【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题应用文体之七（7页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题应用文体之七（7页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达专题应用文体之七 ‎ ‎[一]‎ 假如你是张华，你的外国朋友Tom给你写了一封信，谈了他观看残奥会(the Paralympic Games)的感想。请你结合以下要点用英语给他写一封回信，和他交流一下你观看残奥会后的感受。要点如下：‎ ‎1．残奥运动员乐观向上的生活态度值得我们学习；‎ ‎2．残奥运动员顽强拼搏的精神值得我们钦佩；‎ ‎3．作为健康人，我们更应该珍惜这种幸运，热爱生活。‎ 佳作欣赏 Dear Tom，‎ I’m very glad to receive your letter. You said you were deeply touched by those players’ excellent performance while watching the Paralympic Games. So was I.‎ At first，I was moved by the disabled players’ optimistic attitude towards life. Although they are not as healthy as normal people，they still love life wholeheartedly. They try to realize their dreams by doing sports. In order to win the games，they have to work much harder than healthy people. However，they never give up. That is what we should learn from them.‎ Being healthy people，we are so lucky and we should cherish what we own and try our best to live a meaningful life. Don’t you think so?‎ Yours，‎ Zhang Hua 名师点睛 本篇习作结构比较清晰，使用词汇恰当准确，全文有整体性也比较连贯。作者使用了比较丰富的词汇，如touch，excellent performance，optimistic attitude，wholeheartedly等；同时还成功地使用了一些较高级的句式，如倒装句、让步状语从句和表语从句等。这些都体现了作者对词汇和句式有较好的运用能力。‎ ‎[二]‎ 假如你是李华，你所在的地区有一座古墓，墓内墙上绘有多幅反映当时人们生活的壁画，具有很高的艺术价值。但是，近年来，每天都有很多游人前来参观，空气污染对壁画正在造成破坏。请你就此写一封信，呼吁有关部门采取措施，保护这一文化遗迹。信中要包括以下信息：‎ ‎1．说明写信的目的；‎ ‎2．介绍墓壁的情况；‎ ‎3．提出具体的建议。‎ 佳作欣赏 Dear Sir or Madam，‎ I’m writing to inform you of a newly discovered ancient tomb in our city.‎ It was built in the late Tang Dynasty. On the walls of the tomb are many paintings，which show us how people at that time lived. The wall paintings are of great value. But I am worried about them because some of them are damaged by air pollution，which comes from visitors who come in every day.‎ I think some measures should be taken immediately. For example，we should put glass walls in front of the paintings. Second，the number of visitors should be limited. And we should build a website where people can look at the pictures and paintings of the tomb. Only in this way can we protect the tomb properly.‎ Looking forward to hearing from you.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua 名师点睛 作者充分利用写作提示进行了语言的组织和运用。作者首先表明了自己的身份，然后提出本文话题，最后阐述了自己的建议。文章符合写作要求，基本完成了写作任务。文中作者使用了较为高级的词汇和句式，如inform sb.of sth.，be of great value，take measures，look forward to等以及倒装句、定语从句、原因状语从句等。这些词汇和句式的使用表明作者具有一定的语言运用能力。‎ ‎[三]‎ 请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物。‎ 姓名：Allan Stewart 国籍：澳大利亚 出生日期：1915年3月7日 世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大 学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。‎ 第一个学位：1936年获得 第二个学位：医学博士 第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。‎ 第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。‎ 参考词汇：硕士学位master’s degree；博士doctor 佳作欣赏 Here is a legendary Australian named Allan Stewart，who was born on March 7,1915.He holds such an amazing attitude towards learning that one is never too old to challenge oneself. He has attained 4 degrees，the first of which was obtained in 1936.After getting his second ‎ degree，Doctor of Medicine，Mr. Stewart decided to take up law in his eighties and in 2006 he succeeded in winning his third degree，which led him to set a world record of being the oldest holder of a master’s degree.He was awarded the fourth degree in 2012 by learning online. And he earned praise from his teachers for making good use of his study time in a proper and reasonable manner.‎ 名师点睛 本文有机整合题目所提供的信息，通过简朴的语言和合理的行文顺序把写作要点准确地表达出来。文中过去分词短语作定语、定语从句等高级句式和诸如never too old to...，take up，succeed in doing...，set a world record，make good use of等短语的综合运用，使得语言富于变化，增强了文章的表达效果。‎ ‎[四]‎ 假设你是高三学生李华。你所在学校的英语协会将于十月三十号举办一场英语演讲比赛，请根据以下要点写一则英文通知，呼吁大家踊跃报名参加。‎ 要点如下：‎ ‎1．参加群体：高三年级全体学生；‎ ‎2．报名截止日期：十月十八号；‎ ‎3．比赛奖励：前三名由学校颁发荣誉证书；‎ ‎4．举办目的：激发大家学习英语的兴趣。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：荣誉证书certificate of honor 参考范文 NOTICE Dear students，are you eager to speak in public and be surrounded by applause？If your answer is yes，the English Association will help you realize your dream. With the aim of boosting our passion for English learning，an English speech contest is going to be held on October 30th.All Senior Three students are welcome to participate，and should sign up for it at the English Association office. The deadline is October 18th.The top three students in the contest will be presented with certificates of honor from the school. The contest is guaranteed to be enjoyable and rewarding for all its participants. Please join us!‎ The English Association ‎[五]‎ ‎4月20日，你省某市发生了强烈地震，造成很大损失，学校号召全体师生向灾区捐款。请你拟一份发言稿，在学校捐款动员大会上使用。发言稿主要内容应包括：‎ ‎1．对灾区情况的简单介绍(包括地震发生的时间、地点、造成的财产和人员损失等)；‎ ‎2．捐款的意义(帮助灾区人民渡过难关、帮助灾区重建)；‎ ‎3．如何捐款(自愿、多少不限、以班级为单位，收齐后交到学校红十字会)。‎ 佳作欣赏 Dear teachers and students，‎ As we all know，a terrible earthquake happened in a city of our province on April 20，in which many buildings were destroyed and many people were injured.‎ In order to help the earthquake victims to go through the hard times and rebuild their hometown，the school has called on everyone in our school，including both teachers and students，to donate money to the earthquakestriken area. This donation is voluntary. You can give away however much you want to. The money will be collected by each class before it is handed to the Red Cross Society of our school.‎ We hope that everyone will be kind enough to do what you can to help our fellowmen out of the difficulty.‎ Thank you.‎ 名师点睛 这篇发言稿思路清晰、语言准确。在行文过程中较多地运用了高级句式，如第一段中含有两个定语从句；第二段中的however引导的宾语从句、before引导的时间状语从句等。同时像go through，call on sb.to do...，give away，be kind enough to do，out of the difficulty等高级词汇的运用也使文章添彩。‎ ‎[六]‎ 假设你参加了某国际旅行团的意大利三市游(罗马—佛罗伦萨—威尼斯)。今天你参观的是佛罗伦萨。请根据下面表格提示，写一篇游记。‎ 参观城市及景点介绍 佛罗伦萨位于……‎ 米开朗基罗广场、大卫塑像、乌菲兹美术馆……‎ 参观感受及旅游计划 敬仰古代伟大的艺术家……‎ 准备明天进行下一城市的参观(威尼斯)‎ 佳作欣赏 Oct.4th，FridayFine Here I am in Florence，a worldfamous tourist city in the middle of Italy. It is not only the most famous cultural art center in Europe，but also the home of the Renaissance. Firstly，I came to the Piazzale Michelangelo，from where I looked over the beautiful sights of the whole city. Then，standing in the middle of the square is the sculpture of David，which is the symbol of the city. I couldn’t help showing my respect to the ancient artists. At last，I came to the Uffizi Gallery，where a lot of artworks are displayed by great artists.‎ I am so attracted by them that I really want to stay here for a few more days. However，I must leave for Venice，another famous city in Italy tomorrow morning.‎ 名师点睛 写作中作者能够灵活地运用所学单词和短语，如in the middle of，couldn’t help doing，show one’s respect to，display，be attracted by，leave for，not only...but also...以及定语从句、倒装句、结果状语从句等高级表达方式，同时，一些过渡词汇，如firstly，then，at last，however等的使用，使行文流畅，衔接自然。‎ ‎[七]‎ 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。‎ ‎1．表达你给她提供帮助的意愿；‎ ‎2．说明你能胜任辅导的理由；‎ ‎3．给出讲好普通话的两点建议；‎ ‎4．提出你学习英语的具体需求。‎ 佳作欣赏 Hi Sharon，‎ This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.‎ I think I can help you with Mandarin. In my class my Mandarin is the best，and I won the first prize in a contest last month. Besides，I often teach my English teacher who comes from America Mandarin in my spare time.‎ If you want to speak Mandarin well. First，you should read more and watch more Chinese TV programmes. Second，you should often talk with Chinese people so that you can improve your oral Chinese. In this way I think you can make great progress in your Mandarin.‎ I’m glad that you can also help me with my English. It is just what I want. We can communicate in both English and Chinese. I’m free on weekends，so we can contact at that time. I’m eager to improve my oral English. I think I can improve it with your help.‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Xia 名师点睛 本文内容充实，要点完整，层次分明，条理清楚，用词准确。作者能用变化多样的句式表达出所有要点，具有较强的信息整合能力。本文出现的高级词汇：the best，besides，be eager to，with one’s help等，及文章中的高级句式：定语从句、结果状语从句、表语从句等，都让文章增色不少。‎ ‎[八]‎ 假如你校要举办一次主题为“How to communicate with friends？”的英语演讲比赛，请 你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：‎ ‎1．尊重并信任朋友；‎ ‎2．常与朋友聊天；‎ ‎3．换位思考问题。‎ 佳作欣赏 Hello，everyone！As we all know，friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow. It’s necessary to keep a good relationship with them. Here are my ideas on how to communicate with friends.‎ Firstly，we should respect and trust our friends. Don’t be rude to them even if they offend you on some occasions. Secondly，if we often communicate with them，our friendship will be strengthened. Thirdly，if sometimes we don’t agree with each other over some minor things，we should try to put ourselves in their shoes.‎ Thank you for listening.‎ 名师点睛 本文简明扼要，要点齐全，信息丰富，条理清晰。适当插入了连接词，如firstly，secondly，thirdly，使文章层次分明；并且作者适当增加了细节，使得文章行文连贯，内容充实。文章使用了多种句式结构，如定语从句、it作形式主语、“疑问词＋不定式”作宾语、让步状语从句、条件状语从句等，避免了句式单一；同时使用了高级词汇，如share our happiness and sorrow，keep a good relationship with，be rude to，on some occasions，communicate with，put sb.in one’s shoes等，增加了文章亮点，提高了文章档次。‎ ‎[九]‎ 假如你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手Justin Bieber(贾斯汀·比伯)下个月将到你们市演出。近日你准备和几个朋友成立Justin Bieber的歌迷俱乐部。请你给你的加拿大笔友Freddy发一封email，表明你们喜欢Justin Bieber的理由，并希望Freddy就如何办好歌迷俱乐部提供一些建议。‎ 佳作欣赏 Dear Freddy，‎ I’m glad to tell you that Justin Bieber，my favorite singer，will come to our city to perform next month.‎ I’m so pleased at the news that I decide to form a Justin Bieber fan club with some of my friends recently. All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic! His songs make us feel the true love. We can sing most of his songs and would like to know more about him. But we don’t know what we should do，and where we can pick up some useful information about him and his performing plans. Could you give us some advice?‎ Look forward to your reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 名师点睛 本文要点齐全，逻辑清晰。第一段交代写作内容：Justin Bieber下个月将来演出；第二段作者提出了计划以及对Justin Bieber及其歌曲的看法并提出了要求；第三段提出期望。 行文中作者正确熟练地运用了be pleased at，pick up，look forward to等一些高级词汇及so...that...引导的结果状语从句、宾语从句和祈使句等句式，增强了文章的可读性。‎ ‎[十]‎ 假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习，你计划寒假期间和朋友在当地旅行，请写一封email向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。内容应包括：‎ ‎1．旅行信息(如景点、费用等)；‎ ‎2．当地特色(如食品、风俗等)；‎ ‎3．注意事项。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Sir or Madam，‎ I’m Li Hua，a Chinese student studying in New Zealand.I’m writing to ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Sincerely yours，‎ Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Sir or Madam，‎ I’m Li Hua，a Chinese student studying in New Zealand.I’m writing to ask for information about your agency’s New Zealand’s travel for the winter vacation.‎ My friend and I plan to travel in the country.Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes? As we know，New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these.Besides，I am also interested in the local food and customs there.How much do I have to pay for the travel? At last，are there other things I should be aware of?‎ I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.‎ Sincerely yours，‎ Li Hua