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湖南省2020年学考合格性模拟考试英语试题(四) Word版含解析
www.ks5u.com 2020年湖南省学考合格性考试英语模拟(四) 第一部分 阅读技能 (共两节,满分45分) 第一节(共12小题:每小题3分,满分36分) 阅读下列短文,从每题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。 A Melbourne, Australia Melbourne is a popular tourist city, and it's easy to see its beautiful beaches and busy city life. Why it's a great choice: Australia as a whole is considered a safe destination for international travel, and because of that, many solo travelers go there. As an English-speaking country, you won't be faced with any language barriers(障碍). Melbourne is easy to get around because you can walk or bike practically anywhere! Thailand Thailand is great for solo travelers — perhaps because it is one of the Buddhist mindsets (佛教的心态), which promote equality among the sexes. Why it's a great choice: Thailand is known for its friendly atmosphere, and as a popular tourist country, there are plenty of chances to meet other like-minded travelers. It is well known for being very cheap, especially in the north. It's a good choice if you want to get away on a budget. Thailand has a lot to offer, from the party-central Bangkok to beautiful beaches and tropical jungle(热带丛林). Bali, Indonesia Bali is a spiritual place with yoga, spas, healthy food and beaches. The friendly people and attractive culture have made Bali one of the most popular places. Why it's a great choice: you won't be the only solo traveler in Bali. Everyone is known for being friendly and you're sure to meet some good people along the way. As a Hindu island, Bali is the perfect place for a relaxing and spiritual retreat(静修). The Sacred Monkey Forest in Ubud is fantastic—if you like monkeys, anyway. 1. Where can you enjoy beautiful beaches with convenient transport? A. Melbourne, Australia. B. Thailand. - 18 - C. Bangkok. D. Bali, Indonesia. 2. Which of the following statements is TRUE about Thailand? A. Travelling in Thailand may not cost you quite a lot. B. Women are not treated equally in Thailand. C. You will not have the chance enjoying the tropical scenery. D. People in Thailand are not friendly enough. 3. What have made Bali one of the most popular places? A. Yoga, spas, healthy food and beaches. B. Meeting some good people along the way. C. Friendly people and attractive culture. D. Fantastic monkeys in the Sacred Monkey Forest. 4. What type of writing is this text? A. A travel journal. B. A business report. C. A news advertisement. D. A travel guide. 【答案】1. A 2. A 3. C 4. D 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇说明文。本文主要介绍了澳大利亚墨尔本、泰国、印度尼西亚巴厘岛等旅游景点。 【1题详解】 细节理解题。根据Melbourne,Australia部分的“Melbourne is a hot-spot travel destination,and it's easy to see why with its beautiful beaches and busy city life.”可知墨尔本是旅游热点地区,很容易理解为什么这里有美丽的海滩和繁忙的城市生活;根据Melbourne,Australia部分的“Melbourne is easy to get around because you can walk or bike practically anywhere! ”可知,墨尔本交通便利,因为你几乎可以步行或骑自行车。因此,墨尔本有美丽的海滩,也有便利的交通,故选A。 【2题详解】 细节理解题。根据Thailand部分“It is well known for being very cheap, especially in the north.”可知,以便宜著称,尤其是北边。因此,在泰国旅游不会花太多钱。故选A。 【3题详解】 细节理解题。根据Bali, Indonesia部分的“The friendly people and attractive culture - 18 - have made Bali one of the most popular places.”可知,友好的人们和有吸引力的文化使巴厘岛成为最受欢迎的地方之一。即,让巴厘岛成为最欢迎的地点的是友好的人们和有吸引力的文化。故选C。 【4题详解】 推理判断题。根据内容看,文章主要介绍了世界上四个著名的旅游景点:Melbourne, Australia,Thailand和Bali, Indonesia,并说明了其特色。该类文章应该出现在旅游指导册中,是旅游指南,故选D。 【点睛】在做有小标题的阅读时,可以用“找读”的办法,省时而且准确。比如第3小题根据题干中的Bali 和one of the most popular places可以找到答案区域在文章最后一部分,然后可以找到The friendly people and attractive culture have made Bali one of the most popular places.,而后可以找到正确选项C。 B Last weekend, my kids and a few other kids from the neighborhood volunteered to help me wash my car. My 10-year-old daughter came up with the idea of washing other people's cars as well. It was very hot outside. And she wanted to give juice for a low cost but not free. I felt happy and decided to help her. She asked me, “What if we make this ‘a smile car wash’, mommy? ” I couldn't hold back my tears and encouraged her and other kids to go inside the house and come up with ideas. While I kept myself busy in drying the car, the kids walked up to me with a board of beautiful signs of smiles. They had “Free Car Wash” written on it and the theme of their exercise was “Smile”. It was natural to see a team of kids 5 to 11 years with the task to do something for others. All that seemed natural and came right from their heart. Nothing seemed to matter to them: their playtime, and the heat outside — they just wanted to help and do something nice! I helped them make some fresh juice and brought out some waste materials to help clean cars. Passers-by were amazed and one even shouted at them saying “Good kids”. One of them even tried giving them 5 dollars, which they refused. What a heart-warming scene(场景)! The following weekend, I saw the idea of the week, the theme of which was “Global - 18 - Kindness”. I was moved by such wonderful and loving kids. They made me smile! 5. Who came up with the idea of washing other people's cars for free ? A. The mother. B. One of the passers-by. C. The writer's 10-year-old daughter. D. One of the writer's neighbors' kids. 6. Why couldn't the author hold back her tears when she knew her daughter's idea? A. She was moved by her daughter's kindness. B. She felt sorry for those passers-by in hot day. C. She was sorry for not helping the kids. D. She thought it was very hard for the kids. 7. Why did the kids want to wash others' cars for free? A. They wanted to earn money. B. They were asked to do that by their teacher. C. They just wanted to help and do something nice. D. They wanted to exercise in smiling. 8. Which of the following did NOT the writer do to help the kids? A. She supported the kids' ideas. B. She made some fresh juice for the passers-by. C. She brought out some waste materials to help the kids. D. She gave the kids some money. 【答案】5. C 6. A 7. C 8. D 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。本文讲述了作者女儿想到给别人洗车的主意,还想免费给路人提供柠檬汽水,这使作者很感动,于是鼓励邻居的其他孩子共同参与洗车。作者见证了事件的前因后果,被身边如此奇妙而充满爱的灵魂所包围,感到很幸运。 【5题详解】 细节理解题。根据第一段“My 10-year-old daughter came up with the idea of washing other people's cars as well. ”可知,我10岁的女儿想出来给他人洗车的主意。根据第二段“They had “Free Car Wash” written on it and the theme of their exercise was “Smile”. - 18 - ”可知,他们写着“免费洗车”,而且他们活动的主题是“微笑”。由此可以看出,想出给别人免费洗车的主意的人是作者10岁的女儿。故选C。 【6题详解】 推理判断题。根据第一段“And she wanted to give juice for a low cost but not free. ”可知,她想提供低成本但不免费的果汁;根据第二段“She asked me, “What if we make this ‘a smile car wash’, mommy? ”可知,她问我:如果我们让这成为“微笑洗车”怎么样?提供低成本果汁,微笑洗车,是10岁的孩子展现友好的方式,这让作者感动。由此判断出,当她知道孩子的想法时,作者忍不住眼泪,是因为她被女儿的善良感动了。故选A。 【7题详解】 细节理解题。根据第三段“All that seemed natural and came right from their heart. Nothing seemed to matter to them: their playtime, and the heat outside — they just wanted to help and do something nice!”可知,一切看起来很自然,是心底的想法。对他们来说都没关系:他们玩耍的时间,和外面的炎热,他们只是想帮忙做一些好事。因此,孩子们想免费洗车的原因是他们想帮忙做点好事。故选C。 【8题详解】 细节理解题。根据第一段“I felt happy and decided to help her.”可知,我感到高兴,决定帮助她;根据倒数第二段“I helped them make some fresh juice and brought out some waste materials to help clean cars.”可知,我帮他们制作新鲜果汁,拿出一些废料来帮助清洁汽车。因此,作者支持孩子们的想法,帮忙准备新鲜果汁,并拿出废料帮忙清洁车子,但是没有给孩子钱,故选D。 C Body awareness(身体意识) helps children understand how they can move their bodies and the concept of space and how it relates to their bodies. There are many fun games and songs that teach children body awareness and encourage them to move their bodies. “Simon Says” is a great example, as long as you allow all children to continue to play instead of removing children who do not follow the directions correctly. Children who do not follow the directions correctly are generally the very ones who need to play the game most. Remember the game called “Statue”, or maybe you called it “Freeze”? The - 18 - teacher plays music; and when the music stops, the children “freeze”. To add an element of learning about body parts, add this instruction: “If I call ‘Hands’, everyone should be frozen except for their hands, which should be moving.” Children love this change of the game, and it teaches them to listen and learn body parts. Another classic song that teaches body awareness is “If You're Happy and You Know It”. Although the standard refrains(副歌) tell you to “clap your hands” and “stomp your feet”, you can try to “wiggle(摆动) your fingers”, “pull your ears”, “shake your head”, etc. Children enjoy guessing games. Try giving clues(提示) about which body part you are describing. For example, “I am thinking about a body part that I smell with. It is right under my eyes and right over my mouth. What am I thinking about?” To help thinking and language skills, encourage children to make up the clues for a body part. Children should enter school with a basic understanding of their bodies. Childcare programs can promote this understanding. 9. How many kinds of games are mentioned in the passage? A. 3. B. 4. C. 5. D. 6. 10. According to the 3rd paragraph, the children who don't follow the directions correctly are ______. A. always stupid B. always clever C. of good body awareness D. lacking in body awareness 11. Which of the following games could be more beneficial for thinking and speaking? A. Listening to songs. B. Guessing games. C. Simon says. D. Statue or Freeze. 12. What is the author's purpose to write the passage? A. To show the importance of body awareness for children. B. To tell us the best game for children's body awareness. C. To tell us how to help children learn before going to school. D. To introduce activities that are good for children's body awareness. - 18 - 【答案】9. B 10. D 11. B 12. D 【解析】 这是一篇说明文。身体意识能帮助孩子理解怎样移动身体和认识空间,因此文章介绍了几个能教孩子身体意识,并鼓励孩子移动身体的有趣的游戏。 【9题详解】 细节理解题。根据第三段“ “Simon Says” is a great example”可知,Simon Says是一个例子;根据第四段“Remember the game called “Statue”, or maybe you called it “Freeze””可知,记住Statue,也叫Freeze;根据第五段“Another classic song that teaches body awareness is “If You're Happy and You Know It”.”可知,另外一个能教身体意识经典的歌曲是If You're Happy and You Know It;根据第六段“Children enjoy guessing games.”可知,孩子们喜欢猜谜语。根据以上内容可以看出,文章中提到了四种游戏。故选B。 【10题详解】 推理判断题。根据第二段“There are many fun games and songs that teach children body awareness and encourage them to move their bodies.”可知,这些有趣的游戏能教孩子们身体意识,鼓励他们多动身体;根据第三段“Children who do not follow the directions correctly are generally the very ones who need to play the game most.”可知,不能正确地跟着指令的孩子,是需要多玩这个游戏的。由此能看出多玩游戏可以多练习,这样才能增强身体意识。因此,可以推断出,不能正确跟随指令的孩子是缺乏身体意识的。故选D。 【11题详解】 细节理解题。根据倒数第二段“To help thinking and language skills, encourage children to make up the clues for a body part.”可知,为了有助于培养思维和语言能力,要鼓励孩子为身体的某个部位编造线索。由此可以看出,猜谜语游戏对思维和说话能力有益。故选B。 【12题详解】 推理判断题。根据第二段“There are many fun games and songs that teach children body awareness and encourage them to move their bodies.”可知,这些有趣的游戏能教孩子们身体意识,鼓励他们多动身体。因此判断出,本文的目的是介绍对提高孩子身体意识有好处的活动。故选D。 第二节(共3小题:每小题3分,满分9分) - 18 - 下面文章中有3处需要添加小标题。请从以下选项(A、B、C和D)中选出符合各段意思的小标题,并在答题卡上将相应选项的标号涂黑,选项中有一项是多余选项。 Using Social Media (社会媒体) Positively Social media is so common in our society that almost everyone is connected to some form of it, whether it is Twitter, Facebook or even Instagram. We are in a fast-paced, technology-developing society and we are addicted to social media. In fact, we are looking forward to social media. So how does one ensure a positive online reputation (声誉)? It's simple: ●13.___13___ Party photos with alcohol are not acceptable completely. Would you want to have your boss see these photos? Make sure to post something that you feel positive about you, your creativity and your skills. ●14.___14___ Privacy settings make it harder to see your full account, but it's not impossible. In no case should you rely on privacy settings as a way to protect improper things. ●15.___15___ Find your brand, or what you want people to think of you. Proper spelling and grammar is always a plus, but it may not be your brand. Think about what you want people to think of you and go with it. Follow these simple rules and you're on your way to building, or restoring(恢复) an online reputation. A. Ensure you're professional. B. Don't trust privacy settings. C. Know your post is written personally. D. Be entirely sure about what you're posting. 【答案】13. D 14. B 15. A 【解析】 这是一篇说明文。这篇文章主要向我们如何积极使用社交媒体以确保在网络上的声誉提出了一些建议。 【13题详解】 由后文“Make sure to post contents that you feel positively reflect you, your creativity and your - 18 - skills”可知,确保张贴的内容能让你感到积极地反映你自己、你的创造力和你的技能。D项“你需要完全确定你所张贴的内容。”切题。为本段标题。故选D。 【14题详解】 由下文中的“Privacy settings make it harder to see your full account, but it's not impossible. ”可知,隐私设置使查看完整帐户变得更困难,但这并非不可能。B选项“不要相信隐私设置。”切题。为本段的标题。选项中的Privacy settings与下文呼应。故选C。 【15题详解】 由后文“Find your brand, or what you want people to think of you..”可知,找到属于你的品牌,或者你想让别人怎么看你。A选项“你需要确保你是专业的。”切题。为本段的标题。故选A项。 第二部分知识运用(共两节,满分25分) 第一节完形填空(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分) 阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。 Justin, my brother, has been missing for two weeks. Now I___16___him very much. I'm worried that something___17___has happened to him. I'm sure he___18___that night at about 11 o'clock, because I heard him playing his favorite CD in his bedroom. But where has he gone? Yesterday a girl named Mavis told me that___19___was once taken away by aliens (外星人) from outer space. They did some research on her. Mavis said that the whole experience was really terrible, ___20___ luckily they returned her home. If Justin has been taken away by aliens too, I hope they will___21___him soon. My parents have been worrying about Justin. Soon after he was found missing, they called the___22___. However, the police are not making___23___in the case. They are very puzzled, saying Justin might have been murdered. Dad is very___24___with them. He doesn't think they are doing their job well. Mum is so worried that she___25___sleep well. I hope Justin will come home soon and tell us what happened to him. I want all of us to be together again. 16. A. dislike B. respect C. hate D. miss 17. A. bad B. good C. wonderful D. simple - 18 - 18. A. came home B. went out C. fell asleep D. fell ill 19. A. he B. they C. it D. she 20. A. because B. so C. or D. but 21. A. kill B. hurt C. return D. catch 22. A. police B. teachers C. firemen D. doctors 23. A. a face B. a mistake C. a living D. much progress 24. A. delighted B. disappointed C. satisfied D. pleased 25. A. shan't B. can't C. needn't D. mustn't 【答案】16. D 17. A 18. A 19. D 20. D 21. C 22. A 23. D 24. B 25. B 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。本文讲述的是Justin失踪以后作者的担忧和思念,以及爸爸妈妈寻找他的努力。 【16题详解】 考查动词词义辨析。句意:现在我很想他。A. dislike不喜欢;B. respect尊敬;C. hate讨厌;D. miss思念。由前文Justin, my brother, has been missing for two weeks.可知Justin失踪两个星期了,可推知我很思念(miss)他。故选D。 【17题详解】 考查形容词词义辨析。句意:我很担心一些坏的事情发生在他的身上了。A. bad坏的;B. good好的;C. wonderful很棒的;D. simple简单的。由 I'm worried that,可推知是不好(bad)的事情。故选A。 【18题详解】 考查动词短语词义辨析,句意:我确定那晚大概11点他回家了,因为我听到他在卧室播放他最喜欢的CD。A. came home 回家;B. went out 出去,熄灭;C. fell asleep入睡;D. fell ill。根据下文I heard him playing his favorite CD in his bedroom可知,我听到他在卧室放歌,因此他回家(come home)了。故选A。 【19题详解】 考查代词词义辨析。句意:昨天一个叫Mavis的女孩告诉我,她曾经被来自外太空的外星人带走过。A. he他;B. they他们;C. it它;D. she她。根据前句的a - 18 - girl可知她是一位女性,用she在句中作主语。故选D。 20题详解】 考查连词词义辨析。句意:Mavis说整个经历非常恐怖,但幸运地是他们送她回家了。 A. because因为;B. so因此;C. or 或者;D. but但是。前面the whole experience was really terrible和后面luckily they returned her home是转折的关系,用but。故选D。 【21题详解】 考查动词词义辨析。句意:如果Justin也被外星人带走了,我希望他们也会很快送他回来。A. kill杀死;B. hurt伤害;C. return归还;D. catch抓住。根据前文luckily they returned her home可知此处填return(归还)故选C。 【22题详解】 考查名词词义辨析。句意:在发现他失踪后,他们报警了。A. police警察;B. teachers教师;C. firemen消防员;D. doctors医生。根据下句的the police可知爸爸妈妈在Justin失踪以后就报警了(call the police)。故选A。 【23题详解】 考查名词词义辨析。句意:然而,警察在这个案子上没有一点进展。A. a face脸;B. a mistake错误;C. a living生活;D. much progress进步、进展。根据下文They are very puzzled, aying Justin might have been murdered可知警察在寻找Justin方面的进展很小。make progress取得进步、有进展。故选D。 【24题详解】 考查形容词词义辨析。句意:爸爸对他们很失望。A. delighted高兴的;B. disappointed失望的;C. satisfied满意的;D. pleased高兴的。根据后文He doesn't think they are doing their job well可知爸爸对他们很失望(disappointed)。故选B。 【25题详解】 考查情态动词词义辨析。句意:妈妈很担心以至于她不能睡好。A. shan't不应该;B. can't不能;C. needn't不需要;D. mustn't不必。前文Mum is so worried,所以可知她整夜不能(can’t)睡着。故选B。 第二节(共10小题:每小题1分, 满分10分) 阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式,并将答案转写到答题卡上。 Now I am___26___(stand) in the ancient city of Pompeii. Founded in the 8th - 18 - century, Pompeii was once___27___rich and busy city. But because___28___the eruption of volcano on 24th August AD 79, everything___29___(change).Many people were ___30___(bury)alive in the ash, so___31___(be) the city. Walking around the city, I could see the streets with stepping stones and___32___(house)decorated with wall paintings, ___33___could be recognized as the symbol of the ancient civilization. The volcano is still standing there, ___34___looks very quiet now. It is hard to imagine how this____35____(peace) volcano destroyed the whole city. 【答案】26. standing 27. a 28. of 29. changed 30. buried 31. was 32. houses 33. which 34. but 35. peaceful 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。作者站在庞贝城里,看着眼前的一切,想了起火山爆发对这座城市的影响。 【26题详解】 考查doing形式。句意:现在,我站在在庞贝古城。分析句意可知 ,本句为现在进行时。故填standing。 【27题详解】 考查冠词。句意:建于8世纪,庞贝曾经是个富裕而忙碌的城市。 city为可数名词此处是泛指,rich不是元音发音开头,所以用a。故填a。 【28题详解】 考查固定搭配。句意:但是,因为公元79年8月24号的火山爆发,一切都变了。 because of意味“因为”,是固定搭配。故填of。 【29题详解】 考查动词时态。句意:但是,因为公元79年8月24号火山爆发,一切都变了。公元79年8月24号是过去的时间,应该用一般过去时态。故填changed。 【30题详解】 考查动词语态。句意:很多人被活埋在灰烬里,这个城市也一样。people与bury是被动关系,要用被动语态be done形式;bury的过去分词是buried。故填buried。 - 18 - 【31题详解】 考查动词时态。句意:句意:很多人被活埋在灰烬里,这个城市也一样。是过去发生的事,用一般过去时态;主语是the city,要用单三式,故填was。 【32题详解】 考查名词复数。句意:在城市里走来走去,我可以看到有踏脚石的街道,还有装饰着壁画的房子,这些都可以被认为是古代文明的象征。house是可数名词,这里要用复数形式表示泛指,故填houses。 【33题详解】 考查非限制性定语从句。句意:在城市里走来走去,我可以看到有踏脚石的街道,还有装饰着壁画的房子,这些都可以被认为是古代文明的象征。分析句子可知,空白处引导非限制性定语从句,指代先行词the streets with stepping stones and___7___(house)decorated with wall paintings,用which。故填which。 【34题详解】 考查连词。句意:火山还在那儿,但是现在看起来很安静。分子句意可知,这里是转折关系,应该用but。故填but。 【35题详解】 考查形容词。句意:很难想象这个安静的火山是怎么摧毁一整座城市的。volcano是名词,应该用形容词修饰;peace的形容词是peaceful。故填peaceful。 第三部分 写作技能(共两节,满分30分) 第一节双向翻译(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分) 请根据上下文内容,将文中划线部分译成汉语或者英语,并将答案转写到答题卡上。 Along with physical changes, there come many psychological changes. Boys and girls tend to be different in this regard. ___36___ Many boys become risk-takers — they want to find their own limits and the limits of the world around them, but may not have the wisdom to make good choices in their behavior. At the same time, ___37___女孩子们往往需要某个人 — anyone — to talk to, as they try to deal with their strong feelings. In the social world, as teenagers get older, ___38___ they struggle to depend on themselves. They may badly want and need their parents' love, yet feeling distant; ___39___他们可能想成为团队的一员,yet desire independence. ___40___ Since teenagers have difficulty balancing these needs, they often question who they are and how they - 18 - fit in society. 【答案】36. 很多男孩子成了喜欢冒险的人 37. girls often want someone 38. 他们努力地想要自力更生 39. they may want to be part of the group 40. 因为青少年在平衡这些需要时有困难 【解析】 这是一篇说明文。文章指出,身体的变化会带来心理的变化。男孩和女孩在这方面是不同的。男孩喜欢冒险,而女孩需要某个人。 【36题详解】 考查名词。 risk-takers意为“喜欢冒险的人”;再根据其他内容,故将句子翻译为:很多男孩子成了喜欢冒险的人。 【37题详解】 考查动词。want是动词,可以表示“想、需要”。本句中采用“需要”的用法;再根据其他内容,故将句子翻译为:girls often want someone。 【38题详解】 考查固定搭配。struggle to do意为“努力做”,是固定搭配, depend on oneself意为“依靠自己、自力更生”;再根据其他内容,故将句子翻译为:他们努力地想要自力更生。 【39题详解】 考查固定搭配。part of意为“……的一部分”,是固定搭配; 再根据其他内容,故将句子翻译为:they may want to be part of the group。 【40题详解】 考查固定表达。have difficulty in doing sth.意为“做……有困难”,balance作动词时,意为“平衡”;再根据其他内容,故将句子翻译为:因为青少年在平衡这些需要时有困难。 第二节情景作文(共1小题, 满分20分) 41.下面是一封提议家庭聚会的邮件。假设你是来自美国纽约的Mark,但远在中国留学,请你写一封邮件作为回复,表达你想回国参加家庭聚会的意愿、回去的时间以及对家人的想念。 注意:词数100左右。 Dear Mark, Haven't seen you for quite a long time and we really miss you. Grandma's 80th - 18 - birthday is coming and we hope you know the exact date — it is at the end of this month. We are planning to have a family gathering at the same time as some of us haven't seen one another for ages. I'm writing to tell and invite you to join the gathering and please write to me soon, telling us whether you will come back or not and the exact time and date you're arriving, so that we can pick you up. See you soon! Linda _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Linda, I'm so glad to receive your e-mail and get to know Grandma's 80th birthday is coming. I will surely go back to celebrate her birthday and join the gathering. These years I have been studying in China and I suppose I did quite well in my studies. I have many wonderful experiences to share with you all. In addition, I will fly to New York and arrive at around 3 pm next Friday, so that we can meet soon. I can't wait to have our gathering because I miss you all so much. I am really looking forward to seeing Grandma and all of you again. Yours, Mark 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,表达你想回国参加家庭聚会的意愿、回去的时间以及对家人的想念。 【详解】第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 - 18 - 时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:1.表达你想回国参加家庭聚会的意愿 2.相关情况 1)对家人的想念。 2)回去的时间 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) be glad to;do quite well in;in addition;can't wait to;look forward to 第三步:连词成句 1. I'm so glad to receive your e-mail and get to know Grandma's 80th birthday is coming. 2. I will surely go back to celebrate her birthday and join the gathering. 3. These years I have been studying in China and I suppose I did quite well in my studies. 4. I have many wonderful experiences to share with you all. 5. I will fly to New York and arrive at around 3 pm next Friday, so that we can meet soon. 6. I can't wait to have our gathering because I miss you all so much. 7. I am really looking forward to seeing Grandma and all of you again.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, - 18 - 第五步:润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:I will fly to New York and arrive at around 3 pm next Friday, so that we can meet soon.这句话运用了so that引导的状语从句;使用了一些固定词组,如be glad to;do quite well in;in addition;can't wait to;look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。 - 18 - - 18 -查看更多