2019届高考英语二轮书面表达高分练兵场：（8）应用文写作-倡议书

2019届高考英语二轮书面表达高分练兵场：（8）应用文写作-倡议书

应用文写作-倡议书 ‎1 假设你是遂宁某中学高三学生,你校正开展读书月活动,请你就读书的好处写一篇倡议书,号召同学积极阅读,内容包括:‎ ‎1. 阅读开阔视野、开启智慧;‎ ‎2. 阅读能帮助提升个人魅力;‎ ‎3. 阅读能培养知识和技能。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数:100词左右;‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。‎ Hello,everyone,‎ ‎    As we all know, books are the lamps lighting the road ahead.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎2、近年来,随着网络的普及,学生的汉字书写能力下降。为了保护传统民族文化—汉字,校学生会提出倡议。请你根据以下内容提示,以学生会的名义为你校的同学们写一封英文倡议书。‎ ‎ 1. 少上网,多读书;‎ ‎ 2. 养成练书写和写日记的习惯;‎ ‎ 3. 自拟一项其他方面的倡议内容(比如:背诵国学经典)‎ 注意:短文词数不少于100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)‎ 参考词汇:汉字 Chinese characters   国学经典 national cultural classics Dear friends,‎ In recent years, many of us have spent a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Student’s Union ‎3、假设你是李明,最近你校的一份英语报纸正在校园出现的“涂鸦”现象开展讨论。请你根据以下要点写一篇倡议书。‎ 主要内容包括:‎ ‎(1)“涂鸦”丑陋难看。‎ ‎(2)公共建筑物不是表达观点、感情的地方。‎ ‎(3)禁止“涂鸦”。‎ 参考词汇:graffiti n. 涂鸦,(在墙上的)乱涂乱写  vandalism n. 对公共财物的有意破坏 Dear Editor,‎ Recently graffiti has become more noticeable in my school.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,‎ Li Ming ‎4、目前,电子产品已经成为我们日常生活的一部分,从而导致学生的汉字书写能力降低。为了保护传统民族文化——汉字,校学生会提出倡议。请你根据以下内容提示,以学生会的名义为你校的同学们写一封英文倡议书。‎ 内容要点:1. 多读书,勤记笔记;‎ ‎2. 养成练书写和写日记的习惯;‎ ‎3. 自拟一项其他方面的倡议内容。‎ 注意:词数100左右。‎ 参考词汇:汉字 Chinese character ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎5、假如你叫李华,是校学生会主席。最近,你校学生会发起了一个名为”杜绝校园浪费,倡导低碳生活”的主题活动,要求同学们在日常生活中减少浪费,实现低碳生活。‎ 请你代表学生会写一个倡议书,内容包括:‎ ‎1.列举校园存在的浪费现象;‎ ‎2.低碳生活的必要性:‎ ‎3.提出倡议。‎ 注意:词数100左右。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎6、为弘扬雷锋精神,你所在的某外国语学校决定开展一系列志愿服务活动。假如你是该校学生会主席。请用英语在校报上写一封倡议书,号召同学们加入你校的志愿者俱乐部。‎ 内容包括:‎ ‎1.当志愿者的好处;‎ ‎2.给出具体的几点倡议。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数80左右;‎ ‎2. 开头已给出,但不计人总词数;‎ ‎3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ Dear fellow students,‎ In order to carry forward Lei Feng spirit, we are ready to carry out a series of voluntary activities. ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎7、目前,中国已经进入汽车社会,越来越多的汽车正走进寻常百姓家.但是有些驾驶员的素质令人担忧,他们的所作所为严重危害了自己和他人的安全.这种现象与社会的发展极不协调.请你以李华的身份,结合下列几点写一封倡议书,倡议所有驾驶员做"中国好司机"。主要内容包括: ‎ 简单描述以上现象;  2.你的建议: 1)严格遵守交通规则; 2)不隔窗抛物; 3)礼让他人,不闯红灯.  注意:‎ 词数100左右  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;  3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数. 参考词汇:规则 regulations      让路give way to;       闯红灯run the red light Dear drivers,        At present,more and more cars have entered the homes of ordinary people.‎ ‎ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely, ‎ Li Hua ‎8、建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生,我们更应该珍惜自己的生命,注意自己的人身安全。假如你是李华,并担任校学生会主席,请你就安全问题,向全校学生发出倡议,写一封安全倡议书。‎ 内容提示:(1)不带管制刀具到学校;‎ ‎                 (2)不私自下河洗澡;‎ ‎                 (3)不打架;‎ ‎                 (4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;‎ ‎                 (5)遇紧急情况,立即报告警察或老师。‎ 参考词汇:管制刀具:restricted knives or things;洗澡:have a bath;打架:fight;紧急情况:emergency;交通安全:pay attention to the traffic safety。‎ 写作要求:(1)用词恰当,要点全面,层次清晰,书写规范 ‎                 (2)可适当发挥,100词左右。‎ Dear students,‎ ‎    As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours ‎ LiHua ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1答案及解析：‎ 答案： Hello,everyone,‎ ‎    As we all know, books are the lamps lighting the road ahead. Books are also the bridges connecting the lands apart.In deed , reading is really of great importance for us.‎ ‎    First of all, reading can broaden our vision, making us a full man and a wise man. Just as an old saying goes, books are the ever-burning lamps of accumulated wisdom. Besides, reading can cultivate our taste and improve our personal charm.What’s more, through reading we can also learn some skills and reading can help us get a good job. In a word, reading is to our mind what food is to our body.‎ ‎    Action speaks louder than words. Now let's begin to read!‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear friends,‎ ‎    In recent years, many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity. As a result, we don't write as well as we did in the past. In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting, we'd like to offer some suggestions:‎ ‎    We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books. We'd better form the habit if keeping diaries every day to practice handwriting. Besides, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than sent e-mails. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students. So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future.‎ ‎    Let's take action now! ‎ Student’s Union ‎ ‎ ‎3答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Editor,‎ ‎    Recently graffiti has become more noticeable in my school. I feel quite annoyed at them, especially when some of my classmates praise them as a kind of so-called art. Confronted with this impolite phenomenon, I can’t help asking myself: what is wrong with today’s teenagers?‎ In my opinion, graffiti is a form of vandalism. They are a mess and are ugly to look at. Meanwhile, walls are public places, and they should not be used to express personal views and feelings.‎ ‎    I really think vandalism should be stopped, and those who refuse to stop this bad practice should be punished. We should clear away these ugly expressions and drawings so that our school may return to its true self--a clean, quiet place for both learning and teaching.‎ Yours,‎ Li Ming ‎ ‎ ‎4答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear friends,‎ ‎    In recent years, with the popularity of digital devices, students pay little attention to their handwriting. As a result, their handwriting is not so good as it was in the past. In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly, we’d like to offer some suggestions.‎ ‎    Firstly, spend less time online so that we can have more time to read and take notes. Moreover, we’d better form the habit of practicing handwriting and keeping diaries every day. Besides, it is better to write to our relatives and friends rather than send e-mails. As the saying goes, “The style is the man.” Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students. So please attach great importance to our handwriting in future.‎ ‎    Let’s take action now!‎ Students’ Council ‎ ‎ ‎5答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear fellow students,‎ ‎    As everybody can see, some resources are being wasted in our school. The lights are on during the day in some classrooms. Water taps are left running after washing. In the canteen, some students throw away he food just because they don’t like it.‎ ‎    I think it is high time that we should stop wasting and live a low-carbon life because many people go hungry and energy crisis is getting worse in the world. So I make the following suggestions: First, let’s turn off the lights and the water taps when we don’t use them. Second, we’d better eat up the food we buy. Last but not least, we should form the habit of recycling waste.‎ ‎    Dear friends, it we take action now, we can make a big difference to the whole world.‎ Students’ Union ‎ ‎ ‎6答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ 高分范文 Dear fellow students,‎ ‎    In order to carry forward Lei Feng spirit, we are ready to carry out a series of voluntary activities. Volunteering has a positive effect on our community. It can bring measurable benefits to the individuals, groups, organizations, and communities at large. Firstly, volunteering can help us understand society better. Secondly, teering can provide us with a good chance to school.‎ ‎    I sincerely hope that more and more students will join the volunteer club of our school. Let’s shoulder the responsibilities as volunteers for the old and disabled people around us.‎ ‎    Remember, we can make a difference to society if we are willing to lend a helping hand, so let's take action.‎ Students, Union 标准范文 Dear fellow students,‎ ‎    In order to carry forward Lei Feng spirit, we are ready to carry out a series of voluntary activities. Volunteering has a positive effect on our community. It can benefit us in several ways.‎ ‎ First of all, volunteering can help us learn more about society and gain valuable experience. Secondly, volunteering provides us with a good opportunity to put what we have learned to good use. Finally I hope more and more students will join the volunteer club of our school.‎ ‎    Let's express concern for the old and disabled people around us and offer a helping hand. Let’s clean the parks near our home. Let’s go to nursing homes to bring love to those in need.‎ ‎    Let’s take action.‎ Students’ Union ‎(91 words)‎ 解析：‎ 审题分析 ‎1. 倡议书的对象是fellow students,而阐述的事实是 volunteering,故以第一、三人称为主;‎ ‎2. 叙述的事实与现在信息相关,故以一般现在时为基本时态, 辅之以一般将来时;‎ ‎3. 将已知的信息进行整合,叙述简洁明了,但因为是倡议书,故又要庄重严肃;‎ ‎4. 可调整所给汉语提示的先后顺序,但不可直接逐条翻译;‎ ‎5. 要注意条理清楚,行文连贯。‎ 思路点拨 ‎1. 在所给出的首句之后,直接切入正题;‎ ‎2. 很自然地衔接:号召同学们加入你校的志愿者俱乐部;‎ ‎3. 阐述当志愿者的好处;‎ ‎4. 给出具体的几点倡议,如为我们周围的老人提供帮助等;‎ ‎5. —起积极地行动起来;‎ ‎6. 写作时,注意层次感的充分展现,即条理清晰、脉络分明。‎ 高分范文揭秘 本篇习作格式正确,语言地道,众多的高级句式被作者运用得恰到好处,如what及that引导的宾语从句、if引导的条件状语从句等。另外,以第一人称为主叙述表达,纷繁而不凌乱。确实是一篇好文章。本题满分15分,本文得14分。‎ 标准范文精彩点评 ‎1. 本篇习作运用了一些高级句式结构。如what引导的宾语从句、省略that的宾语从句、祈使句等。‎ ‎2. 时态把握准确到位。‎ ‎3. 高级词汇的大量使用也使文章增色不少。如:benefit sb. in several ways, help sb. learn more about society, gain valuable experience, provide sb. with sth.等。‎ ‎4. 过渡语的使用让文章逻辑性更缜密,层次感更强。如first of all,secondly,finally等。总之,这确实是一篇佳作。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎7答案及解析：‎ 答案：Dear drivers,‎ ‎    At present,more and more cars have entered the homes of ordinary people.But what worries us a lot is some drivers'bad quality.(高分句型一) Their behavior harms the safety of others and themselves.This phenomenon is against the development of our society.Then,I haveome ideas for you to be good drivers.(简单的介绍了现今社会中存在的司机不文明的现象并提出文明驾车)‎ ‎    First,all of us must obey the traffic regulations.Second,youshouldn't throw things out of the car window.Some cleaners are hit bythe passing cars and die per year while they are picking up the things that  you have thrown away(高分句型二).Next,give way topassers-by politely at the cross-roads and you mustn't run the redlight.Last but not least,always remember:your families are waiting foryou at home.(讲述了为什么要文明驾车)‎ ‎     I really hope all the drivers can take action from now on and try tobe good Chinese drivers.(自己的陈述)  ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎8答案及解析：‎ 答案：    Dear students,As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic safety on our way to ‎ school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safety rules above can make us live in peace. ‎ Yours Lihua ‎ ‎