【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题图画作文探讨（4页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题图画作文探讨（4页word版）

‎ 2019届二轮复习书面表达专题 图画作文探讨 从近几年的江苏高考来看，图画作文是经常考查的一种形式。图画作文的特点是形象、直观、内容具体，一般还有文字说明，题材以贴近实际生活为主，因此考生在写作时一般都有话可说。‎ 第十八周　如何写图画作文 右面这幅图画描绘了中学生交往过程中的一种现象。请根据你对这幅图画的理解用英语写一篇短文，给某英语报社投稿。‎ 你的短文应包括以下内容：‎ ‎1．描述图画内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；‎ ‎2．结合图画，谈谈你的友谊观；‎ ‎3．结合自身实际，举例谈谈你自己的做法。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．可参照图画中的文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的想象。‎ ‎2．词数150左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Sometimes how to make friends is not an easy task for students. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[审题]‎ 图画作文一般可分为三步：‎ ‎1．仔细观察图画，品味图画文字。‎ ‎2．挖掘深刻内涵，适度联想发挥。‎ ‎3．描写虚实结合，阐明自己观点。‎ 审题时应做到三定：‎ ‎(1)定时态：叙述和议论时均用一般现在时。‎ ‎(2)定人称：第一人称和第三人称。‎ ‎(3)定体裁：本文为夹叙夹议文。‎ ‎[谋篇]‎ 图画类作文以图画形式给出信息，本文结合文字要求和图画，文章应如此布局：‎ 第一段：叙述图画内容。‎ 第二段：结合图画，论述自己的友谊观。‎ 第三段：自己的做法。‎ ‎[满分范文]‎ ‎①Sometimes how to make friends is not an easy task for students. ②From the picture we can see a boy is offering a girl one hundred yuan in an attempt to make friends with her. ③Apparently in his eyes, money can buy friendship. ‎ ‎④Contrary to what the picture conveys, I firmly believe powerful as money seems, it can never buy friendship. ⑤Undoubtedly, friendship is supposed to be based on shared interests and activities. ⑥Friendship means having someone I can rely on, with whom I can share my happiness and sorrow. ⑦Friendship also means being devoted to others, which involves me supporting my friends whenever they are in trouble.‎ ‎⑧Judging from my own experience, the role that friendship plays in my life can never be ignored, so I do treasure my friendship. ⑨For example, however occupied with my studies I am, I never fail to keep in touch with my friends. ⑩Most importantly, whenever my friends are stuck in a certain difficult situation, I will surely be the first one to give him or her my helping hand. ⑪In a word, so long as you can treat your friends with respect and care, you will enjoy a harmonious relationship with your friends even if you are the poorest person in the world.‎ ‎[满分缘由]‎ ‎1．行文架构 ‎(1)简要描述图画内容 ‎　↓‎ ‎(2)阐述自己的友谊观：不能用金钱购买，以共同的兴趣为基础，同甘共苦，忠诚 ‎　↓‎ ‎(3)如何维持友谊：多联系，急人所急 ‎2．亮点词汇 apparently, undoubtedly, be supposed to, rely on, involve, be occupied with, be stuck in, harmonious ‎3．亮点句式 句④believe后为省略that 的宾语从句，其中powerful as money seems 为as引导的状语从句的前置句式；‎ 句⑥含有两个定语从句：(that) I can rely on, with whom ...；‎ 句⑦含which 引导的定语从句，其中whenever引导让步状语从句；‎ 句⑧中judging ...为现在分词作状语，that引导同位语从句，另外，本句中还用了do 表强调；‎ 句⑨、句⑩中分别含有however和whenever引导的让步状语从句；‎ 句⑪中so long as 引导条件状语从句，even if 引导让步状语从句。‎ ‎[句式改写]‎ ‎1．用it 作形式主语改写句③‎ It_is_apparent_that_money_can_buy_friendship_in_his_eyes.‎ ‎2．用there is no doubt that ...改写句⑤‎ There_is_no_doubt_that_friendship_is_supposed_to_be_based_on_shared_interests_and_activities.‎ ‎(2018·扬州高三调研)请认真观察下面漫画，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ 内容包括：1.简述漫画内容；‎ ‎2．分析其原因；‎ ‎3．你的看法。‎ 参考词汇：诬陷frame　美德virtue ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[范文必背]‎ From the picture we can see that an old man fell on the ground and many people were standing around watching with sympathy, but no one dared to help him up.This is what happens in our society nowadays.‎ The reason for this is very simple.A few people are dishonest and they will frame those who help them.Some even pretend to be knocked down.Though many people around are willing to help them, they don't trust them and they are afraid of getting themselves into trouble.‎ In my opinion, on the one hand, we should all help each other.Respecting and taking care of the old is a traditional Chinese virtue.If I meet with such a case, I will call 120 first and then do what I can to help him.On the other hand, people should be honest so that we could trust each other.‎