie 不久要来中国留学，他想了解一些日常生活中和他人保持联系的方法。请你写信向他推荐微信（WeChat）软件，并期待他早日到来。‎ 内容包括：1.使用广泛；‎ ‎2.方便快捷；‎ ‎3.节省费用。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Leslie,‎ I’m more than delighted to hear that you will come to China for your further study and I hope you can enjoy your stay here.‎ There are a variety of ways to communicate with others in our daily life, of which WeChat is the most popular one. Nowadays, a good number of Chinese, especially young people, are using WeChat to keep in touch with each other. The reason why I like it best is that it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes. More importantly, it is free to communicate with others on WeChat, which will surely save you a lot of money.‎ Hopefully my advice will be of some help to you and I’m looking forward to your early arrival.129‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】试题分析：本文是一封书信。英国网友Leslie不久要来中国留学，他想了解一些日常生活中和他人保持联系的方法。请你写信向他推荐微信（WeChat）软件，并期待他早日到来。内容包括：使用广泛；方便快捷；节省费用。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。There are a variety of ways to communicate with others in our daily life, of which WeChat is the most popular one. of which引导非限制性定语从句；The reason why I like it best is that it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes.句中why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句；另外，a variety of，Nowadays, especially，keep in touch with，More importantly, Hopefully等的运用为文章增色添彩。‎ ‎【广东省广州市2018届高三12月调研测试】假定你是李华，下周你校将举办茶文化节。你想邀请英国朋友David来做关于“英国茶文化”的讲座，请写信告知，内容包括：‎ ‎1.简要介绍茶文化节活动;‎ ‎2.说明讲座主题：英国下午茶;‎ ‎3.询问可来做讲座的具体时间。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear David, ‎ How is everything going these days? Our school is going to hold a Tea Culture Festival next week and I am writing to invite you to give us a talk on “British Tea Culture”.‎ During the Tea Culture Festival, we will have activities like a display of different kinds of tea, an introduction to Chinese Tea ceremonies and different talks on tea cultures around the world. ‎ Afternoon tea is a well-established and historical British institution with widespread appeal in our country, so it would be great if you could tell us something about its procedures and the stories behind it. ‎ If you are willing to do it, please get back to me with a date and time that’s convenient for you. 121‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours, ‎ Lihua ‎【解析】【名师点睛】高中英语提纲式作文写作技巧 ‎　高考中提纲式作文非常常见。下面是写提纲式作文的一点技巧。‎ ‎　1、审题。所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。‎ ‎　2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架。安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。3)避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。要灵活运用各种句式，如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加文章的可读性。注意使用高级框架结构的句子，让文章的结构错落有致。4)用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。‎ 亮点分析：本文内容齐全，结构完整。整个文章以简单句为主，既有主动语态又有被动语态。同时本文运用了复杂句，状语从句和祈使句。文章中还运用了一些较高级的词汇，增加了文章的可读性。‎ 复杂句：Afternoon tea is a well-established and historical British institution with widespread appeal in our country, so it would be great if you could tell us something about its procedures and the stories behind it.‎ 由if引导的状语从句：(2)if you could tell us something about its procedures and the stories behind it；(2) If you are willing to do it, please get back to me with a date and time that’s convenient for you.‎ 祈使句：please get back to me with a date and time that’s convenient for you ‎ ‎【广西桂林市九校2018届高三9月联考】假定你是李华，你市一家剧院将在本周末举办—场京剧演出，外教jackson对此极感兴趣并向你打听相关事宜。请你用英语治他写封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1.简要介绍中国京剧；‎ ‎2.演出内容:京剧名段；‎ ‎3.邀请他一同前往观看。‎ 注意：1.字数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Jackson,‎ There will be a Beijing opera performance held in a theater this weekend. Now, let me introduce some details to you. As a perfect example of Chinese culture, Beijing opera has a long history. Centered in Beijing, the opera has many types of facial makeup, which refer to different characters.‎ As the poster says, some popular selections will be performed during the show time this weekend and some famous actors will show a visual feast for audience. So I sincerely invite you to go to watch the show with me. It can give you some interesting things to appreciate even though you can't understand what the actors sing. It will be a nice experience for you at least.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】‎ 本文是一篇书信，格式正确，要点齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。Centered in Beijing, the opera has many types of facial makeup, which refer to different characters.过去分词和which引导的非限制性定语从句完美结合；As the poster says, some popular selections will be performed during the show time this weekend句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态；It can give you some interesting things to appreciate even though you can't understand what the actors sing.句中使用even though引导的让步状语从句。‎ ‎【河北省保定市2018届高三第二次模拟】提纲类作文 假设你叫李华，你的美国朋友Mike正在北京大学学习汉语，他对中国古诗词很感兴趣。中央电视台将举办《中国诗词大会》比赛，请cemail他告知此事，主要内容包括：‎ ‎1、节目简介；2、建议并鼓励他参加；3、预祝他取得好成绩。‎ 注意:1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Mike,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Mike,‎ How is everything going?‎ I have good news for you. A Chinese Poetry Contest will be held on CCTV, which is intended for all Chinese poetry lovers. The aim of the program is to inherit the outstanding Chinese traditional culture and boost people’s cultural confidence. As I know you’re a big fan of Chinese poetry, I guess it is a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese poetry and examine your learning results. So why not take part in the Contest? Wish you a good luck and excellent performance.‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】假设你叫李华，你的美国朋友Mike正在北京大学学习汉语，他对中国古诗词很感兴趣。中央电视台将举办《中国诗词大会》比赛，请cemail他告知此事，主要内容包括：‎ ‎1、节目简介；2、建议并鼓励他参加；3、预祝他取得好成绩。‎ 考查提纲类作文，本文是一篇书信说明文，要点基本给出。只要用适当的连接词把要点连接成流畅的短文即可。在选择词汇时要注意选择一些相对高级的词汇让文章的层次更高。‎ 亮点分析：本文符合一般的书信要求。要点包含，内容简洁易懂。运用一些较高级的词汇，如be intended for…，boost people’s cultural confidence；inherit take part in …等。 本文的句式相对灵活。文中既有定语从句：（…, which is intended for all Chinese poetry lovers.）；状语从句（As I know you’re a big fan of Chinese poetry, I guess it is a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese poetry and examine your learning results）；宾语从句：I guess it is a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese poetry and examine your learning results。同时还运用了常用句式（why no+动词原形？）和祁使句（Wish you a good luck and excellent performance.），给文章增添了色彩，提高了文章的档次。‎ ‎【河北省邯郸市2018届高三1月教学质量检测】假定你是李华，你们学校将举办“校园文化日”（Campus Culture Day)活动，请你用英语给你校交换生Tom写一封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 目的：展示校园文化，增强文化意识；‎ ‎2. 时间：12月10日，9:00 a.m. - 5:00 p.m.；‎ ‎3. 地点：学校礼堂（school hall)；‎ ‎4. 活动节目。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Tom,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【来源】【全国市级联考】河北省邯郸市2018届高三1月教学质量检测英语试题 ‎【答案】Dear Tom,‎ How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to participate in the activity, called Campus Culture Day. It will be held in our school hall on December 10th. It is expected to last from 9:00 a. m. to 5:00 p. m. The purpose of this activity is to show our rich campus culture and the students’ various talents. And at the same time, we hope our students’ cultural awareness will be strengthened through this activity.‎ On that day there will be many performances such as folk dancing, folk and classic music, Poetry Reading and so on. I think it will be an unforgettable day in our life.‎ Looking forward to your attendance.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】此文为邀请信。要点有：1. “校园文化日”（Campus Culture Day)活动介绍2. 活动节目 3. 发出邀请 4.希望得到回复。‎ 关键词：show our rich campus culture and the students’ various talents.‎ Strengthen cultural awareness performances such as folk dancing, folk and classic music,‎ 时态一般现在时，人称用第一，第二人称为主。‎ 亮点分析：‎ 开头点名写信目的：I am writing to invite you to participate in the activity, （过去分词作后置定语）called Campus Culture Day.‎ The purpose of this activity is to show our rich campus culture and the students’ various talents. （不定式做表语）‎ 高级词汇awareness， strengthen，unforgettable，attendance ‎【河北省保定市2018届高三上学期期末调研】假设你是校学生会主席李华，新年到来之际，为了帮助学校留学生们更好地了解中国文化，学生会将举办一场新年联欢会。请用英语写一个通知，主要内容包括：‎ ‎1. 时间：下周五晚6:00—8:00；‎ ‎2. 地点：教学楼101室；‎ ‎3. 内容：学习包饺子；比赛用筷子；中国校园歌曲串烧、观看武术表演等。‎ 注意：1.词数不少于100 ‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Notice As New Year is around the corner, we are going to hold a New Year party. It intends to help the overseas students have a better understanding of Chinese culture.‎ During the party, the Chinese campus songs will be presented in the form of good mixture. You will have to compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks. Meanwhile, you’ll learn at the party how to make dumplings. Also you can enjoy Chinese martial arts (wushu) performance. The party is scheduled in Room 101of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday. Make sure you won’t miss it. All of you are welcome.‎ Student Union ‎【东北三省三校（哈师大附中、东北师大附中、辽宁省实验中学）2018届高三第二次模拟】假定你是高三学生李华，还有一个月就要离开母校，请你写一份毕业典礼发言稿，内容包括以 下要点：‎ ‎1. 列举高中生活的难忘片段（如学习、活动等）；‎ ‎2. 表达感激之情及美好祝愿。‎ 注意:1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当发挥，以使内容连贯。‎ Dear friends,‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Thank you. From Li Hua.‎ ‎【答案】Dear friends,‎ How time flies! It’s about a month before we graduate from this school and we’ll go to separate universities. It is my great honor to stand here and deliver a speech.‎ Looking back on the old days, I can still remember we were quite curious about everything when we first met. And I like the spring outing best, as we were so delighted exposed to nature. Additionally, what impressed me most was the time when we were completely absorbed in preparing for the university entrance examination. Tired but determined, we fight for our dream without any hesitation.‎ Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude for the care and love from you. I sincerely hope that after graduation our friendship will last forever.125‎ Thank you!‎ From Li Hua.‎ ‎【解析】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是高三学生李华，还有一个月就要离开母校，请你写一份毕业典礼发言稿。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容：1. 列举高中生活的难忘片段（如学习、活动等）；2. 表达感激之情及美好祝愿。抓住了这亮点，我们就抓住了文章的核心内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，回忆过去，考虑用一般过去时；表达感谢及美好祝愿，用一般现在时，用第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意:  提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: fight for为……而奋斗。还使用了宾语从句Looking back on the old days, I can still remember we were quite curious about everything when we first met.和主语从句Additionally, what impressed me most was the time when we were completely absorbed in preparing for the university entrance examination.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性 ‎【东北三省三校2018年高三第一次联合模拟】假设你叫李华，你的澳洲朋友Devin参加汉语水平考试（HSK）未能通过，请你写一封信，安慰一下你的朋友。内容包括：‎ ‎1.对考试失利的安慰；‎ ‎2.对汉语学习提出建议。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右。‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Devin,‎ I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Devin,‎ I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.‎ As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really count. Meanwhile, you may as well watch more Chinese materials as much as you can afford. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made. Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese. A good luck next time.117‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】试题分析：本文是一封书信。你的澳洲朋友Devin参加汉语水平考试（HSK）未能通过，请你写一封信，安慰一下你的朋友。内容包括：对考试失利的安慰；对汉语学习提出建议。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down,句中that引导宾语从句；for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.句中for是并列连词，表示原因，并且文中when引导时间状语从句；As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience.句中as引导非限制性定语从句；另外，Personally, Meanwhile, you may as well，More importantly, Anyhow,等的运用为文章增色添彩。‎ ‎【东北三省四城市联考暨沈阳市2018届高三质量监测(二)】书面表达（百强校英语解析团队专供）(满分25分）‎ ‎52. 假定你是李华，正在负责策划“绿色校园”活动（Green Campus Campaign),请给你的美国笔友Henry写封邮件，向他介绍此次活动的内容并征求他的建议。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Possible version 1:‎ Dear Henry,‎ I have a favor to ask. We are to start a Green School Campaign to inspire students to be environmentally conscious at school. Could you give us some advice on our current plan at your convenience?‎ We plan to play a 30 minutes, video first, which is about how to save water, paper, cans and electricity at school. Students will surely be impressed by the striking figures and helpful tips. Then our science teacher will give a live show in the lab on what actually happens to those recyclable materials during the recycling process. This will be really popular.‎ What else can we do? Looking forward to your constructive suggestions.110‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Possible version 2:‎ Dear Henry,‎ How are you doing? I’m writing to seek your help, as I encounter some problems while planning a Green School Campaign.‎ We plan to organize this campaign like this. First, a series of lectures will be given, introducing ways to build a low-carbon school life. This will be followed by a discussion about ways of saving water, paper, and electricity at school. But how can we put them into practice and make them our daily routine? I’m stuck and wondering if you could give me some practical ‎ advice as I know you’ve organized such activities.‎ Looking forward to your reply.100‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句We plan to play a 30 minutes, video first, which is about how to save water, paper, cans and electricity at school.和宾语从句Then our science teacher will give a live show in the lab on what actually happens to those recyclable materials during the recycling process.‎ ‎【黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市2018届高三第一次模拟】假定你是李华。本周六是你十八岁生日, 家人将在光明饭店会为你举办一次生日宴会。请你给朋友John写一封信, 邀请他参加。内容包括:‎ l. 提出邀请;‎ ‎2. 18岁生日的意义;‎ ‎3. 宴会情况。‎ 注意:1. 词数100左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。‎ Dear John,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear John, ‎ I’m writing this letter to invite you to my 18th birthday party this Saturday. ‎ An 18th birthday is unusual for every child in China, because it means that a teenager who has been an adult becomes more mature and wiser. So my family is determined to hold a big party at Guangming Hotel. Many friends and relatives are invited to the party. The hotel band will play amazing music, and a variety of Chinese food will be served. If you take part in the party, you will definitely enjoy the atmosphere and have a good time with us. ‎ Look forward to your coming. ‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】本文是邀请信，本周六是李华十八岁生日, 家人将在光明饭店为你举办一次生日宴会。请给朋友John写一封信, 邀请他参加。文章以一般现在时和一般将来时来写。‎ 邀请信要注意格式，开头点明写信目的提出邀请，交代清时间，此处用不定式to invite you to my 18th birthday party this Saturday.表目的；然后写18岁生日的意义和宴会情况，使用了定语从句who has been an adult becomes more mature and wiser.和宾语从句that a teenager becomes more mature and wiser.写明举办生日宴会的地点at Guangming Hotel，邀请到的人和具体活动；最后表达愿望，期待对方的到来。‎ 写作时要注意语言简单明了，主动语态和被动语态两种语态交替使用。简单句与复杂句交互使用，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。整个文章要结构完整，要点齐全。‎ ‎【吉林省长春市2018届高三一模】假设你是李华，校学生会主席，想邀请外教Henry先生一起参加学校举办的中秋节晚会。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1.介绍写邮件的目的；‎ ‎2.晚会时间、地点：9月30日晚6点、学校报告厅；‎ ‎3.晚会内容：同学们表演节目、吃月饼、赏月。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Mr.Henry,‎ I’m Li Hua,Chairman of Students’ Union.It’s a great honour for me,on behalf of my fellow union members,to invite you to attend our party.The Mid-Autumn Festival is around the corner,which is a time for family members and loved ones to get together.‎ To celebrate this Chinese traditional festival,a party will be held at the lecture hall of our school at 6 pm.on Sep.30th.At the party there will be a lot of performances and we will enjoy a variety of delicious foods,including mooncakes,watermelons,grapes and so on,while admiring the fullest and roundest moon.‎ We can’ t wait to see you!‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎3. 给文章划分基本段落，仔细阅读题目要求和文字提示，领会要写的文章的主题，确定文章的段落，写出各段的主题句。本题中的内容要点有：①.写信的目的；②. 晚会时间、地点以及晚会内容。这样确定文章的基本段落分为两段。‎ ‎4.尝试用高级词汇，使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构，也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。‎ ‎5.连句成篇，在连句成篇的过程中需要注意过渡句和连接词的使用。‎ At the party there will be a lot of performances and we will enjoy a variety of delicious foods, including mooncakes, watermelons, grapes and so on, while admiring the fullest and roundest moon.‎ 句意：在晚会上，会有很多表演，我们会享受各种美味的食物，包括月饼、西瓜、葡萄等，同时欣赏最圆、最圆的月亮。‎ 主句是由and连接的两个分句“At the party there will be a lot of performances”和“we will enjoy a variety of delicious foods”。句中“including mooncakes, watermelons, grapes and so on,”做插入语，“while admiring the fullest and roundest moon”在句中做状语。‎ ‎【黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市五校联谊2018届高三上学期期末联考】假定你是李华， 你校每年都有一次读书节，你想邀请在本市工作的英国朋友大卫参加今年的读书节，请你就此写一封邀请信，主要内容包括：‎ ‎1. 起始时间和地点；‎ ‎2. 活动：免费赠书和讲座。‎ ‎3. 目的：鼓励学生。‎ 注意：1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结语以为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear David,‎ I’d like to invite you to join the annual Reading Festival of our school next Sunday.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear David,‎ I’d like to invite you to join the annual Reading Festival of our school next Sunday. To inspire more people to love reading and know the benefits of reading, our school has decided to give away books for free in the lecture hall. After that, a lecture on the effective ways of reading will be given there. The Reading Festival this year will begin at 8 am and end at 11 am. Anyone fond of reading is welcome to come and celebrate the Reading Festival with us. ‎ I’d appreciate it if you could come to our school on time. I’m looking forward to you arrival!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】本文的写作背景是学校每年都举办一次读书节，给在本市工作的英国朋友大卫写一封邀请信，邀请他参加今年的读书节活动。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：写作目的：邀请大卫参加学校今年的读书节；内容：读书节活动的起始时间地点，读书节活动以及目的。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该以一般将来时态为主。4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ ‎【江西省临川二中、新余四中2018届高三1月联合考试】假如你是李华, 你的英国朋友 Edward 正在学习汉语, 希望你推荐一个适合他的站。请你根据以下内容, 给他回复邮件。‎ 推荐网站：www.edchinese.com 网站内容：1. 中文情景对话, 中国风俗, 中国电影, 中文歌曲、成语和唐诗等；‎ ‎2. 有在线老师答疑解惑。‎ 注 意：1. 词数 100 左右；‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节, 以使内容充实, 行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。‎ ‎71. Dear Edward,‎ I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Edward,‎ I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you. It’s a good website for non-Chine se speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.‎ Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all this is free of charge.‎ I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.‎ Wish you a happy learning time.‎ Yours, Li Hua 为使文章层次清楚，可分三个自然段写：第一自然段推荐网站：www.edchinese.com ‎；第二自然段介绍这个网站的优点；第三自然段希望这个网站对Edward有所帮助。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: a variety of各种各样的，such as例如。还使用了定语从句It’s a good website for non-Chine se speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.和定语从句I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。‎ ‎【江西省新余市第一中学2018届高三全真模拟】假定你是李华，你所在的运动俱乐部将面向外国朋友开设太极(Tai Chi)课，请写一封邮件，邀请你校的英国交换生Peter参加，要点如下：‎ ‎1. 上课时间和地点；‎ ‎2. 报名的截止时间。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Peter,‎ How’s everything going? I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to invite you to attend a Tai Chi class held by our sports club. Tai Chi, originated in China, enjoys great popularity. Anyone, regardless of age or level of fitness, can practice and benefit from Tai Chi. Practicing Tai Chi regularly, you will feel mentally and physically relaxed with the harmonious movements. I’m sure that you will develop a great interest in this gentle exercise. The class starts between 5:00 and 6:00 p.m. every Monday in our school gym next month. The closing date for entries is next Tuesday.‎ ‎ Please let me know if you want to sign your name.‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。根据提示要求给英国交换生Peter写一封邮件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确两个要点：首先，上课时间和地点；其次，报名的截止时间。2、写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态和语态，就本文而言应该用一般现在时和将来时的结合。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。4、词数不少于100，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，要点全面，运用了一般现在时和将来时，多处使用高级词汇，如benefit from, regardless of等，而且多处使用非谓语动词作状语，比如Tai Chi, originated in China, enjoys great popularity；Practicing Tai Chi regularly, you will feel mentally and physically relaxed with the harmonious movements等。 ‎ ‎【江西省重点中学协作体2018届高三下学期第一次联考】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack今年第一次在唐人街体验了一把春节，并对中国春节的习俗产生了浓厚的兴趣，因此特写信来向你咨询相关信息。请你给他写一封回信进行介绍。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：stick New Year couplets(贴春联)；the lunar calendar(农历)；firecrackers(鞭炮)‎ Dear Jack,‎ Glad to receive you letter.‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Glad to receive you letter.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Jack,‎ Glad to receive your letter. And I’m amazed that you have experienced the Chinese spring festival in Chinatown for the first time and you are interested in its tradition. Here I’m writing this letter I to share with you something about the tradition.‎ The Spring Festival is one of the my most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the first day of the first month in the Chinese lunar calendar. Before the day, people are busy preparing for it and they stick New year couplets on the doors. On the Eve, the whole family usually get together to have a feast. Then they stay up, watching wonderful programs on TV until midnight, to welcome the new year with firecrackers. In the daytime, people dressed in new clothes go to visit friends and relatives with good luck to each other.‎ It’s difficult to say all the things about the festival. I hope you can come to China next spring festival. I’m sure you will like it more.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点分析】‎ 该范文主要按时间顺序介绍了中国春节习俗。主要介绍了贴春联、吃年夜饭、守岁、放烟花等习俗。条理清楚，内容丰富。范文还采用了一些比较高级的词汇，例如：1. It falls on the first day. 2. be busy doing sth. 3. stick 4. get together 5. 非谓语动词watching wonderful programs/ dressed in new clothes。‎ ‎【江西省莲塘一中、临川二中2018届高三上学期第一次联考】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Tom,‎ I am more than delighted to know you show great interest in shared bikes which have received increasing attention home and aboard. It is my pleasure to introduce them to you.‎ When you spot a shared bike, what you need to do is just scan the QR code of the bike to unlock it and enjoy your trip. Not only are shared bikes environmentally friendly and convenient, but also they charge low rates and can be parked almost anytime and anywhere, which have given them advantages over other means of public transport.‎ With Mobike entering the UK, I can’t help but wonder about its situation there. Could you please be kind enough to tell me something about that?‎ Yours sincerely Li Hua ‎【解析】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 开放式作文通常只给一个话题，没有提示词，写作难度较大，发挥的空间很大。因此在写作时要注意：其一，必须看清楚题目，理解题目的内涵，确定要写的作文的内容和题材。其二、针对中心，搜集素材，理清思路，按照一定的顺序确定出一个较完美的写作提纲。其三、确定每一部分的写作重点、细节和时态。写作时要用一些熟悉的句子，以免意思表达不清楚。写完后要仔细检查。这种作文的内容比较广泛，一般是以学生熟悉的生活题材为主。比如现在中国出现的共享单车。这类作文最能体现学生的英语书面交际的综合能力 本题为开放式作文，但要求以中国新近出现的一种共享单车为题做个简要介绍。‎ 亮点分析：本文第一段开始就用一个复杂句（I am more than delighted to know you show great interest ‎ in shared bikes which have received increasing attention home and aboard.）引出本文的话题”中国的共享单车”，以及很荣幸地能为此作介绍。第二段开头就使用了一个复杂句“When you spot a shared bike, what you need to do is just scan the QR code of the bike to unlock it and enjoy your trip.”及一个由not only..but also…引导的并列句+定语从句“Not only are shared bikes environmentally friendly and convenient, but also they charge low rates and can be parked almost anytime and anywhere, which have given them advantages over other means of public transport.”来介绍了共享单车的优点。第三段中用一个with引导的非谓语作状语（With Mobike entering the UK, I can’t help but wonder about its situation there.）。‎ 在文中使用了定语从句:…, which have received increasing attention home and aboard；…, which have given them advantages over other means of public transport。倒装句型：Not only are shared bikes environmentally friendly and convenient, but also they charge low rates and can be parked almost anytime and anywhere。名词从句：what you need to do is just scan the QR code of the bike to unlock it and enjoy your trip.‎ 同时文中大量地使用高级词汇，如more than（非常）， show great interest in….， home and aboard， given sb. advantages over…，other means of public transport，can’t help but do…，be kind enough to do…等。‎ 总之，整个文章内容完整，结构紧凑，语言结构复杂，既有复杂句，又有复合句。而复合句中既有定语从句，又有名词从句和状语从句。既有陈述句，被动语态，又有倒装句。而且文中又使用了大量的高级词汇，让文单丰富多彩，语法句式多变，整个文章一气呵成。可以说是文章的典范。‎ ‎【江西省八所重点中学2018年高三下学期联考】假设你是李华，你的外籍好友Jane在你校举办的汉字拼写大赛中获得一等奖。请你给她写一封信，内容包括：1.向她表示祝贺； 2. 请她介绍语言学习的经验.‎ 注意：1.词数100左右 ‎2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ‎ ‎3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数.‎ 参考词汇：汉字拼写大赛:Chinese Character Spelling Contest Dear Jane,‎ I’m Li Hua. _________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Jane I’m Li Hua .On hearing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Character Spelling Contest held by my school, I felt exceedingly excited! Congratulations to you!‎ As your good friend, I am proud of you! Your proficiency in Chinese Character as well as your deep dive into Chinese culture has left a lasting impression on me. It came as no surprise that you won the contest. You deserve it! I wonder how you are able to master a foreign language. I really wish to improve my English , so could you please share with me your own experience and unique views on language learning?‎ I will be grateful if you write me back. I am looking forward to your early reply. Thank you in advance and wish you all the best!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】本书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息：假设你是李华，你的外籍好友Jane在你校举办的汉字拼写大赛中获得一等奖。请你给她写一封信，内容包括：1.向她表示祝贺； 2. 请她介绍语言学习的经验。‎ 写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清楚试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：参加国际游学的好处；可能遇到的问题；你的看法。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定的逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。4、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如on + v-ing，be proud of，leave a lasting impression on，look forward to，in advance。还运用了It came as no surprise that you won the contest.这句话运用了主语从句；I wonder how you are able to master a foreign language.这句话运用了宾语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：as well as， so, and等等。‎ ‎2017年模拟题 ‎ [2017·河南省豫南九校高三下学期质量考评 (五)]‎ 假如你是李华。你将要参加本周六主题为“An Unforgettable Experience in High School”的英语演讲比赛。你写了一篇演讲稿，请外教Jason给予指导。请根据以下要点，给他写一封邮件。‎ ‎1.说明情况；‎ ‎2.指导内容 (词汇、语法、结构等) ；‎ ‎3.回复时间；‎ ‎4.表达感激。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．信的格式已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Jason，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua One possible version: ‎ Dear Jason，‎ I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to ask you to do me a favour. It's about an English speech contest with the title “An Unforgettable Experience in High School”， which I'm going to take part in this Saturday. I've finished my draft, but I find it still far from satisfactory.‎ I'm not sure of the usage of some words. There may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you be so kind to spare some time to check them out and improve my article? If it's convenient to you, please send it back by Thursday afternoon.‎ I'd appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua ‎ [2017·安徽省“皖南八校”高三第二次联考]‎ 假如你是学生会主席李华，为了让外国人了解中国传统文化，学生会将进行“唐诗吟诵大赛” (Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀请学校国际部学生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知。‎ 主要内容包括：‎ ‎1. 大赛目的和意义；‎ ‎2. 主办方：校学生会。时间：2017年12月30日。地点：校报告厅 (assembly hall)；‎ ‎3. 范围：唐诗三百首 (Three Hundred Tang Poems)。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。‎ Notice Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture?_________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version: ‎ Notice Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? Here comes your opportunity: the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest. I'd like to share with you some details.‎ As scheduled, the contest is to be held on Dec.30th, 2017.You are supposed to get prepared before the contest. Above all, it's recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems, and learn to appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese culture. Whoever feels interested and has a passion ‎ for Chinese culture, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible. If you want to attend, please come to the school assembly hall. Don't miss the chance of being a winner, and some appealing prize is eagerly waiting for you.‎ ‎ Don't hesitate to take part! I'm sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much progress.‎ ‎ [2017·福建省闽粤大联考高三期末质量检测]‎ 假如你最近在China Daily上看到下列广告，请据此写一封词数100左右的申请信。‎ ‎1. 自我简介；‎ ‎2. 自身的条件和优势；‎ ‎3. 自己的心愿。‎ 注意：信的开头和结尾已为你写好。‎ NEW ZEALAND GOVERNMENT SCHOLARSHIP The New Zealand Government is inviting applicants from senior high 3 students for a scholarship to study in New Zealand.‎ The scholarship covers tuition fees (学费) for four years, accommodation and travel expenses. Interested students should write a letter of application to the Secretary，New Zealand Government Scholarships, New Zealand Trade Commission.‎ Shortlisted (初步审核通过的) candidates will be invited for interview before the end of October. Deadline for submissions of application is 31 July.‎ Dear Sir or Madam，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________ ___‎ ‎____________ ____________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Jason Zhang One possible version: ‎ Dear Sir or Madam，‎ In reply to your newspaper advertisement last week, I am writing to apply for the scholarship to study in New Zealand.‎ I felt that I am a strong candidate for receiving the scholarship because of my excellent academic achievements and strong leadership skills.‎ I am looking forward to the opportunity in your country. Thank you for considering my application.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Jason Zhang ‎[2017·河北省邢台市第一中学高三月考]‎ 假定你是李华，计划寒假找份兼职工作。下面的招聘广告引起了你的注意，请根据要点(箭头所指内容)写一封申请信。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Mr Smith，‎ I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp. ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua One possible version：‎ Dear Mr Smith,‎ I've you’re your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp. I'm quite interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.‎ I'm outgoing, energetic, wellorganized and responsible. And most importantly, I love working with children! In the past two years, as the monitor in my class, I have proved myself to be an excellent helper to my teachers. I speak fluent English, which enables me to help native English teachers communicate freely and effectively with students in an Englishonly environment.‎ I will soon have a threeweek winter vacation, so I have no problem working on evenings and weekends. I can start working from the end of this month. I would appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua 请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为100左右的短文。‎ 内容要求：1. 描述画面；‎ ‎2. 谈谈父母的教育方式对孩子的影响。‎ 注意：1.发表观点时必须提供理由或论据；‎ ‎2．阐述观点、提供论据或叙述经历时，不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎3．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version: ‎ A cleaner is used as an example by one mother to warn her child while by another mother to instruct her child to study well, which reflects different ways of parents' education.‎ Personally, I definitely agree with the second mother's way of educating her child, which is much more positive and instructive compared with the first one.In my daily life, my parents treat me like good friends and always encourage me to be a good talent and a good citizen to society, which not only brings about confidence in the process of my growth but also cultivates my good virtues.‎ As a famous saying goes, parents are the best teachers for children, so parents' way of educating children can't be laid an emphasis on enough.Under the proper instructions of parents, just like the second mother, children are more likely to behave well and be a civilized person with good quality in the future.‎ ‎ [2017·辽宁省鞍山市第一中学高三3月月考] ‎ 请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为100左右的短文。‎ 内容要求：1. 描述画面 (四个盲人摸象)；‎ ‎2. 概述其意义并谈谈个人感想。‎ 注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2．可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。‎ In the picture, we can see there are 4 blind men feeling different parts of an elephant's body trying to figure out what it is like.____________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________ _‎ One possible version: ‎ In the picture, we can see there are 4 blind men feeling different parts of an elephant's body trying to figure out what it is like.‎ This is a wellknown story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The man on its back insisted it was like a rough mat, while the man who happened to touch the teeth argued that it was actually like a carrot. Disagreeing with both of them, the third man leaning against its body believed firmly that it was like a wall. Finally, the fourth man holding its tail believed in the shape of a grass rope.‎ Of course, none of them is right, since they just take part of a thing as the whole. Judging things from as many sides as possible is a skill that needs improving all the way. We should draw lessons from this picture and not be shortsighted.‎ ‎【东北师范大学附属中学2017届高三下学期第三次模拟】假定你是某国际高中的学生会主席李华，你校将于本周五下午两点邀请2014届优秀毕业生刘明（现就读于Harvard大学物理系）重返母校，并在学校报告厅(auditorium)进行讲座，分享他的学习经历和大学生活。请你代表学生会写一份书面通知，邀请全校学生参加。‎ 内容要点如下：‎ ‎1．刘明简介；‎ ‎2．讲座内容；‎ ‎3．鼓励同学们积极参与。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．通知的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Notice Exciting news! _____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ THE STUDENTS’ UNION ‎【答案】Notice Exciting news! There will be a lecture in the school auditorium at 2:00 pm this Friday afternoon. The lecture will be given by Liu Ming, one of the most honored graduates from our school.‎ Two years ago, Liu Ming graduated from here with excellent grades. He carried on hard work to university and now he is studying physics at Harvard with remarkable academic performance.‎ In his lecture, Liu Ming will tell us how he made it to the top in his high school years and share with us his university life in Harvard. I suppose every audience will surely get some inspiration from his stories.‎ All are welcome to join in this activity. The Students’ Union is looking forward to your attendance!‎ THE STUDENTS’ UNION ‎【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，涵盖了所有要点。In his lecture, Liu Ming will tell us how he made it to the top in his high school years and share with us his university life in Harvard.这个句子比较长，包括了宾语从句，and连接了两个并列的动作。句式复杂，为作文增彩不少。‎ ‎【湖北省黄冈中学2017年高三5月第三次模拟】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Chris在给你邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1．安慰对方；‎ ‎2．分析心理压力过大会导致的后果；‎ ‎3．给出相应的建议及其理由。‎ 注意：词数不少于100。‎ Dear Chris,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Chris,‎ I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test. Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress. But don’t worry too much, or you may find yourself problems with sleep, appetite, or even memory. Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress.‎ The first thing you can try is to exercise. Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence. Another way is to enjoy some games with friends, which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed. It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener; having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better.‎ I believe it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help further.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。你的美国笔友由于备考压力过大，苦恼的他希望得到你的帮助，对此，需要给他回一封信。‎ 信的称谓已经给出，第一段首先要安慰朋友，不要让他过于焦虑，并告诉他压力过大导致的后果。第二段给出一些具体的减轻压力的方法，以及这样做的理由。最后一段是鼓励朋友的话。‎ 文章内容要点已经给出。但考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：‎ ‎1. 这封信主要是向压力过大的朋友提供帮助，所以以一般现在时为主。‎ ‎2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流畅。‎ ‎3. 注意文章的结构要清晰，细节把控要到位。给出的建议要附带上相应的理由，否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。此外，要注意信件的写作格式。‎ ‎【范文亮点】‎ 优秀词汇和短语：upcoming即将到来的，suffer遭受，appetite食欲，deal with处理，boost energy增强精力，build confidence建立信心，take your mind off思想放空，cheer up振奋起来 优秀句式和行文脉络：‎ ‎1.Another way is to enjoy some games with friends, which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed另外一个方法是和朋友一起享受游戏，这可以帮你减轻思想上的压力，让你更加放松。（运用了to do 不定式作表语，运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）‎ ‎2.全文运用了The first thing，Another way，also这些连接词使行文流畅。而且全文结构清晰，最后还写了振奋朋友精神的话，作为一封给朋友提供帮助的信件，这些细节处理的很好。‎ ‎【湖北省沙市中学2017届高考冲刺第九次考试】假设你是李华，在某英文网站上，你看到正在开展关于填报志愿时首先考虑专业还是大学的讨论。请根据下面所给的要点提示， 用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其描述普遍存在的两种观点及其原因，并谈谈你自己的看法。‎ 观 点 理  由 首先考虑专业 ‎1. 可以学习自己感兴趣的东西；‎ ‎2. 便于将来从事自己喜爱的工作。‎ 首先考虑大学 ‎1. 学习环境对人的成长很重要；‎ ‎2. 名牌大学的毕业生在求职时常会受到青睐。‎ 你的看法？‎ 要求:‎ ‎1. 包括所有要点，可适度发挥，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎2. 开头已经写好，但不计入总词数；‎ ‎3. 词数100左右。‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I’m writing in response to your discussion about the question: should I choose a good major or a good university first when I graduate from high school?‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I’m writing in response to your discussion about the question: should I choose a good major or a good university first when I graduate from high school?‎ Every student will be faced with the question after he passes the entrance exam to college. Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested in. It will also make it possible for there to take their favorite job in future. Those who think differently believe that the environment is important to one’s development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job.‎ In my opinion, the best choice is a good major at a good university. If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.It’s much better for us students to combine all the factors together to make final decisions.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】试题分析：对同一件事情，人们往往有不同的看法，即正反两种观点。在写作时，常使用一般现在时。写作格式一般是：提出问题→两种不同观点→‎ 对两种不同观点的论据（理由）逐项作对比。如果要求说出自己的观点，可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由，最好不要重复前面的理由。本文是高考常考的议论文题型，考生不能遗漏要点要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 本文是一篇电子邮件，格式正确，采用三段式，语言精练，布局合理，同时句中使用高级句子。should I choose a good major or a good university first when I graduate from high school?ｗｈｅｎ引导时间状语从句；Every student will be faced with the question after he passes the entrance exam to college.主语使用一般将来时态的被动语态；Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested in.ｓｏ　ｔｈａｔ引导的目的状语从句和ｗｈａｔ的宾语从句完美结合；Those who think differently believe that the environment is important to one’s development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job.定语从句用在句中；If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best四个状语从句在一句中巧妙出现，堪称经典。‎ ‎【湖北省华中师范大学第一附属中学2017届高三5月押题】假定你是李华，一周前刚从英国伦敦游学回国，期间住在Peter家。回国前，Peter和家人开车带你游览伦敦市内著名景点，并拍了很多照片。请你给Peter写封邮件，要点如下：‎ ‎1.表示感谢；‎ ‎2.请他发送照片给你；‎ ‎3.邀请他和家人来中国旅游。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当加人细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎3.信的开头和结尾已给出。‎ Dear Peter,‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Peter,‎ How time flies! It has been a month since we parted. No words can express my thanks to you and your family for pulling me up in your house when I was having a learning lour in London. You made me feel at home by offering me great help and conveniences.‎ It’ s very considerate of you and your parents to drive me to some of the major attraction in London the weekend before I left, for which I’ll always be grateful! We had a lot of pictures taken together, and enjoyed ourselves very much. As those pictures are precious memories of my life there. I’ll appreciate it if you can send some of them to me.‎ By the way, I sincerely invite you and your family to visit China and I’ll be at your service.‎ Please remember me to your parents and I’m expecting your early reply!‎ Yours sincerely Li Hua ‎【范文亮点】‎ 文章一开头就使用time file 时光飞逝 这一术语一定程度上提高了文章的文学性。‎ 文章时态运用合理，主要使用了过去完成时和现在完场时为主要时态例如 We had a lot of pictures taken together, and enjoyed ourselves very much. 这句话就巧妙地将过去完成时和过去时结合到了一起，这使得文章更为连贯。‎ 文章充分使用各种从句包括限制性，非限制性定语从句，例如It’ s very considerate of you and your parents to drive me to some of the major attraction in London the weekend before I left, for which I’ll always be grateful!后半部分非限制性定语从句的使用是的文章的表述更为地道。‎ 文章格式符合信件类格式，内容安排合理，值得借鉴。‎ ‎【河北省衡水中学2017届高三下学期仿真模拟（五）】假设你是李华，是你校模拟联合国大会主席。你校将举办第五次模联活动，请给你们的外教Smith老师写封信，邀请他担任指导老师（advisor）。‎ 信的内容包括：‎ ‎1.主题：全球气候；‎ ‎2.举办时间和地点；‎ ‎3.指导老师的任务。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ 模拟联合国大会MUN ‎_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,‎ Our school is going to hold the fifth Model United Nations on November 10 and 11 in Meeting Rooms One, Two and Three. The theme is global climate. We sincerely invite you to be one of the advisors.‎ There are some new members in MUN, and the process, how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper, etc. are too complicated for them. Therefore, advisors are needed to train them. Besides, in order to improve their English, some teams are determined to use English as their work language. How to express themselves properly and correctly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem. So we are in great need of native English speakers as our advisors. I know you are a MUN lover. Do come and join us.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为提纲式作文。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文信的内容包括：1.主题：全球气候；2.举办时间和地点；3.‎ 指导老师的任务。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 本文是一封书信，格式正确，语言精练，布局合理，同时句中使用高级句子。There are some new members in MUN, and the process, how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper, etc. are too complicated for them.there be 句型和疑问词加动词不定式在句中巧妙结合；in order to improve their English, some teams are determined to use English as their work language.动词不定式做目的状语；How to express themselves properly and correctly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem.疑问词加动词不定式在句中做主语，堪称经典；Do come and join us.强调谓语，起到画龙点睛之妙；另外，Therefore, Besides,的运用为文章增色添彩。‎ ‎【河北省衡水中学2017届高三下学期二模】假定你是李华。你的美国外教David回国时，请你帮他找人制作一枚中文名章（name stamp）以作纪念。你已找好制作人。给他写封邮件，告知此事，并请他从所附图片中挑选字体、图案及材料。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ Dear David,‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li hua ‎【答案】Dear David,‎ How is everything going? I can still remember the days we spent together when you taught in China. When you went back to America last month, you mentioned to get a Chinese name stamp made for you, as it is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. Now I'm so glad to tell you that ‎ I've already found a stamp craftsman who's experienced and skilled at making Chinese traditional name stamps.‎ To make a stamp that suits you best, I attach some pictures of various types of characters, designs and materials in the email. You can choose whichever of them you prefer.‎ Look forward to your reply.‎ Best wishes.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】试题分析：‎ ‎    题干要求给美国外教David写封信，告诉他已找好制作中文名章（name stamp）的制作人，请他在所附图片中挑选字体、图案及材料。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，完整叙述题干内容。(2)人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一段：问候+写信背景(帮David找人制作一枚中文名章，告知David制作人已找好)；第二段：写作目的（请他从所附图片中挑选字体、图案及材料）；第三段：请回信！祝愿。‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ ‎    1.使用高级句型：定语从句I can still remember the days we spent together when you taught in China.；含有宾语从句和定语从句的复合句Now I'm so glad to tell you that I've already found a stamp craftsman who's experienced and skilled at making Chinese traditional name stamps.；定语从句To make a stamp that suits you best, ….。2.使用了重要短语：be experienced and skilled at擅长； look forward to期待。‎ ‎【广东省惠州2018届高三第一次调研】假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣。恰好你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动(Chinese Summer Camp)，请你给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括 ‎1．时间和地点；‎ ‎2．内容：学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆等；‎ ‎3．报名方式和截止时间 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Tom,‎ Here comes a piece of good news.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Tom,‎ Here comes a piece of good news. Chinese Summer Camp, which is intended for international students, is going to be held in our school this summer vacation. Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to join it.‎ The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days, from July 18 to July 28. It covers a wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture. As we all know, language is closely related to culture, so I’m convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from language study. In addition, the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums, which is the best way to learn about the country. By admiring the historical relics, you will definitely gain a better understanding of the country.‎ If you want to be part of it, please sign up for it before July 2nd at our school website. Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 要点要齐全。但不要简单罗列要点。可以适当的加一些变化，使用连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。‎ ‎【范文亮点】‎ ‎1. 范文采取了定语从句（ Chinese Summer Camp, which is intended for international students, is going to be held in our school this summer vacation.）；条件状语从句（If you want to be part of it, please sign up for it before July 2nd at our school website.）等句式。‎ ‎2. 文章采用了obsess；historical relics；a wide variety of ；As we all know等高级单词或短语。‎ ‎【广东省华南师范大学附属中学2017届高三第三次模拟】假定你是李华，你和父母在澳洲旅游期间于5月1日至2日入住Golden Bay Hotel酒店，但对其提供的服务不满意: 1. 搬运工送到房间的皮箱破损；‎ ‎2. 卫生间漏水；‎ ‎3. 楼下酒吧噪音持续到很晚，影响休息。请发电子邮件给酒店的管理者进行投诉，希望改进服务。‎ 注意：1. 文章必须包括所有要点。可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。‎ ‎2. 词数100，文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数 ‎3. 参考词汇：搬运工porter ; 漏水leak Dear Manager,‎ My name is Li Hua. ______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Manager,    ‎ My name is Li Hua. I stayed at your hotel, Golden Bay Hotel during my visit to Australia from May 1 to 2 with my parents. However, the service in your hotel left much to be desired. I’m writing this email to express my dissatisfaction.‎ First, we found our suitcases broken after they were carried to our room by one of your porters. Second, water was leaking out of the toilet in the bathroom. Third, the noise from the bar downstairs went on so late into the night each night that we couldn’t get good rest.‎ Therefore, I have to say that the service in your hotel is of poor quality.I sincerely hope you can improve your service so that none of the above happens again.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：‎ ‎1.本篇以对旅游期间入住的酒店的不满意之处提出建议为主题展开论述。通篇应该以一般过去式与一般现在式时态为主。‎ ‎2. 要点要齐全，提出对其提供的服务不满意的地方，并且提出改进之处。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。‎ ‎3.根据要点，先组此句；句式丰富，避免单词。‎ ‎4.注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述，一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。‎ ‎【范文亮点】‎ 文章采用了“First...Second...Third...”等连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。‎ 文章使用了“leak out、so...that...”等句式短语。‎ ‎3.so...that...和so that 句式的使用：“Third, the noise from the bar downstairs went on so late into the night each night that we couldn’t get good rest.”和“I sincerely hope you can improve your service so that none of the above happens again.”‎ ‎【福建省漳州市2017届高三5月质量检查】假如你是一所国际中学的学生会主席，你校将要举行为期两周的中学生夏令营（8月1日至14日），旨在增进学生对不同国家文化的了解。请你以学生会的名义拟一则通知。‎ 内容包括：1. 活动介绍；‎ ‎2. 报名要求（英语水平；沟通能力；……）；‎ ‎3. 报名时间：2017年5月10日至17日；‎ ‎4. 报名地点：学生会。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 通知格式已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ NOTICE ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ The Students’ Union ‎【答案】NOTICE ‎    Our school will hold a summer camp. It will begin on August 1st, lasting two weeks. The camp aims to help students have a better understanding of various cultures from different countries. Here are some requirements.‎ ‎    You are expected to have a great ability t communicate with others. Of course, a good command of English is absolutely an advantage. Above all, you should behave well and get along well with others.‎ ‎    If you are interested, you can sign up for it at Students’ Union from May 10 to May 17. Welcome all those who meet these requirements and are eager to take part in this program.‎ The Students’ Union ‎【解析】试题分析：本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一则通知，通知要清晰明确地写明通知对象，时间，地点，以及具体的事件和要求。本通知的第二部分应是本文的主体，写明活动的详细介绍以及具体要求，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。条件状语从句的使用：If you are interested, you can sign up for it at Students’ Union from May 10 to May 17.定语从句的使用：Welcome all those who meet these requirements……。‎ ‎【福建省厦门市2017届高三第二次（5月）质检】假定你是李华，想申请参加2017全球青年峰会（Global Youth Summit）。你写信请外教Mr. Smith帮你写一封推荐信，介绍你的英语能力、个性特点等，并于今年7月5日前发到gys2017GYLeadership.org。‎ 注意：‎ ‎    1.词数100左右；‎ ‎    2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎    3.不得透露考生本人所在学校及个人真实信息。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,‎ I’m Li Hua from your class. I’m writing to ask whether you could possibly write me a recommendation letter.‎ I am applying to participate in the 2017 Global Youth Summit, w hich requires me to provide a recommendation from my English teacher. Could you please comment on my English competence, class performance as well as my personality? You can refer to my statement attached to this letter. If it is convenient to you, would you be kind enough to send it to gys2017GYLeadership.org by July 5th?‎ I sincerely hope you can spare some time from your busy schedule to do me the favor. Think you for your kindness.‎ Yours faithfully,‎ Li Hua 同时要注意以下几点：‎ ‎1.通篇以一般现在时态为主。‎ ‎2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。‎ ‎3. 注意语气。既然是请外教帮自己写推荐信，言辞应当恳切、真诚。‎ ‎4. 写作思路：首先应准确地表达自己的请求，第二段要交代请求写推荐信的原因及推荐信包含的内容及其他事项，最后表示感谢。‎ ‎【范文亮点】‎ ‎1. 本文结构明确，层次分明。文章首先开门见山，提出自己的请求；然后交代请求的原因并向外教说明推荐信的内容；最后表达感谢。‎ ‎2. 此外，文章还运用了＂I am applying to participate in the 2017 Global Youth Summit, which requires me to provide a recommendation from my English teacher.＂等非限制性定语从句以及“If it is convenient to you, would you be kind enough to send it to gys2017GYLeadership.org by July 5th?”虚拟语气。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【一年原创】 原创试题及其解析 ‎1.书面表达(满分25分)‎ 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom最近喜欢上喝中国茶，他来信请你介绍一下中国茶的历史、种类以及喝茶的好处。‎ ‎1. 中国茶有几千年的悠久历史；‎ ‎2. 茶包括红茶、绿茶、花茶等；‎ ‎3. 喝茶可以强身健体，减少疾病。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100词左右；‎ ‎ 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；‎ ‎【思路导航】在高考英语书面表达题中，书信或邮件是经常出现的文体。命题趋势是不再给出开头和结尾。‎ 该篇作文内容接近生活，学生可以做到有话可说，有发挥的空间。在写作时，注意不要遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，而且也可以使用连接词和插入语以使行文流畅。高级句式的使用会提高文章的得分。 ‎ ‎【参考范文】 ‎ Dear Tom, ‎ I’ m glad to tell you something about Chinese tea. Chinese tea has a long history of thousands of years. Over the past centuries, tea has become not only the national drink of China but also a global drink.‎ With the popularity of tea drinking, tea houses as business and social centers appear, where people can talk business or relax themselves.‎ There are many kinds of tea, of which the main varieties are green tea and black tea. Tea is described as a health drink that can make one live longer because they can prevent cancer, heart disease, and many other diseases. I hope we’ll have a chance to drink tea together.‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎2.书面表达(满分25分)‎ 请你写一篇以“How to Grow up Healthily ” 为题的英语短文。要点如下：‎ ‎（1）怎样能健康成长。‎ ‎（2）为健康成长而应有的态度。‎ ‎（3）正确处理学习与娱乐之间的关系。‎ 注意：‎ ‎（1）词数不少于100；‎ ‎（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎（3）题目给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：娱乐 entertainment How to Grow up Healthily ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【思路导航】在高考英语书面表达题中，书信或邮件是经常出现的文体。一般会给出信的开头和结尾。写作时，要抓住得分点，必须使用参考词汇。例如：此题中的要点“1、2、3”均为得分点。得分点都表达完后，再添加一些衔接词、句和细节部分以使文章更流畅。例如：本文中的“And, Firstly, Secondly, Besides, especially when, What is the most important is that, Meanwhile, In a word”均属于衔接词、句。而“we can realize them by doing the following, a lack of sleep will do our body great harm, something bad breaks out, growing healthily depends on a healthy body and mind.”均属于添加细节。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ ‎ How to Grow up Healthily Growing up happily and healthily is everyone’s wishes. And we can realize them by doing the following. ‎ Firstly, we must have a healthy and balanced diet and frequently do enough exercise. Secondly, enough sleep is a must, for a lack of sleep will do our body great harm. Besides, we should face what happens with a positive attitude, especially when something bad breaks out. What is the most important is that, as teenagers, it is wise that we try our best to do well in our study. Meanwhile we’d better relax ourselves with some entertainment. ‎ In a word, growing healthily depends on a healthy body and mind.‎ ‎3.书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是李华，你的笔友Henry非常喜欢中国的戏曲文化。你想邀请他一起观看京剧《白蛇传》。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1.发出邀请；‎ ‎2.简单介绍剧情；‎ ‎3.请求对方回复。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：白蛇传：The Legend of the White Snake ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version:‎ Dear Henry,‎ Good news for you! This weekend, a masterpiece of Peking Opera named The Legend of the White Snake will be put on at eh theater. You told me you love Peking Opera very much last time we met, so I would like to invite you to watch it with me.‎ ‎ As the name suggests, the play tells of a love story between a man and a white snake which changes into a beautiful woman to repay the man’s kindness. I guess you will fall in love with it. Would you like to enjoy it ?‎ Looking forward to your early reply. ‎ ‎ Yours ,‎ Li Hua ‎4.书面表达(满分25分)‎ 假设你是李华，你在网上看到一家北京的旅行社因外国游客增多而计划招聘暑期导游的广告。请你根据以下提示给负责人Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件应征这份工作。‎ ‎1. 口语流利，善于沟通；‎ ‎2. 性格外向，乐于助人；‎ ‎3. 时间充足，熟悉景点。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100词左右；‎ ‎ 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；‎ ‎【参考范文】 ‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ I’ve read your advertisement for a part-time guide. I am interested in the job. And I also think I am quite fit for it. Below are my reasons.‎ Firstly, I am good at English and can speak English fluently, which can enable me to communicate with foreign tourists without difficulty. Secondly, I am outgoing and warm-hearted. As a young man, I am full of energy and willing to help others. Besides, with three years of experience as ‎ a monitor, I think I have the ability to organize any activity. Most importantly, I am a native of Beijing and familiar with all the tourist attractions here. I hope to get this opportunity to prove myself.‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Your sincerely, ‎ LiHua ‎5.书面表达(满分25分)‎ 假设你是李丽，你校英语报纸正在对校园出现的“乱吐痰”现象开展讨论。请你写一封信给报纸编辑，发表你的看法。要点如下：‎ ‎(1)“乱吐痰”是恶习；‎ ‎(2)“乱吐痰”的害处；‎ ‎(3) 解决办法。‎ 注意：‎ ‎(1) 词数100左右；‎ ‎(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：病菌：bug 校园：campus 素质：quality Dear Editor,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ Yours,‎ Li Li ‎【思路导航】在高考英语书面表达题中，书信或邮件是经常出现的文体。一般会给出信的开头和结尾。写作时，要抓住得分点，必须使用参考词汇。例如：此题中的要点“1、2、3”均为得分点。得分点都表达完后，再添加一些衔接词、句和细节部分以使文章更流畅。例如：本文中的“Recently; especially; faced with this uncivilized phenomenon; in my opinion; because; I suggest; in this way,”均属于衔接词、句。而“I feel quite annoyed to；when in the dining hall; I think we should do something to ‎ help them break the bad habit; those spitting everywhere are of such low quality that they are looked down upon；they will gradually develop the sense of shame and pay more attention to their own dignity”均属于添加细节。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Editor,‎ Recently spitting everywhere has become a serious problem on campus. I feel quite annoyed to see someone spitting everywhere shamelessly, especially when in the dining hall. Faced with this uncivilized phenomenon, I think we should do something to help them break the bad habit.‎ In my opinion, spitting everywhere is a very bad habit, because spitting everywhere not only helps bugs spread more fast but also shows those spitting everywhere are of such low quality that they are looked down upon.‎ I suggest we should enable them to drop the bad habit by having them watch the video of someone spitting everywhere and how others react. In this way, they will gradually develop the sense of shame and pay more attention to their own dignity.‎ Yours,‎ Li Li ‎6.书面表达(满分25分)‎ 假定你是李华，你们学校计划将于下周举行书法讲座，请你写信邀请对中国汉字书法感兴趣的外教Mr. Smith前来参加。‎ ‎1) 时间：10月15日（星期六）上午9:00—11:00；‎ ‎2) 地点：图书馆二楼202房间；‎ ‎3) 活动安排：听讲座，讨论，观摩即兴创作等。‎ 参考词汇：书法calligrapher； 即兴创作improvisation  ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1) 词数100左右；‎ ‎2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3) 开头和结尾已为你写好。‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【思路导航】在高考英语书面表达题中，书信或邮件是经常出现的文体。一般会给出开头和结尾。本作文内容接近学生生活，学生可以做到有话可说，有发挥的空间。在写作时，不要遗漏要点，可以使用连接词和插入语以使行文流畅。 ‎ ‎【参考范文】 ‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ I’m writing to invite you to the lecture about Chinese calligraphy on October 15th next Saturday. As far as I know, you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, especially Chinese characters. So I hope you can enjoy it. ‎ The lecture will be given in Room 202, on the second floor of the library and will last from 9 am. to 11 am. It mainly consists of three parts: one hour’s listening to the lecture, half an hour’s discussion and for another half an hour, we will observe the calligrapher improvisation on the spot.‎ We will be very glad if you can come. Looking forward to your early reply. ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎7.书面表达(满分25分)‎ 假定你是王海。你代表大赛组委会(the competition committee) 写一封邮件告知Tom教授已成功被聘请为北京赛区(area)英语演讲竞赛评委(judge)并及时前来等事宜。内容包括：‎ ‎1．航班起降地点、时间。‎ ‎2．抵达后接洽人、地点。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Tom,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Wang Hai ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Tom,‎ On behalf of the competition committee, I’m glad to tell you that you have been invited as a judge of the English Speech Contest in Beijing Area. We have booked the ticket for Flight 6785, which is due to take off at 09:20, on July 3 from Landon International airport. Almost 10 hours later, at 19:45, Secretary Gao will meet you at Beijing International airport and then drive you to meet the head judge, Mr. Zhaong at No, 4 middle School of Beijing. Wish you a good trip and a happy stay in Beijing.‎ Looking forward to meeting at the contest soon.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Wang Hai ‎8.书面表达(满分25分)‎ 假设你是周军，前外籍教师Mr. Smith近日来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示回复一封邮件。‎ ‎（1）简述自己的学习和生活；‎ ‎（2）告知你以“China In Future”为题的演讲参加了省级英语演讲比赛，并获得一等奖。‎ ‎（3）感谢他在英语方面对你的帮助。‎ 注意：‎ ‎（1）词数100左右；‎ ‎（2）可适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎（3）开头落款已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：省级英语演讲比赛 Provincial-level English Speech Contest 为题的：titled Dear Mr. Smith,‎ I’m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours ever Zhou Jun ‎【思路导航】在高考英语书面表达题中，书信或邮件是经常出现的文体。一般会给出信的开头和结尾。写作时，要抓住得分点，必须使用参考词汇。例如：此题中的要点“1、2、3”均为得分点。得分点都表达完后，再添加一些衔接词、句和细节部分以使文章更流畅。例如：本文中的“Recently, because, As a result, Besides, To be honest, What is important is that”均属于衔接词、句。而“I’ve got used to the life in high school. I’ve got through with the English novels you recommended I hope you can give me more advice on study and life. Remember me to your family. Best wishes.”均属于添加细节。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ I’m glad to hear from you. Recently, I’ve been getting along well with my study and life. I’ve got used to the life in high school. What is important is that I’ve got through with the English novels you recommended. As a result, I’ve made obvious and rapid progress in English study. Besides, I entered the Provincial-level English Speech Contest and got first by means of the speech titled China In Future. To be honest, I owe all the achievements to you, because you ‎ helped me much with my English during your teaching in my school. I hope you can give me more advice on study and life. Remember me to your family.‎ Best wishes.‎ ‎ Yours ever Zhou Jun ‎9.学校团支部计划建立一个English club，请你写一封公开信，号召同学们参加，内容应包括：‎ ‎1．English club设立的目的；‎ ‎2．English club 要开展的活动；‎ ‎3．告知大家报名时间和地点。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 开头和结尾已给出；‎ ‎2. 词数80-120。‎ 参考词汇： 语音室 Language lab Boys and girls,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Wang Hai ‎【思路导航】在高考英语作文考题中，书信是经常出现的一种文体。一般来说信的开头，结尾已写好。写作时，要抓住采分点。例如：此题中，＂为了丰富同学们的业余生活，提高同学们的英语水平，团支部计划建立一个English club； 以及所列的1、2、3的内容＂均为采分点。采分点都表达完后，再添加一些衔接词、句以使文章流畅。例如：本文中，＂and、 Apart from that、 yet、If you have any good ideas and suggestions＂均属于承接上下文的衔接词、句。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Boys and girls,‎ I’m secretary of Youth League of No 5 Middle School, Wang Hai, and here is good news for you. To make our life on campus rich and colorful and improve our English, we, Youth League, plan to create an English club. ‎ We’ll see English films in the Language Lab on Thursday evening. Apart from that, there is going to be an English discussion on Saturday evening; yet, the specific topics haven’t been set. If you have any good ideas and suggestions, please let us know.‎ All of our schoolmates are welcome to sign up for the club in the office of Youth League from 15:00 to 17: 00 this Friday. I’m sure you won’t regret joining us. So, just do it.‎ Yours,‎ Wang Hai ‎10.假设你是李华，你的英国网友Peter来信询问你高考后的打算，请你以李华的名义写一封回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 旅游—放松心情；‎ ‎2. 学车—掌握技能；‎ ‎3. 读书—陶冶性情。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100词左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；‎ ‎ 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：高考：the College Entrance Examination Dear Peter, ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ Best wishes Yours ‎ LiHua One possible version:‎ Dear Peter, ‎ How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about my plans after the College Entrance Examination. ‎ I think the first thing I will do is to travel. I as well as several of my classmates have decided to travel to Li Jiang to enjoy the beautiful scenery and have a good relaxation. After that, I want to learn how to drive and get the driving license, as it is a necessary skill in our daily life. Another thing I want to do is reading. During the busy preparations for the examinations, I have no time to read. Now that I have more free time, I will read my favourite books to broaden my horizons.‎ Best wishes Yours ‎ LiHua ‎11.假定你是李华，你校将于3月25日上午8:30到10:30在学校礼堂二楼举行主题为“关爱地球”的英语演讲比赛。请你给你班的外教怀特先生写一封电子邮件，邀请他前来担任评委并做总结发言。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100左右；‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 范文：‎ We will be very grateful if you could set aside some time and attend the contest. As an honored guest, you are expected to make a speech at the end of the contest. We are looking forward to seeing you that day. ‎ Please contact me if you have any questions. ‎ Your Sincerely, ‎ Li Hua ‎12.假设你是李华，你市和美国某城市为友好城市，某国际交流中心利用暑假将组织一个美国中学生交流活动，并在网上征集可提供住宿的中国家庭。你认为自己的家庭符合要求，请你给活动负责人写一封申请信。内容如下：‎ ‎1．有一间独立卧室；‎ ‎2．家庭成员具备良好的素质；‎ ‎3．能够用英语交流。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【思路导航】本篇作文属于应征类作文。对于此类作文的写作，考生应注意以下几点：一、写出应征者的条件，以供征集人挑选。二、在写作的过程中，要注意词汇的使用，包括连接词和一些高级词汇。三、注意不能遗漏要求的要点。四、注意行文连贯。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I have learned from the Internet that you will organize a summer camp for American students in our city and you need some host families. I’d like to apply for it. Please allow me to introduce something about my family.‎ My name is Li Hua, a Senior 3 student and I have been learning English for nearly 10 years. So I have no difficulty communicating with foreign guests in English. Both my parents are good at English, too. They are well-educated and warm-hearted people. Besides, my parents do well in cooking, not only traditional Chinese dishes but also Western food. So my foreign guests can have delicious food in my home. What’s more, our house is big and we have a separate bedroom for foreign guests.‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎13.书面表达 （满25分）‎ 假设你是王平，最近收到英国网友Tom的来信，他在信中询问你对于大学专业的选择问题，请你以王平的名义写一封回信，信中包括：‎ ‎1. 选择专业要根据自己的兴趣、特长；‎ ‎2. 参考别人的意见，不要盲目报考热门专业；‎ ‎3. 希望他能考入理想的大学。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100左右；‎ ‎ 2．文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Tom,‎ I’m glad to hear from you．___________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Wang Ping ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Tom,‎ I’m glad to hear from you. As for the major you will study, I want to give you the following suggestions: Firstly, you should know about your own interest and advantages. Choose what you are really interested in because it will decide your job in the future. Secondly, you can turn to your teachers and parents for help and consider their advice for the reason that they have a better understanding of the majors. What’s more, the so-called “hot majors”and“not–so-hot majors”are relative and "hot majors” might lose their popularity four years later. So you should consider them seriously.‎ Hope you will be admitted to your favorite university.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Wang Ping ‎14.书面表达（满分25分）(改编)‎ 仔细观察右图，根据所看到的图片，描述其所表达的内容，并发表你的感想。‎ 注意：词数100左右。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Look at the picture and you’ll understand how seriously the water is polluted. The two fish have to drink mineral water and pure water to keep alive. Seeing this, we can’t help asking such a question: What will happen if there’s no drinking water available for us?‎ As is known to all, water plays a very important part in our lives. We can’t live without water. Therefore, we must pay much attention to environment protection, especially water protection in order to live in harmony with nature. Otherwise, we’ll regret for what we’ve done sooner or later. After all, our water resources are very limited.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 看图作文在最近几年的高考书面表达中很少出现。但是 看图作文这类题型的特点是：形象、直观、内容具体，且在图画中或图画前面一般还有文字说明，因此考生一般都有话可写，不会写跑题。但在写作时应注意：‎ ‎1．仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或议论文为主。‎ ‎2．确定人称。写记叙文时，如果是以日记的形式来写，一般采用第一人称；如果是以讲故事的形式来写，则一般采用第三人称来写比较方便。写议论文时，一般采用第三人称来写。但不管用哪种人称，全文都必须一致。‎ ‎3．确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁确定文章所要用的时态。要保持全文时态的一致性，个别句子中的特定情况除外。‎ ‎4．发挥联想要合理、适度。这类文章的说明中一般都要求考生作适当的联想和发挥，以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。但一定要根据图画的内容做到联想和发挥合情合理，不能过多地或胡乱联想和发挥。‎ ‎5．明确中心，虚实结合，详略得当。明确图画及文章的中心，对于图画中的内容，该详细叙述、描写的，就必须要详细、具体；可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。绝不拖泥带水。‎ 本篇作文的主题让人们联想到了水污染的问题，如果没有了可饮用的水的话，那么我们赖以生存的基础也就消失了，所以作者在文中强调了水的重要性，同时也呼吁人们保护环境，保护水资源。这些内容在下面的句子中都有体现：As is known to all, water plays a very important part in our lives. We can’t live without water. Therefore, we must pay much attention to environment protection, especially water protection in order to live in harmony with nature. Otherwise, we’ll regret for what we’ve done sooner or later. After all, our water resources are very limited. 此外像Therefore, Otherwise, After all等词语的运用进一步给文章增添了色彩，提高了文章的可读性。‎ ‎15.书面表达(满分30分)‎ 现在各个中学都开始组织学生参与社会实践活动，同学们对此有不同观点。有的学生认为这既可以丰富学生的阅历，又为学生提供了学以致用的机会。而有的学生认为这会耗费太多精力，影响他们的学习。请你以＂My Opinion on Social Practice＂为题，用英语写一篇100—120个词的短文。内容主要包括：‎ ‎1.介绍同学的观点；‎ ‎2.说说你的看法，并阐述理由。‎ 注意：短文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。‎ My Opinion on Social Practice ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ My Opinion on Social Practice Opinions are divided among students on the issue of social practice. Some believe it can enrich students’ experiences and equip them with more knowledge about the society. Besides, it offers them opportunities to apply what they learn in class to practical work.       However, some problems arise if students are engaged in too much social practice. For example, some students put so much effort in it that they cannot set aside much time and energy for study. As a result, they don’t do well in their study, which is not a good effect of social practice. ‎ In my opinion, it is important for students to keep the balance between study and social practice. They should keep study in the first place and hold social practice as an addition. Only in this way can social practice really benefit students. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 文章结构清晰，要点齐全，语言流畅。使用了较高级的词汇，如issue, enrich, equip, apply, be engaged in, set aside, balance, keep…in the first place等；文章恰当地使用了衔接词，如besides, however, for example, as a result等，使上下文衔接紧密；结尾倒装句Only in this way can…的使用也给文章增色不少。‎ ‎16.书面表达 （满25分）‎ 假定你是李华。你的美国朋友Alice给你发了封电子邮件，问你寒假做了些什么，新学期计划怎么做。因为准备开学后的考试，你未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给她回邮件。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 未能及时回复的原因。‎ ‎2．假期外出旅游、阅读书报、复习功课；‎ ‎3．新学期更加努力学习，争取考上北京大学。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.开头和结束语已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Alice,‎ I am very happy to receive your email.____________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Alice I’m very happy to receive your email. I’m really sorry for this late reply.‎ Recently, I’ve been so occupied with an important exam at the beginning of the new term that I failed to reply to your letter in time. As a senior 3 student, I had to devote most of my time to reviewing my lessons during the winter vacation. However, I still managed to spare some time to travel to several places of interest and read books and newspapers to refresh myself.‎ In the new term, I’ll work harder and do my best to make greater progress, hoping to be admitted into Beijing University.‎ All the best wishes. (109)‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 书信类作文是高考的主流文体，在书写有关书信方面的英语作文时,首先要写好开头，注意称呼的使用，如：Mr或Mrs等等。如果开头已给出的话，则需要将重点放在书写正文上。书写正文的时候一定要注意：不要遗漏文中给出的要点。需要先将文中的内容表述清楚，语句要通顺流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误，做到文中语意清楚，简单明了。如有需要的话，可适当增加一些细节，以使表达更加清楚。写作时常运用一般现在时、一般过去时或一般将来时，也可运用一些情态动词。人称要根据内容来定，可使用第一人称也可使用其他人称。在书写时一定要尽可能地得体地使用所学词汇和句型。如能使用一些高级词汇、非谓语，常用的短语和句型，则会给你的文章增添色彩，提高作文的档次，使文章的可读性更强。恰当使用一些连词和插入语，可以使文章表达更加自然、流畅。‎ ‎17.书面表达（满分25分）‎ 世界读书日 (4月23日) 即将到来，针对同学们除教科书外阅读课外图书较少的现状，红星中学决定向同学们发出倡议，号召他们多读书。请你根据以下要点代表红星中学写一篇倡议书。‎ ‎(1) 同学们的读书现状；‎ ‎(2) 读书的好处；‎ ‎(3) 发出倡议。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右。‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Read More Books Dear schoolmates,‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Hongxing Middle School ‎【参考范文】‎ ‎ Read More Books Dear schoolmates,‎ As we know, books are our best friends. They’re the nutrient of the whole world and the ladders to progress. However, nowadays, because of various reasons, many students seldom read except for their textbooks. They haven’t realized the importance of reading.‎ Reading is beneficial to us in many aspects. By reading, we can gain knowledge and broaden our outlook. Reading also helps us improve ourselves and reduce stress. Additionally, reading will make us wise and promote the friendship between us and others.‎ Let's start from now on. To improve ourselves and have a bright future, we should make full use of time to read more books.‎ ‎ Hongxing Middle School ‎18.书面表达(满分25分)‎ 假设你是李华，你的笔友Peter最近染上了吸烟的坏习惯，请你写一封邮件对他进行劝告。内容包含以下两个方面：‎ ‎1. 吸烟的危害；‎ ‎2. 提出建议。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100词左右；‎ ‎ 2. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。‎ Dear Peter,‎ I am sorry to hear that you have fallen into the habit of smoking.____________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Looking forward to your good news. ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua 答案：‎ Dear Peter,‎ ‎ I am sorry to hear that you have fallen into the habit of smoking. In my opinion, you’d better give it up as soon as possible.‎ ‎ The reason why you quit smoking is that smoking is a major contributing factor to many diseases. It does not only damage to your health but also harm to the non-smokers around you. What’s more, smoking is a waste of money and may even cause fires. ‎ ‎ Here are the ways that can help you. Firstly, decide on a day to quit and be determined, but don’t choose a stressful day. Secondly, do some relaxation exercises every time you feel stressed. Thirdly, don’t be afraid to ask others for help when necessary.‎ ‎ Looking forward to your good news.‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎19.书面表达 （满25分）‎ 假如你是一中的李华，你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生Martin想来中国旅游，你向他推荐了西安市，请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。‎ ‎1.自我介绍；‎ ‎2.推荐理由：历史悠久、景色优美、文化丰富、市民友好、小吃多样；‎ ‎3.你的祝愿。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100左右；‎ ‎ 2．文章的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Martin,‎ I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum._______________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Martin,‎ ‎ I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Xi’an．‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua, a student from No.1 Middle School, good at Chinese geography and history. When it comes to ‎ ‎ traveling in China, Xi’an is a popular tourist destination. First of all, Xi’an is not only a city with a long history ‎ ‎ but also has many places of interest,where you can enjoy yourself.Second, people in Xi’an are friendly, kind, ‎ ‎ and willing to help others,which can make your visit comfortable and pleasant.Third, you can ‎ have a chance to ‎ ‎ experience different cultures and enjoy various delicious snacks in Xi’an. In addition, I’d like to serve as your ‎ ‎ guide if you come．‎ ‎ I do hope that you will have a good time in China．‎ ‎ Best wishes!‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎ 书信类作文是高考的主流文体，在写作时要注意称呼的使用，如：Mr或Mrs等等。如果开头已给出的话，则需要将重点放在正文上。书写正文的时候一定要注意：不要遗漏文中给出的要点：1.自我介绍；2.推荐西安市的理由：历史悠久、景色优美、文化丰富、市民友好、小吃多样；3.你的祝愿。需要先将文中的内容表述清楚，语句要通顺流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误，做到文中语意清楚，简单明了。根据文章内容可适当增加一些细节，以使表达更加顺畅。写作前还要根据内容判断确定时态和人称。尽可能地得体地使用所学词汇和句型。如能使用一些高级词汇、常用的短语和高级句式，则会给文章增添色彩，提高作文的档次。恰当使用一些连词和插入语，可以使文章表达更加自然、流畅。‎ ‎20.书面表达（满分25分）(改编)‎ 我们每个人都有自己的愿望和梦想，请你以“My Wish”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括：‎ ‎1．自己的愿望；‎ ‎2．说明理由；‎ ‎3．如何才能实现自己的愿望。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数：100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ My Wish ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ My Wish Everyone has his own wishes. As for me, my wish is to be an inventor when I grow up. There are two reasons for my choice. For one thing, as a man with rich imagination, I’m curious about everything and wonder how it works. Therefore, in my spare time, I’ve been trying to design some inventions. For another, I hope that my inventions can improve the quality of everybody’s life and bring great convenience to them.‎ However, it’s not an easy thing to be an inventor; it needs hard work. So from now on I must study hard and try to solve practical problems using new solutions. I’m convinced that if I try my best, nothing is impossible. And I’m sure that my wish will come true one day.‎ ‎ ‎