【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题日记写作解题指导（2页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题日记写作解题指导（2页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达专题日记写作解题指导 ‎ 日前一些学校正在开展丰富多彩的社团活动，你校也不例外。假如你是一名高三学生，打算加入学校的某些社团，但妈妈有不同意见。请根据以下提示，写一篇120字左右的英语日记。‎ ‎ 1. 妈妈的态度：高三学业负担重，……‎ ‎ 2. 自己的态度：有利于缓解学习压力，……‎ ‎ 3. 最后说服了妈妈，获得了她的理解和支持。‎ 注意：1. 短文的开头已给出，不记入总词数。‎ ‎ 2. 不能遗漏提示内容，但不要逐字翻译。‎ ‎ 3. 可以适当增添合乎情理的过渡性语言。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ To enrich senior high school students’ extracurricular life, recently our school has formed a bunch of clubs for students with different interests and talents….‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 1. 思路：‎ 介绍主题。（首句已经给出，只要介绍高三学生也想参加社团就OK）‎ 妈妈持反对意见，给出反对的具体原因。（参加社团浪费时间，我们负担太重，应把时间用在学习上，考取好大学）‎ 我持赞同意见，给出具体赞同的原因。（参加社团能给我们一种融入感，且可以减轻压力，另外不仅可以开拓视野，还可以得知合作的重要性。）‎ 最终和妈妈达成一致。（为了平衡学习时间，不得选择超过2个社团）‎ 2. 词语的表达：‎ 也不例外：be no exception 持...观点：hold the view that...‎ 毫无意义除了浪费时间：mean nothing but wasting time 一种...感：a sense of...‎ 扩大了视野：broaden one’s horizon 使我大为欣慰的是：to my great relief 达成共识：reach an agreement 3. 句型的多样性：‎ 我们不受益于在社团学习到的知识。‎ we can’t benefit from the knowledge gained in the activities.‎ 她的信念是我们要把所有精力倾注在学习中，只有这样才能上好大学。‎ her belief is that we should pour all our energies into study, only in ‎ this way can we try our best to go to a better university.‎ 参加社团给我们彼此一种融入感。‎ Attending the activities gives us a sense of involvement with each other 不仅开拓了视野，还学习到了合作的重要性。‎ not only do we broaden our horizon, but learn the importance of cooperation ／as well 1. 连词成句：‎ ‎ To enrich senior high school students’ extracurricular life, recently our school has formed a bunch of clubs for students with different interests and talents, all students are called on to join them, we students of Senior Three are no exception. ‎ ‎ My mom hold the view that we can’t benefit from the knowledge gained in the activities. She insists that the variety of after-class life doesn’t belong to us, whose burden of studies is too heavy. Meanwhile, joining the club means nothing but wasting time, her belief is that we should pour all our energies into study, only in this way can we try our best to go to a better university.‎ ‎ However, I hold the opposite view. Attending the activities gives us a sense of involvement with each other. Since the stress in learning is known to everyone, the most efficient way to relieve it is to communicate with others. By doing this, not only do we broaden our horizon, but learn the importance of cooperation as well.‎ ‎ After a long discussion with my mom, to my great relief, we eventually reach an agreement that I can select no more than two clubs so that I can arrange my time properly. ‎ ‎5.检查：‎ 逗号之后首字母不能大些，非谓语，主谓一致 ‎ ‎