2018届二轮复习书面表达分类指导---求助信课件（17张）

2018届二轮复习书面表达分类指导---求助信课件（17张）

2018 届二轮复习 求助信 文体概述 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容： 1. 表明写信目的，请求帮助。 2. 要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。 3. 希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。 常用语块 做某事有麻烦 ______________________ 2. 给某人帮助 ______________________ 3. 寻求帮助 ______________________ 4. 遇到一些问题 ______________________ 5. 面临困难 ______________________ have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth . do sb. a favor / give sb. a hand ask for help / seek for help encounter some problems be faced with difficulties 6. 忙于做某事 ________________________ 7. 为某事做准备 ________________________ 8. 集中精力 ________________________ 9. 学以致用 ________________________ 10. 让某人失望 _________________________ let sb. down be busy doing sth. / be engaged in doing sth . prepare for sth . concentrate on / focus on put…into use 11. 克服恐惧 ______________________ 12. 取得巨大的进步 _______________________ 13. 渴望做某事 ________________________ 14. 提供一些有建设性的指导 ________________________ 15. 因某事感激某人 ________________________ be grateful to sb. for sth . overcome the fear make great progress be anxious to do sth. / long to do sth . offer some constructive guidance 套用句式 我写信想请您帮我一个忙。 2. 我遇到三个困扰我的问题。首先， …… 其次， …… 最困扰我的是 …… 3. 不幸的是，我觉得做某事很困难。 3. Unfortunately, I find/feel it quite difficult/hard to do sth . 1. I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand. 2. I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, … What’s more, … What troubles me most is… 4. 面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给予我一些关于 …… 的建议吗？ 5. 我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些问题。如果你能帮助我，我将感激不尽。 4. Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on…? 5. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me. 习作修改 ( 做短文改错，背经典范文 ) Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua , the Chinese student takes summer courses in your university. I am writing to ask for help. I come here last month and found my courses interested. And I have some difficulties with note- taking and I have no idea of what to use the library. a taking came interesting But how I told that the Learning Center provides help for students and I am anxious to get help from you. I have no class in Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or call to me. Here is my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com; 12345678. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua ∧ was on are 1. the →a 此处表示“一个”学生，表泛指，要用冠词 a 。 2. takes →taking 此处是非谓语，且与逻辑主语是主动关系，故用现在分词 taking 。 3. come →came 由后面的 last month 可知，要用一般过去时。 4. interested →interesting 此处是指 courses 令人有趣的，是修饰物。 5. And →But 根据上下文的逻辑关系，此处应该表示“转折”，而不是“递进”。 6. what →how 根据句意应该是不知道怎样使用图书馆，故用 how 。 7. 在 told 前加 was 此处表示“我被告知”，应该用被动语态，且是在写信前被告知，故用一般过去时的被动语态。 8. in →on 具体指“星期几的下午 / 上午”，要用介词 on 。 9. 去掉 call 后的 to 因为 call 是及物动词。 10. is →are 此句是倒装句，主语是 my email address and phone number ，故用 are 。 课堂练习 假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师 Kate 写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下： 1. 作业多，没有时间运动。 2. 压力大，难以入睡。 3. 希望得到 Kate 的帮助。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Kate, I am Li Hua , a Senior 3 student . Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help . I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems? Sincerely yours, Li Hua 课外作业 假定你是李华，当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师 Tom 写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下： 1. 本人简介。 2. 求助内容。 3. 希望得到 Tom 的帮助。 注意 ： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Tom, I’m Li Hua , a Senior 3 student in your school. Currently, I ’m having trouble learning English. So I’m writing to ask you for help. There’re two main problems I’ m faced with now. First, I find it quite hard to master the English grammatical rules and put them into use. Furthermore, so nervous do I feel in front of my classmates that I can’t say a word in English. Therefore, I sincerely hope you can offer me some advice on how to study English grammar and how to overcome my fear of speaking English. I have the confidence that with your help , I can conquer my English. I really appreciate it if you could help me. Sincerely yours, Li Hua