2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之十：如何使行文连贯

2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之十：如何使行文连贯

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之十：如何使行文连贯 增加过渡是常见的“增加细节”的方法，过渡性词语和过渡性语句的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡(连接)性词语、句子可避免语句陡转直下，不联不搭，通过合理过渡，实现语句的衔接顺畅。这就需要考生在日常学习中积累背诵常用的过渡词。例如：表示列举的firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally；表示自己看法的as far as I'm concerned, from my point of view, in my opinion；表示转折的on the contrary, however, every coin has two sides等。‎ 目的 增加凝聚力，突出连贯性 方法 根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡性词语，或者过渡句，以使文章浑然一体，提高说服力 特色 行文连贯，条理清晰 ‎[典例观摩悟法]‎ ‎1．(话题：家长用车接送学生引起校门口拥堵) Our traffic department should strengthen management to make the parents obey traffic rules.Our school should appeal to us students to walk or ride a bike to and from school, which is not only friendly to our traffic environment but also is good for ‎ students' health.‎ ‎→In my opinion, the problem can be solved from two aspects.On one hand, our traffic department should strengthen management to make the parents obey traffic rules.On the other hand, our school should appeal to us students to walk or ride a bike to and from school, which is not only friendly to our traffic environment but also is good for students' health.‎ ‎[分析]　本段作者使用In my opinion, the problem can be solved ...主题句，其中from two aspects让读者明白作者提供了两个方面的建议，并以on one hand, on the other hand进行展示。这些过渡性词语和过渡句的恰当使用，使文章语言连贯、过渡自然、浑然一体。‎ ‎2．(去美国学习英语询问具体问题)I'm concerned with how far it is from the host family to my school.I'm wondering whether a private bedroom will be offered to me.I tend to know if there are any special customs that I should pay attention to.Would you please give me some more suggestions on how to get along well with the host family？I'm sure your advice will benefit me a lot.‎ ‎→Firstly，I'm concerned with how far it is from the host family to my school.Secondly, I'm wondering whether a private bedroom will be offered to me.Furthermore，I tend to know if ‎ there are any special customs that I should pay attention to.Last but not least, would you please give me some more suggestions on how to get along well with the host family？I'm sure your advice will benefit me a lot.‎ ‎[分析]　本段作者使用firstly, secondly, furthermore, last but not least使层次清晰连贯，使文章提高一个档次，能彰显作者实力。‎ ‎[专题过关训练]‎ Ⅰ.用过渡性词汇补全句子 ‎1．(2018•浙江高考写作)We lost our way in the forest and to_make_matters_worse/worse_still (更糟的是), it got dark.‎ ‎2．(2018•北京高考书面表达)In_my_opinion/view (依我看) studying for a degree in a different culture is never easy.‎ ‎3．First_of_all/To_begin_with (首先), the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out the plan step by step.‎ ‎4．On_the_one_hand (一方面), they can sweep the tombs for the dead.On_the_other_hand (另一方面), they can go for a walk in the country in spring when the grass has just turned green.‎ ‎5．In_a_word/In_conclusion/In_short/In_brief (总之), success is important, and so is failure, because it's the mother of success.‎ Ⅱ.阅读下面短文，从方框中选择适当的过渡性词语填空 近来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识这一问题备受关注，请你用英语写一篇短文：‎ ‎1．概括中学生自我保护的重要性；‎ ‎2．就如何保护自己谈谈你的看法(至少两点)。‎ above all， besides， meanwhile， for one thing， for another thing， personally， in a word Recently, it has been a great public concern that the students lack selfprotection awareness.‎ There is a lack of social experience among students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all.1.For_one_thing,_security comes first.Without security, we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents' expectations.2.For_another_thing,_protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of us students, which is associated with the happiness of every family.3.Meanwhile,_it also helps to build a more harmonious society.‎ ‎4．Personally,_in order to protect us students, 5.above_all,_we should strengthen our security awareness.6.Besides,_when accidents occur, we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help.The government also ‎ plays a leading role in protecting students.7.In_a_word,_only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study in harmony.‎ Ⅲ.请在下面的段落内加上适当的词语或句子，以充实文章 ‎　(话题：是否禁止广场舞)I don't think square dancing should be forbidden.1.Here_are_the_reasons/The_reasons_are_as_follows.2.First_of_all/To_begin_with,_dancing is a good way to take exercise, which can help people to build themselves up.It 3.also provides a chance for people to communicate with each other.4.Besides/What's_more,_the square is a good place for people to work out.‎