【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达普通书信电子邮件(一)写作指导例析（3页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达普通书信电子邮件(一)写作指导例析（3页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达普通书信/电子邮件(一)写作指导例析 某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容应包括：‎ ‎1．你最喜欢的季节；‎ ‎2．你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如：气候、景色、活动、感受……)。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．题目已为你写好；‎ ‎3．行文连贯，语篇完整；‎ ‎4．文中不得透露个人真实信息。‎ The Season I Like Best ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎[四步写作]‎ 一、定人称、定时态，审题快而不偏 人称以第一人称为主，主要时态用现在时 二、列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 ‎1．你最喜欢的季节 最喜欢的 favorite ‎2．你喜欢该季节的两条理由 ‎①精力充沛 full_of_energy ‎②让某人完全自由 lead_sb._to_full_freedom 三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 ‎1．在一年的四个季节中，夏天是我最喜欢的，它让我自由、兴奋和充满活力。‎ Among the four seasons in a year, summer is my favorite, which makes me free, ‎ excited and energetic. ‎ ‎2．每年，当我们学生的暑假来临时，我们可以做在学校期间不能做的一切。‎ When summer vacation for us students comes every year, we can do all that we can’t do during our school time.‎ ‎3．夏天让我精力充沛，我感觉我有力量去做我一生中最困难的事情。‎ Summer makes me full of energy and I feel I have the strength to do the most difficult thing in my life.‎ 四、衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用furthermore, in a word 等衔接词串句成文 The Season I Like Best Among the four seasons in a year, summer is my favorite, which makes me free, excited and energetic. ‎ When summer vacation for us students comes every year, we can do all that we can’t do during our school time, going shopping with friends, swimming in warm water and even hiking and camping in the deep valleys, all of which, I think, lead me to full freedom. Furthermore, We can find us in an exciting world every day, with the sun shining brightly, trees growing greenly and flowers coming out with all kinds of colors. In a word, summer makes me full of energy and I feel I have the strength to do the most difficult thing in my life. I like summer best, and what about you?‎ ‎[写改两用]‎ 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。‎ The Season I Like Best If someone asks me which season I like better, I can told him without hesitation that spring is my favorite of the four seasons.‎ Two reasons may account of why I like spring best. In spring, the weather gets warmer but the days get longer. Everything begins grow. Many kinds of the flowers start to come out, what give the earth a pretty coat, making this world a better place to live in. Besides, I like to go camp in spring and I feel such refreshed in the surrounding of nature. I will forget all my bad moods when walking in nature.‎ Spring are my favorite season.‎ 答案：第一句：better→best; told→tell 第二句：of→for 第三句：but→and 第四句：begins后加to 第五句：去掉第一个the; what→which 第六句：camp→camping; such→so 第八句：are→is