英语卷·2017届河南省南阳市高三上学期期中质量评估英语试题解析（解析版）

英语卷·2017届河南省南阳市高三上学期期中质量评估英语试题解析（解析版）

全*品*高*考*网， 用后离不了！‎ 本试卷分第1卷（选择题，满分100分）和第II卷（非选择题，满分50分），共150分。考试时间120分钟。‎ 第Ⅰ卷（选择题，共100分）‎ 第一部分听力（共两节，满分30分）‎ ‎ 第—节（共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分）‎ ‎ 听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。‎ ‎1.Where does the conversation take place?‎ ‎ A. Outside a bookstore. B. Inside a bookstore. C. In an art museum.‎ ‎2. How much will she need to pay if she stays for a week?‎ ‎ A. 35 dollars. B. 42 dollars. C.49 dollars.‎ ‎3.Whyis the man staying at home?‎ ‎ A．The weather is bad．‎ ‎ B．He got hurt last week．‎ ‎ C. He is busy with housework.‎ ‎4. How old is Dick this year?‎ ‎ A.35． B．39． C．43．‎ ‎5. What is the teacher like now?‎ ‎ A. Much thinner. B. Not changed. C. Much fatter.‎ ‎ 第二节（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分）‎ ‎ 听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。‎ 听第6段材料，回答第6至7题。‎ ‎6. What is the woman doing?‎ ‎ A. She is' writing her aunt a letter to thank her for this year's present ‎ B. She is writing her aunt a letter to thank her for last year's present.‎ ‎ C. She is calling her aunt to say thanks.‎ ‎7. Why is the woman writing at this time?‎ ‎ A. She forgot to say thanks last year.‎ ‎ B. She forgot having said thanks last year.‎ ‎ C. She wants to remind her aunt of her coming birthday.‎ 听第7段材料，回答第8至10题。‎ ‎8. When does the conversation probably take place?‎ ‎ A. Before Christmas. B. During Christmas. C. After Christmas.‎ ‎9.Whyis the man doing the shopping?‎ ‎ A. Because his wife iS working.‎ ‎ B. Because his wife is having a baby.‎ ‎ C. Because his wife is abroad.‎ ‎10. Which statement is NOT true according to the dialogue?‎ ‎ A. Susan doesn't know Mary.‎ ‎ B. Mary has a wonderful job.‎ ‎ C. Susan is not working for the present.‎ 听第8段材料，回答第11至13题。‎ ‎11. Who is the man probably talking to?‎ ‎ A. His old friend.‎ ‎ B. His new boss.‎ ‎ C. A clerk at the property management company.‎ ‎12. Where do guests park their cars?‎ ‎ ‎ A. Behind the building. B. In the front. C. Outside the community.‎ ‎13. How often is the rubbish collected?‎ ‎ A. Every4 hours. B. Every5 hours. C. Every 6 hours.‎ 听第9段材料，回答第14至17题。‎ ‎14. Where does the man need to go?‎ ‎ A. The Bank of China.‎ ‎ B. The Agricultural Bank of China.【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎ C. Joindoor Supermarket.‎ ‎ 15. How far is the Agricultural Bank of China from where they are standing now?‎ ‎ A. It's about 5 minutes' walk.‎ ‎ B. It's about 100 meters away.‎ ‎ C. It's about 5 minutes' ride.‎ ‎ 16. What will the woman do next?‎ ‎ A. She will drive him there.‎ ‎ B. She will show him to the bank.‎ ‎ C. She will draw a map for him.‎ ‎17. Which statement is true according to the conversation?‎ ‎ A. The woman doesn't believe the man. .‎ ‎ B. The man must be a foreigner.‎ ‎ C. The man is not familiar with this area.‎ 听第10段材料，回答第18至20题。‎ ‎18. What will happen if the students miss more than 3 classes?‎ ‎ A. Their grades will not be affected.‎ ‎ B. They will be removed from the class.‎ ‎ C. There will be a talk with the teacher privately.‎ ‎19. What do the students have to do besides attending classes?‎ ‎ ‎ A. They will take2 exams and write a final paper.‎ ‎ B. They will speak with the teacher after class.‎ ‎ C. They will take part in social practice.‎ ‎20. What's their first assignment?‎ ‎ A. Read the textbook and finish the exercises in the first three chapters.‎ ‎ B. Read-Page 2 through 16 and finish the exercises.‎ ‎ C. Look over the pronunciation thoroughly.‎ 第二部分阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）‎ ‎ 第一节（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）‎ ‎ 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C、和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。‎ A ‎ Tom is studying in Oxford and has just bought a new bike. He is worried about security. His friend found this article and sent it to him.‎ ‎ Introduction ‎ A lot of crime is against bicycles. Many bicycles are stolen every year and most are never found. You can prevent this happening by following a few careful steps.‎ ‎ Basic Security ‎ Do not leave your bicycle in out-of-the-way places. Always lock your bicycle when you leave. Secure it to lampposts（灯柱）or trees. Take off small parts and take them with you, for example lights and saddles（车座）．‎ ‎ Locks ‎ Get a good lock. There are many different types in the shop. Buy one that has been tested against attack. Ask for advice from a bike shop.‎ ‎ Registration ‎ There are a number of companies who will mark your bicycle for you. They will then put your registration number and personal details in their computer database. Then if your bicycle is found it will be easy to get in touch with you.‎ ‎ Finally ‎ Keep a record of the bicycle yourself. its make, model and registration number. You can even Take a photograph of it. This will prove the bicycle belongs to you.‎ ‎21.The article advises you to keep a record of your bicycle .‎ ‎ A. in the bike shop and your computer【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎ B. at a police station or in a security company ‎ C. in a security company and your university ‎ D. by yourself and in a security company ‎22.Which part of the article gives you information on how to lock up your bicycle when you leave it?‎ A. Locks. B. Basic Security. C. Finally. D. Registration.‎ ‎23.The main purpose of this article is .‎ ‎ A. to tell you what to do if your bicycle is stolen ‎ B. to give you advice on where to buy a good lock ‎ C. to suggest ways of keeping your bicycle safe ‎ D. to say why you shouldn't keep your bicycle in a lonely place ‎【答案】‎ ‎21.D ‎22.B ‎23.C【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎23.C 主旨大意。根据文章的开头，He is worried about security. His friend found this article and sent it to him.（作者担心自己的自行车被偷，所以他的朋友找来了一篇自行车防偷的文章），所以答案选择C项。‎ B ‎ When I was watching a sports event yesterday, I met with an amazing sight. It was not a gold medal, or a world record broken, but a show of pure courage and determination.‎ ‎ The event was swimming. I watched a man dive off the blocks and knew right away that something was wrong. I'm not an expert swimmer, but I can tell a good dive from a poor one, and this was not exactly medal quality. When he resurfaced, it was evident that the man was not out for gold - his arms were waving in an attempt at freestyle.‎ ‎ I heard the crowd begin to laugh at this poor man who was clearly having a hard time. Finally he made his turn to start back. It was pitiful. He made a few desperate strokes (划水) and you could tell he was worn out. But in those few awkward strokes, the crowd changed. No longer were they laughing, but beginning to cheer. Some even began to stand and yell things like, "Come on, you can do it!" He did. The crowd went wild.‎ ‎ Just a short year ago, he had never even swum, let alone race. His country had been invited to take part in the event. Even though he recorded the slowest time, this man gave more heart than any of the other competitors------a man that gave his all, knowing that he had no chance but to compete because of the spirit of the games.【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎24. We know from the passage that the swimmer .‎ ‎ A. was not professional B. had two competitors ‎ C. had a wrong start D. didn't try his best ‎25. What can be learned from the last two paragraphs?‎ ‎ A. The swimmer lost his spirit ‎ B. The swimmer didn't finish his match.‎ ‎ C. The audience was touched deeply by the swimmer.‎ D. The crowd supported the swimmer from the beginning.‎ ‎26. The author's attitude towards the swimmer is that of .‎ ‎ A. tolerance B. disappointment C. carelessness D. admiration ‎ 27. Which one is the best title of the story?‎ A. Successful Swimmers B. Go for it C. What an Event D. Awkward Strokes ‎【答案】‎ ‎24.A ‎25.C ‎26.D ‎27.B C ‎ It could happen just about any time you step out in public. You get onto an almost-empty bus,but the next passenger in decides to ignore dozens of empty seats to sit right next to you. While you're waiting in line at a supermarket, the next customer insists on standing only two inches behind you and shouting into his cell-phone. You go into a public restroom, and the next person to enter decides to use the next stall. Transgressions(冒犯) like these don't just make us feel uncomfortable; we often feel anxious, alarmed; and violated(被侵犯的 ). it is the attack of the personal-space invaders.‎ ‎ In any society, shared definitions of personal space govern how we interact with other people.People living in densely(密集地) populated cities like Mumbai, Beijing, or Mexico City tend to require less personal space than people living in sparsely(稀少地) populated places within the country. In America, New Yorkers often have smaller requirements than residents of western states, like Montana, Shenandoah and Wyoming. Because everyone has different standards, gestures that are innocent in one place can be interpreted as opposite in another, especially in Britain.‎ ‎ As the British etiquette(礼仪) website Debrett puts it, as a British person, somebody standing too close may make you " focus less on what somebody is saying than on how close they are to you ‎ ".Simple acts like putting an arm around someone you don't know may seem friendly in China, but they can make us very uncomfortable. People from many European countries such as France and Spain kiss each other on the cheek when they meet, yet to British person, this seems too friendly and" touch-freely". The website explains! "The British are not backslappers(拍人后背的人) and generally do not show affection in public". .‎ ‎ Are British people unfriendly? Far from it. The website adds that they are not as "stand-offish and aloof' as they may seem, but very friendly and helpful to foreigners. However, remember not to be too close. If you are going to come closer than an arm's length, please let them know.‎ ‎28. According to the passage, if you were meeting a British for the first time, it would be polite of ‎ you to .‎ ‎ A. kiss him/her on the cheek ‎ B. keep an arm's length away from him/her ‎ C. put an arm around him/her ‎ D. slap his/her back ‎29. According to the passage, who tend to require more personal space?‎ ‎ A. People living in Beijing and people living in Mexico City ‎ B. People living in Mumbai and people living in Shenandoah ‎ C. People living in Wyoming and people living in New York ‎ D. People living in Wyoming and people living in Montana ‎30. The underlined word "stand-offish and aloof' in the last paragraph is closest in meaning to ‎ A. cold and indifferent B. modest and cool ‎ C. gentlemanly and kind-hearted D. independent and strong-willed ‎31. What can we conclude from the article?‎ ‎ A. British people like to sit next to other people on empty buses.‎ ‎ B. British people usually kiss strangers on the cheek to greet them.‎ ‎ C. British people are helpful though they may not appear to be ‎ D. British people are delighted to show affection in public.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎28.B ‎29.D ‎30.A ‎31.C D ‎ Suppose you have three things: a piece of wood, a nail and a hammer. Pretend the wood is a person, and the nail is a mean rumor(语言) about that person. If you hammer the nail in, you're obviously hurting him or her. If you then pull out the nail, there's still a hole in the wood, and the damage has been done.‎ ‎ There are many reasons why that nail of a rumor can be so harmful. Rumors are, quite simply, a form of bullying(欺侮). When a person or a group makes up a rumor about someone or decides to spread gossip, it's usually to hurt someone, break up a friendship, or make someone less popular. It's the same thing as teasing, only it's done behind someone's back instead of to his or her face.‎ ‎ When you spread a rumor about someone, you're sending a signal that the person is outside the group, and somehow less worthy of friendship than others. You're making fun of that person or pointing out negative things about him or her. This can let others think that it's OK to make the person feel bad, and make him or her an outsider.‎ ‎ We need to be able to trust our friends, but gossip and rumors can break this l:rust. If you tell a personal secret to a friend, and he turns around and tells it to someone else, you might feel like you will get burned if you ever get close to him again. ‎ ‎ Letting a rumor influence your behavior is like letting someone else make a big decision for you. Let's say you hear that a teacher plans to call a Snowy Day tomorrow because a blizzard ‎（暴风雪） is coming. Expecting a day off, you don't do your homework as usual. The next morning, the blizzard turns out to be nothing more than a drizzle(毛毛雨), and school isn't off atter all. You get zeroes on your work.‎ ‎32. If a rumor is spread about someone, others may .‎ ‎ A. keep away from him or her B. point out his or her advantages ‎ C. not feel he or she is an outsider D. be hurt if getting close to him or her again ‎33. To tell the rumor and the teasing apart, you depend on ‎ ‎ A. whether it is painful or not B. whether it is done behind someone ‎ C. whether it is a kind of bullying D. whether it is spread fast .‎ ‎34. From the last paragraph, we can infer that .‎ ‎ A. it is hard to keep rumors a secret B. rumors can destroy your interest in learning C. rumors can control your whole life D. believing rumors can lead to bad choices ‎35. The purpose of this passage is to .‎ ‎ A. advise on how to deal with rumors B. teach us how to judge a rumor C. explain why rumors hurt D. find out why rumors spread fast ‎【答案】‎ ‎32.A ‎33.B ‎34.D ‎35.C 第二节（共5小题，每题2分，共10分）‎ ‎ 根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，选项中有两项为多余选项。‎ ‎ Why do many people take vacations frequently? We need to take time out from work to relax,and just be ourselves. 36 .We should all be allowed to leave our jobs behind us-----at least for a few weeks each year-and just have fun. This might be something as simple as reading a good book in front of a warm fireplace through to traveling to the most interesting places on our planet.Whatever we fancy doing is worth taking time out for.‎ ‎ As we know, workplace stress is on the rise. 37 .These include disease, depression and even death. We all seem to be running from one place to the next, never finding out where we want to go in the first place. I intend to break that trend in the coming days. 38 I will sleep late, write, watch movies, drink the occasional glass of wine, and eat to my heart's content, ignoring calorie counting. My plan is to just enjoy the fleeting（飞逝的）moments of being alive. 39 Spend your next vacation the way you want; Do what will restore your mental health.You're very valuable to the people who are close to you, and to those who depend on it. Like it or not, we are all interdependent（互相依存的）in this great life of ours.there's no doubt that you are valuable. Just remember that the next time you look at a mirror and take a deep breath. Remind yourself that there will never be anyone like you ever on this earth again. 40 1you have to do is just ask yourself what you want to do.‎ A. Draw up a detailed plan so that you can see more.‎ B. With it come many health problems.‎ C. When you finally get home you'll be greatly refreshed.‎ D. Life is not all about work, or at least it shouldn't be.‎ E. And only you know how to take a vacation in your way.‎ F. I challenge each one of you to do the same.‎ G. For my next holiday, l will do all the things that I love doing.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎36.D ‎37.B ‎38.G ‎39.F ‎40.E ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文讲述的是在快节奏生活的当今，我们的度假安排是必须的，本文针对此观点做出了证明与分析。‎ 第三部分英语知识运用（共两节，满分45分）‎ ‎ 第一节完形填空（共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）‎ ‎ 阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、 B、C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。‎ ‎ Across the street from where we live, there stands a big hospital. To earn some money, we rented the rooms upstairs to patients. One evening, there was a(n) 41 at the door.I opened it and saw a short old man who was hardly 42 than my eight-year-old son. But the worst thing was his face----it was 43 ugly. He told me he'd been 44 a room since that noon but no one seemed to have one. For a moment I hesitated, not 45 to rent him a room, but his next words convinced me. He said,“I could 46 on this chair. My bus leaves early in the morning."I told him we would find him a 47 .‎ ‎ It wasn't a long time before I found that this old man had a 48 heart in that tiny body. He fished for a living to 49 his daughter, his daughter's children, and her disabled husband. He didn't tell it by way of complaint. Instead, he was 50 that no pain was caused by his disease and that he still had strength to keep going. At 51 ,we put a camp cot（吊床）in my children's room for him. 52 he left the next morning, he asked, “Could I please come back and 53 when I see the doctor next time? Grown-ups are bothered by my 54 .but children don't seem to 55 . ”I told him he was welcome to come again.‎ ‎ On his next trip, he brought a big fish and a bag of the largest oysters（牡蛎）I had ever seen.Other times we received 56 in the mail. There were oysters, fish or some fresh vegetables. 57 how little money he had and that he must walk three miles to 58 these made these gifts much more precious. And from him we 59 what it was to accept the bad without complaint and the good 60 gratitude.‎ ‎41.A. bell B. answer C. knock D. call ‎42.A. taller B. healthier C. better D. stronger ‎43.A. hardly B. usually C. really D. finally ‎44.A. searching B. looking at C. hunting for D. checking in ‎45.A. knowing B. refusing C. fearing D. wanting ‎46.A. wait B. sit C. hide D. sleep ‎47.A. bed B. seat C. table D. living room ‎48.A. funny B. beautiful C. small D. normal ‎49.A. please B. surprise C. support D. exchange ‎50.A. interested B. scared C. grateful D. worried ‎51.A. midnight B. suppertime C. bedtime D. noon ‎52.A. lf B. once C. before D. after ‎53.A. visit B. stay C. pay D. chat ‎54.A. action B. voice C. face D. manner ‎55.A. notice B. require C. mind D. escape ‎56.A. card B.letters C.greetings D.packages ‎57.A. Believing B. knowing C. doubting D. telling ‎58.A. mail B. get C. find D. make ‎59.A. remembered B. explained C. learned D. showed ‎60.A. for B. with C. in D. under ‎【答案】‎ ‎41.C ‎42.A ‎43.C ‎44.C ‎45.D ‎46.D ‎47.A ‎48.B ‎49.C ‎50.C ‎51.C ‎52.C ‎53.B ‎54.C ‎55.C ‎56.D ‎57.B ‎58.A ‎59. C ‎60.B ‎46.D 考查动词。敲门那个人这时说，我其实可以不用住房间的，我在椅子上睡一宿就可以了，因为明天我一早就要坐车走呢。‎ ‎47.A 考查名词。因为这个人的朴实的话语打动了作者，所以作者这时决定帮他找一间床，让他睡下。‎ ‎48.B 考查形容词。通过作者和这个人的交谈，作者发现这个人有着一副好心肠，所以使用beautiful。‎ ‎49.C 考查动词。这个人要养活她的女儿，以及残疾的丈夫，support这里是供养，养活的意思。‎ ‎50.C 考查形容词。作者感叹她的生活如此多艰，但是在她的身上并没有看出些什么消极，所以作者这里赞赏她的伟大之处。‎ 第II卷（非选择题，共50分）‎ 第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ 阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式 ‎ Clever student as Dongfang Liang is. he was badly addicted 61 online games a year ago. He often slipped to cybercafes at night, 62 (feel) very sleepy in class in the daytime. 63 (need) to say, he got poor marks in all subjects. No matter what I advised, no matter 64 I punished him, he still broke the rule. Later I 65 (arrange) his parents to rent a small house near our school to keep him company, or exactly speaking, to supervise him. But only a week later, I noticed him fall asleep constantly again. He must have played other tricks secretly. This time I demanded that his father 66 (sleep) with him in the same bedroom and watch him 67 (close).Following my advice, his father did 68 .Hardly has Dongfang Liang felt sleepy in class ever since, and he has made great progress in study.‎ Last week, believe it 69 not, he sheepishly(难为情地)admitted having read some e-books under his quilt while he was lying 70 bed before his father slept in his room. It is online games that poison our teenagers' minds deeply.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎61.to ‎62.feeling ‎63.Needless ‎64.how ‎65.arranged for ‎66.(should)sleep ‎67.closely ‎68.so ‎69.or ‎70.in ‎66.(should)sleep 考查虚拟语气。因为前文的demand后面的动词应该使用should+动词原形。‎ ‎67.closely 考查副词。这里的 closely是修饰前面的动词watch。‎ ‎68.so did so，表示按照某人所说的那样做了。‎ ‎69.or believe it or not，考查固定搭配，表示信不信由你。‎ ‎70.in 考查介词。在床上躺着，用介词in。‎ ‎ ‎ 第四部分 写作（共两节满分35分）‎ ‎ 第—节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）‎ ‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。‎ ‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。‎ ‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ ‎ 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎ Volunteer travel, that is familiar to foreigners, has nowadays become more and more popular in China Young travelers volunteer to work for youth hostels so that they can eat and live there for something. At the same time, they can enjoy the local scenery on their spare time.‎ As far as I am concern, volunteer travel has some advantages and benefits from you a lot. It can save you lot of money by providing free accommodations, which makes it possible for you to travel to much more places and experience different cultures. Meanwhile, volunteer travel enrich your life by offer different jobs in youth hostels, which also can change your way of life. All in all, it was meaningful. ‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎71.将that改为which【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎72.将something改为nothing或free ‎73.将on改为in ‎74.将concern改为concerned ‎75.将from去掉 ‎76.将lot改为lots或在lot之前加a ‎77.将much改为many ‎78.将enrich改为enriches ‎79.将offer改为offering ‎70.将was改为is ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文讲述了志愿者这个话题，志愿者不仅帮助他人，同时对自己的生活和能力也是一个充实和提高，帮助社会建立和谐友爱的氛围。‎ ‎71.将that改为which 考查非限制性定于从句，且缺少句子成分，充当主语，所以不能使用that，应该使用which。‎ ‎78.将enrich改为enriches 前面的主语是单数，所以谓语动词应该使用单三形式。‎ ‎79.将offer改为offering 前面的by是介词，后面跟动名词，名词。‎ ‎70.将was改为is 考查时态，全文使用一般现在时，所以这里不能使用过去时。‎ 第二节书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎ 假如你是李华，收到澳大利亚表弟( Harry)的电子邮件，邮件中提到他父母想看他的微信朋友圈(We Chat Moments)，他对是否同意和父母分享微信感到犹豫。‎ 请你给他回信，要点如下：1．说明赞成或反对的观点；2．主要理由；3．提出个人的建议。’‎ 注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Harry,．‎ How surprised and pleased to receive your email today! You told me that ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours, Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Harry, ‎ ‎ How surprised and pleased to receive your email today! You told me that your parents asked to see your WeChat Moments and that you’re hesitating about whether to share it with them. As I see it, it’s understandable for your parents to do so.‎ ‎ Blood is thicker than water. Parents are our most believable persons in the world. As parents, they have responsibility to make sure we make right friends and won’t be harmed or misled by bad information. As teenagers, we do need parents’ guidance, especially in terms of social experience. Moreover, sharing your Moments will bring your whole family closer to each other. Therefore, you’d better give them a place in your own world so that you can communicate easily.‎ ‎ Please remember me to your parents.‎ ‎ Yours， ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】范文中运用一些高级短语如Blood is thicker than water.，in terms of，词汇使用精确使用了hesitate，responsibilities，harm，misled等，文章逻辑合理，有理有据，行文流畅，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。‎ 考点： 提纲类作文