2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十四：如何使写好求助信

2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十四：如何使写好求助信

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十四：如何使写好求助信 ‎ [题型技法]‎ 写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[典例悟法]‎ ‎(2016•全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 满分范文 Dear Ms Jenkins，‎ I'm Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I'm not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please ‎ spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. I'd be most grateful if you could do me the favor.‎ I'm looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 范文赏析 ‎(1)文章开篇自我介绍并表明写信意图。随后说明求助的具体内容(请对方帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式)。最后表达希望和感激。‎ ‎(2)范文中使用了大量亮点词汇和句型，如therefore关系明确，因果适当，不但使上下文融会贯通，而且突出了写信目的。Would you please do ...？是请求别人帮助的句型，用得恰到好处，符合说话者的身份；过去分词attached作定语，使句子更加简练地道，增加了文章的可读性。Would you mind doing ...？不同的句式表达了相同的意思，避免了表达形式的单一化，语气委婉。这是文章提档次的句子。most grateful道出了作者希望得到帮助的迫切和感激之情，也展示了作者较高的语言运用能力。‎ ‎[增分佳句]‎ ‎1．求助信开头常用语 ‎①My name is ...I'm writing to you for some help.‎ 我叫……，我写信是向你寻求一些帮助。‎ ‎②I'm writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.‎ 我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。‎ ‎③I have some difficulty in doing ...which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.‎ 我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。‎ ‎④Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to ask you for help.面对如此多的困难，我不得不向你求助。‎ ‎2．寻求帮助常用语 ‎①I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。‎ ‎②I wonder how to deal with the problem.‎ 我想知道如何解决这个问题。‎ ‎3．求助信结尾常用语 ‎①I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.‎ 我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。‎ ‎②I will appreciate any of your help.‎ 我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。‎ ‎③I would greatly appreciate your timely help.‎ 我将非常感激你及时的帮助。‎ ‎[热点押题]‎ 假定你是高中生李华，你们学校要在3月10日举办英语配音比赛(dubbing contest)。你想参赛，但是不知道该选什么电影。你给笔 友Peter写一封邮件，请他给你推荐一部电影。内容包括：‎ ‎1．主题是关于友谊； ‎ ‎2．时间限定在4到5分钟； ‎ ‎3．每个节目最多6个角色。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear Peter，‎ How is everything going？I am writing to you, hoping to seek for help.‎ Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on March 10th.I am eager to have a try.However, I don't know which film is suitable.As a movie fan, would you be so kind as to give me some recommendations? According to the requirements, the theme should be about friendship.And each video may last 4 to 5 minutes.What's more, there should not be more than six characters in each video.‎ I would really appreciate it if you could do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua