19年中考英语真题 分类 专题21-2 书面表达（说明介绍类）（第02期）（解析版）

19年中考英语真题 分类 专题21-2 书面表达（说明介绍类）（第02期）（解析版）

‎2019年中考真题英语分项汇编 专题21 书面表达 考点2说明介绍类 ‎（一）【2019 •浙江省杭州市】‎ 假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。‎ Subject:‎ From: Linda To: Li Ping ‎...‎ I’m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? What does he look like? What kind of person is he and what’s he interested in?‎ Hope to hear from you soon.‎ Love,‎ Linda Subject:‎ From: Li Ping To: Linda Dear Linda,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Ping ‎【写作思路】‎ 这篇作文要求我们对Linda的电子邮件进行回复。写作前，应先阅读Linda的来信，了解信中她想知道的事情，然后有针对性地给她进行介绍。审题可知，Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情况，她提出了三个问题，“他多大了”；“他是什么样子的”；“他是怎样的人以及他的兴趣”，回信中应对Linda的这些提问进行回答，并根据表达的需要，补充一些细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。短文应使用一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先内容应符合题目要求，并且叙述要注意层次和结构；其次应注意英语的表达问题，应符合英文句式的特点以及表达习惯，不能写汉语式的英语。可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Linda,‎ Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.‎ My brother is also cute. He’s of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.‎ Thanks again for your help!‎ Yours,‎ Li Ping ‎【名师点评】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者以李平的身份给Linda写了回信，介绍了哥哥的一些情况。首先短文内容符合题目要求，按照Linda在来信中的提问，介绍了哥哥的年龄、外貌、兴趣爱好等信息。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时、第三人称单数来叙述，符合题目要求，尤其注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化，这是学生们学习中的一个难点。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中主要使用了简单句、并列句和复合句，还使用了非谓语动词，如动词不定式、现在分词等。文章中较好的句型和短语有：Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.、He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. 、He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.、He’s of medium height with short straight black hair.、 He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.等等。‎ ‎（二）【2019 •甘肃省敦煌市】‎ 我们生活学习在美丽的甘肃。假设你所在的学校正在组织一个“让世界了解甘肃、让走向世界＂的活动，请根据以下思维导图的提示，以" The Introduction of Gansu Province"为题，写一篇介绍甘肃的英语短文。‎ 要求：1. 文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容；‎ ‎ 2. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；‎ ‎ 3. 可做适量拓展；‎ ‎ 4. 词数：80词左右。(标题需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域，不计入总词数)‎ The Introduction of Gansu Province ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【写作思路】‎ 本文属于材料作文，介绍甘肃省。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ The Introduction of Gansu Province Gansu Province lies in the northwest of China. It covers an area of 425,900 square kilometers. There are 26 million people living there. Lanzhou is the capital city of Gansu Province. The weather in Gansu is different from ‎ place to place and the temperature is usually quite different from day to night. If you want to go travelling in Gansu，May to October is the best time. Mogao Grotto which is the world famous art palace and Jiayuguan Pass，the western end of the Great Wall，are two of the must-see places of interest in Gansu.‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如lie in, there be, the capital city of, be different from, end of, places of interest以及which引导的定语从句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。‎ ‎（三）【2019 •湖南省郴州市】‎ 在英语课上, 老师将组织以“说出你的烦恼”(Speak out your worries)为主题的交流活动。假如你是李华, 请根据以下表格中提供的信息, 用英语写一篇发言稿, 说出你的烦恼和愿望。‎ Worries Wishes ‎ too strict, too much homework …‎ ‎ little time for outdoor activities…‎ ‎ hard to communicate with…‎ ‎ ….‎ ‎ less homework…‎ ‎ more chances …‎ ‎ get on well with …‎ ‎ …‎ 要求：‎ ‎1短文须包含表格中的所有信息, 并适当发挥；‎ ‎2词数：80词左右（短文开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；‎ ‎3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。‎ Hello, everyone,‎ I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. __________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ That's all. Thank you.‎ ‎【写作思路】‎ 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Hello, everyone,‎ I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. My teachers are too strict. They have too much homework to do every day．And I feel stressed too much．I wish I can have less homework. I think my parents are too strict with me．They give us little time for outdoor activities. It's hard for me to communicate with their parents．I wish I can have more chances to play with my friends. I wish I can get on well with my parents. ‎ That's all. Thank you.‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ 这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。‎ ‎（四）【2019 •山东省滨州市】‎ 即将毕业，请以“My favorite teacher”为题，写一篇英语短文，短文包括以下内容：‎ ‎1. 老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等；‎ ‎2. 以事例描述喜爱的原因；‎ ‎3. 表达对这位老师的感激和祝福。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；‎ ‎2. 文中不得出现真实 姓名与校名；‎ ‎3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，课适当加2-3分；‎ ‎4. 词数：80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。‎ My favorite teacher It’s time to graduate from junior high school. I’d like to write something about my favorite teacher. ________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ My favorite teacher It’s time to graduate from junior high school. I’d like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair.‎ When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize.‎ I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如graduate from，of all the teachers，of medium height，so that，be afraid to do，take part in，give up，encourage sb. to do，at the weekends，thanks to sb.，the first prize等。而并列结构She is of medium height and has long straight hair./ I changed my attitude and won the first prize.和She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading./ When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition./ I will never forget the wonderful time we were together.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。‎ ‎（五）【2019 •广西百色市】‎ 假设李华是你的同班同学，请根据以下提示及要求，用英语写一篇题为" My Classmate"的短文。‎ 提示：1. 他个子高，长相英俊，成绩优秀，擅长运动；‎ ‎ 2. 他乐于助人（举一个例子）；‎ ‎ 3. 对他的评价。‎ 要求：1. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名；‎ ‎ 2. 词数80左右。‎ My Classmate ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ My Classmate Li Hua is my classmate and my good friend．He is tall and handsome．His grades are excellent and he always does well in exams．He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important．【高分句型一】（外貌和特长）He is ready to help others．He often helps me with my English． Last year he helped a ten﹣year﹣old boy who lost his way find his mother．（乐于助人）I think Li Hua is a kind person．Everybody in my class likes him very much． （对他的评价）I hope we will be good friends forever．【高分句型二】（愿望）‎ ‎（六）【2019 •湖南省岳阳市】‎ 假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙，墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴滴，以及考前老师的温馨提示．忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光，请你以"Preparation for High School Entrance Exam"（备战中考）为题，写一篇80﹣100词的短文．‎ 要求：（1）请阐述图中信息，可适当发挥；‎ ‎ （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；‎ ‎ （3）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确．‎ 学 习 区 Listen to the teacher 生 活 区 Eat healthy food 提 示 区 Avoid making mistakes Take notes Exercise Learn to relax Finish doing…‎ Have enough sleep Be on time ‎...‎ ‎...‎ ‎...‎ Preparation for High School Entrance Exam ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Preparation for High School Entrance Exam Time flies，our junior high school life is coming to an end．I can't forget the time when I was preparing for the high school entrance examination．【高分句型一】（点题）On the photo wall of our classroom， we recorded the dribs and drabs of our study and life before the high school entrance examination．We listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes carefully at the same time．We go to bed after finishing our homework every day．（学习区）We eat healthy food and exercise every day．Getting enough sleep is also important．【高分句型二】（生活区）The teacher often reminds us to avoid making mistakes．We must be on time for class．He also taught us to relax．（提示区）‎ ‎（七）【2019 •浙江省台州市】‎ 似如你是李华，一个英国游学团要来你们学校，学校需要一些志愿者，你想成为其中的一员。请读下面的招募启事，写一封应征邮件。‎ Volunteers Wanted Some students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour. They are interested in Chinese culture. We’ re looking for some volunteers to help us. ‎ Can you introduce yourself(English ability and personality)? ‎ Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose? ‎ If you are interested, please email us at Andrew@l63. com. ‎ 注意：（1）请回复招募启事中所提及的两个问题, 可适当发挥；‎ ‎ （2）应征邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；‎ ‎ （3）词数：80~100；‎ ‎ （4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Andrew, ‎ I’m Li Hua. ______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Sir，‎ My name is Li Hua. I'm a 17-year-old girl from Class 3, Grade 2. I would like to become a volunteer for the American students.（点明目的）My English is good and I can talk with foreigner fluently. In addition, I'm interested in sports, which is why I'm in good health.【高分句型一】When my friends get in trouble, I often help them actively. I'm good at taking up with others. Besides I like travelling a lot and I'm quite familiar with our city.（自我介绍）I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture so that British friends can understand China better.【高分句型二】（计划的活动）‎ I'm sure I can become friends with the English students. Looking forward to your answers.（愿望）‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【名师点评】‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ In addition，I'm interested in sports，which is why I'm in good health．此外，我对体育感兴趣，这就是为什么我健康状况良好.‎ which引导非限制性定语从句.‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture， so that British friends can understand China better．我计划组织一次关于中国传统文化的活动，让英国朋友更好的了解中国.‎ plan to do sth计划做某事；so that 引导目的状语从句.‎ ‎（八）【2019 •新疆维吾尔族自治区】‎ 初中生活即将结束，请你想一下，谁是你最喜欢的老师？他、她长什么样子？你 为什么喜欢他、她？以 My favorite Teacher 为题，用英语写一篇短文，请根 据要点进行描述，可以结合具体事例，也可以适当增加自己想写的内容。‎ 要点：‎ ‎1. What does he/ she look like?‎ ‎2. Why do you like him/her?‎ ‎3. ……‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数 80~100;‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容，要求行文连贯；‎ ‎3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【写作思路】‎ 这是一篇给材料作文，本文所给要点是几个问题，故动笔前先要阅读要点，找出问题的答案。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将问题所涉及内容表达完整；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. She is tall and has long straight hair.‎ And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative, because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:be strict with对……严格；be ready to do ‎ sth准备做某事；in trouble处于困难中；try one's best do to sth尽力做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。‎ ‎（九）【2019 •山东省德州市】‎ 假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生，你的学校正在参加全市文明校园的评选．以下内容是学校根据《山东省中小学文明校园评比细则》列举的部分信息．请你根据表格内容，写一篇短文，向社会宣传自己的学校，并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事，为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。‎ ‎1. Teachers' team ‎（师资）‎ ‎①experienced teachers help us make progress ‎②friendly head teachers grow as a person ‎2. School facilities ‎（设施）‎ ‎①a big library read books to learn more ‎②a playground do sports ‎③some science labs find something new ‎3. School environment ‎（环境）‎ ‎①different kinds of trees and flowers be clean and beautiful ‎②safety education classes protect ourselves ‎4. ？‎ ‎…‎ ‎…‎ 要求：（1）语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；‎ ‎ （2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； ‎ ‎ （3）80～100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ I'm from No．3 Middle School． My school is making its effort to be a civilized school． Let me introduce it．‎ There are many experienced teachers in my school．They help us make progress in many ways．‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【写作思路】‎ 这是一篇根据表格信息介绍自己学校的材料作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作。内容包括：1. 师资情况：①有经验的老师帮助我们进步。②班主任和蔼可亲，与人为善。2. 学校设施：①一个大图书馆。②运动场。③一些科学实验室。3. 学校环境：①不同种类的树木和花卉。②安全教育课。4. 谈谈为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事。另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。常用的重点句型和短语有make progress，be friendly，as for，try one's best to do sth，make our school more beautiful。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ I'm from No．3 Middle School. My school is making its effort to be a civilized school. Let me introduce it. ‎ There are many experienced teachers in my school. They help us make progress in many ways. And our head teacher is very friendly, too. For school facilities, we have a library, you can read books to learn more. You also can do sports in the playground. You can find something new in the science labs. As for our school environment, there are different kinds of trees and flowers. So our school is clean and beautiful. We also have safety education classes, these classes can protect ourselves. Finally, our students are polite, too. It will make our school full of civilization.‎ Let's try our best to make our school more beautiful and make it a civilized school.‎ ‎（十）【2019 •荆门市】‎ 为弘扬中华传统文化，你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华，请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John。‎ 要点：‎ ‎1. 时间：5月16日下午2:30; ‎ ‎2. 地点：学校操场;‎ ‎3. 内容：校长在开幕式上致辞；戏曲知识竞赛；师生戏曲表演等；‎ ‎4. 感受：对传统文化有了进一步的了解……‎ 要求：‎ ‎1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；‎ ‎2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；‎ ‎3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；‎ ‎4. 词数：80—100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。‎ 参考词汇：戏曲 opera (n.) 开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.) ‎ ‎ 表演 performance ( n.) 致辞 make a speech ‎ Dear John,‎ How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear John，‎ How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.‎ The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.‎ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【名师点评】‎ 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be hold，on the playground，in the beginning，make a speech，at the opening ceremony，after that，in the end，put on，have a chance等。而we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera./ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your ‎ own.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。‎ ‎（十一）【2019 •四川省眉山市】‎ 假如你是李华，打算邀请你们的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节，并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。‎ 要点：1. 端午节的时间（农历五月五日）、来由（纪念屈原）；‎ ‎2. 活动安排：学包粽子、观看龙舟赛（时间：下午两点；地点：东坡湖；赛况）。‎ 参考词汇：农历 lunar calendar 注意：1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥；‎ ‎2. 词数：80词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；‎ ‎3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。‎ Dear Jack,‎ The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. _______________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【写作思路】‎ 本文属于应用文体，介绍端午节并邀请你的外教杰克来你家共度端午佳节。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Jack,‎ The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. It’s a great honor for me to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.‎ Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals in China. It’s on May fifth in ‎ Chinese lunar calendar. Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.‎ We will make zongzi and watch the dragon boat race at 2:00 p.m. at the Dongpo lake which is not very far from my home.‎ If you are interested in it, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【名师点评】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如it is a great honor for me to do sth, one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, a long history, far away from, hesitate to do以及which引导的定语从句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。‎ ‎（十二）【2019 •广西柳州市】‎ 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括：‎ 年龄与外表 ‎16岁；高大健壮 兴趣与爱好 喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐；最喜欢的科目是英语 性格与为人 风趣幽默；乐于助人、容易相处 注意：‎ ‎ 1. 词数70左右；‎ ‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。‎ 参考词汇：‎ ‎ 高大健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music ‎ 最喜欢的科目favorite subject 风趣幽默funny and humorous ‎ 乐于做某事be ready to do sth. 相处get on with Dear Jack,‎ How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Jack,‎ How is everything going？Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you. He is a 16-year-old boy. He has round face, black hair and bright eyes. He is tall and strong. He likes smiling very much.（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍男同学的外貌及特征）He likes doing sports, reading and listening to music. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He is humorous and funny. He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others. 【要点二，介绍同学的性格】 He likes doing sports, reading and listening to music. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities.（高分句型二） He likes winter very much, because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things，such as skating, making snowman and so on.【要点三，介绍同学的喜好】 His dream is becoming an English teacher, because he wants his students to get good grades. 【要点四，介绍同学的理想】 I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes!（要点五，美好的祝愿）‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【名师点评】‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ ‎ He likes smiling very much．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth "喜欢做某事"，短语very much "非常，很"．此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑。"‎ 注意like后加doing ‎【高分句型二】‎ He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．此句是一般现在时的陈述句。运用短语spend some time （in）doing sth "花时间做某事"。短语take part in "参加"，‎ 此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动。"‎ ‎（十三）【2019 •广州市】‎ 广州某电台英文频道将设Welcome to Guang zhou栏目，目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文，向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。‎ 注意：1. 词数：80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数)；‎ ‎ 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。‎ Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time _________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Guangzhou is waiting for you.‎ ‎【写作思路】‎ 这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容：广州市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处，并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作，为时内容丰富、充实，应对每个话题进行拓展，详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构，要分清主次，合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China，Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China.With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food.‎ I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.‎ As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.‎ Guangzhou is waiting for you.‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含来了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍：第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色，简单的几句话包含了大量的信息；第二段是主体段，主要给读者推荐了一个好去处，并阐述了自己的理由；第三段和第四段是一个结尾，对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰，叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句与复合句结合，使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Located in the south of China，Guangzhou，with a history of more than two thousand years，plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China、I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot.、Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等。‎ ‎（十四）【2019 •广西北部湾经济区】‎ 暑假将至，你校English Club 在社刊上发起了征文活动，题目为“My Plan for Summer Holiday”。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。‎ 写作要点：‎ ‎1. 学习计划 ‎2. 运动计划 ‎3. 娱乐计划 ‎4. 你的愿望 写作要求：‎ ‎1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；‎ ‎2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；‎ ‎3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名，否则不予评分；‎ ‎4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ My Plan for Summer Holiday ‎ Summer holiday is coming. _________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【写作思路】‎ 这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“My Plan for Summer Holiday”为题，根据所给出的材料提示写一篇短文。本文时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系；要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，以便使文章更有档次。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ My Plan for Summer Holiday Summer holiday is coming. I will make a plan for it. First, I will finish my homework. Then I'll read more good books. And I plan to read four great books to improve myself. Second, I will keeping exercising and learn to play table tennis. It's good for my health. Third, I'll go to Nanning for two weeks. Also, I plan to climb Nanshan tea sea. I hope I can be a volunteer. I want to visit the old people, give them gifts and sing for them.‎ I'm looking forward to having a good summer in the vacation.‎ ‎（十五）【2019 •湖北省黄石市】‎ 假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给Tom回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。‎ 内容包括：1. 读几本好书；‎ ‎2. 参加社会实践活动；‎ ‎3. 帮父母做家务；‎ ‎4. 和朋友一起锻炼；‎ ‎5. 邀请Tom。‎ 注意：1. 词数80左右；‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息；‎ ‎4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词忙：有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品classic literature works ‎ 社会实践活动social practice activities Dear Tom,‎ I'm very happy to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【写作思路】‎ 本文属于材料作文，写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Tom,‎ I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my ‎ social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.‎ How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【名师点评】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。‎ ‎（十六）【2019 •黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市】‎ ‎（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不给分）‎ 假如你叫Tom，和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）。‎ 提示：1. 聚会内容：唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏；‎ ‎ 2. 内容要涵盖提示中的信息，字数30-50词。‎ Dear Jack,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ I think we will have a good time Tom ‎【写作思路】‎ 假如你叫Tom，和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）。虽然主要内容已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Jack,‎ I’ll have a birthday party at 7:00 p. m. this Friday. I’d like to invite you to my home. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along Green Street and take the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing. At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play games. I think we will have a good time.‎ Tom ‎【名师点评】‎ 这是一篇比较不错的作文。文中需要发挥的内容写的不错，一些比较好的句型，如I’d like to invite you to my home. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along green Street and take the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing等。‎ ‎（十七）【2019 •四川省广元市】‎ 假如你叫李军，你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象，在政府两年的帮扶下，你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动，请你根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，参加本次活动。‎ 内容要点：‎ 过去 ‎1. 家庭贫困，房屋破旧。‎ ‎2. 母亲生病，为母担忧，成绩下滑。‎ 现在 ‎3. 住进新房，母亲康复，学习进步。‎ ‎4. 生活日趋改善。‎ 要求：1. 词数：70词左右。短文开头语已给出，但不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 2. 短文中必须包括所有要点，但不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。‎ ‎ 3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。‎ My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. __________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years.（点题）‎ My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house.【高分句型一】I don't have any new clothes. My grades dropped because my mother was sick and couldn't afford to see a doctor. Sometimes, I even want to leave school to support my family.（过去）Now, with the help of the government, great changes took place in our lives. 【高分句型二】 We live in a new house. My mother is healthy. I can also set my mind on my study and make great progress in my study. Our life is improving day by day.（现在）‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house.‎ 我家以前很穷，我们住在一个小和旧房子。used to do sth过去常常做某事。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ Now, with the help of the government, great changes took place in our lives.‎ 现在，在政府的帮助下，巨大的变化发生在我们的生活。with the help of 在……的帮助下。‎