2020届二轮复习短文改错解题指导专题课件（30张）

2020届二轮复习短文改错解题指导专题课件（30张）

专题复习 Proof Reading 2020 届高考英语专题复习二 短文改错 How to correct a passage 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处 。每处错误仅涉及 一个单词 的增加、删除或修改。 增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除： 把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。 修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1 ．每处错误及其修改均 仅限一词 ； 2 ．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 How to correct the mistakes. 思 考 短文改错题的特点 : 1) 考点分布的特点 2) 改错方式分布的特点 2019 年全国卷 3 I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style. 2019 年全国卷 3 I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city . Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style. 考核要点： 1. 非谓语 2. 时态语态 3. 形容词副词 4. 非谓语 5. 介词 6. 代词 7. 连词 8. 非谓语 9. 名词 10. 冠词 短文改错考点 1. 错误类型： 冠词 名词 形容词副词 时态语态 代词 连词 介词 非谓语动词 其他：主谓一致、情态动词、逻辑等 2. “ 四不改 ” ： 标点符号、语序、单词拼写、大小写一般不设题 3. 错误分布： 其中多词或者少词一般 2 个，改词 8 个（ 8:1:1 ） 短文改错的解题技巧 1 、 通读全文，理解文章，解决四个一致的错误。 1 ）时态一致 （出现一处与整篇文章时态不一致） 2 ）指代一致 （代词的性、格、数的不一致） 3 ）主谓一致 （主语与谓语动词在人称、数上的不一致） 4 ）逻辑一致 （ and, so, but, therefore, however 的混用； after, when 与 before 的混用；肯定与否定的混用 …) The Story about Growing Pains is my favorite American TV play because it is very interesting. The play tells humorous stories that happen in Seaver’s family. With such stories it make people think about life, but therefore attracts the audience. It is also a window from which we can learn about American society. And there were many meaningful things that are worth thinking of, such as the relationship between parents and children in a lot of American families. It is quite different from those in China. The play is very popular. We’d better miss the chance to enjoy it. are makes and that ∧ not 通读下篇短文，改正文中的 5 个一致的错误 Two years ago, I traveled to Brazil and I rented a car. Fortunately, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two weeks. I called my parents, so I did not tell him what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about me because I was so far away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. However , I told them interesting stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, everybody knew the truth. I still think the that it was the right thing to do. Unfortunately but would Therefore nobody them 通读下篇短文，改正文中的 6 个一致的错误 短文改错的解题技巧 2 、逐句阅读、改正，关注句子的结构，注意一些常考点 短文改错要做好，常见类型应记牢。 名词 爱考数与格 , 冠词 常会错多少。 动词 两态和搭配， 非谓情态 莫错了。 连词 注意并和从， 形副 错用兼比较。 介词 多半考搭配， 代词 错漏想周到。 （ 2019 年全国卷 1 ） All the football player on the playground cheered loudly… （ 2019 年全国卷 2 ） Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. 2 月 9 日作业： We share our thought during the meeting. ( thoughts: a person’s mind and all the ideas that they have in it when they are thinking 心思，思想） 名词爱考数与格 名词爱考数与格 ( 高考真题 1) From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. ( 高考真题 2) Unfortunately, I had an accident And hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. ( 高考真题 3) The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. ( 高考真题 4)You told me the name of different plants and their characteristics. ( 高考真题 5 ） We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture nor industry can go without it toys weeks dishes names animals (2019 年全国卷 1)Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. 2 月 9 日作业： Last Friday, the class meeting was held. During the National holiday, I tried a new way to explore the Forbidden City, where left me deep impression. 冠词常会 " 错 "" 多 "" 少 " 冠词常会 " 错 "" 多 "" 少 " We may be one family and live under a same roof. Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. It has been too dry this year and there are a few apples on the tree. ( 高考真题 ) It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. ( 高考真题 ) As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think interesting that it was the right thing to do. the a ∧ a ∧ the (2019 年全国卷 1) I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. (2019 年全国卷 1) All the football players on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. (2019 年全国卷 2) One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need. 2 月 10 日作业 I’ve felt comfortable in China, and although there were differences, it’s not hard to adjust. 动词两态和搭配 ; 非谓、情态莫错了 动词两态和搭配 ; 非谓、情态莫错了 ( 高考真题 1) Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. …,but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. ( 高考真题 ) Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. (2012 陕西 ) I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing. (2012 全国卷 2 ） Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. might/could went interesting taken used (2019 全国卷 1) One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. (2019 全国卷 2) When I studied chemistry at high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. 2 月 9 日作业： It was in a hot summer holiday which I visited Qingdao, port city in Shandong Province. I found the Forbidden City both traditional or modern because of our history is made alive here. 2 月 10 日作业： Chines culture is different, so Western culture is too, and in this way, they’re so similar. 连词注意并和从 连词注意并和从 I live in Beijing, where is capital of China. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain . 30 percent of girls would like to become teachers when only 5 percent of boys want to do this job. In the end we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. (2012 全国卷 2 ） To deal with the problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water 。 （ 2012 海南） But before long they began to see which was happening.  ∧ when while until because/since/as what which (2019 全国卷 1) I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. (2019 全国卷 2) First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. 形、副错用兼比较 形、副错用兼比较 (2012 浙江 ) Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and … I knew that they would be worried about me because I was so farther away (2012 海南） I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. (2012 陕西 ) We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. He hid the stolen money deeply in a hole under the tree. Now every student in our class is studying more harder than before. Unfortunately far less comfortable deep much (2019 全国卷 2) When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal… 介词多半考搭配 介词多半考搭配 At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. (2012 浙江 ) Two years ago, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. (2012 海南） When I tore apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you.“ (2012 陕西 ) It is in the downtown area, so it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend,… for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least five miles. On for of as (2019 全国卷 1) From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. (2019 全国卷 2) They were two reasons for the decision. 2 月 9 日作业： With the VR glasses on, I even found me back to the time when the palace was under construction. 2 月 10 日作业： As you know, I am eager to be photographer like you, so I asked my parents to buy me the camera last week. But he told me I wouldn't concentrate in my schoolwork if I got it. 代词错、漏想周到 代词错、漏想周到 ( 高考真题 ) I knew that they would be worried about myself because I was so far away ( 高考真题） For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see what was happening. ( 高考真题 ) It is such a great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going there. I woke up and found me still in bed.(07 浙江 ) I hope I can be a bridge between China and others countries.(08 天津 ) …that I did anything special to express my thanks.(08 四川 ) We have been learning about it’s culture(06 浙江 ) ∧ me my mine myself other something its 短文改错的解题技巧 3. 复读全文： 1) 再次核查四个一致的改错 . 2) 注意改错的总体数目 , 以及改错的类型分布是否合理 . 3) 注意改错的符号的规范 . 4) 注意大小写 . 语篇填空（接 2 月 11 日） 技巧 12 ： 若结构较完整，空格后的谓语动词是原形，特别是与上下文时态不一致或主谓不一致时，很可能是填 情态动词 或 表示强调或倒装 的助动词（ do, does, did 等）。 50) _______ I in your place, I would seize the opportunity without hesitation. 51) You screamed in your sleep last night. You _______ have dreamed of something terrible. 52) I _______ not leave. She told me that I must stay here until she comes back. 53) Not until the rain stopped _______ he leave the room. 54) He had no time or energy to play with his children or talk with his wife, but he _______ bring home a regular salary. 50. Were 51. must 52. can 53. did 54. did 技巧 13 ：由特殊的句式结构来判断空格应填的词。 55) _______ precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it. 56) Rich _______ our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. 57) _______ an important thing it is to keep our promise! 58) _______ is its beautiful scenery that attracts a large number of tourists both at home and abroad. 59) _______ by this means can I do this work well. 60) She was so angry _______ she couldn’t speak. 55. So 56. as/though 57. What 58. It 59. Only 60. that 关于 57 题感叹句的联想 2 月 9 日作业 It was in a hot summer holiday which ( 改为 that ) I visited Qingdao, ^a port city in Shandong Province. 考点：强调句 陈述句的强调 句型 It is/ was + 被强调部分 ( 通常是主语、宾语或状语 )+ that/ who( 当强调主语且主语指人 )+ 其他部分 。 At last I joined in the swimmers. Now I still remember what ( 改为 how ) wonderful swimming in the sea was. 感叹句快速练习： 1). ____ delicious the dish is! A. What B. How C. What a 2). ____ strange clothes he is wearing! A. What a B. What C. How a 3). ____ an interesting subject it is! A. What B. How C. It’s 4).____ foggy it was yesterday! A. What B. What a C. How 5).____ careless a boy you are! A. How B. What a C. What 答案： 1) B 2) B 3) A 4) C 5) A