2019届二轮复习高考短文改错技巧指导-课件（24张）

2019届二轮复习高考短文改错技巧指导-课件（24张）

2019届二轮复习 高考短文改错解题技巧指导  本题满分10分，给出一篇约100个单词的短文， 文中有10处错误，要求考生对每个句子进行判断， 如有错误即将其改正。错误类型包括词法、句法、 行文逻辑等方面的错误。   What is proof reading? How to correct a passage  下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改 某个单词。  增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加 的词。  删除 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。不计分。  修改 在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。  注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2、只允许修改10处，多者（丛第11处起）不计分  How to correct the mistakes. 1.以改动一词为原则. 2.以改变实词形式为原则. 3.以单词形式变化最小为原则. 4.以添加或删除虚词为原则. 5.以多“改正”少“添删”为原则． 五原则 ①标点符号不改。 ②大小写不改。 ③词序错误不改。 ④单词拼写不改 。 四不改: 高考短文改错应试答题原则 How can we do well in proof reading? Some skills The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 1. what 3.taking 6.our 4.and 8.can 2.choose 7.knowledge 9.think 10.much 5.the 题号 考点 错误改正 1 连词 how→what 2 动词 chose→choose 3 动词 take→taking 4 连词 but→and 5 冠词 about后面加the 6 代词 your→our 7 名词 knowledges→knowledge 8 动词 can→should或去掉can 9 动词 thought→think 10 形容词 many→much 2016·全国卷Ⅲ错误点归纳  1.名词(Noun)(advice/ suggestions)  2.冠词(Article) (a/ the/ an)  3.代词(Pronoun) (my/me/myself/we/us…)  4.介词（Preposition）(suffer from…)  5.形容词和副词（Adjective and Adverb）  6.动词(Verb)  7.连词 （Conjunction)(and/but/so/that/which…) 8.逻辑（Logical meaning） The types of mistakes 1. I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was    going to  school. The smell from it was very  good（2011•全国卷I） 高考链接1： 3.Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice  and lively. （2011•重庆卷） 2.It was a wonderful surprise as nothing like that   had ever been happened to us. (2012·浙江样卷)  动 词 held is 1.动词的时态      2语态错误.      3. 主、谓不一致的错误。        4. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire,have  our barbecue. （2014·陕西卷) 5. My grandmother used to holding me on her  knees and sing old songs. （2013•全国卷） 高考链接1： 动 词 having hold 1.动词的时态      2语态错误.      3. 主、谓不一致的错误。      4.非谓语动词的误用  2. He should follow which the doctor suggested. which 1. It turned out to be her own cup, that  she’d left on  the shelf by mistake. (2010·陕西卷) what 3. She was about to leave while she noticed an  old man standing at the corner.  when 1.  定语从句（关系代词/副词的误用）  2. 名词性从句（连接代词/副词/从属连 词的混用）  3.状语从句（引导词的误用） 连词 高考链接2： 1.Fortunately, I failed to pass the exam and I felt  very sad. 2.If you’d like to make a trip to my city some  day, I will be better than happy to be your guide               （2011•全国卷II） 3.I have to take up a part-time job because my  family is rich enough. 行文逻辑 not more Unfortunately 高考链接3：  1.名词(Noun)(advice/ suggestions)  2.冠词(Article) (a/ the/ an)  3.代词(Pronoun) (my/me/myself/we/us…)  4.介词（Preposition）(suffer from…)  5.形容词和副词（Adjective and Adverb）  6.动词(Verb)  7.连词 （Conjunction)(and/but/so/that/which…)  8.逻辑（Logical meaning） The types of mistakes Tense/ Voice/V-ing, V-ed, to+V. 并列句/定语从句/名词性从句/状语从句 动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副 非谓语，细辨别 介词短语要记住 A Limerick（打油诗） 代词格，细领悟 句子成分弄清楚 冠词连词常光顾 逻辑错误须关注 How can we do well in proof reading? 2.A good knowledge of English (Grammar & fixed expressions) 3.More practice 1.Some skills Spider-man:Homecoming come out on the Chinese mainland on September 8.Parker are someone most of us that can relate to, whatever our age. He is the nervous high school student, unsure of herself both inside and outside of school. He is even made fun with by some guy. Although he often makes mistakes, but he is always ready save the world, as we can see in the movie’s much fight scenes. It is in these battles which Parker has both high and low moments. 1. came 3. a 6.guys 4.himself 8.to 2.is 7.but 9.many 10.that We are specialists! 2015·全国卷Ⅰ When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I thought I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in the countryside. There the air is clean and the mountains are green. Unfortunately, with the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very serious problem. The air we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Many rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect our environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.  1.名词(Noun)(advice/ suggestions)  2.冠词(Article) (a/ the/ an)  3.代词(Pronoun) (my/me/myself/we/us…)  4.介词（Preposition）(suffer from…)  5.形容词和副词（Adjective and Adverb）  6.动词(Verb) 7.连词（Conjunction)(and/but/so/that/which…) 8.逻辑（Logical meaning） The types of mistakes Tense/ Voice/V-ing, V-ed, to+V. 并列句/定语从句/名词性从句/状语从句 We are specialists! 2015·全国卷Ⅰ When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I thought I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in the countryside. There the air is clean and the mountains are green. Unfortunately, with the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very serious problem. The air we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Many rare animals are dying out. We must find ways to protect our environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it. We are specialists! 2015·全国卷Ⅰ When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it. 题号 考点 错误改正 1 动词(时态） think→thought 2 冠词 countryside前加the 3 连词 or→and 4 介词 on→with 5 动词(语态） been 6 副词 seriously→serious 7 名词 airs→air 8 形容词 Much→Many 9 动词 found→find 10 代词 your→our/the 2015·全国卷Ⅰ错误点归纳 How can we do well in proof reading? 2.A good knowledge of English (Grammar & fixed expressions) 3.More practice 1.Some skills Practice makes perfect! Thank you !