2019届高考英语二轮书面表达高分练兵场：（4）应用文写作-感谢信

2019届高考英语二轮书面表达高分练兵场：（4）应用文写作-感谢信

感谢信 ‎1、假设你是李明,最近参加了一期“澳大利亚冬令营”活动。共两周时间你住在Johnson 夫妇家中,他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请写一封电子邮件感谢他们。‎ 内容包括以下要点:‎ ‎1.安全到家   2.感谢   3.感受   4.保持联系 注意:‎ ‎1.词数120左右;‎ ‎2.可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。‎ ‎                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours,‎ LiMing ‎2、假如你叫李明,在伦敦学习期间,你待在Jonathan的家里。请你给Jonathan 写一封电子邮件表示感谢,并邀请他明年暑假来你家。‎ 内容要点:‎ ‎1. 感谢Jonathan让你住在他家;‎ ‎2. 他们给你创造了一个很好的家庭氛围;‎ ‎3. 明年你将中学毕业,届时你将有两个月的假期,你和家人诚邀Jonathan暑期来西安度假。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数:100 词左右。‎ ‎2.内容应包括以上要点,并适当增加细节,以使内容连贯 ‎3.短文开头已写好,但不计入总词数.‎ ‎4.提示词汇: 氛围:atmosphere Dear Jonathan,‎ ‎    I can’t tell you how much I appreciated your kindness in letting me stay at your home when I was in London. ‎ 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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours,‎ Li Ming ‎3、假定你是李华,已申请就读英国圣安德鲁斯大学(the University of St Andrews)。在申请过程中,得到前英国外教Ms. Rowling的帮助。请你给Ms. Rowling写封信,内容要点如下:‎ ‎1.已被录取;‎ ‎2.感谢帮助;‎ ‎3.期待再见。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数80左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Ms. Rowling,   ‎ ‎                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎4、假如你是李华,本学期你在校报上投稿获得了较多的点赞,请你就此给校友们写一封感谢信。内容包括:‎ ‎1.表示对大家支持的感谢;‎ ‎2.不负厚望,继续撰稿。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数80左右;‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇:点赞thumbs-up Dear fellow schoolmates,‎ 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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎5、假定你是李华,今天上午上英语课时身体不适,课后你的外籍教师Peter送你去医院,之后他因故返回学校。现在Peter发短信了解你的病情,请根据以下内容,回复短信。‎ 内容主要包括:‎ ‎1.感谢;‎ ‎2.现状(发烧,医生建议留院观察两天);‎ ‎3.心情(尽快康复,返回课堂)。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100左右;‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。‎ Peter,‎ ‎                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua ‎6、假定你是第一中学的学生李华,刚从美国参加中美学生文化交流活动回来,请代表你们学校给美方学校写一封感谢信。要点如下:‎ ‎1.自我介绍;‎ ‎2.表达感谢;‎ ‎3.说明活动收获;‎ ‎4.邀请对方来中国。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎2.词数100左右;‎ ‎3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;‎ ‎4.参考词汇:款待 hospitality。‎ Dear Sir / Madam,‎ Greetings from China!‎ 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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎7、假如你是某中学高三学生李华,你的外籍教师 Johnson曾帮助过你学习英语。感恩节即将来临,请给已经回国的他写一封电子邮件,感谢他对你的鼓励和帮助。 ‎ 注意: ‎ ‎1.词数不少于100; ‎ ‎2.信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数; ‎ ‎3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯   ‎ Dear Mr. Johnson ‎ ‎   How is everything going?‎ ‎                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎8、假如你是李华,上个月在加拿大参加了你校组织的“文化交流日”活动,并住在Cathy家里。请你给在加拿大期间认识的新朋友Cathy 写封感谢信,内容包括:‎ ‎1. 活动中的收获;‎ ‎2. 难忘在Cathy家的美好时光;‎ ‎3. 感谢她送你的英文小说。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连冠;‎ ‎3. 开头和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。‎ 提示词:文化交流日Cultural Exchange Day Dear Cathy,‎ ‎    I 've already returned from Canada.‎ ‎                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ‎ ‎                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours,‎ LiHua ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson,‎ I’m writing to you from my home inChina. I returned home safe and sound. When I think of the wonderful two weeks I spent inAustralia, I just can’t help thinking of both of you. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my staying there such a happy and lucky experience. I’ve learned so much, not only English but also culture. And I really enjoyed those happy days that we spent together. Thank you very much. I’ll always remember this trip as well as your kindness. I’ll keep in touch and write to you later. Please take care!‎ Yours,‎ LiMing 解析：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2答案及解析：‎ 答案：Dear Jonathan,‎ ‎     I can’t tell you how much I appreciated your kindness in letting me stay at your home while I was in London. It was a delight to see a loving family. You kept me company and created a great home atmosphere for me. I shall always treasure the time when we were together.‎ ‎    Next summer, I will graduate from senior high school and it will be about two months before I go to university, so my parents and I would really like you to come here on vacation. There are a lot of beautiful and historic places in Xi’an. I’m sure you will like it. Meanwhile, we will have a nice time and enjoy ourselves again.‎ ‎    I’m looking forward to your reply. Please send my best regards to your parents!‎ Yours,‎ Li Ming 解析：‎ 审题分析 这是篇提纲作文,要求习作者以李明的身份给Jonathan写封感谢信——感谢对方给自己在伦敦时提供住宿;接着邀请对方在自己明年高考过后来西安游玩几天;由此可见,习作者不用过多发挥,只用理清内容的头绪遣词属文即可 精彩点评 这篇习作有如下亮点:‎ 一、 内容丰富,层次清楚,表达有序;‎ 二、 感情真挚,不空洞;‎ 三、 使用了大量的高级词汇和句式。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ 高分范文 Dear Ms. Rowling,‎ ‎    I'm glad to tell you that I have been formally admitted to the University of St Andrews and will begin to study there next September.‎ ‎    At the same time, I'm really grateful to you for your help last year during my stay there trying to apply for British universities, without which it would have been much more difficult for me.‎ ‎    I know my university is close to vour home so I wish I could visit you as soon as I arrive there. I'm dying to meet you soon.‎ ‎    Best wishes.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎(90 words)‎ 标准范文 Dear Ms. Rowling,‎ ‎    I hope everything is okay with you. I'm Li Hua, your former student in China. Hopefully you've not forgotten me since you helped me a lot last year when I was trying to apply for British universities.‎ ‎    I’m writing to tell you that I have been admitted to the University of St Andrews and will start my study there next September. I'm really grateful to you for your help.‎ ‎    I wish I could visit you after I get there. I'm looking forward to meeting you soon.‎ ‎    Best regards.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎(88 words )‎ 解析：‎ 审题分析 ‎1. 文章体裁属于应用文之书信;‎ ‎2. 根据文字提示,须以第一人称为主进行叙述;‎ ‎3. 以一般现在时为主;‎ ‎4. 段落的过渡须自然、合情合理;‎ ‎5. 注意对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译;‎ ‎6. 对“感谢帮助”以及“期待再见”等进行适当提升。‎ 高分范文揭秘 短文结构清晰,要点齐全,语言流畅。使用了较高级的词汇:be formally admitted to, at the same time, be grateful to, try to apply for, be close to, be dying to do sth.等。文章中句式变化层出不穷,如that引导的宾语从句,without which引导的非限制性定语从句和as soon as引导的时间状语从句等。本题满分15分,本文得14分。‎ 标准范文精彩点评 ‎1.本篇习作虽用词不多,但读来紧凑,使人一目了然,且思路清晰:‎ ‎2. 适当运用了一些高级句式结构。如since引导的原因状语从句、when引导的时间状语从句、that引导的宾语从句、after引导的时间状语从句等。‎ ‎3. 时态把握准确到位,如一般现在时、一般过去时、现在完成时及一般将来时。‎ ‎4. 高级词汇的大量使用也使文章增色不少。如:one’s former student, help sb. a lot, try to apply for, be admitted to, start one's study, be grateful to sb. for sb’s help 等。总之,这确实是一篇佳作。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear fellow schoolmates,‎ ‎    I would like to give thanks for your thumbs-up for my essays in the school newspaper. Seeing that great changes take place around the whole school, I can't help making them known to all by writing to the newspaper. Receiving so many thumbs-up is beyond my expectations. Therefore, I am determined to go on to live up to your expectations. I am willing to share more with you.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎(70 words)‎ 解析：‎ 审题分析 ‎①审文体要求:应用文感谢信。‎ ‎②审人称、审时态:以第一人称、现在时态为主。‎ ‎③审要点:表示对大家支持的感谢:不负厚望, 继续撰稿。‎ 思路点拨 这是一封感谢信,首先文中一定要提及感谢的具体原因和内容,不要千谢万谢,结果连感谢的理由都没写出来;其次,要在信末表达今后的打算和决心。‎ 精彩点评 ‎1. 本文属于应用文感谢信。范文要点全面,层次清楚,且能够适当增加细节,使行文连贯。‎ ‎2. 采用髙级句式使文章亮点频现。如that引导宾语从句,动名词短语作主语等。‎ ‎3. 运用了适当的过渡词、连句成文。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Peter,‎ ‎    Thank you for texting. It's kind of you to take me to hospital when I felt sick in the English lesson this morning. I am quite grateful for what you have done for me.‎ ‎    Because of your timely help, I could get treated in time, or I couldn't imagine what it would be like. I am much better now. My doctor thinks I've just got a cold. But I have been told that I need to stay in hospital for two days and receive further examination because I still have a fever.‎ ‎    I am looking forward to being well soon and with you again in your lively class. See you then.‎ Li Hua 解析：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎6答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Sir / Madam,‎ ‎    Greetings fromChina! I am Li Hua from the Xin Hua Middle School and I’m writing this letter on behalf of our school to thank you for your warm hospitality during our recent visit to your country. I would also like to thank you for your wonderful cultural exchange activities. I am sure that we can improve our understanding through such activities. We sincerely hope to have more chances to take part in such activities.‎ ‎    We are looking forward to your early visit toChinaand then we will be able to pay back the hospitality we received during our stay in your country. ‎ ‎    Thank you again, and best wishes!‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua 解析：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎7答案及解析：‎ 答案： Dear Mr. Johnson ‎ ‎   How is everything going? With the Thanksgiving Day approaching, I couldn’t help recalling your help. I made great progress in English with your help. Here I'd like to express my gratitude to you. ‎ ‎   I still remember that when I started learning English in senior high school, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior high school. Without your help, I would have lost heart. It was your encouragement that made me realize the importance of English ‎ ‎   Therefore, I got up early every morning, recited English words and texts, listened to tapes and did a lot of exercises. Now, I’ve improved my English greatly. And I'm getting more and more confident in learning English. ‎ ‎   Thanks for your kind help and encouragement. Best regards! ‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎ 解析：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎8答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ One possible version:‎ Dear Cathy,‎ ‎    I've already returned  from Canada. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in Canada.‎ ‎    Last month. I participated in the Cultural Exchange Day. I enjoyed myself in your country .We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the Canadian society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.‎ ‎    What's more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I will never forget the days we spent together.‎ ‎    Here I especially thank you for the English novel  you offered me as a gift. It's a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.‎ ‎    Welcome to China when it's convenient for you!‎ Yours,‎ Li hua 解析：‎ ‎ ‎