【英语】2018届二轮复习书面表达篇之图画作文写作指导教案（10页）

【英语】2018届二轮复习书面表达篇之图画作文写作指导教案（10页）

‎2018届 二轮复习 书面表达篇之图画作文写作指导 考纲解读 考试大纲 要求 考纲解读 ‎《考试大纲》对学生的书面表达能力作了明确的规定：要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。‎ 审题正确、要点全面，能够运用所学的语法结构、词汇知识，使上下文连贯，同时语言要准确、得当，条理清楚，书写规范。‎ 图画作文要求考生根据一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写一篇短文,叙述一件事,或者阐述图画反映的某种社会现象。‎ 高考预测 近几年来，图画作文在高考书面表达中占有一定的比例。试题面目新颖化，融合创新成趋势。今后图画作文主要还是看图叙事和看图说理两类。看图叙事为记叙文，要抓住记叙文的六要素：时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和过程(how)；看图说理为议论文，对事物/事件进行说明时，一定要做到条理清晰，明了易懂。预计2016年高考书面表达的话题也会沿袭之前的传统，贴近考生的学习、生活，联系社会热点、要点。‎ 应试技巧 图画作文的写作技巧 图画类材料作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式，是一种变＂画＂为文的作文方式。这种题型提供给考生的是图画，要求考生在看懂图画的意思后写作文，主要训练和考查考生的观察力、思考力、创造力和表达能力。‎ 一、图画作文的命题特点：‎ 图画作文就是依据图画所表现的情景，按照规定和要求进行写作。一般的图画作文就是就图说话：要求考生按照所给图画，通过合理的想象将一幅或几幅画面的内容正确地表达出来。图画作文的命题形式可以多样化，即根据图画，要求学生写一篇日记、一封书信、一则通知、一篇记叙文或一篇说明文等；要求学生把一幅或几幅内容连续的图画有条理、有层次地再现出来。‎ 二、图画作文的准备过程：‎ ‎1. 正确理解提示和要求。一般情况下，图画作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图画的含义，得到要点和主旨。切忌孤立地看图片而忽视文字提示。‎ ‎2. 确定体裁、格式。根据图片内容确定好题材与体裁，弄清楚是写人还是写景，是说明还是叙事，是书信、日记，还是其他应用文。‎ ‎3. 确定人称。清晰把握作文的人称线条，切不可上下矛盾，混淆不清。‎ ‎4. 确定时态和语态。弄清所要叙述的内容事实是已经发生、尚未发生，还是正在进行，从而确立主体时态。‎ ‎5. 看懂图意，切中题意。正确理解图画的基本事实，并根据每幅画之间的联系，弄清要表达的主题和梗概。‎ ‎6. 展开想象。仔细观察细节（图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等），依据图画细节对画面的内容加以想象、扩充或补充。‎ 三、图画作文的基本步骤：‎ ‎1. 列出要点。明确写作的具体内容，仔细寻找全部要点，做到要点无遗漏。‎ ‎2. 依据内容要点，选择自己熟悉的词汇、短语和句型。做到＂不求难，不求异，只求准＂，在此基础上，可以适当使用一些高级句型、词汇和表达，来提高文章的水平和档次。 ‎ ‎3. 将要点译成基本句子。尽量使用熟悉、简单的结构，避免因使用大量的长句和复合句出现语法错误、表达错误。忌用汉语思维生造句子。‎ ‎4. 按一定的时间、空间或逻辑顺序将基本句子有序地组织起来。‎ ‎5. 适当增加细节，运用适当的过渡词将句子连接成文，使句与句之间、段与段之间衔接自然、流畅。‎ ‎6. 细心检查免错漏。‎ 检查内容要点是否齐全，检查人称、时态和语态是否正确，检查语法、词汇和搭配是否有误。最后，别忘了检查拼写和标点。‎ ‎☞【素材锦囊】‎ ‎1. 用于描述图画或引入话题的句式：‎ ‎(1)As is described/illustrated/shown in the picture... ‎ ‎(2)In the picture we/I can see…‎ ‎2. 用于记叙事件经过或分析现象的语句：‎ ‎(1)At first...Then...Five minutes later...Finally/In the end...‎ ‎(2)Some...;some...;others...‎ ‎(3)More and more people have come to realize the importance of...‎ ‎3. 用于发表议论或进行总结的语句：‎ ‎(1)If such measures were not taken, the problem would be more serious.‎ ‎(2)We can conclude from the picture that...‎ ‎(3)As has been stated, we must...‎ ‎☞【写作模板】‎ 模板一：‎ As can be seen from the picture(s), there is a widespread concern over the issue that作文主题句. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that 观点一. In their views there are two factors contributing to this. In the first place, 原因一. Furthermore/In the second place,原因二. So it goes without saying that 观点一. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that 观点二. In their point of view, on the one hand, 原因一. On the other hand, 原因二.‎ As far as I’m concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或观点二. It is not only because 　　　,but also because 　　　. The more 　　　, the more　　　. ‎ 模板二：‎ It seems to me that the cartoon/drawing is sending a message about 图画内容,which reveals 稍作评价. In my view, 表明个人观点. Apparently, ‎ 将个人观点和图片内容相结合,得出观点. For one thing, 从社会角度论证. For another thing, 从个人角度说明. For example, 自己、朋友或他人的,自己知道或听过的例子. Last but not least, 从反面角度谈论. As a result, the drawer of the illustration is urging us to 建议或措施. Only in this way can we 展望结果.In conclusion, 再次表明观点或态度. We should 进一步说明个人的观点.‎ 真题回顾 典例一 (2015·福建)‎ 请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。‎ 内容要求：‎ ‎1. 描述画面；‎ ‎2. 概述其含义；‎ ‎3. 谈谈个人感想。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2. 可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。‎ 参考词汇：凿，钻 bore In the picture,____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【写作思路】本题为图画作文，主题是一则成语＂凿壁偷光＂。结合题目要求，应该先描述图画内容（一个衣衫褴褛的男孩儿借着墙壁上的洞里透过来的光读书，而且图画下面的文字＂凿壁偷光＂说明墙上的洞是挖出来的，不是本来就有的，而光是通过这个洞＂偷＂来的）及其含义（形容家贫而读书刻苦），再谈个人看法。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量做到内容简洁、精干，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.①A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.‎ This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to ＂steal＂ light from his neighbor’s house to read at night.②‎ The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.③‎ Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.④Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.‎ 典例二 (2015·上海)‎ Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions ‎ given below in Chinese.‎ 学校即将举办＂读书节＂，目前正广泛征集＂读书节＂宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；‎ ‎2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传＂读书节＂的理由。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【写作思路】本题为图画作文，主题是学校为即将举办的＂读书节＂征集宣传册图片。你——学生潘阳，为组委会写信推荐三幅图中的一幅。信中需要描述想推荐的图片的内容，以及推荐该图片的理由。注意信件的格式，同时要注意内容要条理清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，语言简洁，理由充分。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Sir/Madam,‎ Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.‎ In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest.‎ I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Pan Yang 名校典题 ‎(山东师范大学附属中学2016届高三上学期第三次模拟考试)近来，中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议。假设你是李华，一名国际旅行社的导游，就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根据下面的提示完成作文。 ‎ ‎1. 列举不文明行为；‎ ‎2. 指出其影响；‎ ‎3. 提出建议。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3. 首句已给出，不计入总词数。‎ As a tour guide of an international travel agency，I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad. ____________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文 As a tour guide of an international travel agency, I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights. Such bad behavior overseas has caused great damage to the image of the Chinese people and our country as well. ‎ Measures should be taken to stop this. First, before going abroad, tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs. Besides, it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten. Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country. ‎ 专家解读 A 高考是全社会关注的大事，学校和家庭表现得尤为突出。家庭成员从学习到生活给予考生无微不至的＂关怀＂，结果却给考生带来负面影响。根据图画所描述的内容写一篇文章，并发表自己的观点。词数100左右。‎ As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. From the picture, we can see that Li Ming __________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ B 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了你们学校去年12月邀请其他学校的学生参加＂圣诞晚会＂的过程。请根据图片的先后顺序，适当增加细节，为校刊的＂英语园地＂栏目写一篇短文。词数不少于100。‎ Last December, our school celebrated Christmas with students from our neighboring schools. ____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ C 请根据下面的图片，写一篇短文，内容包括：‎ ‎ 1. 描述漫画内容；‎ ‎ 2. 说出其中的寓意；‎ ‎ 3. 发表你的观点。‎ ‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1. 可适当增添内容，使文章层次分明，行文连贯。‎ ‎ 2. 词数100左右。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文 A As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is ＂studying hard＂. There are many books and papers for him to cover. How poor he is! And all his family are busy working for him.‎ Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their children. They hope that their ‎ children study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or a key university. As a result, parents are strict with their children. However, they don’t realize what they have become a heavy burden or a great pressure. It is the hard work or the great pressure that changes their children that much.‎ So I hope parents provide a proper environment for their children. Only in this way will they try their best and succeed at last! ‎ B Last December, our school celebrated Christmas with students from our neighboring schools.‎ One month before Christmas, we held a meeting to discuss how to celebrate Christmas. Li Ming suggested inviting students from our neighboring schools to enjoy our Christmas Party, which received agreement from other students.‎ After that, we began making full preparations for the Christmas Party. Some students practiced dances. Some students prepared some songs with guitar performance. Other students even adapted a play from our textbooks. Li Ming sent invitations to other schools. All the students were busy but felt excited.‎ Having got everything ready, we welcomed the students from other schools to share our Christmas Party in the school hall on Christmas Day. The wonderful performances won the applause from the audience, who laughed and cheered for the actors. We had a big day. ‎ All the students, including the students from our neighboring schools, appreciated the Christmas Party, with the expectation of holding a similar party next year. ‎ C As can be seen in the picture, two men are staring at a potted flower with different expressions on their faces. One man is thinking about the sad ending of the flower while the other is imagining the flower blooming. To the same thing, different people have different views, leading to different results. One is happy while the other is sad.‎ In our daily life, faced with the same situation，pessimistic people may feel helpless and complain about it all day long. Optimistic people，however，may look at it positively ‎ and take it as a chance to show their abilities and talents. When we are in trouble, we should keep optimistic, take effective measures to solve the problem.‎